Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 19, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-50640-->-->Hidden Deficiency under Bright Skies: Vitamin D Prevalence and Genetic Associations in African Type 2 Diabetes: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Abera, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 30 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: My Reports This manuscript presents a well-designed and timely systematic review and meta-analysis addressing vitamin D deficiency, glycemic control, and VDR polymorphisms among individuals with type 2 diabetes in African populations. The study follows PRISMA 2020 guidelines, has a registered PROSPERO protocol, applies appropriate statistical methods, and addresses an important gap in the literature. Overall, the manuscript is methodologically sound and largely suitable for publication in PLOS ONE, pending minor but targeted revisions aimed at improving clarity and interpretation. Comments 1. Definition and standardization of vitamin D deficiency Vitamin D deficiency is a primary outcome of this review; however, the included studies apply different cut-off values to define deficiency (e.g., <20 ng/mL vs. <30 ng/mL). The manuscript would benefit from a clearer explanation of how this variability was handled analytically. If feasible, a sensitivity or subgroup analysis based on vitamin D cut-off definitions could be considered. Alternatively, this issue should be more explicitly acknowledged as a contributor to between-study heterogeneity in the Limitations section. 2. Interpretation of substantial heterogeneity The pooled prevalence analysis demonstrates very high heterogeneity (I² >95%). While meta-regression and subgroup analyses were conducted, the Discussion could be strengthened by a more explicit interpretation of the implications of this heterogeneity. In particular, the authors may wish to clarify how such variability affects the generalizability of the findings and their relevance for regional or clinical decision-making in African contexts. 3. Scope and interpretation of genetic findings The conclusions regarding the lack of association between VDR FokI polymorphism and type 2 diabetes risk are appropriate; however, they would benefit from additional contextualization. Given the small number of genetic studies and the extensive genetic diversity across African populations, the authors are encouraged to explicitly frame these findings as hypothesis-generating and to emphasize the need for larger, population-specific genetic studies. 4. Data availability and reproducibility The Data Availability Statement is acceptable; however, the authors are encouraged to clarify whether extracted datasets and/or statistical code (e.g., R scripts) could be made available as supplementary material. This would further enhance transparency and reproducibility, in line with PLOS ONE’s open science principles. Reviewer #2: This systematic review addresses an important and understudied topic — vitamin D deficiency (VDD) in African populations with type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2DM). The authors followed PRISMA and JBI guidelines, pre-registered the protocol, and performed a range of appropriate analyses. However, several major analytical concerns substantially limit the interpretability of the findings and require revision before acceptance. 1. VDD Definition Not Clearly Specified: The paper never clearly states how VDD was defined across studies or whether a unified threshold was applied for pooling. This is a critical methodological detail that must be reported transparently in the methods section or a supplementary table. 2. Case-Control Studies and Prevalence Estimation: Eleven of the 22 included studies used a case-control design, from which prevalence estimates should not be directly calculated, as prevalence in such designs is a function of the sampling ratio rather than true population prevalence. It is unclear whether VDD prevalence estimates were drawn only from the "case" (T2DM) arm of these studies and, if so, how they were handled differently from cross-sectional estimates. The subgroup analysis by study design is appreciated but does not resolve this concern, which should be explicitly addressed in the methods. 3. Inclusion of a Non-Peer-Reviewed Source: Reference 34 (Hasan, Algeria) appears to be a thesis rather than a peer-reviewed publication. Its inclusion should be explicitly justified, and its methodological quality should be assessed transparently, as theses are not subject to the same review process as journal articles. 4. Extreme Heterogeneity: The pooled prevalence of 51% (95% CI: 36–65%) is accompanied by I² = 95.7%, which is extreme. This is not merely a limitation to acknowledge — it fundamentally undermines the validity of a single pooled estimate. When I² is this high, the confidence interval is almost entirely driven by between-study variance (τ²), and the pooled figure of 51% carries very little real estimative value. While the authors acknowledged heterogeneity, conducted subgroup analyses by region and study design, and ran a meta-regression on publication year and sample size, none of these explained the variability. The authors should have explored the most clinically plausible sources of heterogeneity as moderators in the meta-regression — specifically: VDD threshold definition (e.g., <20 ng/mL vs. <30 ng/mL vs. <50 nmol/L), assay method (immunoassay vs. LC-MS/MS), season of blood draw, and diabetes duration. These were mentioned in the discussion as speculative explanations but were never formally tested, which represents a significant analytical gap. Furthermore, in case there is insufficient data to assess confounders, the authors should explicitly discuss whether pooling these studies is even appropriate at this level of heterogeneity, or whether a narrative synthesis would be more honest for certain outcomes. 5. VDR FokI Polymorphism Analysis: Only 4 studies were pooled for the VDR FokI analysis, yielding I² = 80.8% and a confidence interval so wide, making it analytically not meaningful: OR = 1.51 (95% CI: 0.23–9.73). While the GRADE rating of "very low" certainty is appropriate, the language used in the abstract and conclusion do not adequately reflect this uncertainty. For instance, lines 45–46 conclude that "current evidence does not support a clear influence of VDR FokI polymorphisms on T2DM susceptibility". This statement that is too confident given the extreme imprecision. A more accurate conclusion would be that the available evidence is insufficient to draw any meaningful conclusion on this outcome. 6. HbA1c Association: The finding that VDD is associated with higher HbA1c (MD = 0.89%, 95% CI: 0.06–1.72, I² = 0%) is based on only 3 studies. Although the I² = 0% is reassuring, three studies are far too few to draw reliable conclusions, and this result should be treated as preliminary and hypothesis-generating. The confidence interval nearly crosses zero, indicating meaningful imprecision. Despite the appropriate GRADE rating of "low" certainty, the language in the abstract and conclusions present this finding with more confidence than is warranted (lines 291–292: "significantly associated with poorer glycemic control"; line 317: "The significant association between VDD and poorer glycemic control"). This language should be softened accordingly. Additionally, it is unclear whether the three included studies adjusted for key confounders such as diabetes duration, medication use, BMI, or renal impairment — all of which affect vitamin D levels and glycemic control. Unadjusted mean differences in observational studies are highly susceptible to confounding, and this issue is not discussed. 7. Meta-Regression: The meta-regression included only publication year and sample size as covariates across 20 studies. While borderline acceptable in terms of the study-to-covariate ratio, the two covariates chosen are arguably the least likely to explain heterogeneity in VDD prevalence. The failure to include more clinically meaningful predictors such as VDD threshold used, assay type, or study setting as moderators (if data were available in the extracted tables) is a missed opportunity and substantially weakens this section. 8. Line 311: The claim that African nations "contributed only five studies" to a prior global review, despite 10 eligible studies existing before that date, should be supported with a supplementary comparison table that also addresses differences in inclusion/exclusion criteria between the two reviews. 9. References: Line 409: Reference 1 ("Analytical Fact Sheet…") is incomplete — no author, year, or URL is provided. This must be corrected. 10. Line 120: The exclusion criterion referencing "sample sizes too small to generate meaningful estimates" does not specify the cutoff used. This threshold should be defined. 11. Seasonal variation as a potential confounding factor in vitamin D levels is not formally addressed and should be discussed or tested where data permit. 12. Line 323: A period is missing at the end of the sentence. Reviewer #3: This a review of “Hidden deficiency under bright skies: Vitamin D prevalence and genetic associations in African type 2 Diabetes: A systematic review and meta-analysis.” This study is a review of the current literature that explores the link between the presence of type 2 diabetes mellitus (T2DM) and vitamin D deficiency (VDD) within several African nations. The author’s identified 22 appropriate studies of with 3,447 total individuals from 11 African nations as being relevant to their research question. Their analysis of the relevant papers showed a link between the presence of VDD and T2DM and recommend that reducing VDD could be an effective compliment to diabetes management in Africa. The study is well done and the authors did a thorough job of identifying and screening for relevant studies and in the subsequent analyses of said studies. I have a few general comments and some remarks regarding the writing, all of which are minor. ********** -->6. 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-->PONE-D-25-50640R1-->-->Hidden deficiency under bright skies: Vitamin D prevalence and genetic associations in African Type 2 diabetes: A systematic review and meta-analysis-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Abera, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 20 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: I have carefully reviewed the revised manuscript and the authors' point-by-point responses to the reviewers' comments. The authors have done an excellent job of addressing all the concerns and suggestions raised during the initial review stage. The newly added subgroup analyses and meta-regressions regarding vitamin D definitions successfully clarify the analytical approach, and the limitations of the high heterogeneity and genetic findings are now balanced and scientifically sound. Additionally, providing the extracted dataset and R scripts as supplementary material perfectly aligns with PLOS ONE's commitment to data availability and reproducibility. All required modifications have been thoroughly implemented, and the manuscript is now ready for publication. I recommend its acceptance without further revisions. Reviewer #4: The manuscript addresses an important gap in African diabetes research and has improved substantially after revision. 1- The clinical recommendations exceed the strength of evidence. The manuscript states: "Our findings stress the importance of integrating vitamin D assessment into routine diabetes care in Africa" . However, this review is based almost entirely on observational studies and does not evaluate intervention effectiveness. 2- The discussion is short and can be improved. The paper repeatedly mentions that Africa has abundant sunlight but high VDD prevalence. This is interesting but not explored deeply. They should discuss skin pigmentation and reduced cutaneous vitamin D synthesis, Urbanization and indoor lifestyles, dietary vitamin D intake 3- Clinical significance of HbA1c difference MD = 0.89% HbA1c which is actually clinically meaningful. A discussion on Is a 0.89% HbA1c difference comparable to some pharmacological interventions? and What impact might this have on diabetic complications? should be included to strengthen the discussion section ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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