Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 12, 2019 |
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PONE-D-19-25685 Distribution of Human T-Lymphotropic Virus (HTLV) and Hepatitis C Co-infection in Bahia, Brazil, PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Santos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Both expert reviewers found several areas of the manuscript that require revision. Please provide a revised manuscript that addresses all comments and suggestions of both reviewers. For the HTLV and HCV serology, please include an explanation of the differences in assay sensitivity and specificity for the two different serological assays used for each virus and how that may have impacted the study results. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Nov 30 2019 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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Please include your amended statements within your cover letter; we will change the online submission form on your behalf. Additional Editor Comments (if provided): [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: No ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: No ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: PONE-D-19-25685 Distribution of Human T-Lymphotropic Virus (HTLV) and Hepatitis C Co-infection in Bahia, Brazil The manuscript contains novel information about HTLV/HCV coinfection and prevalence in Bahia and is based on very large cohort, covering approx. 0.8% of the state’s population. Comments: 1. Please, include in the introduction why is the co-infection rate of those two agents important -clinical outcomes, treatment strategies, epidemiology, or not known at all? There is some information about this in the discussion, but it needs to be in the introduction to better justify the undertaking of the work. Lines 71-72 would be a good place to include such text. 2. Please, include in the description of the study design what was the no-random sampling bias that lead to testing predominantly females. 3. It is not clear from the data shown in the tables and figures why is co-infection more frequent in males at median age of 59? Please, demonstrate this conclusion with the specific results and support it with significance values. 4. Please, mention the genotyping method for HCV in the methods and explain why so few (only 30%) were successfully genotyped. Reviewer #2: This manuscript aims to report on the prevalence of co-infection with both HCV and HTLV infection in the state of Bahia, Brazil, an area where HTLV is highly prevalent. The authors use a valuable data source from a central lab reporting source and analyses are generally well described and conducted. However, there are numerous issues that need to be addressed that would make this article have more public health and clinical impact. Why is mapping this important? 1) Throughout the manuscript the authors present different estimates of prevalence of co-infection: (a) in the general population; (b) prevalence of HTLV given HCV infection (i.e. the denominator is HCV infected) and (c) prevalence of HCV given HTLV infection. These all have different denominators, interpretations and epidemiological significance. They cannot be compared, yet the authors do this. For example, the paragraph that starts on line 66 this - what are the authors comparing and what is it they are focused on? is it overall HCV/HTLV in the whole population? or one given the other, and if so which? This needs to be reconciled throughout the manuscript for studies cited and for the results. Then the conclusions can be better articulated and interpreted. Note that the Discussion also conflated these different approaches and the interpretation is flawed as a result. (eg, the paragraph starting on line 177: we don't know what the denominator is for the Sao Paulo study and then this is compared to Japan where author present the prevalence of HCV given HTLV infection). 2) The authors have not presented the main rationale for the study - why is this analysis important to public health and or clinical practice? What gap does this analysis fill and how should it be used to improve health or change policy? 3) It would be very very good to know how the sample of people who were tested for BOTH viruses (which is the sample correct?) compare to the general population? it is hard to interpret this from what is presented. The authors state that because it is a large sample and it is noted that females are over-represented. I am assuming this is due to prenatal testing, but the authors should explain why this is. Several areas are 100% female samples. Then this needs to be better addressed in the limitations. The manuscript needs a table with demographics and primary outcome (HCV+HTLV exposure) 4) A major limitation is that the authors are presenting prevalence of EXPOSURE to HCV - as they only present anti-HCV results. Unlike HTLV, HCV infection can be spontaneously cleared and treated. Thus this estimate does not reflect prevalence of infection, but prevalence of exposure. If authors had HCV RNA results this would be better to use for the prevalence of co-infection estimate. 5) The low number of genotyped samples presents large interpretation issues: one because obviously only RNA positive samples can be genotyped, and there are potential biases resulting from (i) differential clearance rates of HCV found in HTLV-HCV infected persons, and (ii) potential differential clearance by genotype. This needs to be addressed in limitations. Minor comments: 1) Introduction: (a) line 62: specify that this is one study conducted in rural Ethiopia. If possible let reader know if urban Ethiopia has higher co-prevalence; (b) line 65 - the conclusion of the study in Spain regarding people who inject drugs; - did this study have any data on country of origin? in particular African origin? 2) If you don't have HCV RNA results, then the manuscript needs to specify that this is HCV exposure and not HCV infection. 3) The Discussion needs to directly address how this data contributes to practice and or policy. ********** 6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. 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PONE-D-19-25685R1 Distribution of Human T-Lymphotropic Virus (HTLV) and Hepatitis C Co-infection in Bahia, Brazil, PLOS ONE Dear PhD Santos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Specifically, please address the suggestions and comments of the reviewer raised in the current revision. We would appreciate receiving your revised manuscript by Jun 05 2020 11:59PM. When you are ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that if applicable you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
Please note while forming your response, if your article is accepted, you may have the opportunity to make the peer review history publicly available. The record will include editor decision letters (with reviews) and your responses to reviewer comments. If eligible, we will contact you to opt in or out. We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, William M. Switzer, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: The authors have made a very diligent and thorough effort to address the comments and suggestions provided by the reviewers. As a result the quality of the manuscript has improved significantly. Reviewer #2: The authors have mostly addressed my concerns and critiques in the revised submission, and I commend their attention to these. I have the following minor issues that I think need addressing to make the manuscript publishable. 1) The authors need to be explicit in the Methods section that this study used data from anti-HCV test results indicating exposure to HCV and that they are using this as a proxy for infection in their co-infection estimates. While they correctly noted in the limitations that clearance would result in fewer infections that estimated, this could be more explicitly stated in methods. Contrary to what they note, anti-HCV is not used globally to indicate infection, it is used to indicate exposure and previous infection. Many current systematic reviews use or estimate infection based on RNA results, or impute it based on expected clearance rates. Also as more people are treated, we can expect anti-HCV to be an even larger over-estimate of infection. 2) Lines 127-128: age) . authors say that they 'adjusted' the estimates. Adjusted for what? if its not adjusted, for example for age, then just say the rate per 100,000 and remove the "adjusted" . Also this sentence implies that your primary outcome is HCV and HTLV- co-infection among all tests reviewed. Not only HCV in those with HTLV. Is this correct? 3) The final conclusion is still weak: how can this data inform prevention? just hoping it will is not enough - what are ways that this paper can be used beyond their descriptive contribution? ********** 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files to be viewed.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email us at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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PONE-D-19-25685R2 Distribution of Human T-Lymphotropic Virus (HTLV) and Hepatitis C Co-infection in Bahia, Brazil, PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Santos, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but still does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the minor points raised by one reviewer during the review process. Please revise the manuscript in accordance with the additional minor recommendations of Dr. Page. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 19 2020 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: http://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, William M. Switzer, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (if provided): Please revise the manuscript in accordance with the additional minor recommendations of Dr. Page. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] While revising your submission, please upload your figure files to the Preflight Analysis and Conversion Engine (PACE) digital diagnostic tool, https://pacev2.apexcovantage.com/. PACE helps ensure that figures meet PLOS requirements. To use PACE, you must first register as a user. Registration is free. Then, login and navigate to the UPLOAD tab, where you will find detailed instructions on how to use the tool. If you encounter any issues or have any questions when using PACE, please email PLOS at figures@plos.org. Please note that Supporting Information files do not need this step. |
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Distribution of Human T-Lymphotropic Virus (HTLV) and Hepatitis C Co-infection in Bahia, Brazil, PONE-D-19-25685R3 Dear Dr. Santos, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice for payment will follow shortly after the formal acceptance. To ensure an efficient process, please log into Editorial Manager at http://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/, click the 'Update My Information' link at the top of the page, and double check that your user information is up-to-date. If you have any billing related questions, please contact our Author Billing department directly at authorbilling@plos.org. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, William M. Switzer, MPH Academic Editor PLOS ONE Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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PONE-D-19-25685R3 Distribution of Human T-Lymphotropic Virus (HTLV) and Hepatitis C Co-infection in Bahia, Brazil, Dear Dr. Santos: I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now with our production department. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information please contact onepress@plos.org. If we can help with anything else, please email us at plosone@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Mr. William M. Switzer Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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