Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 5, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-56115-->-->Implementation of school-feeding programme and its effect on nutritional adequacy among primary school children in Kisarawe district, Tanzania.-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Mwakasungura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 27 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Title: Implementation of school-feeding programme and its effect on nutritional adequacy among primary school children in Kisarawe district, Tanzania. Aim(s): To evaluate the implementation status and effects of school feeding programs on nutritional adequacy (measured via dietary diversity and meal frequency) among primary-school children in Kisarawe District, Tanzania. This paper examined the cross-sectional associations between school feeding programs and dietary adequacy among primary school adolescents in Tanzanian Kisarawe district, where severe undernutrition is a pervasive phenomenon. The research question is important, not well covered by current research, and well-defined. Unfortunately, central constructs are ambiguously termed (e.g. nutritional adequacy/dietary adequacy, which I think are not interchangeable but represent two different stages of the health process) or not well operationalized (e.g. how is DDS determined). The language is hampering the quality of the manuscript and definitely needs correction and clarification. Central terms have to be defined and consequently labeled in accordance with the field. I suggest the following major points: 1.) The manuscript frequently uses "nutritional adequacy" and "dietary adequacy" interchangeably. In nutritional science, dietary adequacy (intake relative to requirements) is often considered a precursor to nutritional status (physiological outcome). I recommend consistently using terms like "dietary adequacy" when referring to intake (DDS and meal frequency) and reserving "undernutrition" for anthropometric or biochemical outcomes. 2.) The study defines dietary diversity as consuming at least 4 out of 7 food groups. However, the current FAO/WHO standard for Minimum Dietary Diversity (MDD) for individuals (including adolescents) is typically validated at 5 out of 10 food groups to predict micronutrient adequacy. The authors should justify why the 4/7 threshold was chosen over the 5/10 standard. 3.) There is a critical contradiction regarding the study duration. The Abstract claims data collection occurred from "March to May 2025", while the Methods section specifies a four-day window from "22/4/2025 to 25/4/2025". The authors must clarify this and explain how 300 face-to-face interviews were conducted in four days, including details on the number of enumerators used to ensure data quality. 4.) The study relies on a single 24-hour dietary recall, which cannot account for day-to-day variation. The authors should explicitly list this as a major limitation and discuss how it might have affected the results, particularly for the "marginal" significance found in dietary diversity. 5.) The manuscript states that written consent was obtained from head teachers, while students provided only verbal assent. For minors (10-14 years), standard ethical practice requires informed written consent from parents or legal guardians in addition to student assent. The authors must clarify if parental consent was bypassed and provide a strong ethical justification if so. 6.) Baseline Balance (Table 1): While the manuscript includes a Table 1 for general characteristics, it fails to provide a comparative "Table 1" that shows if the participating and non-participating groups were balanced at baseline regarding socio-economic status (SES), parental education, or household food insecurity. Without this, the associations found in the regression could be confounded by pre-existing household differences. 7.) In the Results and Abstract, the p-value of 0.051 for dietary diversity is described as having "did not reach statistical significance". Refine this to describe the finding as "marginally significant" or a "notable trend," especially given the large effect size (45% higher likelihood) and the potential lack of power or the limitations of a single-day recall. 8.) To improve the "Results" section, the authors should report which specific food groups were most frequently added by the school meal. For instance, did the school meal provide the "protein gap" (legumes/meat) that was missing from home diets? This would provide much-needed depth to the finding that 40% of schools provided meals with at least four food groups. 9.) The finding that males were 48% less likely to meet meal frequency requirements is significant. The discussion should be expanded to explore cultural reasons for this in rural Kisarawe, such as boys being more likely to be involved in livestock herding or agricultural labor that keeps them away from scheduled meal times. 10.) The study took place in April. The authors should discuss whether this was a "lean" or "harvest" season in Kisarawe and how this affects the generalizability of their dietary diversity scores. 11.) The manuscript should discuss the possibility of "home-meal substitution"—where parents reduce food portions at home because the child ate at school. This could explain why the school feeding program had a massive impact on meal frequency (12x higher likelihood) but only a marginal impact on overall dietary diversity. 12.) The finding that none of the schools fully met national guidelines due to lack of dining areas or storage is a major point. The authors should emphasize that the "effect" of the program is likely attenuated by these implementation failures. Reviewer #2: 1. Line 99 mentions “The exposure variable was participation in the school feeding program” and table 1 shows Participation in school feeding program Yes 195 65% No 105 35%. I am unclear as to how children attending the same school which had similar school feeding programs running were excluded from participation. Was this because some schools did not have the program (and therefore the children studying there naturally did not participate) or was it because of absenteeism of students the previous day? 2. Lines 152-154 mention “only 40% provided meals containing at least four different food groups as recommended. Despite the presence of school feeding programs, only 65% of enrolled students participated regularly due to economic barriers”. I am curious to know whether the researchers would also like to do some basic analysis related to the causes behind the consumption of four food groups or lack of it. While information is provided that 65% students participated in the school feeding program while 40% participants were provided four food groups in the meals served, it would be interesting to understand the relation between participation in the program, availability and food groups in the school and food groups consumed at home to the outcomes of the study. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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