Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 21, 2025 |
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Please also include contact information for the third party organization, and please include the full citation of where the data can be found. 4. Please amend the manuscript submission data (via Edit Submission) to include author Gokhan Tut,Tara Lancaster, Panagiota Sylla, David Bone, Christopher Bentley, Azar Jadir, Rachel Bruton, Katie Spencer, Soumyajit Mallick, Ahmed Elzaidi, Alexander Dowell,Mary Y Wu, Ruth Harvey, Edward J Carr, Crick COVID Immunity Pipeline, Rupert Beale, Maria Krutikov, Oliver Stirrup, Borscha Azmi, Andrew Hayward, Andrew Copas and Laura Shallcross. 5. Please ensure that you refer to Figure 5 and 6 in your text as, if accepted, production will need this reference to link the reader to the figure. 6. Please remove your figures from within your manuscript file, leaving only the individual TIFF/EPS image files, uploaded separately. These will be automatically included in the reviewers’ PDF. 7. We notice that your supplementary figures are included in the manuscript file. Please remove them and upload them with the file type 'Supporting Information'. Please ensure that each Supporting Information file has a legend listed in the manuscript after the references list. 8. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This manuscript by Tut & Lancaster et al. presents a valuable investigation into the immune response and clinical outcomes following serial SARS-CoV-2 vaccination, including a bivalent booster, in the highly vulnerable nursing home population. The study leverages the VIVALDI cohort to provide longitudinal data on both humoral and cellular immunity. The central finding that robust, plateaued spike-specific immunity does not prevent high rates of reinfection is clinically important. However, I hope the authors would find the comments below helpful in improving the manuscript. Minor The final sentence in the abstract is strong, but the preceding one ("These findings demonstrate...support the value of bivalent vaccines") feels somewhat generic. Consider refining it to more directly reflect the nuanced finding that the vaccine boosts immunity but that this alone is insufficient to prevent infection in this setting. Line 71 and 72 are duplicates (methods) The relationship between the 4th and 5th doses and sample collection needs clarification. Lines 124-127 show a much longer median time between the 4th dose and sampling for residents (133 days) compared to the 5th dose (65 days). This complicates the direct comparison of immune responses between the 4th and 5th doses, as waning may have already occurred for the 4th dose group. This could be acknowledged as a limitation. Clarify the role of staff participants. Their inclusion is appropriate as a comparison group, but the manuscript could explain why only three staff received the 5th dose and how their data were handled. The introduction references “more reassuring outcomes observed in other settings (refs 4,5)” but does not clearly contrast those findings with the current study. There are important variables that are missing or briefly mentioned which greatly influence immune response in this population. While missing variable such as ethnicity, time since prior infection, severity of infections or reinfections were acknowledged, others such as comorbidities, frailty, or medication use need be acknowledged. Major comments - Reinfection is defined solely by a ≥2-fold rise in nucleocapsid IgG. This threshold is not validated, especially in older adults, and natural fluctuations or assay variability could account for such changes. Also, the text acknowledges reduced PCR/LFD testing in later periods, yet the manuscript does not quantify how this limited diagnostic certainty may bias reinfection estimates. Without sequencing or precise timing of infection, it is unclear whether rises in nucleocapsid antibody reflect new infection, late seroconversion, or boosting from recent viral exposure. Authors should justify the two-fold threshold using published references or internal validation. Also consider discussing the risk of misclassification more explicitly. - A major limitation, acknowledged by the authors, is the lack of data on the clinical severity of these primary infections and reinfections. Given that the primary goal of vaccination in this population is to prevent severe disease, hospitalization, and death, the absence of this data significantly weakens the public health message. Were these largely asymptomatic infections detected by routine screening? Or did they lead to hospitalizations? Any available data on symptom severity or healthcare utilization should be included. If no data exists, this key limitation needs to be more explicitly stated. It may be helpful to clarify that reinfection rates may reflect environmental/behavioral exposure rather than vaccine insufficiency. Also, I would avoid implying that reinfections necessarily indicate unmet clinical need unless clinical significance is demonstrated. - The reported 30% reinfection rate in residents over 6 months is presented as "high," which it may well be. However, to properly interpret this, the manuscript needs context. What was the community incidence of SARS-CoV-2 during this specific study period (approx. July 2022 - Jan 2023)? This period likely covered Omicron subvariants like BA.5, which are known for high immune evasion. Stating the dominant variants and community prevalence would help assess whether this 30% rate is truly unexpectedly high given the immune-evasive nature of the circulating viruses and the congregate living setting, or if it is consistent with broader population trends. - The data in Figure 6 and the corresponding text (lines 340-342) are currently confusing. It states that reinfection did not boost spike-specific antibodies in residents "due to high baseline values." However, Figure 6D appears to show a significant increase in spike antibodies in reinfected residents (p=0.007). This direct contradiction between the text and the figure must be resolved. The authors need to clarify their interpretation and ensure the statistical analysis and textual description are aligned. - The discussion focuses on the robustness of the immune response but does not adequately grapple with the core paradox: why do high antibody and T-cell levels not prevent infection? The authors correctly state that vaccines are less effective at preventing infection than severe disease, but they could expatiate further. For instance: Could this be due to differences in mucosal IgA responses, which are critical for blocking infection at the portal of entry? Could the "plateau" of immunity represent a ceiling effect that is still insufficient to neutralize the high viral loads encountered in an LTCF setting? The modest reduction in BA.5-specific T-cell responses is noted, but its potential contribution to breakthrough infections could be discussed more thoroughly. - The suggestion that "further approaches are needed" is appropriate but vague. The discussion could be strengthened by proposing specific "adjunctive protective approaches" (line 369), such as improved ventilation, prophylactic antivirals, or perhaps, next-generation mucosal vaccines. Reviewer #2: The authours have evaluated Older adult residents of long-term care facilities, and their infection/reinfection rates with Sara-CoV-2. While the maunscript is generally acceptable for publication and the data and conculsions are justified. I have some questions that may be considered. The manuscript puts a large amount of emphesis on the 4th to 5th vacine dose "Here we determined humoral and cellular immunity following delivery of a 5th vaccine dose" however Table 2 tells us that only 3 staff (of 168) and 64 residents (of 141) recived the 5th dose. in total only 22% of those in the study. Is it therefore correct to put such emphesis on the 4th to 5th vaccine dose when only 67 people of the 309 in the study actually recived this dose?. Also the inclusion of the Staff - who are a wholely different demographic - mostly much much younger than the residents - this also seems like an odd sub set to be included in the study - which doesnt really get an explanation. The manuscript could also do with a quick grammar check. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Oladayo A. Oyebanji Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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Dear Dr. Moss,
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: No ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #3: The aim of this study was to 1. Determine the antibody and cellular immune responses against SARS-CoV-2 following bivalent vaccination in long-term care facilities for older adults, and to 2. Assess breakthrough infection rates. The study uses a subset of VIVALDI cohort to compare immune responses after later booster doses (4th and 5th) to conclude that while the vaccines elicit robust systemic spike-specific immune responses, it does not prevent reinfection. The manuscript addresses an epidemiologically important question and has important public health implications for vulnerable older populations. However, the authors should consider these revisions to allow accurate interpretation of the data. • It is unclear which participants were included in the analyses and in each figure. While the table nicely breaks down the population in the study, it doesn’t provide information about which samples actually ended up in the analyses and the breakdown of staff vs residents. For example, Figure 1A reports an n=41, are these all residents? Are these completely independent samples? Or are there repeated participants in each group? Similarly, Figures 4 and 6 have a different sample size compared to other figures with matched data. The manuscript can really benefit from mapping the included participants/samples into a CONSORT-style diagram and from noting when certain samples are omitted from analysis in specific figures. The sample sizes in matched data are very small. Why? • Statistical analyses in all figures need reconsideration. In figure 1A and C, it is not clear if the analysis included repeated participants (i.e. same people contributed a sample after the 4th dose and after 5th dose). If participants are repeated, then the 4 groups are not fully independent so Kruskal–Wallis test is not appropriate, and a mixed-effects model should be used. • In panels B and D, it would be nice to see a correlation graph between antibody titer after 4th and 5th dose instead of showing only matched data. Also, when were these matched samples collected for the 4th and 5th dose? Are equivalent time points being compared? • 6–100 days is a very wide window. Immune responses at one week and at 3 months are not biologically equivalent, and you lose a lot of information. I suggest further stratifying the groups. • Figure 2: Why were the Wuhan titers for prior infection samples analyzed with paired t test and the rest of the titers analyzed with Wilcoxon matched-pairs signed rank test? Were multiple comparisons done and corrected? Or were these unadjusted comparisons? The authors need to reanalyze and draw conclusions accordingly. From the current p values, bivalent vaccination broadened Omicron spike-binding responses more consistently in prior-infected than in infection-naïve participants. Also, similar to Figure 1, it should be stated whether the paired samples were taken at comparable times after each dose. • Figure 3: again, statistical analysis. Were multiple comparisons done? What were the p values for each variant? How were the thresholds for weak and complete inhibition determined? Or are these the limits of detection of the assay? How did the authors reach the conclusion “bivalent vaccine enhances omicron variant-specific antibody titres irrespective of infection status and further enhances neutralisation capacity in donors who remain infection-naive”? • Figure 4: The manuscript concludes that “Recognition of ancestral and BA.1 peptides was equivalent whilst those against BA.5 were slightly reduced, irrespective of prior infection status”. While cellular responses to BA.5 were modestly reduced in both prior-infected and infection-naive residents, the small sample size in infection-naive donors limits the precision of these estimates. Therefore, conclusions should be framed cautiously. • Figure 5 is informative, but authors should be cautious about overstatements and implying causal dose thresholds and stabilization effects that are not directly tested by the statistical analysis presented. To evaluate changes in immune responses across doses and infection status groups, a mixed-effects longitudinal model would be more appropriate. Additionally, if this data is from all participants in the VIVALDI study, does that mean all ages are included? • Figure 6: How many doses of vaccine did the participants in this figure have at that point? While Primary infection and reinfection events occurred, it is unclear how it was determined that the primary infection participants had “strong immunity”. Some of these participants were sitting at 10–100 BAU/mL in July, that is a low binding-antibody level. The data suggest that a subset of older donors remained weak humoral responders or had substantial waning in July, but with infection, immune responses were boosted. Overall, immunity in this cohort was shaped by both vaccination and repeated infection. In the resident reinfection group, infection did not result in further measurable boosting of spike antibody levels, likely reflecting a ceiling/ plateau effect or stable hybrid immunity. Minor concerns: • In addition to the absence of viral screening and inability to tell the time of prior infection with the use of anti-N IgG, it would strengthen the manuscript to acknowledge that anti-N IgGs decline more rapidly than spike antibodies, especially in older adults. Therefore, there could be some misclassification in the “naive group”. • Additional clarification and description of the analytic structure and interpretation of results in the Results section would substantially improve readability and reduce ambiguity. • Line 343, the text says August 2022 but the figure says July. Make sure it is consistent. ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: Yes: Oladayo A. Oyebanji Reviewer #3: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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High rates of SARS-CoV-2 reinfection in residents of long term care facilities despite robust spike-specific immunity following serial vaccination PONE-D-25-51786R2 Dear Dr. Paul, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Mohammad Rashidul Hashan, M.B.B.S.;Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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