Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 10, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-25331 Evidence for pre-climacteric activation of AOX transcription during cold-induced conditioning to ripen in European pear (Pyrus communis L.) PLOS ONE Dear Professor Dhingra, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Dec 15 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: This is an interesting study, particularly the analysis of the gene expression data. Some clarification is recommended for the following points: Line 171: Was the non-conditioning control kept at 20C in the same way as the conditioning treatment? Line 174: Why was the peel tissue used and not the flesh? Line 196: What primers were used for cDNA synthesis? Line 197: Why was the cDNA nanodropped? What information were you expecting to obtain? dNTPs can often interfere with the reading of cDNA. Line 223: "or above 2.20". Line 229: How many technical replicates were run for qRT-PCR? Line 272: What condition was defined as the calibrator (to normalize the expression data)? Comments about the intro: Since the manuscript is titled: "Evidence for pre-climacteric activation of AOX transcripcion during cold-induced...", I would recommend adding additional background about the role of this gene in the introduction. What it is currently present may not enough. Reviewer #2: The manuscript entitled “Evidence for pre-climacteric activation of AOX transcription during cold-induced conditioning to ripen in European pear (Pyrus communis L.)” contributes significantly towards understanding of the species- specific fruit ripening process of European pear and has direct implications in preventing post-harvest losses in P. communis. The work is well-performed with defined objectives, appropriate methodology, novel results with statistical significance. The manuscript is well-written with organized figures and tables, and it merits publication with some minor corrections: 1. The sample collected for gene expression studies is unclear. Why the expression has to be studied in the peel tissue and not the other part(s)? 2. In line 172, it is mentioned as ‘The fruit was evaluated for physiological parameters’; however, it is unclear what are the parameters studied? The description is available only for ‘fruit firmness’. 3. It is unclear how many replicates were maintained for qPCR analysis. Also, the statistical treatment corresponding to it has to be described. 4. Although the manuscript is well written, the list of references and the in-text citations are not proper in many places. All the references in the reference list should be as per the journal format. In many positions cited references has not been included in the reference list. Those should be incorporated. 5. Line 109: Place 43 and 44 within the same bracket. 6. In the materials and methods, in many places, reference number has not been mentioned for the in text citations. Line 170: Replace ‘Sugar and Einhorn, 2011’ by reference number 47. 7. In Line 190: the reference ‘Gasic et al., 2004’ is missing in the list of references. In text citation should be numbered. 8. Line: 192: DNAse will be ‘DNase’ 9. Line: 222: Both the references: ‘Ramakers et al., 2003’ and ‘Ruijter et al., 2009’ are not present in the list of references. Their corresponding in text citations should be numbered. 10. Line: 231: Pfaffl, 2001: Reference should be corrected and corresponding reference number to be mentioned in the text. 11. Line 233: ‘Andersen et al., 2004; Imai et al., 2014; Vandesompele et al., 2002’ all of these references are not present in the list of references. 12. Line 236: ‘Altschul et al., 1990; Gish and States, 1993’ these references are also missing in the list of references. 13. Line 238: mention the corresponding reference number (#77) for ‘Rieu and Powers, (2009)’. 14. Line: 272: Use symbols for ‘2-delta-delta Ct’ 15. Line 301, 303: Mention the reference number (#47) instead of ‘Sugar and Einhorn, 2011’ 16. Line 317: ‘Wayland, 2003’ reference missing in the list of references. 17. Line 319: Replace ‘Kruskal, 1964’ by reference # 64, Replace ‘Krzywinski and Altman, 2014’ by reference # 66. The reference ‘Young, 1970’ is missing in the list of references. 18. Line 350: ‘Olsvik, Søfteland’ will be ‘Olsvik et al.’ 19. Line 423: ‘Nham, Macnish’ will be ‘Nham et al.’ 20. Line 496: Mention the reference # 87 replacing ‘El-Sharkawy, 2004’ 21. Line 509: All of the references ‘Chang et al., 2014; Ma et al. 2012; Qiu et al., 2012’ are missing in the list of references. 22. Line 537: Mention the reference # 87 replacing ‘El-Sharkawy, 2004’ 23. Line 547: Replace ‘Sivankalyani et al., 2014’ by reference # 90. 24. Line: 565: Replace ‘Liu et al., 2013’ by reference # 12 25. Line 566: Replace ‘Tacken et al. 2012a’ by reference # 58. References ‘Robles et al., 2012; Schaffer et al., 2013;’ are not present in the list of references. 26. Line 618: Mention reference # 68 within () 27. For the list of references, the formatting should be corrected wherever they are not as per the journal format 28. Line: 727: Rewrite the reference as per journal format 29. Line 835: Rewrite the reference as per journal format 30. Line 880: Rewrite the reference as per journal format 31. Line 916: Rewrite the reference as per journal format 32. Line 925: Correction needed 33. Line 929: Rewrite the reference as per journal format 34. Line 966: Rewrite the reference 35. Line 1012: Rewrite the reference 36. A minor polishing in terms of grammar is required. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Evidence for pre-climacteric activation of AOX transcription during cold-induced conditioning to ripen in European pear (Pyrus communis L.) PONE-D-19-25331R1 Dear Dr. Dhingra, We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it complies with all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you will receive an e-mail containing information on the amendments required prior to publication. When all required modifications have been addressed, you will receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will proceed to our production department and be scheduled for publication. Shortly after the formal acceptance letter is sent, an invoice for payment will follow. 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With kind regards, Muthamilarasan Mehanathan, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The manuscript presents interesting data regarding ripening in pear. The study is technically and scientifically sound. A few aspect required some clarification, however, these were properly addressed by the authors. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No |
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PONE-D-19-25331R1 Evidence for pre-climacteric activation of AOX transcription during cold-induced conditioning to ripen in European pear (Pyrus communis L.) Dear Dr. Dhingra: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Muthamilarasan Mehanathan Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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