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| Original SubmissionMarch 16, 2026 |
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the manuscript entitled “An ecosyndemic framework for understanding obesity: spatial clustering of health, environmental and socioeconomic disadvantage in the Netherlands”. The authors clearly explain why their research is important (obesity and related health consequences are increasing but vary across space) and the gap that they are addressing (lack of an integrative approach that addresses both neighborhood-level socioeconomic and environmental factors). The authors provide a detailed description of their variables and methods and they have conducted a thorough statistical analysis. The map that they have developed can indeed be a practical guide for policy makers and others. Taken together, it can be argued that this is a very relevant study that certainly deserves publication. However, some minor issues remains: -The authors state that the metrics indicated that two or three clusters would suffice, but that due to ‘model interpretability, policy relevance and diversity of profiles’ five clusters were deployed in the research. This explanation is a bit thin. What is the added value of selecting five clusters over two or three? What is missing if the authors would select four instead of five clusters? Also because psychological vulnerability becomes quite central to the paper, by being a separate cluster but it is not clear why (as the paper’s main focus is on obesity and it’s consequences, so why generate a separate cluster on psychological vulnerability with low obesity scores?). -The authors could elaborate on their measurement of walkability, bikeability and drivability. Were the metrics confined to the administrative neighborhood boundaries? Or were these factors measured within a certain range from the center of the administrative neighborhood? And what formed the basis for this decision? The authors acknowledge in their discussion section that administrative neighborhood boundaries have some limitations, so it is useful for the reader to know what considerations were taken into account. Also because calculating walkability, bikeability, and drivability around a center point instead of confining it to administrative borders, might be a more accurate resemblance of the daily lives of inhabitants. Reviewer #2: The research uses an ecosyndemic approach to characterize obesogenic neighborhoods by looking into their different situations regarding health, environmental features, and socioeconomic position. The results show very interesting combinations of neighbourhood characteristics and their spatial distribution. The results also provide clear evidence for policymaking. Only a few revisions will be needed to make the paper even more reader-friendly. 1. Introduction: The authors introduce the concepts of syndemics and ecosyndemics in the introduction. The three bullet points after the mention of syndemics seem to link environmental and social factors to the cluster of health issues in an abstract way. On the basis of the three very important bullet points, the authors can consider elaborating more on what the three bullet points mean, listing some empirical evidence of the three mechanisms/descriptions in them, or giving brief examples/cases of how they work. Some of the detailed explanations of the concepts and mechanisms seem to be in the discussion section. The authors may consider mentioning some of them in the introduction section, so that the readers can understand the context earlier. 2. Operationalisation: In section 2.2, the authors introduce the indicators of SEP, health, and the obesogenic index. There is a lot of information in the indicators and in Table 1 that is related to the research context and can be elaborated on. For example, when revising the introduction section, the authors may also consider introducing some existing literature about the impact and relevance of these indicators, so that the readers can get prepared in advance and understand more easily why these specific indicators are chosen in this research. In the research study section, the authors can also consider briefly explaining directly why these indicators/data are chosen, such as for theoretical need, for data accessibility, etc., whether they have been used in other studies, and their performance in those studies. 3. Visualisation: The results and discussion are clear and fruitful. The authors may consider visualising the characteristics of each type of neighbourhood in the results, so that the readers can grasp the main point of each type more quickly and easily. For example, for each type of neighbourhood, the authors can draw a set of charts to describe the combination of the scores/percentages in their indicators. By putting the five sets of charts together, the readers could understand more directly what the main differences between them are, and what the main problems/features of each of them are. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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An ecosyndemic framework for understanding obesity: spatial clustering of health, environmental and socioeconomic disadvantage in the Netherlands PONE-D-26-12617R1 Dear Dr. Muilwijk, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Floris Vermeulen Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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