Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 31, 2026 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript investigates optimization of diffusion bonding parameters for Al–Al and Al–Fe–Al laminated structures using BBD–RSM and NSGA-II. The topic is relevant and technically sound, combining experimental work with statistical and optimization tools. However, while the methodology is structured, the manuscript still lacks depth in scientific interpretation, novelty positioning, and validation rigor, which are critical for publication in a journal like PLOS ONE. Overall, the manuscript would benefit significantly from additional experimental characterization, particularly in terms of phase identification, interfacial analysis, and mechanical testing. These analyses are essential to validate the proposed bonding mechanisms and strengthen the scientific rigor of the study. 1. The manuscript claims limited studies on Al–Al and Al–Fe–Al systems, but this is not convincingly demonstrated. The novelty appears incremental: BBD + RSM + NSGA-II is already widely used in manufacturing optimization. 2. The authors must clearly state What is new beyond existing diffusion bonding optimization studies? Is it Dual-material optimization? Specific parameter combination? Or Microstructural insight? 3. Include and discuss Recent optimization-based works (2023–2025). Comparative methodologies (ANN, GA, hybrid models) 4. Formula for number of experiments is given, but Why 46 runs specifically? How many center points? Clarify Replication strategy and Experimental error estimation. 5. The literature review is insufficient and lacks depth. More recent (last 3-5 years) references should be incorporated. Cite these papers: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0341127 https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S2238785425032867 https://www.nature.com/articles/s41598-026-41113-1 6. Results and Discussion show Superficial Interpretation as Trends are described but not deeply explained. Example: “temperature increases strength” expected, not insightful. Add: Diffusion kinetics explanation, Role of oxide breakdown, Intermetallic formation behavior (especially Fe–Al) 7. No reporting of R², Adjusted R², Predicted R² , Residual plots and Model adequacy plots. Model validation is incomplete. 8. Only qualitative discussion on SEM analysis. No Magnification scale details, EDS analysis, Intermetallic identification. Fe₂Al₅, FeAl₃ phase discussion (critical for Al–Fe systems) must be included. In Al–Fe–Al systems, the formation of intermetallic compounds (e.g., Fe₂Al₅, FeAl₃) is well known and critically affects mechanical performance. However, no phase identification techniques such as X-ray diffraction (XRD) or EDS/EDX analysis have been used. The authors should perform phase analysis to confirm the presence and distribution of intermetallic layers. 9. Higher-resolution and more detailed characterization techniques (Hardness, Residual stress) are required to substantiate the conclusions. 10. The thickness of the diffusion layer/intermetallic region is not quantified. Reviewer #2: After careful reading of the article, I strongly recommend it for major revision due to the following concerns: 1. Abstract is not well drafted. Write a structured abstract mentioning the statistical data, but within the journal’s template. It is advised to follow IMRAD template for Headings in the article. 2. The abstract claims “limited research on Al-Fe-Al laminated structures” but fails to quantify how many prior studies exist. Please specify the gap with concrete citations. 3. NSGA-II optimization is mentioned, yet the abstract does not state whether the predicted optima were experimentally validated. This must be clarified. 4. The introduction cites several review papers but does not highlight any specific contradictory findings from previous diffusion bonding studies. Add a clear statement of unresolved discrepancies. 5. Cite more contemporary studies to strengthen the research gap. In this regards, the authors are encouraged to cite the following recent and highly relevant articles to strengthen the literature background. Incorporation the following works will improve the article’s readability: • https://doi.org/10.1016/j.rineng.2025.107054 • https://doi.org/10.1016/j.measurement.2025.120114 • https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0341127 • https://doi.org/10.1007/s12008-023-01473-8 • https://doi.org/10.1016/j.jmrt.2024.06.079 • https://doi.org/10.1504/IJMATEI.2024.144232 6. Also, it will be great if the authors add a summary of literature just after completion of prior state of the art. 7. The hole-pattern structure on the steel layer is described, but its geometry (diameter, depth, spacing) and how it affects mechanical interlocking are not quantified. Provide their details too. 8. The tensile testing section follows ASTM E8/E8M, yet the reported specimen thickness (6 mm) and gauge length (57 mm) do not match standard subsize proportions. Verify and correct them. 9. Five processing parameters are studied, but the range for cooling rate (13–17°C/min) is extremely narrow. Justify why such a small window was chosen. 10. Figure 5 plots use polynomial fitting without reporting R² or RMSE values. Add these goodness-of-fit metrics for each subplot. 11. The discussion attributes weaker Al-Fe bonding to Young’s modulus mismatch, but no quantitative calculation of interfacial shear stress is provided. Include a simple estimate to support the claim. 12. The SEM images are presented without scale bars or magnification labels. Add these for proper interpretation of interfacial features. 13. First of all, it must be “Conclusions”. In the current form, the presented conclusions section doesn’t provide any concrete outcome to the readers. It is suggested to include the limitations as well as the future work in the article. Overall, the article is good but lacks clarity in its presentation. However, it can be improvised if worked upon. Therefore, I recommend MAJOR REVISION. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Optimization of Process Parameters for Enhancing the Tensile Strength of Diffusion-Bonded Al–Al and Al–Fe–Al Laminated Structures PONE-D-26-15896R1 Dear Dr. Son Minh, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Din Bandhu, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: I recommend acceptance of the manuscript for publication. Prior to publication, the authors may consider carefully proofreading the manuscript to correct a few minor grammatical and typographical errors, improve consistency in terminology and units, and update the literature review with a few recent relevant references where appropriate to further strengthen the discussion. Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed by the authors. Hence, I recommend for the acceptance of this article. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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PONE-D-26-15896R1 PLOS One Dear Dr. Son Minh, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Din Bandhu Academic Editor PLOS One |
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