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Thank you very much for submitting your manuscript "Understanding perception of schistosomiasis and its control  among lakeshore communities in Mayuge, Uganda." for consideration at PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases. As with all papers reviewed by the journal, your manuscript was reviewed by members of the editorial board and by several independent reviewers. The reviewers appreciated the attention to an important topic. Based on the reviews, we are likely to accept this manuscript for publication, providing that you modify the manuscript according to the review recommendations.

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Clearly articulated methodology

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Results

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Results clear

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Conclusions

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-Is public health relevance addressed?

Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Conclusions are supported by the data presented and of public health relevance

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Editorial and Data Presentation Modifications?

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Reviewer #1: (No Response)

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: Authors should consider making the following changes:

Lines 77-79: to move towards the end of Introduction section, can consider merging it with Lines 162-163

Lines 80-85: references missing

Lines 81-82: it should read "actively penetrate the skin and became schistosomule. These enter the circulatory system and migrate to the liver where they develop into adult worms, pair off, and sexually reproduce."

Line 103: consider putting recent data, as these one are 5 years and older.

Lines 198 and 203-204: the acronym "WaSH" look different, please correct.

Line 276: remove "s" after the word "utensils".

Lines 289-290: consider moving this statement to Discussion

Lines 351-352: consider moving this statement to Discussion

Line 382: correct the spelling for Praziquantel.

Lines 572-576 and 593-594: consider moving these statements to Discussion.

Lines 689-740: consider including in the recommendation "improving availability and accessibility of WaSH facilities like safe water, etc", as this is in the results nd discussion, not coming out clearly in the recommendations.

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Summary and General Comments

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Reviewer #1: This is a very interesting area to explore. As the authors say, Uganda has received many rounds of treatment over the last 15 years with promising progress in some areas, but also some persistent areas of infection, and even increases, including in Mayuge. This type of qualitative, social-science approach, such as using the rapid ethnographic appraisal, is very welcome. Treatment coverage is worrying low here.

“35.3% of the population eligible to take praziquantel reported never to have taken it, despite over 10 years of MDA in this community” is an incredible statistic.

I found this article to be very well written, clear, comprehensive, and very interesting. I only have some minor suggestions / comments.

Comments

• As well as their knowledge about infection and symptoms, did the communities see SCH as a problem?

• Did you record how many of the interviewees had taken PZQ? At last round or ever?

• Out of interest, what was the intensity of infection in these areas? Presumably high as well. Were there a lot of people harboring heavy infections?

Minor / Editorial

• Line 83 – haematobium should be in italics

• Line 110 – remove extra comma

• Line 276 – check typo between ‘utensils’ and ‘other household activities’

• Figure 4 – typo in title

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: This is study is very relevant and provide important findings on the perceptions of Schistosoma mansoni disease by people living in endemic areas along Lake Victoria.

The findings and recommendations are very vital for the health officers in the national control program as they implement strategies to control schistosomiasis and move towards eliminating it as a public health problem by 2030.

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Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

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Submitted filename: Reviewer Comment (2 9 2022).docx

Dear Mr Mujumbusi,

Thank you very much for submitting your manuscript "Understanding perceptions of schistosomiasis and its control  among highly endemic lakeshore communities in Mayuge, Uganda." for consideration at PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases. As with all papers reviewed by the journal, your manuscript was reviewed by members of the editorial board and by several independent reviewers. The reviewers appreciated the attention to an important topic. Based on the reviews, we are likely to accept this manuscript for publication, providing that you modify the manuscript according to the review recommendations.

Dear Authors,

The correct acronym for Water, Sanitation and Hygiene is WASH not WaSH as used throughout the manuscript. WASH is a UNICEF approved acronym. Please revised the acronym throughout your manuscript including the reference section. Obviously, WaSH is not the same as WASH.

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[2] Two versions of the revised manuscript: one with either highlights or tracked changes denoting where the text has been changed; the other a clean version (uploaded as the manuscript file).

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Thank you again for your submission to our journal. We hope that our editorial process has been constructive so far, and we welcome your feedback at any time. Please don't hesitate to contact us if you have any questions or comments.

Sincerely,

Uwem Friday Ekpo, PhD

Academic Editor

PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases

Francesca Tamarozzi

Section Editor

PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases

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Dear Authors,

The correct acronym for Water, Sanitation and Hygiene is WASH not WaSH as used throughout the manuscript. WASH is a UNICEF approved acronym. Please revised the acronym throughout your manuscript including the reference section. Obviously, WaSH is not the same as WASH.

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Reproducibility:

To enhance the reproducibility of your results, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io, where a protocol can be assigned its own identifier (DOI) such that it can be cited independently in the future. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option to publish peer-reviewed clinical study protocols. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols

References

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Dear Mr Mujumbusi,

We are pleased to inform you that your manuscript 'Understanding perceptions of schistosomiasis and its control  among highly endemic lakeshore communities in Mayuge, Uganda.' has been provisionally accepted for publication in PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases.

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Best regards,

Uwem Friday Ekpo, PhD

Academic Editor

PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases

Francesca Tamarozzi

Section Editor

PLOS Neglected Tropical Diseases

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