Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMay 23, 2025 |
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The study of the Children's Museum offers a compelling exploration of an innovative initiative within the Czech museum landscape, particularly due to its integration within the National Museum and its alignment with constructivist educational principles. The museum’s emphasis on visitor-led interpretation and interactive engagement is commendable, however, the manuscript would benefit from a more robust theoretical and methodological foundation to enhance its academic contribution. The introduction currently lacks sufficient engagement with relevant theoretical frameworks, particularly those related to constructivism in museum education. A more comprehensive literature review, including both conceptual discussions and empirical studies of constructivist approaches in museum settings, would provide a stronger foundation. Additionally, comparative insights from similar children’s museums or interactive exhibitions internationally would help contextualize the distinctiveness of the museum. The section titled The Children's Museum primarily describes the study setting and would be more appropriately situated within the Methods section. This repositioning would clarify the structure and improve the logical flow of the manuscript. Furthermore, the methodology section requires greater transparency. While the involvement of an ethnologist is noted, the theoretical lens guiding the observations remains unspecified. Clarifying the ethnographic tradition, observation protocols, and analytical procedures would significantly strengthen the study’s methodological rigor. The introduction of the three principles of interaction—Learning, Playing, and Creating—appears to stem from pilot observations, yet the process of their development is insufficiently detailed. These categories would benefit from clearer operationalization and grounding in existing literature on informal learning and museum pedagogy. A recurring limitation throughout the manuscript is the lack of theoretical and comparative context. The study would be enriched by positioning its findings within broader discourses on museum learning, visitor studies, and constructivist pedagogy. Moreover, the absence of comparative analysis with similar initiatives limits the generalizability and broader relevance of the findings. Finally, the manuscript would be strengthened by a more explicit articulation of its contribution to the field. Clarifying the new insights it offers into the design and evaluation of children’s museums, and how these findings might inform future research or practice, would help situate the study within a broader academic and practical discourse. Reviewer #2: This manuscript examines visitor engagement and learning dynamics in a newly established Children’s Museum in Prague, designed around constructivist pedagogical principles. Using 720 structured observations of over 2,000 visitors, the authors analyze how different age cohorts, accompanying adults, and facilitators interact with exhibits. The study identifies a significant mismatch between the intended audience (ages 6–10) and the actual predominant visitors (preschoolers), raising questions about the accessibility of the museum’s constructivist design. The paper is well-structured, clearly written, and contributes valuable empirical evidence to the field of museum education. Strengths A large dataset of systematically collected observational evidence supports the analyses. The study addresses a relevant and underexplored question: the alignment of constructivist museum design with actual visitor demographics. The open sharing of data and R scripts via OSF enhances transparency and reproducibility. The discussion effectively links findings to broader debates in constructivist pedagogy and museum learning. Weaknesses and Limitations Overgeneralization of findings – The conclusion that preschool-aged children are “too young” for constructivist approaches may be overstated. Although qualitative field notes and interviews were collected, these are not adequately integrated into the main analysis to substantiate claims. Analytical rigor – While appropriate non-parametric tests are used, the analysis is limited to group comparisons. Effect sizes, confidence intervals, and multivariate analyses would strengthen the robustness of the findings. Observer reliability – The manuscript does not report inter-rater reliability or calibration among the 19 observers. This omission raises concerns about measurement consistency across such a large team. Sampling scope – The study focuses on only five observation units within a large and complex exhibition. Families often split and regroup during visits, which may limit the representativeness of the data. Repeated measures – The issue of potentially duplicated observations (approximately 19% of visitors) is acknowledged but not fully addressed analytically, introducing a possible bias. Facilitator role – The paper emphasizes facilitator passivity but does not sufficiently explore underlying reasons. More triangulation with qualitative data could provide insight into this dynamic. Presentation – While generally well written, sections of the manuscript are repetitive, and results could be streamlined for greater clarity and concision. Recommendations The manuscript provides an important empirical contribution to the field of museum learning and constructivist pedagogy. However, before publication, I recommend that the authors: Provide additional evidence from field notes or interviews to support claims about preschoolers’ inability to engage constructively. Report inter-rater reliability for observational data. Include effect sizes and, where possible, multivariate analyses to strengthen the statistical rigor. Clarify how potential duplicate observations were handled analytically. Streamline presentation by reducing redundancy in the results and discussion sections. Reviewer #3: 1.The author does not articulate how its findings extend, challenge, or refine constructivism within the specific context of museum learning. 2.To insufficiently situates the Czech museum environment within the broader European or global landscape of children’s museums. 3.Potential external determinants of visitor composition—such as socioeconomic background, ticket pricing, accessibility, or educational disparities—are not examined. These could have provided valuable insight into why younger, not older, children dominate visitation. 4.Observations were limited to five exhibition units, excluding other spaces that might provide complementary insights. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Dear Dr. Jehlicka, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 26 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: N/A Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** Reviewer #2: Dear Author congratulations for reaching at this stage. Thank you you have addressed all of my comments well. Reviewer #3: 1. Some of the subjective statements go beyond what is supported by the current evidence. Please adjust your claims and arguments, particularly in the “Discussion” and “Conclusion” sections. 2. You may draw a connection to the SDGs at the end of the conclusion. 3. In the second-to-last paragraph of the “Discussion” section, please clarify the theoretical, methodological, or practical limitations of the conclusions or the proposed model. Reviewer #4: The paper is well-structured, clearly written, and contributes valuable empirical evidence to the field of museum education. The authors clarifying the ethnographic tradition, observation protocols, and analytical procedures had significantly strengthen the study’s methodological rigor & sound evidence. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Too young to ask their own questions: Learning and visitor dynamics in a constructivist museum environment PONE-D-25-27943R2 Dear Dr. Jehlicka, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Weicong Li, P.hD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): The manuscript’s citation format is non-standard and should use the [no.] format. The current use of parentheses ( ) overlaps with the numerical data reported in the “Results” section, which can be confusing. Reviewers' comments: |
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