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Original SubmissionMarch 24, 2026
Decision Letter - Alessandro Galeazzi, Editor

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Reviewer #1:  Dear Editor,

Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript.

This paper addresses an important question: how biases in large language models manifest and evolve during multi-agent interactions. The authors introduce a framework simulating echo chamber conversations between LLM-powered agents and show that substantial opinion drift, undetected by standard questionnaire-based bias assessments, can emerge. This is both novel and practically relevant.

The paper has several strengths. The experimental design is clear and well-motivated, with the echo chamber setup providing a natural baseline (zero opinion shift). The evaluation is comprehensive, covering nine models, eight topics, and multiple sensitivity analyses (e.g., conversation length, prompt ablation, number of agents, memory saturation, and alternative opinion signals). The comparison between direct probing (Figure 2a) and conversational framework (Figure 2b) is particularly compelling, highlighting a key limitation of current bias evaluation methods. The open code and candid discussion of limitations are also appreciated.

I have a few suggestions that I believe would further strengthen the manuscript:

1. Annotation and validation. The opinion signal agent is central to the framework, and its validation could be strengthened. The authors acknowledge that the 1,000-message annotation assigns entire topics to individual annotators for time efficiency, without computing inter-annotator agreement. While this is understandable, even a small subset of overlapping annotations across topics would help establish the difficulty of the task and contextualize the reported F1 score of 0.84.

2. Generation parameters. While not reported in the manuscript, the publicly available code (framework/modules/huggingface_llm.py) reveals that generation uses a temperature of 0.7. This and any other relevant sampling parameters should be explicitly stated in the paper for reproducibility.

3. Typos and minor issues. There are a few typographical issues to address, including “Marjiuana” (should be “Marijuana”, Figures 2 - 4), “settins” (should be "settings", line 91), “hypothised” (should be “hypothesized”, line 318), and “any agents display memory loss,” which should read “no agents display memory loss” (line 320). Reference formatting could also be made more consistent (i.e. some have DOIs some do not).

Overall, this paper makes a valuable contribution by highlighting a blind spot in current bias evaluation practices. The central insight, that bias can emerge from interaction dynamics in ways that static assessments fail to capture, is well supported by the results. The revisions above are minor and straightforward. I recommend acceptance after revision.

Reviewer #2:  This paper addresses a timely and methodologically relevant topic, highlighting a fundamental inconsistency in the use of Large Language Models within opinion dynamics models. The core contribution, namely showing that biases absent under direct probing emerge strongly in conversational settings, is solid and well executed.

However, I believe the theoretical framing of the work deserves deeper reflection. Language models are not cognitive systems; they produce token sequences guided by statistical plausibility, creating the appearance of knowledge and reasoning. This dynamic has been formally conceptualized as epistemia, namely the illusion of knowledge, in recent work showing that LLMs rely on lexical associations and statistical priors rather than contextual reasoning or normative criteria when performing evaluative tasks (Loru et al., PNAS, 2025). In this sense, what the authors observe is not a bias in the traditional meaning of the term, something identifiable and potentially correctable, but rather a structural and unavoidable property of text-generating systems. Framing it as a "bias" risks implying that the issue can be fixed, an assumption that is not supported by the nature of these models. This point is further highlighted by recent work on generative exaggeration (Nudo et al., Online Social Networks and Media, 2025): when simulating human behavior, LLMs do not simply reproduce it, but tend to amplify the most salient traits present in the training data, introducing systematic distortions that may not reflect the variability and complexity of real human behavior. The authors could discuss these epistemic limitations more explicitly, avoiding to give the impression that the problem is merely a localized technical flaw, and could extend the discussion to address the broader contradiction involved in using these systems to simulate human opinion dynamics.

Furthermore other points to consider are:

1. Figures 2 and 3. The two figures should be repositioned later in the manuscript, and their role should be clarified more explicitly. Figure 2 shows that biases absent under direct probing emerge in conversational settings; Figure 3 appears to communicate a very similar result at the chatroom level. It is therefore not immediately clear why both are necessary in their current form. A unified figure directly comparing the single-shot and conversational settings through a consistently applied Z-test, with a comparable number of observations across conditions, would likely be more effective and easier to interpret. At present, the use of different methodologies within the same visual structure makes the comparison unnecessarily difficult. The visual quality of the figures should also be improved overall.

2. Figure 5. The analysis varying conversation length M is interesting, but it is unclear why it was performed on an ad hoc subset of models and topics rather than by reusing the existing simulations and simply truncating them at M messages. The latter approach would be methodologically more coherent and would allow direct comparison with the results shown in Figure 3. The authors should either justify this methodological choice or, preferably, provide both versions.

3. Sycophancy and cascade effects. The authors dismiss sycophancy as a primary explanation for the observed drifts, but the analysis could be developed further. In particular, it would be informative to decompose the overall drift probability into two separate quantities: the rate of the first unjustified opinion shift, and the conditional probability that the second agent follows once the first has already drifted. Although this partially emerges from the current results, the authors could strengthen the analysis by integrating this measure into the conversation-length experiments (Figure 5), explicitly counting how often an initial shift is followed by a second one. This would provide a more direct quantification of possible sycophancy-driven cascade effects, disentangling them from model-intrinsic bias.

4. Model ordering. It would be useful to order the models in the figures according to structural characteristics such as parameter count or context-window size, in order to assess whether robustness and conversational consistency correlate with these properties. This would add an interesting analytical dimension to the discussion.

5. Editorial quality. The manuscript contains several issues that currently undermine its formal quality: missing text on pp. 14–15, the word "ciao" visible below the plot in Figure 2a, and inconsistencies in paragraph and figure numbering. A careful editorial revision is strongly recommended before publication.

Loru E., Nudo J., Di Marco N., Santirocchi A., Atzeni R., Cinelli M., Cestari V., Rossi-Arnaud C., Quattrociocchi W. (2025). *The simulation of judgment in LLMs*. PNAS, 122(42), e2518443122.

Nudo J., Pandolfo M.E., Loru E., Samory M., Cinelli M., Quattrociocchi W. (2025). *Generative Exaggeration in LLM Social Agents: Consistency, Bias, and Toxicity*. Online Social Networks and Media.

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Revision 1

We sincerely thank the Editor and Reviewers for their valuable feedback, which has helped us refine the robustness of our work, in terms of both experimental evaluation and presentation quality.

A summary of the key changes is as follows:

1. We broaden the experimental section by: (i) strengthening the validation of the opinion signal model by further sampling a subset of about $200$ messages and distribute them across all authors to compute inter-annotator agreement; and (ii) computing the conditional probability that a second agent exhibits an unwarranted opinion change once the first has previously drifted.

2. We expanded the Related Work section to discuss the crucial phenomenon of epistemia, and better contextualize our work within the broad landscape of LLM-based systems.

3. We carefully revised the bibliography, ensuring consistency across references and adding dois/urls.

4. Overall, we improved the presentation quality of the paper, by fixing the reported typos, providing new figures to further corroborate the results, and enlarging the existing ones to enhance readability.

The complete point-by-point responses are provided in the revised cover letter.

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Reviewer #1: The authors have satisfactorily addressed my previous comments. In particular, they have strengthened the validation of the opinion signal model by adding overlapping annotations and reporting inter-annotator agreement, added the requested information about the generation temperature, revised the references, and corrected the presentation issues identified in my review. The manuscript also now more clearly acknowledges the limitations associated with automated stance classification and the generalizability of the experimental setting. I have no further substantive concerns and recommend acceptance.

Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all of my previous concerns thoroughly and satisfactorily. In particular, they have strengthened the theoretical framing, clarified the methodological choices, improved the presentation of the figures and analyses, and corrected the editorial issues identified in the previous version. Overall, the revisions have significantly improved the manuscript, and I believe the paper is now suitable for publication in its current form.

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