Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-16014 Morphine exposure exacerbates HIV-1 Tat driven changes to neuroinflammatory factors in cultured astrocytes PLOS ONE Dear Dr Klase, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Aug 16 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript by Chen and colleagues is reporting the effects of morphine on the suppression of b-catenin in the presence of HIV Tat. This is a relevant manuscript, with important findings. Yet, the manuscript presentation has several problems that need to be addressed, including focus and flow. They have been itemized below, not in order of relevance but as they appeared in the text, followed by a general summary. We believe that the findings are important, but major revision needs to be performed. 1. The abstract needs to be revised for missing verbs and for improving clarity of goals, methods and results. For instance, the study is performed in astrocytes, cell lines and primary cultures. However, the relevance of studying the effects of Tat on astrocytes is not clear, in the abstract. The results should be better outlined. It is right now too brief, and short on explaining the actual findings. The importance of studying the effects on b-catenin is also not clear in the abstract. The study of miRNA or targets is not stated, or why. 2) The Introduction has a lot on HAND and Tat (missing citations and important literature), but it is short on offering background about what was the actual study, which is a mechanism, not the disorder. The model, the outcomes, and their relevance all should be stated upfront. 3) miRNA in the Introduction is disconnected (line 71). Terrible flow. 4) Literature on the effects of Tat on RNA PolII and on dopamine pathway is outdated. 5) Case for studying astrocytes, rather than other "physiologically relevant" cells, in the context of HIV, and in particular, neurological disorders, is not sufficiently strong. 6) The explanations about b-catenin (line 94) may have to be focused towards astrocytes. 7) Citation on numbers of opioids and HIV, and on inflammatory molecules (which by the way are not the ones investigated in the study) are needed (line 105 and 110). 8) The significance of Tat mutants is not stated in Introduction. 9) Results chapter start with miRNA, but I don't see results on miRNAs. Unfocused. 10) Overall, It is not shown whether the transfection with low, moderate or high plasmid really corresponds to low, moderate and high protein expression, upon transduction. This is desirable, to demonstrate the efficiency of the transfection and the protein levels (which are rather more important). 11) The three different models (cell line, primary astrocytes, and donors) are not well separated or justified, causing confusion and problems of flow. 12) It is not clear why in primary astrocytes there are only two doses with a 2log difference. 13) Tat only controls should be included in all graphs. It is very hard to appreciate the effects of interaction if not ALL controls are included in the graphs. 14) Reference for serum concentration of morphine found in subjects who overdosed on heroin is not provided (line 144). 15) IN line 180, all of a sudden there are donors. Human, mice, monkeys, fetal, purity of cultures, and mainly why? Only two, and with opposite results? This doesn't seem to add anything. There is zero power in this experiment, even with a paired analysis. There are two choices here. Drop the donor experiments and make a better case for astrocytes in general, introduce and discuss better the effects on b-catenin, or increase the number of donors, with data on sex, age, pre-exposure, HIV status, everything that is missing here, including statistics, to make sense. Another strong alternative is to show that the effects are reverted with interventions that restore b-catenin levels. 16) Line 190, different mutants give different results. Nowhere we see why is this relevant, whether they differ in structural properties, and implications. All this should be in the discussion. 17) Line 205. All of a sudden we have NLRP-1 and other things that were not introduced at all. Again 3 donors. AND, there no discussion about individual variability at all. 18) IN the discussion also, comments on CCL5, iNOS, genes that were not measured. 19) Paired Student's t test is not correct. Student's t test is unpaired. Very hard to follow. Rationale has to be better developed. Focus has to be largely improved. Further experiments to increase the power of readouts, with additional donors, including acknowledgment of factors that may affect individual responses in this pathway, as well as interventional studies, are recommended. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled "Morphine exposure exacerbates HIV-1 Tat driven changes to neuroinflammatory factors in cultured astrocytes " Since HAND increases in drug abusers, this study was directed to elucidate the role morphine on the effect of Tat HIV-1 and Tat mutants associated with neurocognitive impairment mediated by the β-catenin suppression and inflammatory processes. Although the data may be interesting, the manuscript has serious errors that must be resolved before it is acceptable for publication. 2.- Some paragraphs do not have a bibliographic support and there are multiple typographical, orthographic and verb conjugation errors. 3.- Throughout the writing different styles are noticed, with some secctions well written and others are not. 4.- Major changes have to be made in the methods section. 4.1. The subtitles in general are inadequate 4.2. Given that the primary cultures of astrocytes are of fetal origin, it is important to inform about the time during the fetal development in which the cells were taken, how many donors are included in the study and if the experiments were performed in same donors?, please mention culture conditions for primary cultures and the cell line (was the same medium was used for both’), mention the passage of the culture in which the studies were made. 4.3. The authors must demonstrate that the primary cultures are really astrocytes and not neural stem cells, which are also positive to GFAP. Immunohistochemistry is recommended for neural stem markers. 4.3. Furthermore, depending on the fetal age in which the cells are obtained, they have different potential for differentiation. The fact that they are proliferative indicates that they are stem cells since the differentiated astrocytes do not proliferate, unless they are cancerous. 4.4. The luciferase assay is not in the methods 4.5. Please include the data of all suppliers and the information on the antibody ID used (http://antibodyregistry.org/). 4.6. It is not clear how long after the transfections and treatments the tests were performed. 4.7. In the section of reverse transcription authors mention that it was done as for the microRNAs, but in the manuscript, there is no analysis of these molecules. Please describe how the reverse transcriptions were made. 4.8. The use of 1μl of cDNA without quantifying the amount of cDNA used in the PCR reactions is inadequate, please mention the amount of cDNA used. 4.9. Graphs on PCRs are inaccurate some are as relative expression (if so, the control group should have a value of 1), and others as xmRBNA/GAPDH. The authors are asked to clarify which method of expression analysis is used, and they are recommended to use 2-ΔΔCT. 4.9. Statistic section is unclear, why did the authors used Paired Student’s t test. And why after ANOVA a pairwise analysis was performed and not a multiple comparison test. Results: 1. The images are of very poor quality. 2. In some results they refer to the donor number and in others they do not. 3. The luciferase assay are confusing, perhaps because it is not described in the methods. 4. Not all figure legends have the statistical test used. 5. In cases where ANOVA was used, which post-test was performed. 6. It is inappropriate to use the Student's t to compare more than two groups (example Figure 1) 7. The number of experiments is not clear. The discussion does not have a clear focus and repeats a large part of the results, which makes it tedious and very long. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Maria Cecilia Garibaldi Marcondes Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Morphine exposure exacerbates HIV-1 Tat driven changes to neuroinflammatory factors in cultured astrocytes PONE-D-19-16014R1 Dear Dr. Klase, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #2: The authors responded adequately to the comments, which greatly improved the understanding of the manuscript. Only one detail remains regarding the qRT-PCR. Figure 6 indicates that the results are 2 ^ ΔΔC and should say 2 ^ -ΔΔCT. Please confirm that the data is calculated correctly. And although it is not mandatory, I suggest that the way in which the analysis was performed must be in the methods section rader than in the figure legend. ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #2: Yes: Anayansi Molina-Hernández |
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PONE-D-19-16014R1 Morphine exposure exacerbates HIV-1 Tat driven changes to neuroinflammatory factors in cultured astrocytes Dear Dr. Klase: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Fatah Kashanchi Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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