Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 15, 2026 |
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-->PONE-D-26-00179-->-->Body Fat, Skin Tone, and the Accuracy of Smartwatch Caloric Expenditure Estimates-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Kostrna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 12 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Title and Abstract - Abstract (Lines 50–52): The wording is unclear and would benefit from rephrasing for clarity and flow. - Physical activity energy expenditure (PAEE) should be defined in full at first mention in the abstract. - The primary objective is not clearly stated in the abstract and should be explicitly articulated. - References are generally not included in abstracts; prior work should be described using general phrasing without citation. Methods Ethics and Recruitment - There is a discrepancy between the stated ethics approval date (2024) and the reported recruitment start date (January 2023), which requires clarification. - The manuscript should explicitly state that participation was voluntary and that alternative assignments were offered to minimise the risk of coercion. - The recruitment strategy should be clearly planned and described a priori; changes to recruitment methods over time should be justified if applicable. Participants - The method used to stratify body mass index (BMI) is not described and should be specified. - Demographic and baseline characteristics should be reported in the Results section rather than in the Participants subsection of the Methods. Study Design - The design is acceptable; however, the authors should briefly clarify the between-subject and within-subject factors of the mixed factorial design and describe the randomisation of device placement conditions. Measures - The description of wearable devices is generally clear; however, the authors should clarify wrist placement, ordering of the five devices, and address potential interference from simultaneous wear. - Ensure that this section is limited to methodological descriptions and does not include results. Data Analysis - Line 206 should clearly state whether the COSMED K5 was used as the criterion reference. - Five devices are described earlier, yet the statistical models refer to device as having four levels; this discrepancy must be clarified. - The inclusion of all pairwise interaction terms should be briefly justified or stated as prespecified. - A short explanation should be added to justify the log-transformation of AE and APE. - Truncated sentences should be corrected and abbreviated terms (for example, “Fitz”) written in full. - A brief justification for the inclusion of one-sample t-tests alongside mixed-effects models would improve clarity. Results - Demographic and baseline participant data should be presented in the Results section. - While the Results collectively address device- and adiposity-related PAEE error, the authors should ensure that all prespecified objectives, particularly those related to skin tone and the criterion reference, are clearly reflected in the Results structure and subsection headings. Discussion - The Discussion is well written and appropriately interprets the findings in light of the study design and analyses. Minor revisions are recommended to more clearly contextualise subgroup limitations and to maintain appropriate caution in device-level comparisons. Reviewer #2: This manuscript presents a well-designed validation study examining the accuracy of physical activity energy expenditure (PAEE) estimates from four widely used wrist-worn wearables against indirect calorimetry during a controlled cycling protocol. The study is preregistered, employs an appropriate criterion measure (COSMED K5), applies mixed-effects modeling, and makes data and code publicly available via OSF. The focus on body fat percentage (BF%) as a moderator of device error is a clear strength and addresses an important gap in the literature. However, several methodological and interpretational issues require clarification and additional analyses before the conclusions can be fully supported. Major concerns: Clarification of PAEE definition and analyzed time window The protocol includes rest, exercise, and recovery phases, but it is not fully clear which segments were included in the PAEE error calculations. Please explicitly specify whether error metrics (Bias, AE, APE) were computed over the entire session, the exercise phase only, or separately by intensity. In addition, clarify whether devices reported “active” versus “total” calories and how this was harmonized across brands. These details are critical, as low-intensity periods may disproportionately affect APE and between-device comparability. Transparency and consistency of data filtering and outlier handling The manuscript refers to “device-specific data quality filters” and the removal of implausible estimates (e.g., values >450% of K5). The conclusions regarding Fitbit accuracy appear particularly sensitive to these decisions. Please provide a clear, device-agnostic description of all filtering rules, indicate whether these criteria were preregistered, and justify any device-specific procedures. I strongly recommend presenting sensitivity analyses with and without outlier removal (at least for Fitbit, ideally for all devices) to demonstrate the robustness of the main findings. Interpretation of skin tone effects Although three methods of assessing skin tone were described, only Fitzpatrick self-report (types III–V) was retained for analysis due to reliability issues with objective measures. Please provide more detail on why colorimetry and SFDS data were excluded. Given the small number of participants with Fitzpatrick type V, the null findings regarding skin tone should be interpreted more cautiously and framed explicitly as limited by statistical power and measurement constraints. Specification of BF% measurement used in primary analyses Body fat percentage is a central moderator in the models, yet it is unclear which BF% measure (skinfold-derived, BIA-derived, or another composite) was used in the primary analyses. Please clarify this choice and, if feasible, include a brief sensitivity analysis demonstrating whether results are consistent across BF% assessment methods. Scope and strength of conclusions While the data clearly demonstrate substantial PAEE error under the tested conditions, some statements regarding the unsuitability of consumer wearables for individual or research use appear overly broad given the single exercise modality and short protocol. I recommend tempering these conclusions and explicitly limiting them to the tested conditions, while distinguishing between absolute caloric accuracy and potential utility for relative or within-person tracking. Minor comments: Please confirm that user profiles (age, sex, height, weight) were consistently entered across devices and clarify whether any device incorporated BF% directly. Consider reporting back-transformed effect sizes (e.g., change in APE per 1 SD increase in BF%) to aid interpretation of practical relevance. Briefly acknowledge the potential influence of wearing multiple devices simultaneously on wrist fit and sensor contact. Minor typographical and spacing issues are present and should be corrected during revision. Recommendation: This study meets the technical criteria of PLOS ONE but requires major revision to improve transparency, robustness, and interpretability of the results. Addressing the points above would substantially strengthen the manuscript and its contribution to the literature on wearable-derived energy expenditure estimation. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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-->PONE-D-26-00179R1-->-->Body fat, skin tone, and the accuracy of smartwatch caloric expenditure estimates-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Kostrna, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== ACADEMIC EDITOR: -->-->Thank you for submitting the revised manuscript. It seems that some sections may still require additional revision. Please carefully address the reviewers' comments and resubmit the manuscript at your convenience. ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Jul 26 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #3: I believe the authors have already successfully addressed the comments raised by previous reviewers, and the manuscript is suitable for publication. I would only suggest briefly indicating the BMI levels/cut-offs according to WHO classification standards for clarity. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #3: Yes: Dr Encarna Micó Amigo ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. 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