Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 24, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-17789 Identification of novel non-myelin biomarkers in multiple sclerosis using an improved phage-display approach PLOS ONE Dear Dr EDOMI, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands and that some minor revisions will be required. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Sep 22 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Thank you for including your funding statement; "The research was partially funded by the Italian multiple sclerosis foundation (Fondazione italiana sclerosi multipla – FISM, www.aism.it) grant n. 2002R26 and 2004R6 to PE. The funder had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." Please provide an amended statement that declares *all* the funding or sources of support (whether external or internal to your organization) received during this study, as detailed online in our guide for authors at http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submit-now. Please also include the statement “There was no additional external funding received for this study.” in your updated Funding Statement. Please include your amended Funding Statement within your cover letter. We will change the online submission form on your behalf. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: In their work Cortini et al. described three strategy to discover new candidate autoantigens of multiple sclerosis (MS). All the strategies use a cDNA library obtained from human brain where the potential new biomarkers are selected using antibody present in bodily fluids of patients (CSF and serum) or by using a recombinant antibody library generated from two MS patients. At the end of their efforts, the authors indicate DDX24 and TCERG1 as a novel autoantigens of interest. Here are my comments: Line 118, phrase starting with “Relatively to CSF…” double check the English. Table 1. I think the term “range” should be removed for the “mean age” column, after all only the mean age is shown in the table. Line 143. Is it correct that only 1 picogram of poly(A)+ RNA and 2.5 pg of random primers were used for the generation of the library? Similarly, in line 159 the authors describe the use of only 40 pL of cells for electrocompetent cells transformation. Line 352. How many clones were screened to identify the three “background” antigens? I think it is important to state the number to give more significance to the fact that only three clones were identified. In order to reduce binding background, why the authors did not considered to use anti-IgG antibody to pre-clear the phage population before the selection? Line 415. What do the authors mean with a scFv antibody library diversity of 73%? How did they estimate the diversity? If 27% of the clones were present more than once in a very small library of 2x104 clones I questioned the quality of the library itself. Supplementary Table S7. In the legend and in the text, it is mentioned that 15 positive clones were identified, while in the table the clone frequencies are reported to be fractions of 17 clones (i.e. 1/17). Figure 2. Figure Legend. In the figure for DDX24 there are **** indicating the statistical significance, while for TCERG1 there are **, but in the figure legend the p value is indicated for ** and *** stars. Line 497. The authors state that “a bigger cohort is needed to calculate this value with a better precision”. Since the described experiment involved the use of recombinant purified proteins, instead of protein fragments displayed on the surface of the phage, the authors should repeat the experiment adding all the other sera utilized in the previous part of the study, where the proteins were displayed on phage, to increase the cohort size and better validate their findings. Line 550. The authors list the benefits of using recombinant scFv for the isolation of potential autoantigens. I found their conclusions not too convincing. It is known that, when phage selections are performed, the enrichment ratio does not necessarily reflect the quality of a selection. Even in the present work, although the selection performed by using scFv gave a 160-fold enrichment, only 15 out of 94 clones were positive during the ELISA screening (~16%) while 48% of the clones were positive when purified antibodies from CSF were used, with only a 10 fold enrichment. Moreover, the identification of the background clones was obtained selecting the cDNA library against an anti-human-IgG antibody, so the presence of no background when phage scFv directly bound on plastic are used for the selection is not surprise. A selection on an unrelated phage-scFv should have been used to assess the background of this selection strategy. Reviewer #2: The research article by Cortini et al. described the implementation of a phage display approach to identify new autoantigens in multiple sclerosis (MS). The authors first generated a cDNA library using RNA from human brain and screened against an IgG pool of cerebrospinal fluid (CFSs) collected from relapsing remitting (RR-MS) and CIS patients. The antigen library was also screened against an antibody scFv library obtained from RNA of B cells purified from CFS of two RR-MS. Within this approach, they selected 7 potential autoantigens that were validated in a first cohort of RR-MS and patients with other neurological disease (OND). Among them, two autoantigens, namely DDX24 and CTERG1, resulted significantly increased in CFS form RR-MS. Then, validation in a third cohort of RR-MS patients found that autoantibodies against DDX24 and CTERG1 were increased also in the periphery (serum) of RR-MS. Thus, the authors suggest DD24X and CTERG1 as new potential biomarkers for MS. General comment: This manuscript is of impact and very interesting for its translational potential. It would be, even more impacting, to test these biomarkers in PP-MS patients where neurodegeneration is an important part of the process, ectopic follicles are found within the brain, and the identification of specific biomarkers is still an unmet need. The manuscript is well written. Overall, my recommendation is to accept it with minor revisions. Minor comments: 1- To generate the scFv library the authors selected two drug-naïve RR-MS patients. Where the RR-MS patients of the validation cohort without any treatment as well? Please specify in the text 3- A figure showing a schematic overview of the generation of library/screening would be helpful for readers 4- Abbreviation and acronyms should be specified the first time they appear in the text. I found the full name of the two new autoantigens DDX24 (DEAD-Box Helicase 24) and TCERG1 (Transcription Elongation Regulator 1) at the end of the discussion. Please correct all along the text for all abbreviations. 5-lines 593-608: the authors should rephrase this part, because in this study they are not demonstrating any pathogenetic mechanism about the effect of these autoantibodies. They might change the word “propose” with “can speculate” 6- In Figure legend 1 the p value is missing 7-line 781: number 2 is repeated twice ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Fortunato Ferrara Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-17789R1 Identification of novel non-myelin biomarkers in multiple sclerosis using an improved phage-display approach PLOS ONE Dear Dr EDOMI, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the two very minor final points raised during the review process (changing a sentence and adding a bibliographic reference). We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 23 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Emanuele Buratti, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I appreciated how the authors addressed all my comments. I still have a couple of minor comments: - Line 120 in the revisited manuscript: "For the selection against 121 CSF samples, were pooled samples of 7 untreated RR MS patients (EDSS 0-3.5) and 4 122 clinically isolated syndrome (CIS) patients (EDSS 0-2)" I am pretty confindent that the correct English version of such sentence should be: "Samples from 7 untreated RR MS patients (EDSS 0-3.5) and 4 122 clinically isolated syndrome (CIS) patients (EDSS 0-2) were pooled for the selection against 121 CSF samples". -Line 431. I think it is worth to mention the citation of Owen et al. 2003 to briefly explain the oligoclonal nature of the antibodies obtained from CSF of MS patients. Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfactorily responded to all my questions and my recommendation is : Accept With No Changes ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Fortunato Ferrara Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Identification of novel non-myelin biomarkers in multiple sclerosis using an improved phage-display approach PONE-D-19-17789R2 Dear Dr. EDOMI, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. To ensure an efficient production and billing process, please log into Editorial Manager at https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the "Update My Information" link at the top of the page, and update your user information. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, you must inform our press team as soon as possible and no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. With kind regards, Emanuele Buratti, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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