Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJune 19, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-17327 Carbogen gas-challenge BOLD fMRI in assessment of liver hypoxia after portal microcapsules implantation PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. The manuscript has been reviewed by two experts in the field. Both felt that the use of carbogen BOLD to evaluate hepatic hypoxia after transplantation was novel and interesting. However, they differed on the quality of the experimental design and results presented. Both reviewers commented that more complete statistical analysis is needed. Reviewer #2 raised a number of further issues, including serious concerns about the experimental design and how the results are presented. If these critiques can be addressed, then a major revision of the manuscript should be able to address the remaining, more minor comments. Please also have the manuscript edited for clarity and grammar with the help of a native English speaker. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 13 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: 1. Introduction: The Purpose of using Carbogen gas and the meaning of gas-challenge in the title need to be described clearly. 2. How long did it take to perform BOLD-fMRI data acquisition? 3. Results: The authors need to provide the tables to list the ΔR2*value of BOLD-fMRI in each group,and show the statistical results。 4. There are no pathological or imaging images. 5. In Table 1, if adding the P value will make the results clearer. 6. The full name of the BOLD is blood oxygen level dependent。Similar grammatical mistakes and clerical error may exist in several sentences in the manuscript,for example page 16, the first sentence“it still has buffering effect and liver parenchymal deoxyhemoglobin concentration”。Please carefully edit the language issues with the help of the native English-speaking experts. Reviewer #2: Introduction: 1. It is too simple for the intro section。The author mentioned hypoxia or related concept in the intro section repeatedly,please identity what exactly the mechanism of hypoxia happening after Islet cell transplantation and the concept of buffering effect by artery and portal vein in liver should be discussed in the process of hypoxia 2. The mechanism of BOLD should be expounded in the intro section。 3. In“By observing the changes of T2WI signal”,should T2WI be written as T2*? 4. Please explain why you choose the Carbogen gas as the stimulant for BOLD instead of pure oxygen,especially the effect of 5% CO2 5. Please identify what ΔR2* is。 Materials and methods 1. Please identify what SPF condition is 2. Please identify the unit of transplanted microcapsules in the 1000/kg, 3000/kg and 5000/kg 3. I can not find the information in this manuscript whether the islet cell was encapsulated into the microcapsules or not,which means nothing encapsulated in the study。If the effect to liver hypoxia by microcapsules is different between islet cell encapsulated and not,then it was the major deficiency to this study,or author should prove that there is no difference in affecting liver hypoxia between islet cell encapsulated and not。We do not use the empty microcapsules for treatment after all。 4. It is better to replace saline with the solution of microcapsules(not included microcapsules) for the control group 5. I wonder why MR scan was not performed before microcapsules transplant。It is very important to get the baseline for observing changes before and after operation。Data and experiment need to be supplemented。 6. There were 51 rabbits included but only 41 were used(three for 1,2,3,7 day in three experimental groups and 6 for control group),please explain 7. “The BOLD scan was performed at a flow rate of 15 ml/s.”,it meant the flow rate in the mask? 8. The author should clarify the amount of data for each group。As my understanding to this manuscript,author used 3*5 ROIs(15)for each group to meet the sample size requirement for statistical analysis and the author should talked about the “type I error” because there were only 3 rabbits in each group after all。Inversely,If the average value from 5 ROIs was used,the date is not enough for statistical analysis at all。 9. The author should address more details about the histopathological examination ,like the sections for whole liver or partial?like how to choose the section which is used for microscopy analysis。I do not think “Five ROIs were randomly selected”is appropriate for the inhomogeneity of hypoxia which should be talked in detail。In the end,the ROIs used in BOLD analysis and histopathological analysis should be in the same/similar location which make this study more credible。 10. In the last paragraph,should R2* be written as ΔR*? RESULTS 1. Statistical analysis between BOLD and histopathological examinations are much needed (like some quantitative indicators for avascular necrosis or the amount of capillaries,or the pimonidazole results,et al)to guarantee the value and reliability of this study。In this study,one key evidence was missed in the relationship between the amount of used microcapsules and the ΔR2*,in which the essence of hypoxia is ischemia result from obstruction of microcapsules in small vessels,hence the result from ischemia should be quantified and compared to BOLD。I only find the descriptive words for pimonidazole results but no statistical analysis。 2. In “2.1 Histopathological examination”,please indicate the time for each observation 3. Please identify the meaning of “+”for pimonidazole results 4. In “2.3:but there was significant difference between each two groups (P < 0.05).” meant significant difference between each two groups in each day? 5. In“2.4”,are all the result from 3rd day?Please address the statistical relationship between transplantation dose and ΔR2* in other time point rather than only 3rd day Discussion 1. In the 2rd paragraph,“and pimonidazole immunohistochemical results were used as a reference for hypoxia”is improper because there was no statistical analysis between and BOLD or transplantation dose 2. In“and the response of liver to Carbogen gas stimulation decreased gradually”,please identify what the response of liver is 3. There are many times for miswriting ΔR2* as R2*,the author should check it carefully。 4. Please identify “compensatory mechanism”in detail and it is hard to understand“it still has buffering effect and liver parenchymal deoxyhemoglobin concentration”,please make it more readable 5. Please identify what change is in“The degree of change was relatively reduced” 6. It is very sloppy to make the conclusion :“Therefore, BOLD-fMRI stimulated by Carbogen gas can assess the degree of liver hypoxia after portal vein microcapsule transplantation”due to the key evidence was missed which can be fixed by doing statistical analysis related to pimonidazole results or some quantitative indicators for avascular necrosis or the amount of capillaries 7. It is very hard to understand the last sentence “It is worthwhile……”,please rewrite it for more readability Figure legends: The fig4 legend should indicate the time ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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