Peer Review History
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PONE-D-19-20764 Assessment of ICAM-1 N-Glycoforms in Mouse and Human Models of Endothelial Dysfunction PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rakesh Patel, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. As you will gather from the reviews, the referees identified several methodological problems and questionable functional significance of the current findings. The editor concurs. Major issues include low resolution of images and lack of support data for PLA (e.g. western analysis). Other concerns pointed by reviewers should also be addressed. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript within three months. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The study by Regal-McDonald et al used PLA to investigate co-localization of specific N-glycan structures and ICAM-1 in mouse and human atherosclerotic arteries and human AVF of chronic kidney disease patients (models of endothelial dysfunction). The results demonstrated that hypoglycosylated and α-2,6-sialylated ICAM-1 N-glycoforms are present in atherosclerotic murine and human arteries and AVF patients. The results also indicated that HM-ICAM-1 levels positively correlated with macrophage burden in both murine and human atherosclerotic tissue. The study is timely but lacks functional information on the role of ICAM-1 N-glycoforms in atherosclerosis or AVF. 1. The figures of the manuscript are very low resolution. 2. It would strengthen the findings of the manuscript if the authors confirm the results obtained using the innominate arteries by looking at total, HM / hybrid, a-2,6-sialylated, and a-2,3-sialylated ICAM-1 in the atherosclerotic mouse aorta. 3. How were the lesion and non-lesion segments identified? 4. Fig. 2 and 3 legends state that n=5 experiments were performed for CD68 immunostaining. The corresponding bar graphs show only 3 experiments. 5. What is the correlation coefficient for Fig. 4 studies? It seems there would be no correlation if only the closed symbols are taken into consideration. It is recommended to perform more experiments for the correlation studies. In the high fat diet model (Fig. 2; no ligation), there was atherosclerosis in the brachiocephalic artery and HM/hybrid, HM, a-2,6-sialylated and a-2,3-sialylated ICAM-1 were increased in lesion vs. non-lesion segments. If there is atherosclerosis in these mice but no correlation between CD68 and ConA or HHL puncta, the mechanisms regulating ICAM N-glycosylation may not be important for monocyte adhesion and macrophage accumulation. 6. Type 2 human atherosclerotic lesions show no ICAM-1 expression. The type 2 lesions are characterized by the presence of lipid-laden macrophages according to Stary et al (ATVB, 1995). These findings suggest that ICAM-1 (and its N-glycoforms) does not play a role at the early phase of monocyte transmigration in human atherosclerotic vessels. 7. Fig. 6B legends n=10 is misleading. It seems only n=5 samples per group was involved in the analysis. The authors need to carefully check the legends for accuracy. 8. This is an observational study and no functional experiments have been included to investigate the role of different ICAM-1 N-Glycoforms in the development of atherosclerosis or pathogenesis of AVF maturation failure. The manuscript would be strengthened by the addition of mechanistic data. 9. The rational for including the AVF data in the manuscript is not entirely clear. The mechanisms, leading to endothelial dysfunction in AVF failure vs atherosclerosis is different. Reviewer #2: This is a novel approach to assessment of ICAM-1 N-Glycoforms in mouse and human models of endothelial dysfunction. In this paper using the proximity ligation assay (PLA), authors assessed the relative formation of high mannose, hybrid and complex α-2,6-sialyated N-glycoforms of ICAM-1 in human and mouse models of atherosclerosis, as well as in arteriovenous fistulas (AVF) of patients on hemodialysis. To establish the distinct ICAM1-N-glycoforms in inflammatory disease in ivvivo authors solely used PLA assay. Indeed this assay has some limitation, however the PLA positive red puncta was not clear in all images throughout the manuscript. As this data represents the first study to demonstrating ICAM1-N-glycoforms invivo authors should provide convincing images with good quality pictures for PLA assay. There was no description for Figure 2F and 2G in result section. Author should mention about these two figures. In result section, Figure 3A author described that total ICAM-1, HM / hybrid N-glycoforms were increased in the ligated left carotid artery (LC) compared to the control right carotid artery (RC). But this statement was not matches with the Figure 3A. It looks like total ICAM1 and α-2,6-sialylated ICAM1 expressed more than HM/hybride. Fig 3C quantification was not reflects the Fig 3A images. Author should be careful about this discrepancy. In Fig 4 and Fig 6 show correlations between CD68 staining and HM / hybrid, HM and α-2,6- sialylated, ICAM-1 respectively. It was not clear how author made this correlation graph. Author should provide some direct evidence to prove this statement that CD68 expression higher in HM/hybrid not other ICAM1 N-glycoformes. Partial ligation and HFD are well establish model for atherosclerosis. Authors used only male mice without justification for the exclusion of female mice. Author should comment on this in discussion. Overall, this manuscript does not fit for publication in PLoS One as it currently stands. Reviewer #3: The current study showed correlation of high mannose (HM)-ICAM1 N glycoforms and a-2,6 sialylated ICAM1 N-glycoforms with macrophage burden in the lesions in human and mouse atherosclerosis, and in AVF maturation failure in hemodialysis patients. HM-ICAM1 N glycofoms and sialylated ICAM1 N-glycoforms were assessed by proximity ligation assay, while macrophage burden were assessed by CD68 staining. This is an extension of author’s previous studies. Findings are novel and important. There are several issues that should be addressed to make manuscript stronger. 1) Overall, image quality except Figure 7A is poor. High resolution image will be needed, since this is a crux of current study. 2) To support HM-ICAM1 N glycoforms and a-2,6 sialylated ICAM1 N-glycoforms in lesions, they need to be shown by western analysis as well. 3) In panel 2F, 3D, 6A, please show macrophage staining by immunohistochemistry, instead of immunofluorescence. [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. 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