Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 27, 2026 |
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Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: This study is a multinational (4 institutions), feasibility, pilot randomized controlled trial investigating the effects of an AI-based telerehabilitation intervention in persons with multiple sclerosis (pwMS). Participants (n=96) will be randomized to receive either 10 weeks of a home-based AI telerehabilitation intervention or a home-based exercise intervention with paper-based instructions. The primary clinical outcome is the 30-second sit-to-stand test (30STS), and secondary clinical outcomes are balance, fatigue, MS impact, quality of life, symptoms of anxiety and depression and cost effectiveness analyses. Feasibility, in terms of recruitment and retention, acceptability of procedures and compliance and adherence will also be captured. The document has been well planned and written clearly. There are some further considerations needed. 1. One needs a reasonable retention strategy to be spelled out more specifically for this special population. 2. One needs a data quality control and data monitoring strategy among the 4 institutions. They note that regular data checks will be performed to ensure completeness and accuracy of data. Please be specific. 3. Since this is a feasibility study there is no formal sample size power considerations. However, 96 subjects randomized between the two arm appears sufficient according to the guidelines they have referenced. Again pay attention to retention. The primary analysis strategy to examine changes in outcomes from baseline to the end of the intervention period, a multivariate repeated-measures mixed-effects regression model will be applied. Participant ID will be included as a random effect, and group (intervention vs. comparator) and time (T0 vs. T1) will be included as fixed effects. The ITT approach will be verified by the Per protocol analysis. Please be sure these (ITT, PP) are defined appropriately for this kind of study. In the Statistical analysis section the authors note that the model's assumptions, including normality, homogeneity of variance, and normally distributed residuals, will be assessed. If these assumptions are not met, appropriate data transformations will be applied. 4. They should also consider any multivariate non parametric options for non-normal data analysis. 5. Economic data capture forms should be in the supplement or appendix and reviewed by an economic expert for content and procedure. 6. Sensitivity analyses will be performed to evaluate the robustness of the findings under various assumptions regarding missing data. Please be specific. Also how are you defining robustness in this context? 7. The statistical feasibility analysis strategy should be clearly presented. 8. The strengths and limitations appear to have been thought out and seem reasonable. Reviewer #2: Overall, this is a clearly organized multicentre pilot RCT protocol with many core procedures in place. There are several key operational details missing or inconsistent, limiting reproducibility and risk-of-bias appraisal. In addition, the manuscript provides only a high-level description of the AI platform (camera-based motion analysis and real-time feedback) without adequate procedural/background detail on what the AI measures/outputs, how feedback is generated, and what validation evidence supports these measures; expanding this section and briefly situating the approach within the emerging literature on AI-enabled telerehabilitation/AI-guided exercise programs would strengthen transparency and interpretability. 1. The manuscript states de-identified data will be available “upon reasonable request,” which is typically insufficient for PLOS ONE protocols. Please provide a concrete, procedure-level plan for how and where de-identified data will be shared upon study completion (e.g., named repository, timing, access conditions). 2. "Sealed envelope procedure” is not enough for reproducibility. Please specify (a) how the random sequence is generated (computer-generated? block sizes? varying blocks?), (b) whether randomization is stratified, and (c) how concealment is protected (who prepares/holds envelopes, tamper-proofing, when opened). 3. The protocol notes the T0 evaluator is blinded, but it is unclear who performs T1 assessments and how blinding will be maintained. Please explicitly describe assessor blinding at T1 and procedures to minimize unblinding (separate staff, standardized scripts, participant instructions). 4. Exercise selection is described as guideline-based plus therapist clinical reasoning, but the protocol lacks operational standardization/fidelity procedures. Please add minimum required exercise domains, progression rules, therapist training/certification, and fidelity checks (e.g., audits of prescriptions/logs across sites). ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Jereme D. Wilroy ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Protocol for a pilot effectiveness and feasibility randomized controlled trial of an advanced telerehabilitation system for people with multiple sclerosis (PLATINUMS project). PONE-D-26-10480R1 Dear Dr. Madsen, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Imre Cikajlo, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Does the manuscript provide a valid rationale for the proposed study, with clearly identified and justified research questions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Is the protocol technically sound and planned in a manner that will lead to a meaningful outcome and allow testing the stated hypotheses??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Is the methodology feasible and described in sufficient detail to allow the work to be replicable??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors described where all data underlying the findings will be made available when the study is complete??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above and, if applicable, provide comments about issues authors must address before this protocol can be accepted for publication. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about research or publication ethics. You may also provide optional suggestions and comments to authors that they might find helpful in planning their study. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed and the revisions in the manuscript are noted. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for their thorough and thoughtful response to my comments. The revisions and clarifications provided adequately address the concerns I raised in my initial review, and I am satisfied with how the critiques have been handled. I have no further concerns at this time and support the paper moving forward. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Jereme Wilroy ********** |
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PONE-D-26-10480R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Taul-Madsen, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Professor Imre Cikajlo Academic Editor PLOS One |
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