Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 13, 2026 |
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-->PONE-D-26-16776-->-->An evidence-informed psychosocial intervention program for caregiver burden among family caregivers of children with autism spectrum disorder: a multi-stage development and Delphi study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Yan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 12 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: First, the role of the prior quantitative and qualitative phases needs to be described more transparently. These previous findings appear to be central to the development of the intervention targets, such as psychological capital, perceived social support, illness cognition, affiliate stigma, and coping strategies. However, the manuscript does not provide enough detail about these earlier phases. Please clarify whether these studies have been published, who the participants were, how the findings were generated, and how their quality and relevance were assessed. Since these earlier phases directly shaped the intervention program, readers need more information to judge the strength of this evidence base. Second, the Delphi results should be interpreted more cautiously. The expert response rate was high, and the authority coefficient was acceptable, which supports the credibility of the consultation process. However, Kendall’s W remained modest across the two rounds, increasing only slightly from 0.23 to 0.25. This suggests statistically significant but limited agreement among experts. Therefore, the manuscript should avoid implying strong expert consensus. It would be more accurate to state that the Delphi process provided preliminary support for content validity and feasibility, rather than strong confirmation of the program’s validity. Third, the manuscript should address the limited involvement of caregiver stakeholders. The intervention is designed for family caregivers of children with ASD, but the final refinement appears to rely mainly on professional experts. Expert input is valuable, but caregiver acceptability, burden, cultural fit, and practical feasibility cannot be fully assessed without caregiver feedback. Please either explain how caregiver perspectives from the prior qualitative phase informed the final program, or acknowledge more clearly that direct caregiver evaluation remains necessary in future feasibility testing. Fourth, the feasibility of the final program needs stronger justification. The finalized intervention includes three modules, seven themes, 22 components, and eight sessions lasting 90–120 minutes each. It also combines multiple approaches, including mindfulness, gratitude-based expressive writing, ACT-informed strategies, self-compassion training, and problem-solving skills. This is a rich program, but it may also be demanding for caregivers who already face substantial time, emotional, and practical burdens. The authors should explain why this intensity is feasible, how participant fatigue or dropout will be managed, how intervention fidelity will be maintained, and how emotional distress during sessions will be handled. Finally, I encourage the authors to moderate claims about feasibility and effectiveness. Since pilot feasibility testing is still ongoing and effectiveness has not yet been evaluated, the conclusion should emphasize that this study developed a structured and evidence-informed intervention framework, rather than suggesting that the program is already feasible or effective in practice. Overall, this is a promising and relevant manuscript, but it requires substantial clarification and refinement before publication. The study would be strengthened by greater transparency about the evidence sources, more cautious interpretation of the Delphi findings, clearer acknowledgement of caregiver involvement, and stronger justification of the program’s practical feasibility. Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a well-structured, theory-informed, and evidence-based psychosocial intervention program targeting caregiver burden among family caregivers of children with autism spectrum disorder (ASD). The topic is important and clinically relevant, particularly given the growing recognition of caregiver burden and the limited availability of structured caregiver-focused psychosocial interventions in this population. The manuscript demonstrates a thoughtful and rigorous multi-stage intervention development process integrating theoretical frameworks, evidence synthesis, prior quantitative and qualitative findings, and Delphi expert consultation. The methodological approach is generally sound and clearly described. The integration of the ABC-X family stress model and stress and coping theory provides a coherent conceptual foundation for the intervention structure. The evidence synthesis process was systematic and appropriately conducted, and the Delphi consultation included multidisciplinary experts with substantial professional experience. The statistical analyses used for the Delphi process, including Kendall’s coefficient of concordance, coefficients of variation, and expert authority coefficients, were appropriate for this type of methodological study. The manuscript is generally well written and organized, and the conclusions are appropriately cautious and aligned with the developmental nature of the study. Importantly, the authors appropriately acknowledge that intervention feasibility and effectiveness have not yet been fully evaluated. I have several suggestions that may further strengthen the manuscript: The manuscript mentions that pilot feasibility testing has already been initiated with 12 family caregivers enrolled. Please clarify whether any preliminary feasibility observations or process indicators are currently available, or explicitly state that no feasibility outcomes are included in the present study. Although the Delphi consensus achieved statistical significance, Kendall’s W values remained modest. The discussion addresses this appropriately; however, additional clarification regarding how divergent expert opinions were reconciled during the revision process would improve transparency. More detail regarding intervention implementation and fidelity management would strengthen the practical applicability of the program. For example, please clarify whether facilitators will receive standardized training, whether intervention manuals will be used, and how consistency across sessions will be maintained. Some sections of the Discussion are relatively lengthy and repetitive. Condensing several paragraphs may improve readability and manuscript flow. Please ensure consistency in terminology throughout the manuscript, particularly regarding the use of “family caregivers,” “caregivers,” and “FCs.” Minor grammatical, stylistic, and formatting revisions are recommended to improve clarity and readability. Overall, this is a valuable and meaningful contribution to the literature on psychosocial support for caregivers of children with ASD. The study provides an important foundation for future feasibility and effectiveness research, and the intervention framework may have practical relevance across pediatric, rehabilitation, nursing, and community care settings. After minor revision, the manuscript would be suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: The authors propose a multidisciplinary intervention program that will contribute significantly to both the Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs: 3, 4, 5) and the fields of health and behavioral sciences. A strength of the study is the evaluation of the quality of evidence and the components of the intervention program. 1. Statements of interest and the authors’ position on the knowledge gap Introduction The authors justify the need to develop a multidisciplinary intervention based on a Rapid Review, three scientific theories, and expert consultation. They also highlight the need to adopt an intervention that goes beyond merely reducing symptoms, opting instead for a structured, multi-component, multidisciplinary psychosocial intervention, as recommended by the WHO (World Health Organization). They also discuss the epidemiology of ASD (Autism Spectrum Disorder) in children, though without providing global figures to support their claims. Therefore, it is appropriate for the authors to note the following: a) The program’s specific contribution, in addition to medical sciences, to clinical and health psychology, and to developmental psychology (because the program will improve the three-way interaction between caregivers, children, and family members). b) The updated global epidemiology regarding the workload of caregivers of children with ASD. In this regard, it is known that approximately one in every 127 children has ASD, and between 23–27% of these children’s caregivers experience psychological health problems with a workload of up to 13–16 hours per day. Highlight the advantages of using the scientific theories presented in Figure 1 compared to the “Karasek Theoretical Model of Demand-Control-Psychosocial Support in the Work Environment,” an analysis of the theoretical perspective of which can be found on pages 8 and 9 of: https://www.medwave.cl/medios//research/studies/2986/medwave_2024_2986-1.pdf 2. Details of the methods and techniques used Methods They are sufficient. However, after review, it should be noted that the study is based on the ACCORD (ACcurate COnsensus Reporting Document) guideline from the EQUATOR Network published by Gattrell et al. (2024) in PLOS Med, 21. Literature search: the end date is indicated, but the start date is missing. At the end of the paragraph “Phase 2. Theoretical basis… insert (Figure 1). 2. Data support and analysis techniques Sufficient. 3. Data availability In addition to sufficient data availability as supplementary material and deposited in “Zenodo,” the evidence synthesis is also registered (ES20245306). 4. Ethical considerations Adequate. The research project was approved by a Research Ethics Committee (KY-2024-368). Discussion The authors state “...the most fragmented intervention approaches when combining multiple components within a single structured framework...”; please cite the references supporting this claim (2nd paragraph). As limitations: a) Note that the Delphi method was conducted in a single phase consisting of two rounds of asynchronous consultations (the complete Delphi method comprises three phases with three rounds of in-person or synchronous consultations in the second phase, i.e., controlled and with feedback (Shang, 2023: https://doi.org/10. 1097/MD.0000000000032829). b) Ideally, the intervention program should be validated through focus groups (caregivers of children with ASD). ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-26-16776R1-->-->An evidence-informed psychosocial intervention program for caregiver burden among family caregivers of children with autism spectrum disorder: a multi-stage development and Delphi study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Yan, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 22 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: The revised manuscript is substantially improved and now presents a clearer and more appropriately cautious account of the intervention-development process. The authors have responded carefully to the concerns raised about the earlier quantitative and qualitative phases, the interpretation of the Delphi findings, caregiver involvement, implementation planning, and the distinction between program development and demonstrated feasibility or effectiveness. I particularly appreciate that the revised manuscript now describes Kendall’s W as modest, acknowledges that caregivers did not directly review the final post-Delphi program, and clearly states that the ongoing pilot data are not included in the present paper. These revisions make the scope and contribution of the study much more transparent. I have only one remaining conceptual concern. In several places, the manuscript still appears to suggest that the evidence synthesis and Delphi process support the “reliability” or “content validity” of the intervention program. These terms may be stronger than the present design allows. The study demonstrates systematic development, expert appraisal, and refinement of the program, but it does not appear to include a formal reliability assessment or a conventional content-validity analysis. I therefore suggest replacing “reliability” with wording such as “systematic refinement and expert appraisal,” and replacing “content validity” with “perceived relevance, clarity, and appropriateness,” unless formal content-validity indices were calculated. It would also be helpful to ensure that the Conclusion continues to maintain the same cautious distinction used elsewhere in the manuscript: the program is a structured and evidence-informed framework ready for caregiver-informed feasibility testing, rather than an intervention whose feasibility or effectiveness has already been established. Subject to these minor wording revisions and a final technical check of the clean manuscript and supporting files, I believe the manuscript is suitable for publication. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: I am satisfied with the changes, clarifications, and the point-by-point responses. Most importantly, it refers to the ACCORD (ACcurate COnsensus Reporting Document) guideline from the EQUATOR Network. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. 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An evidence-informed psychosocial intervention program for caregiver burden among family caregivers of children with autism spectrum disorder: a multi-stage development and Delphi study PONE-D-26-16776R2 Dear Dr. Yan, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Yilin Jiang Academic Editor PLOS One |
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PONE-D-26-16776R2 PLOS One Dear Dr. Yan, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Yilin Jiang Academic Editor PLOS One |
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