Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJuly 10, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-19426 Mathematical Determination of the HIV-1 Matrix Shell Structure and its Impact on the Biology of HIV-1 PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Marcet-Palacios, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. This manuscript was reviewed by two experts in the field, who raised several points that need to be addressed carefully before a revised version is considered for publication. All comments are self explanatory and require more detailed description of techniques or results. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Oct 25 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: (1) The "6-lune hosohedra" structure should be mentioned in the abstract. (2) Formula 1 & 3 look mysterious, there should be more explanation about Formula 3. (3) For the 2 paragraphs following Formula 3 "Geometric consideration ..." and "Relationship between HIV-1 ...", there should be some tables about percentage or distribution of the data you obtained for the 400,000 HIV-1 particles or MA spheres. (4) Figures 3,4,5 are somewhat useful but not enough for understanding the 6-lune hosohedra structure. Is it possible to have some figures for illustration in mathematical or geometric aspect? (5) In Discussion Paragraphs 2 & 5, it is stated hexagonal MA shells are unlikely and a comparison to CA hexagonal structure is presented. For this regard, a recent paper might provide some useful info: Jiangguo Liu, Farrah Sadre-Marandi, Simon Tavener, Chaoping Chen, Curvature concentrations on the HIV-1 capsid, Mol. Based Math. Biol., 3(2015), pp.43-53 (6) For Discussion Paragraph 3, I am glad that the authors mentioned potential gaps among MA units. This should allow some random factors in the formulation of MA shells. (7) For Discussion Paragraph 7, it is helpful that the authors have discussed the limitation of their model. Overall, this paper is well written but needs further elaboration on derivation of their 6-lune hosohedra model. Reviewer #2: In this manuscript authors used geometrical and rotational matrix computational methods to construct a model and predict a new mechanism for viral entry. This work explained the increase in particle size observed during CD4 receptor engagement and the most common HIV-1 ellipsoidal shapes observed in cryo-EM tomograms. The work is interesting and meaningful. However, my concerns are listed as follows. COMMENT #1. In abstract, “Evidence by various high-resolution microscopy techniques support a model composed of MA trimers arranged in a hexameric configuration.” Firstly, the evidence is only one side, but some evidences may support a model composed of MA hexamers. Obviously, MA hexamers consist of two MA trimmers. I believe that it may be difficult to differentiate them. Therefore, I suggest that authors should describe these two views in the introduction. Secondly, this sentence is isolate to its surrounding sentences, and it is redundant, I think. COMMENT #2. Only one reference is shown about the coarse-grained method. I suggest that authors should cite more important works about it because it is one of key methods about virus assembly. COMMENT #3. Authors only presented one method (the coarse-grained method) to review the methods on HIV capsid assembly. It is not comprehensive. As far as I know, at least two main methods, including the coarse-grained method and ordinary differential equation model, are developed to simulate the HIV capsid assembly. The ordinary differential equation model assumed that the assembly model equilibrates rapidly. It was developed by Zlotnick, et. al. (J. Mol. Biol. 241 (1994), Biochemetry(1999)), and Hagan et. al. (Biophys. J. 98 (2010), Adv. Chem. Phys. (2013), Rev. Phys. Chem. 66 (2015)) to simulate viral assembly. More recently, it was applied to study HIV-1 capsid assembly by Liu, et. al. (Bull Math Biol (2019). COMMENT #4. “a 3-dimensional (3D) object constructed solely of regular hexagons cannot exist.” The meaning of this sentence may be not right. I can form a 3D capsid with hexagons by adjusting the gaps between hexagons. These irregular gaps may accommodate the curvature necessary to form an approximately spherical protein shell (E.O. Freed , Springer (2013), E.O. Freed Nat. Rev. Microbiol. (2015) ) COMMENT #5. The sphere size and its relation to the radius of a final lipid Bilayer: y = 0.198x – 4.728. To my understanding, if x=10, the sphere size y<0. Therefore, this formula may be improved or authors may add some explanations about it. There are still two similar formulas needed to be improved in this paper. COMMENT #6. “generating a 3D model of the HIV-1 MA shell in its spherical conformation using hexameric rings was impossible (Fig. 1C and D).” To my understanding, this method does not generate a spherical conformation using hexamers. But I believe that a spherical conformation can be generated by hexamers by adjusting gaps between hexamers. COMMENT #7. Please check the reference “14. Cole IR (2015) Modelling CPV. 1-260.” ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-19-19426R1 Mathematical determination of the HIV-1 matrix shell structure and its impact on the biology of HIV-1 Dear Dr. Marcet-Palacios: I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper at this point, to enable them to help maximize its impact. If they will be preparing press materials for this manuscript, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. For any other questions or concerns, please email plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. With kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Jamil S Saad Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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