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Original SubmissionDecember 5, 2025
Decision Letter - Vandana Dabla, Editor

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However, the topic is important and the dataset is substantial, the significant methodological and interpretive issues must be addressed before the manuscript can be reconsidered. Major revision of manuscript is advised. while addressing reviewer's comments and following observations:

  1. Pooling and Model Structure:  Clarify and justify the pooling of 12 countries. Indicate whether country fixed effects were included. Consider a three-level model (individual–cluster–country) or provide statistical justification for the current approach. Must clearly describe how weights were handled.
  2. Statistical Corrections:  Correct the ICC interpretation (between-cluster variance was misreported). Remove the “anemia” copy-editing error. Provide clearer VIF reporting.
  3. Causal Language:  Remove causal interpretations. Acknowledge reverse causality and cross-sectional limitations explicitly.
  4. Conceptual Framing:  Either strengthen the ecological model operationalisation or moderate the related claims.
  5. Discussion and Novelty:  Clarify the study’s novel contribution beyond prior DHS-based IPV analyses. Reduce speculative explanations and strengthen the limitations section (including underreporting, heterogeneity, and pooling bias).
  6. Presentation:  Simplify figures, clarify tables, and improve language precision.

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Reviewer #1: General Concern:

The author of this study 'provides updated cross-regional insights into intimate partner violence among women in Africa and Asia to inform culturally tailored interventions and strengthen policy frameworks.' I find this study concerning and problematic because of the vast nature of Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA), part of Africa comprising 54 countries, and Asia with 48 countries. Both regions group vastly different nations with diverse and extreme development paths and disparities that shape divergent outcomes, even in the case of intimate partner violence, the subject of this study. The different countries in SSA and Asia have unique cultures, resources, economies and political systems, making broad study misleading and replication challenging.

Continent-wide study ignores varied internal factors like socio-cultural, ethnic and political complexities.

Suggestion:

Focus on specific countries with similar factors and not broad continents, thus avoiding risk of stereotyping, oversimplification or misleading generalizations and conclusions.

Reviewer #2: Reviewer Report (PLOS ONE – Major Revision Recommended)

Manuscript title: Prevalence and Associated Factors of Intimate Partner Violence against Reproductive-Age Women in Africa and Asia Regions: Insights from 2022–2024 DHS Datasets

1. Overall assessment

The manuscript addresses an important public health and human rights issue, and the use of recent DHS datasets across multiple countries provides valuable potential for cross‑regional insights. The study is well‑motivated and the topic is highly relevant. At the same time, several sections would benefit from further clarification and refinement to ensure full alignment with PLOS ONE’s standards for methodological transparency, analytical rigour, and clarity of presentation.

Overall, the paper would be strengthened by revisions that enhance methodological detail, improve the precision of the statistical reporting, and streamline the narrative. These adjustments would help the manuscript reach its full potential.

2. Assessment according to PLOS ONE criteria

2.1. Methodological rigour

Strengths

Use of large, nationally representative DHS datasets.

Application of multilevel modelling, which is appropriate for hierarchical data.

Clear conceptual grounding in the WHO ecological model.

Areas for improvement

The rationale for selecting the twelve countries could be described in more detail.

It may be helpful to clarify whether all included countries had complete and comparable IPV modules.

The construction of the binary IPV outcome is understandable, though a brief discussion of potential information loss or misclassification would strengthen the section.

There is a reference to “anaemia” in the methods, which appears to be an editing oversight and could be corrected for clarity.

The handling of missing data is not described and could be elaborated.

Suggested tone:

Providing additional detail in these areas would enhance the transparency and reproducibility of the study.

2.2. Statistical analysis

The use of multilevel logistic regression is appropriate; however, the justification for the model structure could be expanded.

The interpretation of the ICC could be clarified, as some statements appear to conflate within‑cluster and between‑cluster variance.

We consider that the presentation of the MOR formula could be improved in terms of formatting and clarity, which would help readers follow the logic more easily.

It may be helpful to report model diagnostics or sensitivity analyses.

Some variables (e.g., fear of partner, jealousy, justification of wife‑beating) may be conceptually related; a brief comment on potential conceptual overlap would strengthen the analysis.

Suggested tone:

Clarifying these points would support the robustness and interpretability of the statistical findings.

2.3. Conclusions

The conclusions are generally consistent with the results, though in a few places the narrative could be more cautious to avoid implying causality.

Some explanatory interpretations (e.g., psychological or sociocultural mechanisms) could be framed more tentatively, as they are not directly measured in the dataset.

Suggested tone:

Rephrasing certain statements more cautiously would ensure that the conclusions remain closely aligned with the evidence presented.

2.4. Quality of presentation

The manuscript is generally well written, though some sections could be streamlined to improve readability.

A few editorial inconsistencies (e.g., the reference to anaemia) could be corrected.

Figures and tables should be checked to ensure that all labels, confidence intervals, and legends are clear and consistent.

Suggested tone:

A careful editorial review would further enhance the clarity and flow of the manuscript.

2.5. Ethics and integrity

The ethical considerations are appropriately described.

It may be helpful to explicitly state that all DHS domestic ethical approvals for IPV modules were in place in the included countries.

2.6. Data availability

PLOS ONE requires a clear Data Availability Statement.

Providing the direct DHS repository link and specifying the exact datasets used would fully meet journal requirements.

3. Detailed comments for the authors

3.1. Introduction

Strengths

Strong global framing of IPV as a public health and human rights issue.

Good use of international references.

Suggestions

The introduction could be slightly more concise.

A clearer articulation of the specific knowledge gap addressed by this study would strengthen the narrative.

The rationale for comparing Africa and Asia could be made more explicit.

3.2. Methods

Clarify country selection criteria.

Provide more detail on weighting procedures within the multilevel framework.

Explain how missing data were handled.

Correct the reference to anaemia.

Consider briefly discussing the implications of dichotomising IPV.

3.3. Results

Including confidence intervals for all prevalence estimates would be helpful.

Clarify whether cross‑country differences were statistically tested.

Ensure consistency between text, tables, and figures.

Consider adding model fit statistics.

3.4. Discussion

The discussion is comprehensive, though it could be more concise in places.

Some interpretations could be framed more cautiously.

Adding a dedicated limitations section would strengthen the manuscript.

Policy implications could be made more specific to the regions studied.

4. Recommendation to the editor

Recommendation: Major Revision

The manuscript addresses an important topic and has strong potential. With further refinement of the methods, statistical reporting, and clarity of presentation, it could make a valuable contribution to the literature.

Reviewer #3: I greatly commend the author. The methodology is rigorous, with clear justification provided for each analytical approach, and the discussion is well written. I would only suggest strengthening the discussion by adding references to support some of the proposed explanations for the findings. For example, references could be included to substantiate the statement that ' This might be due to longer marital duration and cumulative exposure to

relationship stressors, greater likelihood of economic dependence, and entrenched gender norms

that increase vulnerability over time. Additionally, older women may be more likely to disclose

experiences of IPV compared with younger women, leading to higher reported prevalence in this

age group. ' There were other explanations in other paragraphs without references

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Reviewer #3: No

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Revision 1

Editor’s comments

Pooling and Model Structure: Clarify and justify the pooling of 12 countries. Indicate whether country fixed effects were included. Consider a three-level model (individual–cluster–country) or provide statistical justification for the current approach. Must clearly describe how weights were handled.

All these things are addressed as separate.

Statistical Corrections: Correct the ICC interpretation (between-cluster variance was misreported). Remove the “anemia” copy-editing error. Provide clearer VIF reporting. Corrected.

Causal Language: Remove causal interpretations. Acknowledge reverse causality and cross-sectional limitations explicitly. Corrected.

Conceptual Framing: Either strengthen the ecological model operationalization or moderate the related claims. Corrected.

Discussion and Novelty: Clarify the study’s novel contribution beyond prior DHS-based IPV analyses. Reduce speculative explanations and strengthen the limitations section (including underreporting, heterogeneity, and pooling bias). Corrected.

Presentation: Simplify figures, clarify tables, and improve language precision. Corrected.

Reviewer 1

The author of this study provides updated cross-regional insights into intimate partner violence among women in Africa and Asia to inform culturally tailored interventions and strengthen policy frameworks. I find this study concerning and problematic because of the vast nature of Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA), part of Africa comprising 54 countries, and Asia, with 48 countries. Both regions group vastly different nations with diverse and extreme development paths and disparities that shape divergent outcomes, even in the case of intimate partner violence, the subject of this study. The different countries in SSA and Asia have unique cultures, resources, economies, and political systems, making broad study misleading and replication challenging. I appreciate your concern regarding the heterogeneity of Sub-Saharan Africa and Asia. This study does not intend to imply uniformity across these regions but rather to provide a broad overview of cross-regional patterns. I have clarified in the manuscript that while regional aggregation highlights overarching trends useful for policy dialogue, country-specific analyses remain essential for culturally tailored interventions.

A continent-wide study ignores varied internal factors like socio-cultural, ethnic, and political complexities.

Suggestion: Focus on specific countries with similar factors and not broad continents, thus avoiding the risk of stereotyping, oversimplification, or misleading generalizations and conclusions. This study aimed to identify broad cross-regional patterns, but I agree that country-level or subregional analyses are essential to avoid stereotyping or oversimplification. These findings should be interpreted as a starting point for more granular, context-specific research.

Reviewer 2

The rationale for selecting the twelve countries could be described in more detail. I have clarified these criteria in the Methods section to provide greater transparency.

It may be helpful to clarify whether all included countries had complete and comparable IPV modules. Thank you for raising this important point. I have clarified this in the Methods section to make the approach more transparent.

The construction of the binary IPV outcome is understandable, though a brief discussion of potential information loss or misclassification would strengthen the section. I have added a brief discussion of this limitation in the manuscript to ensure readers are aware of the trade-offs inherent in this approach.

There is a reference to “anemia” in the methods, which appears to be an editing oversight and could be corrected for clarity. Corrected.

The handling of missing data is not described and could be elaborated. I have clarified this procedure in the Methods section to ensure transparency.

The use of multilevel logistic regression is appropriate; however, the justification for the model structure could be expanded. I have expanded the Methods section to clarify this rationale.

The interpretation of the ICC could be clarified, as some statements appear to conflate within-cluster and between-cluster variance. I have revised the text to ensure that this distinction is explicit and that readers understand the ICC as a measure of clustering effects.

We consider that the presentation of the MOR formula could be improved in terms of formatting and clarity, which would help readers follow the logic more easily. Corrected.

It may be helpful to report model diagnostics or sensitivity analyses. Thank you, I have included this.

Some variables (e.g., fear of partner, jealousy, and justification of wife beating) may be conceptually related; a brief comment on potential conceptual overlap would strengthen the analysis. To address this, I examined correlations among these variables and found that although related, they were not collinear to a degree that would compromise the analysis.

The conclusions are generally consistent with the results, though in a few places the narrative could be more cautious to avoid implying causality. Revised.

Some explanatory interpretations (e.g., psychological or sociocultural mechanisms) could be framed more tentatively, as they are not directly measured in the dataset. I have revised the text to frame psychological and sociocultural mechanisms more cautiously, emphasizing that these are plausible explanations rather than direct findings from the dataset.

A few editorial inconsistencies (e.g., the reference to anemia) could be corrected. Corrected.

Figures and tables should be checked to ensure that all labels, confidence intervals, and legends are clear and consistent. Corrected.

It may be helpful to explicitly state that all DHS domestic ethical approvals for IPV modules were in place in the included countries. I have added a statement to make this explicit.

Providing the direct DHS repository link and specifying the exact datasets used would fully meet journal requirements. The individual’s record (IR file) was employed in the current investigation and stated under the data sources, sampling, and populations section.

The introduction could be slightly more concise. I have revised this section.

A clearer articulation of the specific knowledge gap addressed by this study would strengthen the narrative. Corrected.

The rationale for comparing Africa and Asia could be made more explicit. I have revised the introduction to make this clearer.

Clarify country selection criteria. I have specified this.

Provide more detail on weighting procedures within the multilevel framework. I have revised the Methods section to clarify how weights were incorporated.

Explain how missing data were handled. Explained.

Correct the reference to anemia. Corrected.

Consider briefly discussing the implications of dichotomizing IPV. Discussed.

Including confidence intervals for all prevalence estimates would be helpful. Corrected.

Clarify whether cross-country differences were statistically tested. The study did not formally test statistical differences across countries, as this was not the primary objective.

Ensure consistency between text, tables, and figures. Corrected.

Consider adding model fit statistics. It is included in table 4.

The discussion is comprehensive, though it could be more concise in places. Some interpretations could be framed more cautiously. Corrected.

Adding a dedicated limitations section would strengthen the manuscript. Corrected.

Policy implications could be made more specific to the regions studied. I have revised the discussion to make the policy implications more region‑specific.

Reviewer 3

I would only suggest strengthening the discussion by adding references to support some of the proposed explanations for the findings. For example, references could be included to substantiate the statement that 'This might be due to longer marital duration and cumulative exposure to relationship stressors, greater likelihood of economic dependence, and entrenched gender norms that increase vulnerability over time.' Additionally, older women may be more likely to disclose experiences of IPV compared with younger women, leading to higher reported prevalence in this age group. 'There were other explanations in other paragraphs without references. Thank you for this valuable suggestion. I have strengthened the discussion by adding references to support the proposed explanations for our findings.

Thank you very much for your time and effort.

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Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->To strengthen the mothodological rigor and conceptual clarity, authors are requested to address following observations, in addition to reviewers remarks. -->-->

  1. The rationale for pooling 12 countries is improved, but still somewhat descriptive rather than analytical. Authors are suggested to add one concise sentence clarifying whether country fixed effects were included or whether region alone was modelled. Briefly acknowledge that unmeasured country-level heterogeneity may remain despite multilevel adjustment.
  2. Fear of husband/partner is treated as a predictor, but conceptually it may partly reflect either a consequence of IPV or contemporaneous manifestation of abuse. And therefore, current wording risks temporal ambiguity in interpretation. Manuscript acknowledging possible bidirectional or reverse relationship between fear and IPV in limitations/discussion, would provide scientific clarity.
  3. The manuscript invokes the WHO ecological model, but most variables remain individual-level. Current “community-level” variables are limited mainly to residence, media exposure or region. To improve conceptual consistency authors are suggested to moderate claims regarding ecological operationalization or may state that available DHS variables constrained fuller community/societal-level modelling.
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Revision 2

The rationale for pooling 12 countries is improved, but still somewhat descriptive rather than analytical. Authors are suggested to add one concise sentence clarifying whether country fixed effects were included or whether region alone was modeled. Briefly acknowledge that unmeasured country-level heterogeneity may remain despite multilevel adjustment.

Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I have revised the manuscript to clarify that country fixed effects were included in this analysis rather than modelling region alone. I also acknowledge that some unmeasured country-level heterogeneity may remain despite this multilevel adjustment and have added a concise statement in the limitations section to reflect this.

Fear of a husband/partner is treated as a predictor, but conceptually it may partly reflect either a consequence of IPV or a contemporaneous manifestation of abuse. And therefore, current wording risks temporal ambiguity in interpretation. A manuscript acknowledging a possible bidirectional or reverse relationship between fear and IPV in limitations/discussion would provide scientific clarity.

Thank you for this insightful observation. I agree that fear of husband/partner may not only precede IPV but also arise as a consequence or contemporaneous manifestation of abuse. To address this, I have added a statement in the limitations section acknowledging the potential bidirectional or reverse relationship between fear and IPV and the resulting temporal ambiguity in interpretation. I believe this addition provides greater scientific clarity and transparency.

The manuscript invokes the WHO ecological model, but most variables remain individual-level. Current “community-level” variables are limited mainly to residence, media exposure, or region. To improve conceptual consistency, authors are suggested to moderate claims regarding ecological operationalization or may state that available DHS variables constrained fuller community/societal-level modeling.

Thank you for highlighting this important issue. I agree that the majority of variables in this study are individual-level, with community-level measures limited to residence, media exposure, and region. To improve conceptual consistency, I have moderated my claims regarding ecological operationalization and added a statement in the limitations noting that the available DHS variables constrained fuller modeling of community and societal domains. I believe this clarification strengthens the transparency of my ecological framing.

Correct grammar and flow of sentences in the manuscript.

Corrected.

Thank you very much for your time and effort.

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