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Original SubmissionDecember 4, 2023
Decision Letter - Aldrin V. Gomes, Editor

PONE-D-23-40669Integrated multi-omics approach revealed TTNtv c.13254T>G causing dilated cardiomyopathy in micePLOS ONE

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: I Don't Know

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: Authors performed extensive experimental search to analyze functional effect but did not present and prioritize their data properly.

Many important points should be addressed to improve the quality of this manuscript.

1. There is neither clinical description of patients nor phenotype of the model mice. Authors statement “In previous study, we reported two probands diagnosed with DCM carrying a novel TTNtv c.13254T>G (p.Tyr4418Ter)…” does not supported by any data. No citation to find this previous study, no published clinical case in PubMed with this mutation under given authorships, no any minimal clinical data about patients (at least age, gender, instrumental investigation, time of follow-up, any epigenetic factors of DCM etc. No description of the phenotype in mice, time of DCM detection, heart failure progression, comparability of the human and mourine cardiac involvement.

2. Genetic data are strongly underrepresented even zygosity of the TTNtv rare variant in human and mice did not mention. The volume of genetic testing is required. Are there other candidate findings? The correct description of the variant of interest is absent (genomic coordinate with the reference genome version (hg19/hg38), correct MANE or MANE Clinical transcript number or RefSeq used for cDNA description. Considering multiple transcripts for TTN gene this information in crucial. Authors mentioned once 363-exons transcript, and it might me a virtual Meta-transcript (ENST00000589042/hg19). If so than exon 45 in Meta would not present in N2B and N2BA (principal long cardiac isoforms) and expresses only in novex-1 isoform (minor short cardiac isoform), and PSI (percentage spliced in) for this exon in myocardium as small as 1%. It raises the question about ACMG(2015) criteria chosen for this variant to get Class III of pathogenicity. How it goes in mice?

3. Does this variant undergo NMD elimination or escape NMD? This should be checked. What happens with total mRNA in human and mice? Human exon 45 (if correctly determined) in symmetric and the loss of exon 45 does not change the ORF in novex-1 transcript.

4. Detailed description of the DNA findings, RNA spectrum and quantity are important for understanding what’s going on in myocardium with this rare variant.

5. Figures with histological findings are accompanied with nice statistics plots. But it is completely unclear what parameter authors try to compare.

6. Discussion will largely depend on improved phenotypic and genetic description.

Reviewer #2: The present study revealed the association of TTNtv c. 13254T>G in dilated cardiomyopathy in murine model. The manuscript is well written in standard English and statistical analysis is properly done.

However, the following points need attention.

Major Concern.

1) Western blotting results quantification and graph (Figure 3) for different titin protein variants are not convincing and required to be re-quantified. Although the Gapdh is shown to stable between KO and WT samples, It would be more appropriated to normalize the band intensities with the total protein. Additionally, a full gel picture with molecular marker would be very helpful (either in supplement or in main manuscript).

2) Figure legends should be more informative and required to be rewritten.

Minor Concern:

1) Manuscript has some syntaxes and easily recoverable errors.

2) Method section required some more Information regarding reagents used (supplier, name of kits, catalogue no. etc).

3) At few places the selection of scientific words will be more appropriate (For example: instead of lifted ..use upregulated/ increased etc)

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Revision 1

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript entitle “Integrated multi-omics approach revealed TTNtv c.13254T>G causing dilated cardiomyopathy in mice” (PONE-D-23-40669). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We online submitted a rebuttal letter, a marked-up copy of the manuscript that highlights changes, an unmarked version of the revised paper, a list of responses (with one point by point response), a new cover letter, two reprepared figures (Fig1 and Fig3) processed by PACE, western blot figure of total Titin protein (S2 Fig), and a PDF file named “S1_raw_images” containing all original blot and gel results. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are highlighted in yellow in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as following:

Responds and rebuttal to the comments of academic editor and reviewer(s):

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Response: Thanks for your important comments. Apologies for mistaking the funding. We have replaced fundings “Hubei Natural Science Foundation Youth Program (2022CFB841) and Scientific Research Program of Wuhan Municipal Health Commission (WX20D15)” by “Special Project of Hubei Provincial Health Commission (WJ2021M033)”. Dr Dan Yu received the funding. The role of the funder Dan Yu has been stated in the author contribution section of the study. Dan Yu participated in study design, conducted formal analysis and methodology. In addition, she wrote original draft and reviewed & edited the manuscript. We have provided an amended statement that declares all the funding or sources of support (whether external or internal to your organization) received during this study. We have included an amended Funding Statement within the cover letter.

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. Thank you very much.

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Reviewer #1: I Don't Know

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. We have examined our statistical analysis program of the manuscript carefully, and make sure that the statistical analysis appropriately and rigorously.

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. We have made every effort to polish the language. Thank you very much.

5. Review Comments to the Author:

Reviewer #1

Reviewer #1: Authors performed extensive experimental search to analyze functional effect but did not present and prioritize their data properly. Many important points should be addressed to improve the quality of this manuscript.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. Thank you very much.

Comments to review:

1. There is neither clinical description of patients nor phenotype of the model mice. Authors statement “In previous study, we reported two probands diagnosed with DCM carrying a novel TTNtv c.13254T>G (p.Tyr4418Ter)…” does not supported by any data. No citation to find this previous study, no published clinical case in PubMed with this mutation under given authorships, no any minimal clinical data about patients (at least age, gender, instrumental investigation, time of follow-up, any epigenetic factors of DCM etc. No description of the phenotype in mice, time of DCM detection, heart failure progression, comparability of the human and mourine cardiac involvement.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. We are very sorry for forgetting to cite our previous study “The TTN p. Tyr4418Ter mutation causes cardiomyopathy in human and mice”. Now the previous study has been cited in the introduction section (page 3, line 24) and discussion section (Page 17, line 5). In the previous study, the clinical data about two probands was described in detail in the case reports section. The construction process of KO mice, validation by sanger sequencing, serological detection time, echocardiography detection time, histological staining time were also described in the materials and methods section.

2. Genetic data are strongly underrepresented even zygosity of the TTNtv rare variant in human and mice did not mention. The volume of genetic testing is required. Are there other candidate findings? The correct description of the variant of interest is absent (genomic coordinate with the reference genome version (hg19/hg38), correct MANE or MANE Clinical transcript number or RefSeq used for cDNA description. Considering multiple transcripts for TTN gene this information in crucial. Authors mentioned once 363-exons transcript, and it might me a virtual Meta-transcript (ENST00000589042/hg19). If so than exon 45 in Meta would not present in N2B and N2BA (principal long cardiac isoforms) and expresses only in novex-1 isoform (minor short cardiac isoform), and PSI (percentage spliced in) for this exon in myocardium as small as 1%. It raises the question about ACMG (2015) criter

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Decision Letter - Aldrin V. Gomes, Editor

PONE-D-23-40669R1Integrated multi-omics approach revealed TTNtv c.13254T>G causing dilated cardiomyopathy in micePLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Xiao,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

Concerns about figure 3 and the quantification still exists, as well as the documentation of this quantification in the text is inadequate. 

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Major point:

1) Figure 3: Again, if you look carefully, quantification of 10-18, 18-23, 23-30, 30 KD titin proteins with GAPDH is not correct and convincible. They need to be quantify with adequate precision.

2) There is missing information regarding the software or program and method used for this quantification in text.

3) To enhance the confidence in Western results, it was suggested that to quantify each titin protein isomer with normalization method using total protein existing on experimental blot. However, it was partially done.

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Revision 2

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Integrated multi-omics approach revealed TTNtv c.13254T>G causing dilated cardiomyopathy in mice” (PONE-D-23-40669). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We online submitted a rebuttal letter, a marked-up copy of the manuscript that highlights changes, an unmarked version of the revised paper, one reprepared figure (Fig3) processed by PACE. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are highlighted in yellow in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as following:

Responds and rebuttal to the comments of academic editor and reviewer(s):

Journal Requirements:

1. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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Reviewer #2: Partly

Response: Thanks for your important comments. According to your suggestion, we reevaluated WB data using total protein normalization method.

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. Thank you very much.

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Reviewer #2: Thank you for some of recommended changes you have made throughout the manuscript; however, the following points need to be addressed.

Major point:

1) Figure 3: Again, if you look carefully, quantification of 10-18, 18-23, 23-30, 30 KD titin proteins with GAPDH is not correct and convincible. They need to be quantify with adequate precision.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. We apologize for not understanding your suggestions correctly for the first time. We’ve re-quantified 10-18, 18-23, 23-30, 30, 42 and 55 KD titin proteins with total protein existing on experimental blot. Figure 3 has been redrawn with the updated normalized data. (Page 14, line 8-19).

2) There is missing information regarding the software or program and method used for this quantification in text.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. The information of the software and method used for WB quantification has been supplemented to the “Statistics” section. “For western blotting, Image J was used to obtain the grayscale value of the target protein band which was further normalized with total protein” was added (Page 11, line 13-14).

3) To enhance the confidence in Western results, it was suggested that to quantify each titin protein isomer with normalization method using total protein existing on experimental blot. However, it was partially done.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. We apologize for not understanding your suggestions correctly for the first time. According to your advice, we’ve normalized 10-18, 18-23, 23-30, 30, 42 and 55 KD titin proteins using total protein existing on experimental blot.

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Response: Thanks for your important comments.

Special thanks to you for your good comments.

We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. According to the comments of reviewers, we have revised the manuscript and list specific changes here point by point. The changes have been highlighted in yellow in revised paper. The table line number of specific changes is based on the new revised manuscript.

We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.

Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

The list of specific changes

1. Page 2, line 16

“small molecular weight” was removed.

2. Page 7, line 12

“and GAPDH was the internal reference” was removed.

3. Page 8, line 2

“; GAPDH, AB-P-R 001, GOODHERE BIOTECH, Hangzhou, China” was removed.

4. Page 11, line 13-14

“For western blotting, Image J was used to obtain the grayscale value of the target protein band which was further normalized with total protein.” was added.

5. Page 14, line 10-11

“GAPDH as the internal reference” was replaced by “normalization method using total protein existing on experimental blot”.

6. Page 14, line 11-13

“Results suggested that the expression of titin protein of 10kDa~18kDa, 18~23kDa, 23~30kDa, 30kDa, 42kDa, and 55 kDa significantly decreased in mutant mice heart tissue than in WT mice heart tissue (Figs 3B-3G)” was replaced by “Results showed a downward trend in the expression of titin proteins of 10kDa~18kDa, 18~23kDa, 23~30kDa, 30kDa, 42kDa, and 55 kDa in mutant mice heart tissue compared with WT mice heart tissue (Figs 3B-3G)”.

7. Page 14, line 13

“Additionally, the total TTN protein of KO mice was significantly lower than that of WT mice (S2 Fig).” was removed.

8. Page 14, line 16-19

“The expression of Titin of 10-18 kDa, 18-23 kDa, 23-30 kDa, 30 kDa exhibited an apparent decline in cardiac tissue of KO mice compared with WT mice. 42 kDa and 55 kDa titin of KO mice expressed a decreasing trend” was replaced by “There was no significant difference in the expression of Titin of 10-18 kDa, 18-23 kDa, 23-30 kDa, 30 kDa, 42 kDa and 55 kDa between KO mice and WT mice. But all these 6 titin isoforms expressed a downward trend in heart tissue of KO mice.”.

9. Page 17, line 23-24

“western blot results suggested a significant decrease in the protein expression level of some Titin isoforms caused by TTN-truncating variant c.13254T>G, especially low molecular weight Titin protein fragments” was replaced by “western blot results suggested a downward trend in the protein expression level of some Titin isoforms caused by TTN-truncating variant c.13254T>G”.

10. Page 20, line 3

“small molecular” was removed.

11. Page 23, line 11-12

“S2 Fig. (A) Quantification results of the total titin of KO mice and WT mice by WB. WB was carried out twice on KO mouse #2 and WT mouse L164 heart tissue samples. (B) Wilcoxon test showed that titin's total protein expression level was profoundly declined in KO mice than in WT mice.” was removed.

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Decision Letter - Aldrin V. Gomes, Editor

PONE-D-23-40669R2Integrated multi-omics approach revealed TTNtv c.13254T>G causing dilated cardiomyopathy in micePLOS ONE

Dear Dr. Xiao,

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

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Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #2: Thanks for suggested changes: However, there are minor concern and need to be addressed.

(1) It would be better to submit complete gel picture of total protein (used for normalization) either under the main Western Gel in Figure or in Supplement.

(2) Statistically, there is no differences in titin protein isomers between KO and WT. Moreover, there is negligible differences in the mean values of quantifications of all titin isomers between KO and WT. In that case, it not appropriate to describe them as "decreasing trend" in the text and figure legend. Critically, there is no changes. It is recommended to make changes and describe accordingly in results, discussion, and figure legend.

Reviewer #3: The author has adequately addressed the comments of the reviewers from the previous revision. The statistics have been performed appropriately and rigorously, and the manuscript is presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English.

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Revision 3

Dear editors and reviewers:

Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers’ comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Integrated multi-omics approach revealed TTNtv c.13254T>G causing dilated cardiomyopathy in mice” (PONE-D-23-40669). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding significance to our researches. We online submitted a rebuttal letter, a marked-up copy of the manuscript that highlights changes, an unmarked version of the revised paper, one re-prepared figure (Figure 3) processed by PACE, and an updated S1_raw_images. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are highlighted in yellow in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer’s comments are as following:

Responds and rebuttal to the comments of academic editor and reviewer(s):

Journal Requirements:

1. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. We have reviewed the reference list carefully. It is complete and correct without any retracted papers cited. No changes have been made to the reference list.

Comments to the Author:

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #2: (No Response)

Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed

Response: Thanks for your important comments. Thank you very much.

2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #2: Partly

Reviewer #3: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. According to your suggestion, we’ve supplemented the gel image of the total protein used for normalization and deleted WT mice titin isoforms decreasing trend-related content from the article.

3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. Thank you very much.

4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

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Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. Thank you very much.

5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #2: Yes

Reviewer #3: Yes

Response: Thanks for your important comments. Thank you very much.

6. Review Comments to the Author:

Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)

Reviewer #2: Thanks for suggested changes: However, there are minor concern and need to be addressed.

Major point:

(1) It would be better to submit complete gel picture of total protein (used for normalization) either under the main Western Gel in Figure or in Supplement.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. The gel picture of the total protein used for normalization has been added to figure 3 as figure 3B, and to the supplementary file S1_raw_images. We first obtained gray values of titin isoforms and total protein using the software ImageJ. Then, titin isoforms were normalized by being divided by the gray value of the total protein. We further analyzed the difference in the normalized gray value of titin isoforms between KO mice and WT mice. The results showed no significant difference in the protein expression level of these titin isoforms between the two groups.

(2) Statistically, there is no differences in titin protein isomers between KO and WT. Moreover, there is negligible differences in the mean values of quantifications of all titin isomers between KO and WT. In that case, it not appropriate to describe them as "decreasing trend" in the text and figure legend. Critically, there is no changes. It is recommended to make changes and describe accordingly in results, discussion, and figure legend.

Response: Thanks for your important comments. We’ve removed all the conclusions related to the decreasing trend of WT mice titin isoforms from the abstract, results, discussion and figure legend of the manuscript (Page 2, line 16; Page 14, line 10-13; Page 14, line 19; Page 17, line 22; Page 20, line 2).

Reviewer #3: The author has adequately addressed the comments of the reviewers from the previous revision. The statistics have been performed appropriately and rigorously, and the manuscript is presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English.

Response: Thanks for your important comments.

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Reviewer #2: No

Reviewer #3: No

Response: Thanks for your important comments.

Special thanks to you for your good comments.

We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. According to the comments of reviewers, we have revised the manuscript and list specific changes here point by point. The changes have been highlighted in yellow in revised paper. The table line number of specific changes is based on the new revised manuscript.

We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers’ warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.

Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.

The list of specific changes

1. Page 2, line 16

The sentence “The TTNtv Y4370* caused a decrease in some isoforms of Titin protein.” was removed.

2. Page 14, line 8

“isoforms (Fig 3A)” was added.

3. Page 14, line 10

“(Fig 3B)” was added. “(Figs 3A)” was deleted.

4. Page 14, line 10-13

Sentence “Results showed a downward trend in the expression of titin proteins of 10kDa~18kDa, 18~23kDa, 23~30kDa, 30kDa, 42kDa, and 55 kDa in mutant mice heart tissue compared with WT mice heart tissue (Figs 3B-3G)” was replaced by “Results showed no significant differences in the expression of titin proteins of 10kDa~18kDa, 18~23kDa, 23~30kDa, 30kDa, 42kDa, and 55 kDa in mutant mice heart tissue compared with WT mice heart tissue (Figs 3C-3H)”.

5. Page 14, line 15-16

“(B) Western blot image of total titin protein of KO mice and WT mice.” was added.

6. Page 14, line 16

“(B)~(G)” was replaced by “(C)~(H)”.

7. Page 14, line 19

“But all these 6 titin isoforms expressed a downward trend in heart tissue of KO mice.” was removed.

8. Page 17, line 22

“In addition, western blot results suggested a downward trend in the protein expression level of some Titin isoforms caused by TTN-truncating variant c.13254T>G.” was deleted.

9. Page 20, line 1

“and” was added.

10. Page 20, line 2

“, and decreased expression level of titin isoforms” was removed.

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Decision Letter - Aldrin V. Gomes, Editor

Integrated multi-omics approach revealed TTNtv c.13254T>G causing dilated cardiomyopathy in mice

PONE-D-23-40669R3

Dear Dr. Xiao,

We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements.

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Aldrin V. Gomes, Ph.D.

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Reviewers' comments:

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Comments to the Author

1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.

Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.

Reviewer #2: Yes

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #2: Yes

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available?

The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.

Reviewer #2: Yes

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English?

PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #2: (No Response)

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PONE-D-23-40669R3

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