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| Original SubmissionMarch 3, 2026 |
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Please ensure that you refer to Table 4 in your text; if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the Table. 9. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript addresses an important applied problem, uses an exceptionally large, nationally sampled data set, and combines appropriate analytic techniques (ROC analysis, latent profile analysis, and interpretable ML–based CAT). The methodological approach is coherent and the translational component (a Shiny application; code link on OSF) is commendable. However, several substantive issues must be addressed prior to publication to ensure conceptual accuracy, analytic robustness, and compliance with journal policies. 1.The manuscript states the data are owned by the Italian National Institute of Health (Istituto Superiore di Sanità) and are not publicly available. This does not satisfy PLOS ONE’s data availability requirements. The authors must either: a) deposit a suitably de-identified version of the dataset in a public or controlled-access repository with documented access procedures, or b) provide a clear, formal controlled-access mechanism (repository name, contact, application procedure, and expected time to obtain access) that permits independent verification while protecting participant privacy, and include a justification that satisfies PLOS exception criteria. If legal/ethical constraints prevent sharing item-level data, the authors should provide synthetic data or aggregated tables sufficient to reproduce key results and supply all analysis scripts (complete R / Mplus code) together with the Shiny app configuration files. 2.The ROC cutoff is derived using a single self-report item about room confinement. That item is conceptually close to HRI content and therefore may bias classification (criterion contamination). The authors should: Provide justification for using that single item as the external criterion and discuss its limitations explicitly; and, where possible, validate the cutoff against an independent clinical benchmark (e.g., structured clinical interview or clinician rating) or at least against external correlates (functional impairment, school absence). Report ROC confidence intervals, decision thresholds sensitivity analyses (different dichotomizations), and calibration metrics. 3.The train/test split is appropriate but insufficient alone. Please provide one or more of the following robustness checks: repeated k-fold cross-validation, bootstrap validation, or external temporal/geographic validation (if available). Justify hyperparameter choices for the conditional-inference tree (mincriterion/minsplit/minbucket). Provide sensitivity analyses showing how results (e.g., item savings, ICC, MAE) change when tuning these parameters. Compare the proposed CART/ctree-based CAT with at least one alternative (for example: an IRT-based CAT, regularized regression, or random-forest surrogate) to demonstrate that the chosen approach balances interpretability and accuracy. 4.The manuscript selects a four-class solution but reports significant VLMR/LMR p-values up to 5 classes. Provide a clearer, reproducible rationale for selecting four classes: include class stability checks (e.g., split-sample LPA), entropy and posterior probabilities per class, and substantive interpretability criteria. Report class-specific sizes and standard errors clearly, and include the full fit-statistics table in supplement. Consider reporting model-based probabilities and provide a diagram/table with profile means and variance. 5.Correct the in-text statement implying hikikomori is a formal DSM-5 diagnosis. The condition is a socio-cultural syndrome under scholarly debate and is not listed as a discrete DSM-5 disorder. Reframe language accordingly and cite current nosological discussions. 6.Include confusion matrices, calibration plots, and calibration statistics for cutoff-based classification (both full-length and CAT-derived). Provide ICC tables with 95% confidence intervals. For ML/CAT performance: report distributions of administered items, item-by-item visitation frequencies, and leaf-level prediction summaries (means, SD, n). Provide examples of cases where CAT and full-length scores diverged and explain why. Make all analysis code and the exact Shiny app tree/dictionary files available on the OSF project; include a README with instructions to reproduce the analyses and to run the Shiny app locally. Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a well-structured and methodologically rigorous study on the development of an interpretable machine learning–based computerized adaptive test (CAT) for hikikomori screening using the HRI-15. The topic is timely and relevant, and the integration of psychometric modeling with machine learning represents a meaningful contribution to both clinical assessment and large-scale screening. A key strength of the study is the use of a large, nationally representative sample (N = 8,755), which provides strong statistical power and enhances the generalizability of the findings. The analytical framework is robust and appropriately implemented, combining ROC analysis, latent profile analysis (LPA), and a conditional inference tree–based CAT model. The use of a training/test split and multiple evaluation metrics (e.g., AUC, entropy, ICC, Cohen’s κ) demonstrates good methodological rigor and supports the validity of the conclusions. The identification of a clinically interpretable cut-off score (≥ 42) and the derivation of four meaningful latent profiles represent valuable contributions, particularly for applied settings where both screening and personalization are needed. The CAT implementation is also well justified and shows substantial efficiency gains, reducing item administration while maintaining strong agreement with full-length scores. The inclusion of a Shiny-based application further enhances the practical utility of the work. Despite these strengths, there are a few points that should be addressed to further strengthen the manuscript: External Criterion for ROC Analysis: The ROC analysis relies on a single self-report item as the external criterion for hikikomori risk classification. While this approach is understandable in large-scale surveys, it may introduce measurement limitations. The authors should discuss the potential impact of this choice on classification accuracy and consider referencing validation against clinical diagnoses where possible. Generalizability Across Cultures and Age Groups: The sample consists of Italian adolescents. Given that hikikomori is a culturally influenced phenomenon, the authors should elaborate on the extent to which the findings and the derived CAT model can generalize to other cultural contexts and age groups. Data Availability and Reproducibility: The manuscript states that the data are not publicly available due to privacy restrictions. While this is understandable, the authors are encouraged to provide as much transparency as possible, for example by sharing synthetic datasets, detailed preprocessing steps, or expanded documentation of the analysis pipeline to facilitate reproducibility. Model Interpretability and Clinical Use: The use of conditional inference trees is a strength in terms of interpretability. However, the manuscript would benefit from a clearer illustration or example of the decision path (e.g., a sample tree or decision rules) to help clinicians better understand how the adaptive process operates in practice. Longitudinal or Real-World Validation: The study demonstrates strong cross-sectional performance. Future work could explore longitudinal validation or real-world deployment to assess how the CAT performs over time and in applied clinical or school settings. In conclusion, this manuscript is technically sound, well written, and provides a valuable contribution to the field. Addressing the points above would further enhance its clarity, applicability, and impact. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Interpretable Machine Learning for Hikikomori Screening: The Adaptive HRI-15 PONE-D-26-05328R1 Dear Dr. Anselmi, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Alberto Greco Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The revised manuscript has addressed all the concerns and is acceptable. The final version however, increase some readability, as in some cases, there are too many explanations. These can be either divided, or may be presented in the other ways, like table/figures, etc (as suits) ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: S M Rashidul Hasan ********** |
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