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| Original SubmissionFebruary 13, 2026 |
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Additional Editor Comments: The general framing is promising with the strongest contribution of the paper in the combination of dynamic facial transitions, eye tracking, and time-binned gaze analyses. However, several claims need to be softened, and the statistical modeling requires clarification or re-analysis before one is confident that the reported gaze-evaluation effects are robust. More specifically: 1. In the paper you repeatedly interpret the anger-to-smile condition as a "masking" context. You do acknowledge alternative interpretations such as emotion regulation, recovery, appeasement, or changed social intent, but several later claims still sound as if masking was actually manipulated or detected. This matters because the key behavioral result is that sincerity, happiness, and anger ratings did not differ significantly between conditions. The conclusion that temporal context "may elicit increased monitoring of the eyes" is supported, but claims about a "masking effect" or "hindering detection of fake smiles" should be reframed as mouth-attention positivity bias or reduced weighting of prior negative context, unless you add direct authenticity judgments or social-context manipulations. 2. The repeated-measures structure is complex. Each participant sees multiple stimuli, each trial has multiple AOIs, and the time-course models expand each trial into AOI × time-bin observations. The models include random intercepts for participant and stimulus media, and one time-course model includes a participant random slope for time bin. However, for time-binned models predicting a single rating from many binned fixation rows, the same participant-by-stimulus rating appears to be reused across multiple rows. A random intercept for trial e.g. participant × stimulus/media, might needed to avoid treating repeated rows from the same trial as more independent than they are. Without this, standard errors for time-bin/AOI effects may be too small, especially for the reported time-varying mouth–anger association. 3. You mention that condition and stimulus culture were not significant for sincerity, happiness, and anger. That supports the claim "we did not detect differences", not "the conditions do not differ". This is especially important because the power analysis was for medium between-group effects, while the paper's main theoretical claims involve interactions, gaze–rating associations, and time-binned effects. If you want to argue that dynamic context alone is insufficient to affect evaluations, you should report effect estimates and confidence intervals for the condition effects and ideally include equivalence tests or Bayesian evidence for the null. Otherwise, the conclusion should read more cautiously. 4. The descriptive means for anger are very low, e.g. 1.53 in the neutral-to-smile condition and 1.81 in the anger-to-smile condition on a 10-point scale. This raises concern about skew and floor effects. A standard Gaussian LMM may be acceptable as a sensitivity analysis, but you should show residual diagnostics or consider ordinal/robust mixed models. This is particularly important because several key findings involve anger ratings. 5. More time looking at the mouth generally means less time available for eyes/nose, and total looking time differs across participants and trials. You log-transform and z-score fixation durations, but the manuscript does not explain how zero fixations were handled, which is crucial for log transformation. You should clarify whether you used log(x), log(x+1), or another transformation. You should also consider using fixation proportions, total face-looking time as a covariate, or compositional approaches, because interpreting mouth fixation as an independent predictor can otherwise be misleading. 6. The paper sometimes says attention "affected" perceived anger or that mouth attention had an "impact". But the design is observational with respect to gaze as participants were not experimentally assigned to look at the mouth or eyes. The reported effects show associations, not causal effects. For example, longer mouth fixation was associated with higher sincerity/happiness and lower anger ratings, and in the anger-to-smile condition longer mouth fixation predicted lower anger. I would recommended using alterative wording such as "was associated with, was linked to, or may index greater reliance on mouth cues" instead. 7. The sample is adequate for a basic between-condition comparison but limited for the more complex mixed models. You should acknowledge that the sample is a culturally and demographically narrow sample, mostly female and undergraduate, and that the study may be underpowered for higher-order interactions. Additionally, the stimulus design should be described more explicitly. It is important to state clearly whether the final happy/smile image was identical across the anger-to-smile and neutral-to-smile versions for each poser. If not, condition effects may be confounded with smile intensity or stimulus identity. The manuscript says there were 8 anger-to-smile movies, 8 neutral-to-smile movies, and 8 fillers, each with a 6-second morph and 3-second final still image. That is useful, but pairing/counterbalancing needs to be unmistakable. Moreover, the 3-second static final expression likely strengthens recency effects and may explain the absence of rating differences. You discuss this possibility, noting that participants may have focused on the high-intensity final smiles rather than the initial angry expressions. This should be elevated from a discussion point to a central design limitation. Finally, eye-tracking quality metrics should be added including calibration accuracy, track loss, trial exclusions, off-AOI looking, and whether AOI fixation durations sum to total face or screen fixation time. 8. Time-course analyses showed AOI and AOI × condition effects, plus time-bin × AOI effects, but not the predicted condition × time-bin × AOI interaction. Therefore, the manuscript should avoid saying that the anger context changed the trajectory of gaze over time. It changed the distribution of gaze across AOIs, while the time trajectory did not differ reliably by condition. Also, the mouth-fixation association with ratings is plausible but should be treated cautiously. The reported mouth effects for sincerity, happiness, and anger are statistically significant, but some p-values are modest, and the time-varying anger interaction is p = .047. Given multiple models and multiple outcomes, you should either correct/qualify these analyses or explicitly label them exploratory. 9. The limitations section is useful but incomplete. You acknowledge the between-participant design and the lack of explicit social context, but you should also add the limited sample diversity, small number of posers/stimuli, possible floor effects for anger, possible recency effects due to the 3-second final still image, absence of direct authenticity/masking manipulation checks, non-causal gaze–rating associations, and uncertainty about the robustness of time-binned models. Please discuss. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The study is very well written and makes a clear and interesting contribution. The introduction sets up the aims well, the literature review is strong, the hypotheses are clear, the methods and analyses are sound, and the figures are easy to interpret. Overall, this is a well executed and clearly presented study. I would support publication after minor revisions. My suggestions are listed below: • The Introduction could end with a brief statement on the theoretical and/or practical importance of the study. This would help emphasize why the work matters beyond the immediate findings. • The Discussion could more clearly highlight the broader importance of the study for social cognition. Because faces and facial expressions are central to everyday social interaction, you could say more about how the findings help us understand the interpretation of changing facial expressions in real-life interactions. • The Discussion could also more clearly explain the study’s theoretical contribution. In particular, the findings seem to distinguish between gaze behaviour and explicit evaluations. This is interesting because it suggests that attention to facial information and later social-affective judgments may not reflect the same process. • Relatedly, you may consider whether the difference between gaze behaviour and explicit ratings is not only a difference between perceptual and evaluative processing, but also a difference in the nature of the measures themselves. Eye movements are relatively spontaneous and less consciously controlled, whereas ratings of sincerity, happiness, and anger are explicit judgments and may be shaped by reflection or social norms. This may help explain why gaze allocation differed between conditions whereas the final ratings did not. Reviewer #2: I believe the article is well-written and employs an appropriate methodological approach and sound statistical analysis. 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