Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionAugust 16, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-41107-->-->Understanding the Underuse: Barriers to Vacuum-Assisted Birth Among Clinicians in Tanzania: An Exploratory Qualitative Study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Chikwala, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 04 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Dear Author, This is a relevant and fairly good methodological study to explore the maternal health in-depth regarding VAB in LIMC. Here are few suggestions and queries that I think needs to be cleared before the publication. Strengthen the introduction and discussion. Clarify and deepen the thematic analysis. The details of comments and queries are attached as a separate file. Thank you Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this manuscript. This manuscript addresses an important and underexplored issue in maternal health by examining the barriers to the use of vacuum-assisted birth among clinicians in Tanzania. Given the continued burden of prolonged labor and preventable maternal and neonatal complications in low-resource settings, understanding factors influencing the underuse of evidence-based obstetric interventions is highly relevant. The study’s focus on clinicians’ perspectives and its use of an exploratory qualitative design are appropriate for capturing contextual, system-level, and experiential barriers. The topic aligns well with the scope of PLOS ONE and has the potential to contribute valuable insights to obstetric practice, health systems strengthening, and policy discussions in similar settings. Below are some comments that, when addressed, could improve the quality of the manuscript: 1. Line 52: (Despite its known benefits, VAB the utilization of VAB remains…) This sentence will have to be checked to avoid repetition of terms. 2. Line 64: (This utilization may be contributing) This could be changed to “This underutilization may…” 3. Lines 397-401: (In some instances, the use of inappropriate sizes of vacuum extracted cups…) and (Inappropriate sizes of vacuum extractor cups have resulted in slippage during procedures…). These two sentences appear to be communicating the same point. It will benefit the manuscript if the authors can make a single statement from both or keep one. 4. Lines 408-409: (These results are consistent with studies conducted in other LMICs…). It would be more appropriate to be more specific with the names of these LMICs. 5. Lines 433-435: (Similar concerns have been reported in other African countries…). It would be more appropriate to be more specific with the names of these African countries. 6. Additionally, including the data collection tool as a supplementary file would benefit both the readers of the manuscript and improve its perspective. 7. The study makes a good contribution to the field and would benefit from proofreading to correct some grammatical errors. Reviewer #3: Comments to author This is a worthwhile study, particularly in a low resource setting to determine what barriers exist to using a safe alternative to avoid C/S which carry significant risks (especially in a setting with a 75% C/S rate). In understanding the context of the research (which relates to transferability), it would be helpful to describe for the international readership the type (e.g. Kiwi, Silc-cup) and composition (e.g. metal, silicone) of the vacuum systems (e.g. piped or hand-pump operated compressed air) available. Clarifications • Please clarify and define early in the article the clinical specialists included in this study. There is frequent generic reference made to skilled health care providers, and later on (line 248-54) mention is made of nurses, midwives, and nurse attendants. It is unclear why these categories of health care providers are mentioned when the focus appears to be on the barriers experienced by medical clinicians. Are midwives or nurses taught and licensed to undertake vacuum deliveries? • Please clarify what is meant by clinical experience. Does this include clinical experience as an undergraduate medical student or only after qualification. Alternatively does this relate specifically to obstetric clinical experience? As this is a qualitative study it would be prudent to disclose the authors’ experience / perspective of this clinical situation as this is germane to their research conduct and interpretation. • The article would be strengthened by including information about the development of the semi-structured interview guide. It is unclear what informed the questions, i.e. what was the theoretical or conceptual base? This level of detail is relevant for the credibility aspect of trustworthiness. What is mentioned in lines 95/6 is “The tool was informed by a review of existing signatures (include references) to ensure relevant themes on barriers to VAB use”. It is not clear what is meant by a review of existing signatures (include references)”. • Research rigour / Trustworthiness. It would strengthen the article to explicitly include “transferability” and to mention if member checking was done to enhance confirmability. Discussion. This is well founded on the information gathered (data). However, • There is no mention of the knowledge foundation of the participants (to address lack of confidence in decision-making). • While it is understood that the context (equipment availability and functionality, and clinical skills) is not conducive to successful VAB, it appears that some of the participants believed that VAB was harmful per se, despite long standing evidence to the contrary. • While mention is made of lack of agreed clinical guidelines and SOPs, and challenging interpersonal relationships among the labour ward staff, the article is silent on the apparent lack of clinical leadership which is required to manage such dynamics and processes. Ethics. While confidentiality is clearly described there are other ethical concerns • Participants were identified by the ward “incharge”, after which the researcher approached them in person. Did the “incharge” ask the potential participants if the researchers could approach them? This distinction is important in terms of the autonomy of the individuals concerned who were in the employ of the hospital. • What was the employment relationship between the participants and the researchers? Given that the participants were employees in the hospital where the study was being conducted, was there a sense of obligation to participate (undue coercion?), what was the power dynamic between the participants and the employer and/or the researcher? Was there a possibility that they might feel that their participation was necessary to ensure that their employment status was not jeopardised? References. A thorough check of the reference list required to ensure that references are complete and correct, specifically 1, 4, 5, 7, 12, 18, 24, 26 Author contributions. Please clarify which of the authors conducted the interviews. The article indicates that a midwife was a co-facilitator, but it is not clear who was the lead interviewer. It is not clear if the midwife co-facilitator (information gatherer / data collector) is included in the authorship or acknowledgements. Please clarify this contribution. I wish you well in any follow-up quality improvement initiative to strengthen this aspect of clinical practice for the benefit of mothers and babies in your setting. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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