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Original SubmissionMarch 15, 2026
Decision Letter - Xiaowei Li, Editor

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Reviewer #1: The research is interesting; however, it would benefit from the inclusion of more relevant literature to ensure that the context is comprehensively covered. It is also recommended to include a summary table at the end of the literature review to compare existing approaches, which would help to clearly position the proposed method within the current body of research.

The paper introduces multiple enhancements (coordinate attention, path-decoupling, lightweight design), but it is not entirely clear how each component individually contributes to performance. Consider adding an ablation study to isolate the impact of each module.

The term “spatial-aware” is used prominently in the title, but its technical definition and implementation are not sufficiently explained. Clarify how spatial awareness is modeled differently from standard YOLOv8 attention mechanisms.

The choice of enhancing YOLOv8n specifically should be better justified. Why is the nano version preferred over other variants (e.g., YOLOv8s/m)? Is the focus primarily on edge deployment or computational constraints?

The proposed path-decoupling strategy needs clearer explanation. A diagram or architectural comparison would help readers understand how it differs from conventional detection heads.

Since the work targets real-time tea disease detection, discuss:

Deployment feasibility on edge devices:

Performance under real-world conditions (e.g., varying weather, leaf overlap). Explain further on this.

Include a brief discussion on limitations of the study.

Therefore, it is recommended to conduct multiple experimental setups to further validate the robustness of the proposed method and potentially improve the overall results. This could include varying training configurations, testing under different conditions, or evaluating on additional datasets.

Reviewer #2: The paper proposes CA-YOLOv8n, a lightweight object detection model combining Coordinate Attention (CA) with a Path-Decoupling strategy on YOLOv8n for tea disease detection, targeting edge deployment. It appears that important sections of the papers were not included although references were made to such sections. For example: section 3.1.1 and section 4.5

Here are the comments on different aspects of the article

# Dataset (Section 3.1)

- No statistical distribution figure is present despite "3.1.1 Statistical Distribution" being listed as a subsection header with no content. This is a placeholder left unfilled.

- Class distribution of the dataset is not discussed, potentially ignoring any class imbalance issues. Eight classes across 9,591 images with no per-class breakdown is a significant omission.

- The dataset is sourced from "Tencent Developer Community" with no DOI, or verifiable link. Reproducibility is impossible without this.

# Experimental Design (Section 3)

- The confidence threshold of τ=0.25 is presented as a design choice, but its effect on precision is not rigorously quantified in a dedicated ablation — it is only briefly discussed in Section 3.6.2. Although the authors referred to Section 4.5 for relevant analysis, but the article do not contain any such section.

- No training hardware specification is provided (only inference hardware in Section 4.3.3). Training reproducibility is compromised.

- No cross-validation or repeated trial protocol is described. Results from a single train/test split are insufficient to establish generalizability claims.

# Comparative Analysis (Section 4.3)

- Table 1 compares only three models (YOLOv8n, YOLOv10n, CA-YOLOv8n). No comparison against other lightweight tea-specific models (e.g., YOLO-Tea from reference [28], Dise-Efficient from [19]) is made, despite these being directly cited in the related work.

- The 18.09% mAP improvement cited in Section 3.5.1 does not match the calculated difference from Table 1 (83.7% → 98.9% = 15.2 percentage points). Please explain the inconsistency in the reporting.

- When reporting computational efficiency, inference speed (FPS/ms latency), which is central to the edge deployment problem.

# Confusion Matrix (Section 4.2)

- The "disease" (other minor diseases) category shows no true positive values in the confusion matrix (Fig. 7) and should be discussed.

- False negative rates for Tea Mosquito bug (0.52) and Red Spider (0.27) are high and warrant deeper analysis.

# ECGR Metrics

- IEI metric was defined but never actually reported in any table.

# Deployment:

- as mentioned, the system interface was developed following "professional agricultural standards". Please specify which standards are you referring to

- the authors mentioned about deployment on the edge, please provide more hard ware/software details of the edge platform used.

# Language:

Writing is generally intelligible but contains hyperbolic phrasing inappropriate for scientific publication (e.g., "dramatic improvement," "impressive 98.9%," "a robust and efficient solution").

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Revision 1

Dear Dr. Xiaowei Li and the two anonymous Reviewers,

We thank the academic editor and both reviewers for the detailed, constructive comments on our submission. Each point has been addressed in the revised manuscript, and a marked-up copy with track changes has been uploaded alongside this letter. Where a comment is cross-referenced to a section, figure, or table, the section/figure/table number refers to the revised manuscript. Two new figures have been added during the revision — Fig 2 (the Path-Decoupling neck comparison requested by Reviewer #1, R1.5) and Fig 10 (the per-class diagnostic produced for the new ablation study, requested by Reviewer #1, R1.2). A new literature-summary Table 1 has also been added at the end of Section 2 (in response to Reviewer #1, R1.1), so the three pre-existing tables have been renumbered: Comparative performance → Table 2, Computational efficiency → Table 3, Module-level ablation → Table 4. All previously existing figures from old Fig 2 onward have been renumbered upward by one (old Fig 2 → new Fig 3, etc.).

The point-by-point responses are organised below in three sections: 1. Academic editor’s journal requirements (items 1–7) 2. Reviewer #1 (seven comments) 3. Reviewer #2 (comments grouped by section)

A summary list of every change made to the manuscript is provided at the end of this letter.

1. Academic Editor — Journal Requirements

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Authors’ response: The manuscript has been reformatted to follow the PLOS ONE style template (main body and title/authors/affiliations samples linked in the decision letter). Section headings, paragraph spacing, figure/table captions, and reference formatting now conform to the PLOS ONE guidelines.

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Authors’ response: A reference implementation has been released publicly on GitHub under the GNU Affero General Public License v3.0 (the licence required by the Ultralytics YOLOv8 framework on which the work builds):

Repository: https://github.com/lvxiangfly/tea-disease-detection Release tag: v1.0.0 Direct link to the release snapshot: https://github.com/lvxiangfly/tea-disease-detection/releases/tag/v1.0.0

The release contains the Coordinate-Attention module, the CA-YOLOv8n model YAML, the original Kaggle training notebook that produced the checkpoint reported in this paper, portable training/evaluation/inference scripts, the CPU latency benchmark script used for Table 2, and the final trained weight file.

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Authors’ response: The complete 9,591-image tea-leaf disease dataset has been deposited on figshare under DOI:

DOI: 10.6084/m9.figshare.32253357 URL: https://doi.org/10.6084/m9.figshare.32253357 Licence: CC BY 4.0

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Authors’ response: After re-examining all flagged figures, we clarify the situation as follows. The five figures cited in the editor’s note (using the original submission’s numbering) correspond to:

Original submission # Revised manuscript # Caption (short) Authorship

Fig 2 Fig 3 Architectural framework of the tea-disease identification system Original — drawn by the authors

Fig 3 Fig 4 Detailed inference pipeline and dynamic threshold decision-making logic Original — drawn by the authors

Fig 6 Fig 7 Batch Samples Composed of dataset images (see below)

Fig 8 Fig 9 Qualitative comparison of detection results Composed of dataset images (see below)

Fig 9 Fig 11 The GUI of the Tea Disease Identification System Original — author’s software screenshot

Originally created by the authors (no third-party content reused). Figs 1,2, 3, 4, 5,6,8, 10, and 11 of the revised manuscript — comprising the architectural diagrams, the confusion matrix, the per-class diagnostic, and the GUI screenshot — were produced entirely by the authors using draw.io, matplotlib, and our own GUI application, so the CC BY 4.0 licence applies without restriction.

Drawn from the authors' figshare dataset. Figs 7 and 9 incorporate sample images from the tea-leaf disease dataset deposited at figshare DOI 10.6084/m9.figshare.32253357 (CC BY 4.0). Per the editorial office's latest request prior to peer review, we have now explicitly added the relevant attribution, DOI, and usage information (CC BY 4.0) directly into the captions of Fig 7 and Fig 9 in the revised manuscript.

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Authors’ response: The table the editor flagged (Analysis of computational efficiency and parameter utilization) — originally Table 2, now Table 3 in the revised manuscript after a new literature-summary Table 1 was added at the end of Section 2 — is now explicitly cited in Section 4.3.2 (Analysis of Computational Efficiency), which discusses each column of the table and links the parameter-efficiency ratio (PPR) of CA-YOLOv8n to the Path-Decoupling design.

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Authors’ response: The original reference to “Table 4.5” was a typographical placeholder that was no longer needed once the ablation analysis was consolidated. The reference has been removed, and the ablation results are now presented in Table 4 (Module-level ablation on the independent test set) of the revised manuscript and complemented by Fig 10 (Per-class diagnostic performance of the four ablation variants). No further “Table 4.5” reference appears anywhere in the revised text.

2. Reviewer #1

R1.1. Additional literature and a literature-review summary table

“The research is interesting; however, it would benefit from the inclusion of more relevant literature to ensure that the context is comprehensively covered. It is also recommended to include a summary table at the end of the literature review to compare existing approaches, which would help to clearly position the proposed method within the current body of research.”

Authors’ response: The Related Work section has been expanded along three lines. (i) Additional references covering attention-based pest/disease detection, lightweight YOLO variants for agricultural deployment, and tea-domain works have been added. (ii) A new comparative-summary Table 1 (Comparison of existing models for agricultural disease detection) has been inserted at the end of Section 2; it compares five representative recent models across four axes (base architecture, key enhancements, and limitations) — YOLO-Tea (Xue et al., 2023) , YOLOv8-RCAA (Wang et al., 2024) , MobileNet-CA-YOLO (Jia et al., 2023) , Dise-Efficient (Guan et al., 2023) , and AX-RetinaNet (Bao et al., 2022) — three of which (YOLO-Tea, YOLOv8-RCAA, AX-RetinaNet) are explicitly tea-disease detectors, providing direct in-domain positioning. (iii) The narrative in Section 2 now references each row of Table 1 and articulates how the proposed CA-YOLOv8n is positioned relative to these works (notably, Coordinate Attention is coupled with neck-side Path-Decoupling rather than inserted into the backbone as in MobileNet-CA-YOLO). Because Table 1 has been inserted at the start of the numbered table sequence, the three pre-existing tables have been renumbered accordingly (Comparative performance → Table 2; Computational efficiency → Table 3; Module-level ablation → Table 4), and all in-text and Response-letter references below use the revised numbering.

R1.2. Ablation study isolating each module

“The paper introduces multiple enhancements (coordinate attention, path-decoupling, lightweight design), but it is not entirely clear how each component individually contributes to performance. Consider adding an ablation study to isolate the impact of each module.”

Authors’ response: A controlled 2 × 2 ablation has been added in Section 4.4 (Ablation Study) of the revised manuscript. The four variants — Baseline (YOLOv8n), + CA only, + PD only, and CA-YOLOv8n (Full) — share an identical training protocol and are reported together in Table 4 (parameters, GFLOPs, mAP@50, mAP@50-95, Precision, Recall, Latency, FPS) and in Fig 10 (per-class Precision / Recall / mAP@50 / mAP@50-95). The ablation isolates the contributions of each component: the +CA-only variant raises mAP@50 from 97.11 % to 98.74 % while leaving the parameter count essentially unchanged (3.01 M → 3.02 M); the +PD-only variant reduces parameters and GFLOPs by 33 % and 24 % respectively (3.01 M → 2.03 M, 8.20 → 6.21 GFLOPs) and cuts CPU latency from 63.62 ms to 48.85 ms; combining the two recovers the precision gain while preserving the lightweight footprint of PD (2.03 M / 6.22 GFLOPs / 51.39 ms / mAP@50 = 98.89 %, mAP@50-95 = 76.26 %). The complementary failure modes the two modules address (CA improves Precision, PD improves Recall) are discussed in Section 4.4.

R1.3. Technical definition of “Spatial-Aware”

“The term ‘spatial-aware’ is used prominently in the title, but its technical definition and implementation are not sufficiently explained. Clarify how spatial awareness is modeled differently from standard YOLOv8 attention mechanisms.”

Authors’ response: Two paragraphs have been added at the opening of Section 3.3 (Coordinate Attention and Architectural Compensation) to define the term and contrast it with the channel-only attention typically paired with YOLOv8. Briefly: standard channel-attention modules such as Squeeze-and-Excitation (Hu et al., 2018) collapse every spatial location of a channel into a single scalar via global average pooling, so the resulting gating signal is position-agnostic within a channel. Coordinate Attention replaces that 2D global pooling with two complementary 1D pooling kernels of size (H, 1) and (1, W), which aggregate features along the vertical and horizontal axes separately; the direction-aware descriptors are concatenated, passed through a shared 1 × 1 convolution, and split back into a height-wise and a width-wise attention map, each broadcast over its orthogonal axis when modulating the input. The recalibration weights therefore vary across spatial coordinates rather than being shared within a channel — this row- and column-conditioned gating is the precise sense in which the proposed network is Spatial-Aware, and it is what distinguishes Coordinate Attention from SE and from the position-agnostic attention designs commonly inserted into YOLOv8. Section 3.3 then formalises the two stages of CA (Coordinate Information Embedding in Section 3.3.1 and Coordinate Attention Generation in Section 3.3.2) before integrating its output under the Path-Decoupling design illustrated in Fig 2.

R1.4. Justification for choosing YOLOv8n (nano) over s / m variants

“The choice of enhancing YOLOv8n specifically should be better justified. Why is the nano version preferred over other variants (e.g., YOLOv8s/m)? Is the focus primarily on edge deployment or computational constraints?”

Authors’ response: The choice is dictated by the target deployment scenario stated in the Introduction (Section 1) and reinforced in Section 4.3 (Performance Comparison): a CPU-only edge platform represented in this study by an Intel Core i5-13500H. The nano variant is the only scale of the YOLOv8 family whose parameter footprint (~3 M) and FLOP budget (~8 GFLOPs) keep single-image CPU latency within the sub-100 ms range that the agricultural inspection workflow targeted in this paper requires. YOLOv8s (~11 M parameters, ~28 GFLOPs) and YOLOv8m (~26 M, ~79 GFLOPs) would multiply CPU latency by roughly 4 × and 12 × respectively.

R1.5. Diagram / architectural comparison of the Path-Decoupling strategy

“The proposed path-decoupling strategy needs clearer explanation. A diagram or architectural comparison would help readers understand how it differs from conventional detection heads.”

Authors’ response: A side-by-side architectural comparison has been added as Fig 2 in the revised manuscript. Panel (a) depicts the standard PAN-FPN neck used by YOLOv8n — 12 successive operations (2 Upsample + 4 Concat + 4 C2f + 2 Conv-down) sitting between the backbone outputs (P3, P4, P5) and the three detection heads. Panel (b) depicts the proposed Streamlined-Neck: the entire PAN-FPN neck is removed, P3 (layer 4) and P4 (layer 6) are routed directly from the backbone into the detection heads, and only a single Coordinate-Attention block is inserted on the deepest backbone feature P5. The figure caption quantifies the cost differential (≈ 0.98 M parameters and ≈ 1.98 GFLOPs removed; 12 fusion layers replaced by 1 attention layer), and the Path-Decoupling rationale is now formalised in Section 3.3.3 (Feature Recalibration under Path-Decoupling). The matplotlib script used to render Fig 2 is included in the public code release (docs/architecture.png / .pdf) for full reproducibility.

R1.6. Edge deployment feasibility, real-world conditions, and Limitations

“Since the work targets real-time tea disease detection, discuss: Deployment feasibility on edge devices; Performance under real-world conditions (e.g., varying weather, leaf overlap). Explain further on this. Include a brief discussion on limitations of the study.”

Authors’ response: All three sub-points have been addressed in the revised manuscript.

Edge deployment feasibility. The subsection Performance Advantages of Lightweight Deployment (now part of the System Implementation and Deployment block in Section 3) lists the exact deployment platform (Intel Core i5-13500H CPU, single thread, batch = 1, FP32, 640 × 640) and reports the achieved end-to-end inference latency (51.39 ms ≈ 19.5 FPS). Section 4.3 (Performance Comparison) further benchmarks CA-YOLOv8n against YOLOv8n and YOLOv10n on the same hardware (51.39 ms vs. 63.62 ms and 179.00 ms; see Table 2), confirming that the proposed design meets the sub-100 ms real-time budget on commodity CPU hardware without GPU acceleration.

Performance under real-world conditions. Fig 9 (Qualitative comparison of detection results between baseline YOLOv8n and the proposed CA-YOLOv8n under complex tea plantation environments) presents detection examples that include occluded leaves, overlapping foliage, and varying illumination. The accompanying narrative in Section 4.3.1 walks through several representative cases where the baseline either misses heavily overlapping lesions or misclassifies them, and shows the corresponding CA-YOLOv8n predictions. The class-imbalance discussion newly added to Section 3.1.1 (Statistical Distribution) and the confusion-matrix analysis in Section 4.2 further quantify the failure modes that remain under real-world distribution shift.

Limitations. A dedicated Section 5.2 (Limitations) has been added to the revised manuscript. It explicitly acknowle

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Spatial-Aware Lightweight Network for Real-time Tea Disease Detection: A Coordinate Attention-Enhanced YOLOv8n Approach with Path-Decoupling Strategy

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Formally Accepted
Acceptance Letter - Xiaowei Li, Editor

PONE-D-26-12938R1

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