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-->PONE-D-25-52254-->-->HLA-DRB1 and HLA-DQB1 genetic polymorphisms and susceptibility to atherosclerosis in a Northeast Chinese Population: a case-control study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 06 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Additional Editor Comments (if provided): The manuscript deals with an interesting subject in the study of “HLA-DRB1 and HLA-DQB1 genetic polymorphisms and susceptibility to atherosclerosis in a Northeast Chinese Population: a case-control study” The first confusion arises from the title of the manuscript: “The genetic polymorphism of HLA-DRB1 and HLA-DQB1 in response to the rising rates of atherosclerosis in Northeast China.”, however, authors describe in the abstract their results of serotype HLA-DR7-DQ2? In these types of studies is very important to have the ancestry data of those haplotypes in the north-east China, DRB1*07:01, DRB1*09:01, DRB1*04:05 (prevalence/ frequency) in the population of Northwest China, the same applies to HLA-DQB1*03:01, -DQB1*02:02, and -DQB1*03:03 alleles. Besides, authors should be careful with the description of HLA-DR/DQ, this is not a haplotype!!, is a serotype, this is stated in results section where authors described the results of NGS, I suggest authors homogenize the nomenclature of HLA alleles (lines 169, 179, 182 and 199). It was not clear the estimation of statistical significancy (p-value) for association of the HLA-DRB1*07:01-DQB1*02:02 haplotype with disease susceptibility, this values must be corrected using the Bonferroni test, which is necessary in this type of studies, and besides, authors should mention if the values shows some kind of trend toward susceptibility for this haplotype. There is an error in line 212, the haplotype HLA-DRB1*07:01-DQB1*02:02. should be corrected. In discussion section, I suggest deleting the next phrase "in murine models, several variants associated with cardiovascular risk have been identified." This makes confusion due to the clear differences between the murine MHC and the HLA in humans, both complexes are not comparables (line132) [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: No ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Why, if the article title frames the genetic polymorphism of HLA-DRB1 and HLA-DQB1, do you describe the results in the abstract with the serotype HLA-DR7-DQ2? Line 50, it would be illustrative to create a map that frames the northwest region of China, where the samples originate. Line 62, you cite an article you authored, comparing the miniature pig MHC (SLA), on chromosome 7, with the human MHC (HLA). I do not consider them comparable. You should reconsider this idea. Line 66, HLA-DR/DQ, describes serotypes, not the haplotype that you will describe later in the results, obtained by NGS. In the section on study participants, I think that the description of the patient group is correct. Line 161, The results fail to mention whether the most frequent alleles found in your study population, DRB1*07:01, DRB1*09:01, and DRB1*04:05, are prevalent or very frequent in the population of Northwest China. Line 178, the same applies to the HLA-DQB1*03:01, -DQB1*02:02, and -DQB1*03:03 alleles. Lines 163, 169, 179, 182 and 199, homogenize the nomenclature of the described HLA alleles. Line 190, the significant p-value for the association of the HLA-DRB1*07:01-DQB1*02:02 haplotype with susceptibility to developing the disease must be corrected using the Bonferroni test, which is necessary in this type of study of HLA and its association with disease. If the p-value loses its significance, explain, at least, the trend toward susceptibility for this haplotype. Line 212, correct the haplotype HLA-DRB1*07:01-DQB1*02:02. Line 231, in the discussion, makes no sense in trying to link this study: "in murine models, several variants associated with cardiovascular risk have been identified." The mouse MHC is H-2 and is located on chromosome 17. It is not comparable to HLA on chromosome 6. You need to remove these lines. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Eric G. 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--> PONE-D-25-52254R1 HLA-DRB1 and HLA-DQB1 genetic polymorphisms and susceptibility to coronary atherosclerosis in a Northeast Chinese Population: a case-control study PLOS One Dear Dr. Chen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: I think authors improve the previous version, however they need to read carefully the reviewer’s suggestions , they have options to make their work scientifically congruent.
I suggest the authors reconsider the use the term phenotypic (allelic) frequencies this I not correct if we consider the data presented in the manuscript and in supporting information, in genetics this statement is an issue that double fold when you are working with two loci together, you cannot speak on haplotypes because that requires to identify the chromosome where both alleles, one from DRB1, the other form DQB1, occurs maybe the authors can use the term "phenotypic haplotype" followed by the proper explanation, but "haplotype" is not genetically correct, include phenotype (or genotype) to clarify that the values presented are not allelic frequencies.
In my previous review I suggest the authors that even if this imply more work, that involves considering the two alleles of each individual, then the estimation of allelic and haplotypic frequencies, can duplicate the n, but imply testing for Hardy-Weinberg from the Controls and probably the p values could not be statistically significant but at least can show a tendency (trend)... ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 16 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:
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I suggest the authors reconsider the use the term phenotypic (allelic) frequencies this I not correct if we consider the data presented in the manuscript and in supporting information, in genetics this statement is an issue that double fold when you are working with two loci together, you cannot speak on haplotypes because that requires to identify the chromosome where both alleles, one from DRB1, the other form DQB1, occurs maybe the authors can use the term "phenotypic haplotype" followed by the proper explanation, but "haplotype" is not genetically correct, include phenotype (or genotype) to clarify that the values presented are not allelic frequencies. 2- The second is related to the statistical methods. In my previous review I suggest the authors that even if this imply more work, that involves considering the two alleles of each individual, then the estimation of allelic and haplotypic frequencies, can duplicate the n, but imply testing for Hardy-Weinberg from the Controls and probably the p values could not be statistically significant but at least can show a tendency (trend) [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation. Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: (No Response) --> ********** --> 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly --> ********** --> 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No --> ********** --> 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes --> ********** --> 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here. Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes --> ********** --> 6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters) Reviewer #1: I believe that the authors heeded and added to their manuscript the observations and recommendations given, and I consider it suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a case control study of atherosclerosis in a Northeast Chinese Population. I found the manuscript interesting but I do found some issues that need to be addressed before it is suitable for publication. The first one refers to the designation of the HLA entities used in the study. The second is somewhat related but concerns the statistical methods appropriate. The genes of the HLA are autosomal and exist in two copies in each individual, hence a sample size of 2n genes. When we speak of allele frequencies we refer to those not the phenotypic frequencies (sample size of n). Given the data presented in the manuscript and in supporting information, clearly the authors are using phenotypic (allelic) frequencies. This is not a problem by itself but deserves correction, even though I know many published articles use the inappropriate designation of allele frequencies. This same (formal genetics) issue is double fold with two loci together, we cannot speak oh haplotypes because that requires to identify the actual phase (the chromosome where both alleles, one from DRB1, the other form DQB1, occur). I would argue the most correct designation is "two-locus phenotype", I do not like but could accept "phenotypic haplotype" if an expalnatin of the intended term is provided, but "haplotype" is clearly misleading. In my opinion the authors have to options: 1. correct the designations to include phenotype (or genotype) so that it si clear that the values presented are not allelic frequencies), 2. do a proper (formal) genetic study, that involves considering the two alleles of each individual (that doubles the sample size) then the estimation of allelic and haplotypic frequencies -this also implies testing for Hardy-Weinberg from the Controls. Then use those to complete the comparison. I guess the second option requires much more work from the authors and although it would provide more statistical power (the sample size doubles) it may not be enough to get significant results. The second issue is with the comparison themselves. The table 2 shows values for 4 two-locus phenotypes, why 4?, why these 4? why not just one? Isn't this sherry-picking? The same question apply to table 4. Finally a few minor details: l64: *a* Northeast Chinese population rather than *the* l90: no n=209 in the table title l120: precise criteria for when Chi² or Fisher are appropriate (or not) l187: LD between DRB1 and DQB1, some ref needed here This would be minor revision unless the authors decide to use the two alleles carried by each individual (and explore their possible homozygosity in association with Angiography status). --> ********** --> 7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy. Reviewer #1: Yes: Eric G. Hernandez Reviewer #2: Yes: José Manuel Nunes --> ********** --> [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications. --> |
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