Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionDecember 5, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-65041-->-->Prevalence and Associated Factors of Intimate Partner Violence against Reproductive-Age Women in Africa and Asia Regions: Insights from 2022-2024 DHS Datasets-->--> PLOS One Dear Dr. Mekonen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================================== However, the topic is important and the dataset is substantial, the significant methodological and interpretive issues must be addressed before the manuscript can be reconsidered. Major revision of manuscript is advised. while addressing reviewer's comments and following observations:
Please provide a detailed point-by-point response with your revision of the above obervations and reviewers comments. ============================================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 12 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Partly Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: General Concern: The author of this study 'provides updated cross-regional insights into intimate partner violence among women in Africa and Asia to inform culturally tailored interventions and strengthen policy frameworks.' I find this study concerning and problematic because of the vast nature of Sub-Saharan Africa (SSA), part of Africa comprising 54 countries, and Asia with 48 countries. Both regions group vastly different nations with diverse and extreme development paths and disparities that shape divergent outcomes, even in the case of intimate partner violence, the subject of this study. The different countries in SSA and Asia have unique cultures, resources, economies and political systems, making broad study misleading and replication challenging. Continent-wide study ignores varied internal factors like socio-cultural, ethnic and political complexities. Suggestion: Focus on specific countries with similar factors and not broad continents, thus avoiding risk of stereotyping, oversimplification or misleading generalizations and conclusions. Reviewer #2: Reviewer Report (PLOS ONE – Major Revision Recommended) Manuscript title: Prevalence and Associated Factors of Intimate Partner Violence against Reproductive-Age Women in Africa and Asia Regions: Insights from 2022–2024 DHS Datasets 1. Overall assessment The manuscript addresses an important public health and human rights issue, and the use of recent DHS datasets across multiple countries provides valuable potential for cross‑regional insights. The study is well‑motivated and the topic is highly relevant. At the same time, several sections would benefit from further clarification and refinement to ensure full alignment with PLOS ONE’s standards for methodological transparency, analytical rigour, and clarity of presentation. Overall, the paper would be strengthened by revisions that enhance methodological detail, improve the precision of the statistical reporting, and streamline the narrative. These adjustments would help the manuscript reach its full potential. 2. Assessment according to PLOS ONE criteria 2.1. Methodological rigour Strengths Use of large, nationally representative DHS datasets. Application of multilevel modelling, which is appropriate for hierarchical data. Clear conceptual grounding in the WHO ecological model. Areas for improvement The rationale for selecting the twelve countries could be described in more detail. It may be helpful to clarify whether all included countries had complete and comparable IPV modules. The construction of the binary IPV outcome is understandable, though a brief discussion of potential information loss or misclassification would strengthen the section. There is a reference to “anaemia” in the methods, which appears to be an editing oversight and could be corrected for clarity. The handling of missing data is not described and could be elaborated. Suggested tone: Providing additional detail in these areas would enhance the transparency and reproducibility of the study. 2.2. Statistical analysis The use of multilevel logistic regression is appropriate; however, the justification for the model structure could be expanded. The interpretation of the ICC could be clarified, as some statements appear to conflate within‑cluster and between‑cluster variance. We consider that the presentation of the MOR formula could be improved in terms of formatting and clarity, which would help readers follow the logic more easily. It may be helpful to report model diagnostics or sensitivity analyses. Some variables (e.g., fear of partner, jealousy, justification of wife‑beating) may be conceptually related; a brief comment on potential conceptual overlap would strengthen the analysis. Suggested tone: Clarifying these points would support the robustness and interpretability of the statistical findings. 2.3. Conclusions The conclusions are generally consistent with the results, though in a few places the narrative could be more cautious to avoid implying causality. Some explanatory interpretations (e.g., psychological or sociocultural mechanisms) could be framed more tentatively, as they are not directly measured in the dataset. Suggested tone: Rephrasing certain statements more cautiously would ensure that the conclusions remain closely aligned with the evidence presented. 2.4. Quality of presentation The manuscript is generally well written, though some sections could be streamlined to improve readability. A few editorial inconsistencies (e.g., the reference to anaemia) could be corrected. Figures and tables should be checked to ensure that all labels, confidence intervals, and legends are clear and consistent. Suggested tone: A careful editorial review would further enhance the clarity and flow of the manuscript. 2.5. Ethics and integrity The ethical considerations are appropriately described. It may be helpful to explicitly state that all DHS domestic ethical approvals for IPV modules were in place in the included countries. 2.6. Data availability PLOS ONE requires a clear Data Availability Statement. Providing the direct DHS repository link and specifying the exact datasets used would fully meet journal requirements. 3. Detailed comments for the authors 3.1. Introduction Strengths Strong global framing of IPV as a public health and human rights issue. Good use of international references. Suggestions The introduction could be slightly more concise. A clearer articulation of the specific knowledge gap addressed by this study would strengthen the narrative. The rationale for comparing Africa and Asia could be made more explicit. 3.2. Methods Clarify country selection criteria. Provide more detail on weighting procedures within the multilevel framework. Explain how missing data were handled. Correct the reference to anaemia. Consider briefly discussing the implications of dichotomising IPV. 3.3. Results Including confidence intervals for all prevalence estimates would be helpful. Clarify whether cross‑country differences were statistically tested. Ensure consistency between text, tables, and figures. Consider adding model fit statistics. 3.4. Discussion The discussion is comprehensive, though it could be more concise in places. Some interpretations could be framed more cautiously. Adding a dedicated limitations section would strengthen the manuscript. Policy implications could be made more specific to the regions studied. 4. Recommendation to the editor Recommendation: Major Revision The manuscript addresses an important topic and has strong potential. With further refinement of the methods, statistical reporting, and clarity of presentation, it could make a valuable contribution to the literature. Reviewer #3: I greatly commend the author. The methodology is rigorous, with clear justification provided for each analytical approach, and the discussion is well written. I would only suggest strengthening the discussion by adding references to support some of the proposed explanations for the findings. For example, references could be included to substantiate the statement that ' This might be due to longer marital duration and cumulative exposure to relationship stressors, greater likelihood of economic dependence, and entrenched gender norms that increase vulnerability over time. Additionally, older women may be more likely to disclose experiences of IPV compared with younger women, leading to higher reported prevalence in this age group. ' There were other explanations in other paragraphs without references ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. 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-->-->PONE-D-25-65041R1-->-->Prevalence and Associated Factors of Intimate Partner Violence against Reproductive-Age Women in Africa and Asia Regions: Insights from 2022-2024 DHS Datasets-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Mekonen, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->To strengthen the mothodological rigor and conceptual clarity, authors are requested to address following observations, in addition to reviewers remarks. -->-->
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously?--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: This review was removed by PLOS journal staff ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Dr. Agnes Ebotabe Arrey Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. 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