Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionFebruary 19, 2026 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: In line with the reviewers’ comments, the study addresses an important and clinically relevant question; however, several methodological issues require further clarification before the manuscript can be considered for publication. In particular, please address concerns regarding the development and validation of the proposed Firth model, clarify the rationale and timing of the postoperative EUROMACS score in relation to the study outcome, and moderate the interpretation of the newly derived model, presenting it as exploratory and hypothesis-generating. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents an analysis of right heart failure (RHF) prediction models in a large real-world cohort of patients undergoing primary durable LVAD implantation. The study addresses an important clinical problem and provides valuable comparative insights into the performance of existing RHF risk scores while proposing a multimodal predictive approach. Overall, the manuscript is well-structured, clinically relevant, and supported by a substantial dataset. The findings—particularly the limited performance of established risk models and the improved discrimination achieved by the proposed Firth-based model—are of interest to the field of advanced heart failure and mechanical circulatory support. However, several minor issues should be addressed to improve clarity, readability, and scientific rigor. Major Comments None. The study is methodologically sound, and the conclusions are generally supported by the data. Minor Comments 1. Language and Formatting The manuscript would benefit from careful language editing to correct typographical errors, spacing issues, and inconsistencies. Some sentences are difficult to follow due to formatting artifacts and should be streamlined for clarity. Ensure consistent terminology throughout (e.g., RHF, RVF, LVAD). 2. Clarity of Results Presentation When reporting AUC values, consider consistently providing confidence intervals to enhance interpretability. The transition between discussion of individual scores and the proposed model could be made smoother to improve readability. 3. Description of Modified Utah Score The rationale for modifying the Utah score by including ECMO and Impella® devices should be clarified further. Please specify whether this modification has been validated elsewhere or is exploratory. 4. Statistical Methods Provide a brief justification for the use of Firth-penalized logistic regression (e.g., addressing small-sample bias or separation issues). Clarify how variables were selected for inclusion in the 5-variable model. 5. Interpretation of Hemodynamic Parameters The finding that commonly used hemodynamic parameters were not predictive is interesting but deserves slightly deeper discussion. Consider elaborating on potential physiological explanations or measurement limitations. 6. Limitations Section While limitations are appropriately acknowledged, consider explicitly mentioning potential selection bias due to single-center design. Clarify whether missing data were present and how they were handled. 7. Future Directions The discussion of machine learning approaches is relevant but somewhat general. If possible, briefly relate this to your dataset or suggest specific applications. Conclusion The manuscript provides meaningful insights into the limitations of current RHF prediction models and supports the use of a multimodal, integrative approach. With minor revisions addressing language, clarity, and methodological detail, the manuscript will be suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: The study addresses a clinically relevant question: external validation of post-LVAD right heart failure (RHF) prediction models remains an important and unresolved issue. In addition, the manuscript is reasonably well written, the narrative is coherent, and the real-world dataset is interesting. However, there are several methodological and statistical concerns that would likely prevent direct acceptance in PLOS ONE. The strengths of the manuscript include: a consecutively collected and reasonably well-characterized cohort; use of a contemporary INTERMACS definition of RHF; direct comparison of historical prediction scores; appropriate use of Firth regression given the small number of events; clinically meaningful outcomes. However, there are several important limitations. 1. Major issue: overfitting and self-derived model. The authors propose a new “5-variable Firth model” with an AUC of 0.854, but:only 21 moderate-severe RHF events were available; the model was both derived and tested within the same cohort; no bootstrap validation, internal validation, cross-validation, or calibration analysis was performed. This is the main methodological concern. The reported AUC of 0.854 is likely optimistic and may not generalize well. The manuscript itself acknowledges the risk of overfitting. I would strongly recommend that the authors include bootstrap optimism correction; 2. Conceptual inconsistency: validation study versus new score development The title and stated objective describe a validation study of existing scores. However, the manuscript then shifts toward development of a new predictive model. This creates a conceptual and editorial issue: either this is an external validation study; or it is a model development study. Currently, it appears to be an unfocused hybrid of both. I would suggest: reducing the emphasis on the newly derived model; presenting it as an exploratory, hypothesis-generating analysis; avoiding strong claims regarding superiority over existing scores. 3. Important methodological concern: use of the postoperative EUROMACS score There is a significant methodological concern regarding comparison of a “postoperative EUROMACS score” against postoperative RHF outcomes. This raises the possibility of temporal bias or information leakage: a postoperative score is inherently advantaged; it is not directly comparable to preoperative prediction models. The authors should clarify: the exact timing of score calculation; whether variables were collected before RHF onset; the rationale for including postoperative scores in the comparison. Given a single-center cohort of only 103 patients, this conclusion appears too strong and should be substantially toned down. Limited sample size The study includes 103 total patients and only 21 events, which is relatively small for: validating multiple prediction scores; developing a new multivariable prediction model. This requires cautious interpretation. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Predicting the right! Validation of right heart failure predictive risk models after primary durable ventricular assist device implantation PONE-D-26-07516R1 Dear Dr. Sales, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Francesco Curcio, M.D., Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have adequately addressed the reviewers’ concerns, and the manuscript has been substantially improved. In its current form, it merits publication in PLOS ONE. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: No further comments. All questions arised have been answered. The manuscript merit to be published in PlosOne. Reviewer #2: After reviewing the revised manuscript and the detailed response to the reviewers, I believe that the authors have addressed the major methodological concerns raised during the previous review. In particular, they have: clearly distinguished the primary validation study from the secondary exploratory Firth model; added appropriate bootstrap internal validation and calibration analyses; substantially moderated the interpretation of the exploratory model; clarified the role of the postoperative EUROMACS score and its temporal limitations; strengthened the Discussion and Limitations sections; improved the statistical methods and reporting throughout the manuscript; and considerably improved the language and overall presentation. The manuscript is now more balanced, transparent, and appropriately cautious regarding the exploratory nature of the proposed model. The additional internal validation demonstrates awareness of the risk of overfitting and avoids overstating the clinical applicability of the findings. I have only a few minor comments: In the Discussion, the authors may further emphasize that the optimism-corrected calibration slope (0.586) indicates substantial overfitting, reinforcing that external validation is essential before any clinical application. Some minor typographical and stylistic inconsistencies remain and should be corrected during copyediting, although the English has improved substantially compared with the previous version. Overall, I believe the authors have satisfactorily addressed the reviewers' concerns, and the manuscript is now suitable for publication after minor revision. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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