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Decision Letter - Wislei Riuper Osório, Editor

Dear Dr. Katiyar,

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Additional Editor Comments:

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Based on the Reviewers’ comments and suggestions, the proposed manuscript should meticulously be revised and improved. For this, it is indicated that a Rebuttal letter be prepared. Please, taken attention in each one of the items comments. Additionally, it is hardly suggested that a Grammar and Spelling revision be also made. Besides, reproducibility and repeatability should also be better explained and elucidated.

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

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1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

Reviewer #1: Partly

Reviewer #2: Partly

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2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?>

Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

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Reviewer #1: I previously reviewed an earlier version of this manuscript, and although the revised submission shows noticeable improvements in organization, statistical presentation, and discussion of some physical mechanisms, several important concerns raised in the previous review remain insufficiently addressed. In my opinion, these unresolved issues are substantial and still justify a recommendation of major revision.

Important methodological and reproducibility concerns remain unresolved.

a. Robustness and predictive reliability of the statistical model

The manuscript continues to report extremely high R² values (~0.999) obtained from a relatively limited experimental design space. Although the revised version now briefly acknowledges the possibility of overfitting, no independent external validation or cross-validation procedure has been performed. The validation remains restricted to confirmation experiments conducted very close to the optimized condition itself, which is not sufficient to fully demonstrate the true predictive capability or generalizability of the proposed model. Since the work strongly emphasizes predictive modelling and optimization, stronger validation procedures are necessary to support these claims.

b) Experimental reproducibility and data availability

The manuscript still states only that “Data is provided within the manuscript. ” However, no structured raw dataset, supplementary spreadsheet, or publicly accessible repository has been provided. Considering that the study relies heavily on ANOVA/RSM modelling and statistical optimization, the absence of openly accessible experimental datasets substantially limits reproducibility, transparency, and independent verification of the reported results. This remains an important concern, particularly under the reproducibility and data-sharing standards expected by PLOS ONE.

C. Scientific contribution and scope

While the manuscript has improved its discussion and presentation, the core contribution still remains largely centered on the application of established statistical optimization techniques (RSM/ANOVA) to a relatively restricted processing window of Cu–Gr composites. The broader scientific impact and methodological novelty of the study could still be more clearly established.

D. Language and scientific writing

Although improved compared with the previous version, the manuscript still contains several grammatical inconsistencies and awkward sentence constructions throughout the text. Additional professional language revision would improve clarity and readability.

the remaining concerns regarding validation robustness, predictive reliability, reproducibility, and data transparency are still significant and should be more thoroughly addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication.

Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses an applied and industrially relevant topic and is currently in its second revision; however, in its present form, it still falls short of the scientific rigor required to support its central claims of “predictive modelling,” “optimization,” and “sustainable manufacturing.” The revision carried out by the authors has improved certain aspects of writing and transparency, but it has not resolved the core conceptual and methodological problems previously identified by the reviewers. The study remains essentially based on a quadratic RSM/CCD fit over a restricted experimental space, with a predominantly qualitative physical interpretation and internal statistical inconsistencies that are still present in the revised text. For example, one problematic issue remains the choice of absolute density as a response variable while the graphite content is simultaneously varied. The manuscript itself acknowledges that density decreases with increasing graphite content due to the intrinsic difference between the densities of copper and graphite, in addition to possible effects of wettability and agglomeration. This means that the “density” response is inevitably confounded by the rule of mixtures, without adequately isolating the actual densification efficiency. Under these conditions, the interpretation of the processing optimum becomes conceptually weakened. Furthermore, although the authors claim to have corrected the ANOVA and strengthened the statistical validation, the revised text still contains internal inconsistencies. In the density ANOVA, temperature and time appear with p = 0.0035, yet the text states that all three factors have p < 0.0001; in the hardness ANOVA, term C (holding time) appears with p = 0.5170, and is therefore not significant, but the text states that A, B, and C are significant with p < 0.0001. There is also inconsistency in the R² and adjusted R² values discussed for the density model. This compromises the reliability of the statistical analysis.

In addition:

1. How do the authors justify the interpretation of “optimal densification” without using relative density, linear shrinkage, and/or open/closed porosity?

2. How do the authors intend to quantitatively separate the effect of composition from the actual effect of sintering? Without such separation, in what sense can the reported “optimum” be regarded as a processing optimum rather than simply a reflection of the rule of mixtures?

3. Is there any quantitative analysis supporting the interpretation of diffusion, neck growth, and the competition between densification and grain growth?

4. How do the authors explain that, in Table 4, temperature and time have p = 0.0035, while the text states p < 0.0001 for all factors? How do they justify that, in Table 6, term C has p = 0.5170 and is nevertheless treated textually as significant? Which set of R²/adjusted R² values for density should be considered correct: 99.18/98.44% or 99.90/99.40%?

5. What is the quantitative basis for claiming homogeneous graphite dispersion? Were area fraction, interparticle spacing, degree of agglomeration, pore size distribution, or statistical analysis over multiple fields calculated?

6. How do the authors demonstrate grain growth in the absence of a quantitative average grain size analysis?

7. How do they infer reduced wettability without contact-angle measurements, more detailed interfacial analysis, or quantitative evidence of interfacial gaps?

8. What is the actual functional relevance of the study for electrical and tribological applications if only density and hardness were measured?

9. In what strict technical sense does this work demonstrate sustainable manufacturing? How do the authors justify such wording in the title without any objective sustainability metric? Would it not be more appropriate to replace this formulation with something more modest and methodologically consistent, limited to statistical process optimization?

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Revision 1

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Response: Figure 1 of the manuscript contain images that are originally taken by the author. The authors have worked on the ball milling machine and furnace shown in the Figure 1.

General Editorial Questions

Comment 1: Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions?

Reviewer #1: Partly

Reviewer #2: Partly

Response: The manuscript has been revised to improve technical clarity and strengthen the linkage between experimental data and conclusions. Additional explanations have been incorporated to better justify the observed trends, and limitations of the study have now been explicitly acknowledged. While the experimental framework remains valid, the discussion has been expanded to avoid overgeneralization and to ensure that conclusions are fully supported by the presented data.

Comment 2: Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?

Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: No

Response: We appreciate the reviewers’ observations. The statistical analysis has been carefully re-evaluated. Errors and inconsistencies in the ANOVA tables have been corrected, and additional statistical validation—such as residual analysis and diagnostic plots—has now been included. The interpretation of statistical parameters has also been revised to align with standard practices.

Comment 3: Have the authors made all data underlying the findings fully available?

Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: All relevant data supporting the findings are included within the manuscript. The experimental data of density and hardness are shown in Figures 4-6. In addition, structured datasets and supporting numerical values have now been organized more clearly (given in Table 3).

Comment 4: Is the manuscript written in standard English and presented clearly?

Reviewer #1: No

Reviewer #2: Yes

Response: The manuscript has undergone thorough language editing to improve clarity, grammar, and readability. Redundant statements have been removed, and the overall structure has been refined to ensure clear and concise scientific communication.

Reviewer #1:

I previously reviewed an earlier version of this manuscript, and although the revised submission shows noticeable improvements in organization, statistical presentation, and discussion of some physical mechanisms, several important concerns raised in the previous review remain insufficiently addressed. In my opinion, these unresolved issues are substantial and still justify a recommendation of major revision.

Important methodological and reproducibility concerns remain unresolved.

Major´s

Comment 1. Robustness and predictive reliability of the statistical model

The manuscript continues to report extremely high R² values (~0.999) obtained from a relatively limited experimental design space. Although the revised version now briefly acknowledges the possibility of overfitting, no independent external validation or cross-validation procedure has been performed. The validation remains restricted to confirmation experiments conducted very close to the optimized condition itself, which is not sufficient to fully demonstrate the true predictive capability or generalizability of the proposed model. Since the work strongly emphasizes predictive modelling and optimization, stronger validation procedures are necessary to support these claims

Response: We thank the reviewer for this important comment. In the present study, the models were developed using Response Surface Methodology (RSM) based on the experimental data generated within the investigated design space, and their adequacy was evaluated through analysis of variance (ANOVA), residual analysis and predicted-versus-actual plots. However, additional validation approaches, such as cross-validation, independent test datasets, or experiments conducted at new design points outside the optimization region, would strengthen confidence in the model's generalizability. These aspects are beyond the scope of the present study and will be considered in future work

Comment 2. Experimental reproducibility and data availability

The manuscript still states only that “Data is provided within the manuscript. ” However, no structured raw dataset, supplementary spreadsheet, or publicly accessible repository has been provided. Considering that the study relies heavily on ANOVA/RSM modelling and statistical optimization, the absence of openly accessible experimental datasets substantially limits reproducibility, transparency, and independent verification of the reported results. This remains an important concern, particularly under the reproducibility and data-sharing standards expected by PLOS ONE.

Response: The experimental data is provided in the Table 3 for both density and hardness of the composite.

Comment 3. Scientific contribution and scope

While the manuscript has improved its discussion and presentation, the core contribution still remains largely centered on the application of established statistical optimization techniques (RSM/ANOVA) to a relatively restricted processing window of Cu–Gr composites. The broader scientific impact and methodological novelty of the study could still be more clearly established.

Response- We thank the reviewer for this thoughtful assessment and constructive suggestion. The primary objective of the present study was not to develop a new statistical methodology but rather to systematically investigate the combined effects of graphite content, sintering temperature, and sintering time on the density and hardness of Cu–Gr composites and to establish empirical relationships between these processing variables and the resulting properties. The contribution of the work lies in providing a statistically guided optimization framework for Cu–Gr composites fabricated through powder metallurgy and in identifying the parameter combinations that maximize the measured responses within the investigated experimental domain. Further, the RSM technique can be used for other metal matrix composites, also for analysis of tribological performance the composites.

Comment 4. Language and scientific writing

Although improved compared with the previous version, the manuscript still contains several grammatical inconsistencies and awkward sentence constructions throughout the text. Additional professional language revision would improve clarity and readability.

the remaining concerns regarding validation robustness, predictive reliability, reproducibility, and data transparency are still significant and should be more thoroughly addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication.

Response- The authors acknowledge the reviewer comment. The manuscript has undergone a thorough revision to improve grammar, sentence structure, clarity, and overall readability. The text has been carefully reviewed, and several grammatical inconsistencies have been corrected throughout the manuscript. With respect to the concerns related to validation robustness, predictive reliability, reproducibility, and data transparency, we acknowledge the importance of these aspects. The scope and limitations of the developed RSM models have been further clarified in the revised manuscript.

Reviewer #2:

The manuscript addresses an applied and industrially relevant topic and is currently in its second revision; however, in its present form, it still falls short of the scientific rigor required to support its central claims of “predictive modelling,” “optimization,” and “sustainable manufacturing.” The revision carried out by the authors has improved certain aspects of writing and transparency, but it has not resolved the core conceptual and methodological problems previously identified by the reviewers. The study remains essentially based on a quadratic RSM/CCD fit over a restricted experimental space, with a predominantly qualitative physical interpretation and internal statistical inconsistencies that are still present in the revised text. For example, one problematic issue remains the choice of absolute density as a response variable while the graphite content is simultaneously varied. The manuscript itself acknowledges that density decreases with increasing graphite content due to the intrinsic difference between the densities of copper and graphite, in addition to possible effects of wettability and agglomeration. This means that the “density” response is inevitably confounded by the rule of mixtures, without adequately isolating the actual densification efficiency. Under these conditions, the interpretation of the processing optimum becomes conceptually weakened. Furthermore, although the authors claim to have corrected the ANOVA and strengthened the statistical validation, the revised text still contains internal inconsistencies. In the density ANOVA, temperature and time appear with p = 0.0035, yet the text states that all three factors have p < 0.0001; in the hardness ANOVA, term C (holding time) appears with p = 0.5170, and is therefore not significant, but the text states that A, B, and C are significant with p < 0.0001. There is also inconsistency in the R² and adjusted R² values discussed for the density model. This compromises the reliability of the statistical analysis.

Response: The authors sincerely thank the reviewer for the careful and constructive assessment of the manuscript. We acknowledge that several statements in the previous version generalized the significance of model terms and inadvertently introduced inconsistencies between the ANOVA tables and their interpretation. The manuscript has been thoroughly revised to ensure complete consistency between the statistical outputs and the accompanying discussion.

For the density model, the previous statement indicating that all three factors possessed p-values lower than 0.0001 has been corrected. The revised text now accurately reports that composition (A), temperature (B), and holding time (C) are statistically significant with p-values of <0.0001, 0.0035, and 0.0035, respectively. Likewise, the values of R² and adjusted R² have been carefully verified and corrected wherever necessary. Similarly, for the hardness model, the previous interpretation has been revised to reflect the actual ANOVA results. The linear effect of holding time (C) was found to be statistically insignificant (p = 0.5170), and therefore the earlier statement suggesting that all three linear factors possessed p-values lower than 0.0001 has been removed. The revised discussion now clarifies that the effect of holding time on hardness is predominantly nonlinear, as evidenced by the highly significant quadratic term (C², p < 0.0001) and the significant BC interaction term (p = 0.0002). Consequently, holding time contributes to the hardness response through curvature and interaction effects rather than through a simple linear relationship.

In addition, the sentence referring to possible inconsistencies arising from rounding of numerical values has been removed to avoid ambiguity and to maintain the integrity of the statistical analysis. With regard to the reviewer's concern regarding the use of density as a response variable, the authors agree that the absolute density of Cu–graphite composites is inherently influenced by the density difference between copper and graphite according to the rule of mixtures. Therefore, a reduction in density with increasing graphite content cannot be interpreted solely as a reduction in densification efficiency. To address this concern, the discussion has been revised to emphasize that the measured density values represent the combined influence of composition and processing conditions.

Major Comments

Comment 1: How do the authors justify the interpretation of “optimal densification” without using relative density, linear shrinkage, and/or open/closed porosity?

Response: The authors aim was to predict the density of composites in the desired processing conditions, since optimization of density would be affected by many other variables (relative density, shrinkage, porosity). The densification was evaluated solely based on the experimentally measured density values of the Cu–Gr composites. The term “optimal densification” has been removed from the manuscript. The processing condition that resulted in the highest measured density among the investigated samples was determined in the present work.

Comment 2: How do the authors intend to quantitatively separate the effect of composition from the actual effect of sintering? Without such separation, in what sense can the reported “optimum” be regarded as a processing optimum rather than simply a reflection of the rule of mixtures?

Response- We acknowledge that the measured density is inherently influenced by the composite composition, and changes in density may partly arise from the rule of mixtures associated with varying graphite content in addition to the effects of sintering. The present work did not aim to quantitatively decouple the contribution of composition from the intrinsic sintering behavior through parameters such as relative density, densification parameter, shrinkage, or porosity measurements.

Therefore, the term "optimum" refers to the optimum combination of composition and processing parameters within the selected design space rather than a pure sintering optimum. To avoid any ambiguity, the manuscript has been revised to clarify this point and to state that the optimized conditions correspond to the ‘maximum’ predicted density and hardness achieved by RSM within the investigated range of composition and sintering parameters.

Comment 3: Is there any quantitative analysis supporting the interpretation of diffusion, neck growth, and the competition between densification and grain growth?

Response- We thank the reviewer for this valuable comment. The present study did not include direct quantitative characterization of these phenomena through measurements such as neck-size evolution, grain-size analysis, diffusion coefficients. The experimentally observed trends in density and hardness were discussed according to the well-established principles of powder metallurgy and solid-state sintering reported in the literature.

Comment 4: How do the authors explain that, in Table 4, temperature and time have p = 0.0035, while the text states p < 0.0001 for all factors? How do they justify that, in Table 6, term C has p = 0.5170 and is nevertheless treated textually as si

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Decision Letter - Wislei Riuper Osório, Editor

Dear Dr. Katiyar,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.

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ACADEMIC EDITOR:

Dear Authors;

Please, in this second round of the revision, Reviewers have again provided comments concern to statistical aspects and repeability concerning to data attained. Please, it should meticulusly revised and improved. For this purpose, please, consider each one of the comments provided and a rebutal should be uploaded. Based on these Reviewer's comments, it is expected that Authors provide new sentences explaining details and procedures about the commnets provided. After this, it seems that the manuscript will deserve its publication.

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We look forward to receiving your revised manuscript.

Kind regards,

Wislei Riuper Osório

Academic Editor

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Additional Editor Comments (if provided):

Dear Authors;

Please, in this second round of the revision, Reviewers have again provided comments concern to statistical aspects and repeability concerning to data attained. Please, it should meticulusly revised and improved. For this purpose, please, consider each one of the comments provided and a rebutal should be uploaded. Based on these Reviewer's comments, it is expected that Authors provide new sentences explaining details and procedures about the comments provided. After this, it seems that the manuscript will deserve its publication.

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Reviewers' comments:

Reviewer's Responses to Questions

Comments to the Author

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??>

Reviewer #3: Partly

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3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?>

Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??>

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Reviewer #3: (No Response)

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5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??>

Reviewer #3: Yes

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Reviewer #3: 1. Critical Overview

The manuscript addresses the prediction of sintered density and Vickers microhardness for copper-graphite composites processed via powder metallurgy (PM), employing a central composite design (CCD) coupled with Response Surface Methodology (RSM). The topic holds significant industrial relevance for friction components and electrical contacts. However, the manuscript exhibits flaws, such as the omission of experimental replicates for physical properties and a suspicious level of overfitting in the statistical models that requires thorough justification.

2. Strengths

* The use of complementary microstructural characterization techniques (XRD, SEM, and EDS elemental mapping) qualitatively validates the distribution of graphite within the copper matrix.

* The attempt to correlate actual physical parameters (porosity and the difference from theoretical density based on the rule of mixtures) with statistical responses demonstrates a sound physical basis for the discussion of graphite behavior.

3. Weaknesses and Mandatory Improvements (Major Revisions)

* Omission of Replicates (Density): While Section 2.2 categorically states that hardness was measured 7 times per sample, the text is completely silent regarding the number of density measurements. Was only one measurement performed per run? The authors must clarify the statistical sample size (N) for density and include error bars in the plots shown in Figures 5, 6, and 7.

* Overfitting Analysis: The R2 values presented in Tables 5 and 7 are extremely high (99.9%). However, the predicted and adjusted R2 values in the statistical summary tables show unusual variations (e.g., in Table 5, the linear model has an Adj. R2 of -0.5364$, whereas the quadratic model jumps to 0.9940). The authors must provide residual diagnostic plots and explain in detail whether the narrow experimental range resulted in an artificially overfitted model.

4. Minor Revisions

* Units of Measurement: In Table 2, the unit for Sintering Temperature is written simply as "C". Correct it to "°C" using the appropriate formatting.

* Scientific Language: In the abstract and throughout the text, eliminate vague and informal terms such as "perfect fit" or "minimal errors". Replace them with precise statistical terms (e.g., "The quadratic model exhibited a strong correlation with experimental data, as evidenced by an R2 of 0.999").

* Time Standardization: Replace the informal abbreviation "hrs" with "h" (International System standard) throughout the text and tables.

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Reviewer #3: No

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Revision 2

Response to Reviewer’s comments

The authors sincerely thank the Editor and the Reviewer for the thorough evaluation of our manuscript and for the constructive comments and valuable suggestions. We greatly appreciate the time and effort devoted to reviewing our work. The comments have been carefully considered, and the manuscript has been comprehensively revised to address all the concerns raised. In particular, we have further strengthened the statistical analysis by clarifying the experimental methodology, improving the discussion on model robustness and limitations, revising the interpretation of the statistical results, and enhancing the transparency of the predictive modelling approach. We believe that these revisions have significantly improved the scientific rigour, clarity, and overall quality of the manuscript. A detailed, point-by-point response to each comment is provided below, and all corresponding changes have been incorporated into the revised manuscript and highlighted for the reviewer's convenience.

Reviewer #3:

Comment 1. Critical Overview: The manuscript addresses the prediction of sintered density and Vickers microhardness for copper-graphite composites processed via powder metallurgy (PM), employing a central composite design (CCD) coupled with Response Surface Methodology (RSM). The topic holds significant industrial relevance for friction components and electrical contacts. However, the manuscript exhibits flaws, such as the omission of experimental replicates for physical properties and a suspicious level of overfitting in the statistical models that requires thorough justification.

Response: The authors thank the reviewer for the careful evaluation of the manuscript and for recognising the industrial relevance of the present work. We appreciate the opportunity to further clarify these important methodological aspects.

Regarding the experimental replicates, we acknowledge that the manuscript did not explicitly describe the replication strategy in sufficient detail. In the present work, each experimental condition defined by the Central Composite Design (CCD) was fabricated once, and the measured physical properties were obtained from multiple measurements on each specimen. Specifically, the Vickers microhardness values reported for each experimental run represent the average of multiple indentations performed at different locations on the specimen surface in order to minimise the influence of local microstructural heterogeneity. Similarly, density was determined using Archimedes' principle following standard practice. We agree that fabrication-level replicates would provide a more rigorous assessment of experimental variability and statistical confidence. However, owing to limitations in material availability and experimental resources, independent replicate specimens for every CCD condition could not be produced. This limitation has now been explicitly acknowledged in the revised manuscript, and it has been stated that future work will include replicated experimental runs to further strengthen the statistical reliability of the developed models.

Regarding the concern of potential overfitting, we fully understand the reviewer's observation that the reported coefficients of determination (R² ≈ 0.99) may appear unusually high. These values primarily arise because the investigated design space was intentionally narrow and carefully controlled, involving only three process variables over limited practical ranges using a Central Composite Design specifically intended for second-order response modelling. To ensure that the high R² values do not merely reflect model overfitting, the revised manuscript now provides a more comprehensive statistical assessment, including Adjusted R², Predicted R², ANOVA, Lack-of-Fit analysis, residual diagnostics, normal probability plots, residual-versus-predicted plots, residual-versus-run-order plots, and predicted-versus-actual plots. These diagnostic analyses collectively indicate that the regression models adequately represent the experimental data within the investigated design space, with randomly distributed residuals, no systematic trends, and statistically insignificant lack-of-fit.

Furthermore, the predictive capability of the developed models was verified through independent confirmation experiments conducted under the optimised processing conditions, in which the experimentally measured density and hardness closely matched the model predictions, with very small prediction errors. We agree that independent external validation or cross-validation with additional experimental datasets would provide a stronger assessment of the model's generalizability. However, such validation was beyond the scope of the present investigation and has now been explicitly acknowledged as a limitation of the study.

Accordingly, the manuscript has been revised to clarify that the developed RSM models are intended to provide reliable prediction and optimisation within the investigated experimental domain, rather than to serve as universal predictive models applicable outside the selected processing window. We believe these revisions substantially strengthen the transparency, statistical rigour, and interpretation of the proposed models while clearly defining their scope and limitations.

Comment 2. Strengths

* The use of complementary microstructural characterization techniques (XRD, SEM, and EDS elemental mapping) qualitatively validates the distribution of graphite within the copper matrix.

* The attempt to correlate actual physical parameters (porosity and the difference from theoretical density based on the rule of mixtures) with statistical responses demonstrates a sound physical basis for the discussion of graphite behaviour.

Response: The authors are very grateful and obliged for the encouraging comments from the honourable reviewer.

Comment 3. Weaknesses and Mandatory Improvements (Major Revisions)

3.1 Omission of Replicates (Density): While Section 2.2 categorically states that hardness was measured 7 times per sample, the text is completely silent regarding the number of density measurements. Was only one measurement performed per run? The authors must clarify the statistical sample size (N) for density and include error bars in the plots shown in Figures 5, 6, and 7.

Response- The authors are thankful for the reviewer’s comment. The sintered density of all composites was measured five times. Also, the density range for each composite is shown as error bars in the respective Figures (5, 6, and 7). The clarification sentence is included in the manuscript and is highlighted.

Comment 4. Overfitting Analysis: The R2 values presented in Tables 5 and 7 are extremely high (99.9%). However, the predicted and adjusted R2 values in the statistical summary tables show unusual variations (e.g., in Table 5, the linear model has an Adj. R2 of -0.5364$, whereas the quadratic model jumps to 0.9940). The authors must provide residual diagnostic plots and explain in detail whether the narrow experimental range resulted in an artificially overfitted model.

Response- The authors acknowledge the reviewer's comment for highlighting concern regarding potential overfitting and the unusually high R2. The apparent variation between the adjusted and predicted R2 values across the different models, particularly the low adjusted R2 of the linear model and the substantially higher value for the quadratic model, reflects the ability of the respective model structures to capture the nonlinear response within the investigated experimental domain.

The linear model does not adequately capture the variation in the response, whereas the inclusion of quadratic terms substantially improves the model fit. We acknowledge that the relatively narrow experimental ranges of the input parameters may contribute to the exceptionally high R2 values.

We have carefully re-examined the regression models and included the corresponding residual diagnostic plots (9(a, b) and 11(a, b)) to assess model adequacy and potential overfitting. The residual plots show that the residuals are randomly scattered around the zero line without any clear systematic pattern, indicating that the assumptions of model adequacy are reasonably satisfied. Furthermore, the residuals are predominantly distributed within a narrow range, with no evident trend or pronounced outliers. The detailed discussion of residual plots has been added to the manuscript and highlighted.

Comment 5: Minor Revisions

* Units of Measurement: In Table 2, the unit for Sintering Temperature is written simply as "C". Correct it to "°C" using the appropriate formatting.

* Scientific Language: In the abstract and throughout the text, eliminate vague and informal terms such as "perfect fit" or "minimal errors". Replace them with precise statistical terms (e.g., "The quadratic model exhibited a strong correlation with experimental data, as evidenced by an R2 of 0.999").

* Time Standardization: Replace the informal abbreviation "hrs" with "h" (International System standard) throughout the text and tables.

Response: The authors acknowledge the reviewer comments.

* Units of Measurement: The unit of sintering temperature in Table 2 is changed to "°C" and highlighted in the manuscript.

* Scientific Language: The authors have replaced the informal terms throughout the manuscript and highlighted the same.

* Time Standardisation: The authors thank the reviewer for pointing this out. The abbreviation “hrs” has been replaced with “h” throughout the manuscript in accordance with the International System of Units.

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Revision 3

Response to Editor/Reviewers’ comments

Comment 1. Table 1 should be reworked and error ranges included. At least the equipment error should be considered.

Response: We thank the editor for this important suggestion. Table 1 has been revised accordingly, and the corresponding error ranges have been included. The equipment-related measurement errors have been considered and incorporated in the revised table.

Comment 2. JCPDS file numbers corresponding with XRD patterns should be included.

Response: The authors are thankful for the valuable suggestion. The corresponding JCPDS reference card numbers have been added to the revised manuscript for the phases identified from the XRD patterns and relevant reference are also included and highlighted in the manuscript.

Comment 3. Fig. 2 has no indicating its repeatability or reproducibility. Besides, is a bulk sample utilized or a powder sample is used?

Response: We thank the editor for this thoughtful assessment. Five samples were tested for XRD for better repeatability of results. Also, a bulk sintered samples were utilized for the testing. Also, details are now included in manuscript and highlighted the same.

Comment 4. Discussion of Figs. 3 and 4, at least a new sentence should be included in order to clarify its reproducibility.

Response: The authors acknowledge the reviewer comment. The authors have added the sentences in the manuscript and highlighted. To ensure the reproducibility of the microstructural observations, optical and SEM images were obtained from three independently prepared samples under identical experimental and imaging conditions, and the observed microstructural features were found to be consistent across the samples. The details are now included in the manuscript and highlighted the same.

Comment 5. The revised text should be verified in order to prevent both US and British English styles. It is verified words in two styles.

Response: The revised manuscript has been thoroughly checked to ensure consistent use of American English, and all instances of mixed American and British spelling have been corrected accordingly.

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