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Original SubmissionNovember 12, 2025
Decision Letter - Alessandro Rodolico, Editor

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- Methodological transparency: The manuscript should more clearly describe where the approach aligns with and diverges from the standard JLA methodology. The use of focus groups rather than surveys for generating research questions requires stronger justification.

- Participant recruitment: Both reviewers noted the need for more detailed information on how patient representatives and clinicians were recruited, and how diversity was sought or achieved.

- Evidence appraisal criteria: The process used to determine whether core questions had been "sufficiently addressed" by existing evidence needs to be more explicitly described. An appendix documenting the search strategy and appraisal rationale would strengthen transparency.

- Strengths and limitations: The discussion should more thoroughly address potential biases in recruitment, question formulation, and the final prioritisation workshop, including group dynamics among the nine participants.

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Thank you for asking me to peer review this interesting, well written and well structured manuscript. I recommend minor revisions prior to publication and outline these below.

Introduction

I appreciate the concise and appropriate content here. However, I think it would be worth expanding a little on the heterogeneity associated with back pain, and adding a couple of lines acknowledging the varied trajectories of back pain - acute, subacute and chronic back pain, and also any data on inequalities in impact of back pain, if you have these for Norway or Europe perhaps?

Methods

The introductory paragraph states that the method is ‘inspired by JLA’ but reporting is to patient and public involvement guidance. I’m wondering why the study is not reported according to the priority setting partnership guidance on the Equator site? Further, I note the study diverges a little from the JLA guidance – it would be helpful to clarify where it is aligned to JLA, and where it is not. For example, I don’t think a protocol was set or registered; I don’t think carers were involved… It would be helpful to have more explanation to me as a reviewer, and also within the text.

I think potentially the most notable divergence is the generation of knowledge gaps/research topics by a relatively small set of focus groups, and not surveys – and you may well have good reasons, but they need more explanation and justification. This point is discussed under limitations on p24 (of the pdf manuscript that I have) but I think we need more earlier. I find it hard to see the as justification for a small number involved in setting questions instead of a survey. I’m looking at the JLA guidebook 2021 https://nihr.widen.net/s/zrmtvrknlk/jla-guidebook-version-10-march-2021 and on page 34 it does say focus groups can occur ‘as well as via a survey.’ I think we may understand the method as an adapted JLA approach or PSP more broadly. I think this point is important, as once the paper is published, I may wish to share it with colleagues, but I wouldn’t want them to think that it is necessarily JLA methodology/ for your paper to set a precedent. Broad generation of questions is surely important in JLA. Please do either correct my knowledge here, or address this issue in the manuscript.

Recruitment for the focus groups – how did this occur exactly? This is obviously influential to the findings, so I think we need more detail on this for transparency.

Setting the scope – I know that JLA is for health and healthcare research but there is rationale in the broad literature to also view back pain disability as influenced by social/political factors/structures such as workplace adaptations/interventions (or lack of), social security that addresses needs, broader policy responses, sources of marginalisation. It might be worth mentioning this within scope and then addressing the issue in the discussion. ‘Back pain’ is quite different to a more specific ‘disease’.

Results

These are interesting and a little exciting! It’s interesting to see so many with knowledge mobilisation/implementation roots.

Were there any issues with language translation e.g. the term ‘tool’ occurred quite often? The English language can require a lot of context (I am sorry I do not know Norwegian) - were there any assumptions underpinning the meaning of ‘tool’ about what that was? Also is the term ‘non-specific’ being contested, or is something lost in translation?

Discussion

Within the summary line I think it would be worth inserting ‘in Norway’ just for clarity – you could also do this elsewhere.

You might find more to discuss if also comparing with other literature and research recommendations made in guidelines for back pain.

Would be good to have a subheading for strengths and limitations.

I would contest the line ‘Despite best efforts to engage with all stakeholders’ – I think that given the broad nature and high prevalence of back pain, more organisations including those not dedicated to only back pain, could have facilitated involvement. I would be happy if you removed that phrase, but you could also address that issue more in the text.

I agree with the issue you raise on representation – also you did not collect data on ethnicity or socioeconomic status – perhaps a recommendation for future work?

I’m not sure I agree that the fourth limitation given is a limitation as such – it’s just the way things are. I would be happy for you to remove it, or discuss it as a point that is not a limitation – maybe see what the other reviewer, or editor, thinks?

This is an optional point, but I would consider re-prioritising some of the space in the abstract, and expanding the conclusion, towards the main categories of findings including the very interesting knowledge implementation/mobilisation questions.

Reviewer #2: Overall, this is an important and well‑conducted study, and the manuscript presents a generally clear and methodologically sound process. Below I provide several comments and suggestions aimed at improving clarity, transparency, and interpretability of the work.

Abstract:

Line 47: The statement that none of the core questions had been “sufficiently addressed” is unclear without an explanation of how “sufficiently” was defined. Providing a short description of the criteria (e.g., type of evidence required, reliance on existing systematic reviews, or methodological thresholds) would strengthen transparency.

Abstract:

The abstract reports only the top‑ranked research priority. Including a brief indication of the major thematic categories represented across the top 10 (e.g., lifestyle factors, healthcare organisation, diagnostics, prevention, patient‑centred care) would make the abstract more informative without compromising conciseness.

Introduction:

The introduction could more clearly articulate why end‑user involvement is especially important in back‑pain research. Given the condition’s subjective symptom profile, heterogeneous trajectories, and psychosocial influences, priorities set without patient involvement risk overlooking concerns most relevant to those living with back pain.

Methods:

More information is needed on how patient representatives were recruited. Clarifying whether recruitment was open, purposive, clinically mediated, or targeted would help readers assess representativeness and potential selection biases.

Methods:

Relatedly, the manuscript would benefit from a clearer description of how diversity among both patients and clinicians was sought or achieved (e.g., variation in age, sex, geography, clinical background, diagnostic history).

Methods:

Although the manuscript explains that evidence was evaluated to determine whether each core question had been “sufficiently addressed,” this process remains somewhat opaque. Including an appendix with the search strategy, screening approach, and rationale for retaining or excluding each core question would greatly enhance methodological transparency.

Results:

Some results raise questions about how evidence sufficiency was judged. For example, the classification of “What types of physical activity and exercise are appropriate for individuals with back pain?” as insufficiently answered may appear surprising given the extensive literature showing no clear superiority of specific exercise modalities. Again, an appendix documenting the evidence appraisal would resolve this and strengthen transparency.

Results:

One of the top 10 priorities concerns scoliosis (“risk of requiring spinal surgery”), which appears diagnostically narrower than the general back‑pain population described in the manuscript. It would be helpful to clarify why this topic remained within scope and how it aligns with the PSP’s stated population definition.

Discussion:

Given that the final top‑10 workshop involved nine participants, the Discussion could benefit from a short reflection on potential group dynamics, how differing views were managed, and what steps were taken to minimise dominance effects.

Discussion:

The Discussion could include a more explicit acknowledgement that PSP processes can be influenced by various forms of bias (e.g., in participant recruitment, question formulation, and decision‑making stages).

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Revision 1

Dear Editor and Reviewers,

Thank you for the time and effort you have invested into reviewing our article. We greatly appreciate your valuable comments and recommendations. We have addressed each of your comments in the point-by-point response below and a revised version of the manuscript has been submitted. Changes are highlighted in yellow in the “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”. We believe these revisions have enhanced the quality of the manuscript, and we hope they meet your expectations, making it suitable for publication in PLOS One.

Sincerely,

Rikke Munk Killingmo, on behalf of all authors

Editor

Your manuscript has been reviewed by two experts in the field. Both reviewers found the study to be important and the manuscript generally well written. However, they raised several substantive concerns that require attention before the manuscript can be considered for publication. I am therefore recommending Major Revision. In particular, I would like to draw your attention to the following key points, which both reviewers independently highlighted:

Comment 1: Methodological transparency: The manuscript should more clearly describe where the approach aligns with and diverges from the standard JLA methodology. The use of focus groups rather than surveys for generating research questions requires stronger justification.

Response: Thank you for this comment. We have aimed to be transparent regarding our method in the manuscript, but we agree that this could be presented more clearly. In response to your comment, we have added a dedicated section in the Materials and methods describing how the study deviated from the JLA Guidebook, including justification for our approach. We appreciate the suggestion and agree that this clarification is appropriate and valuable to include. Please refer to the Material and methods section or see below:

Deviations from the JLA Guidebook

This study deviated from the JLA Guidebook [17] in four ways. First, although a protocol outlining the aim, scope, and method was developed, it was not registered or published on the JLA website, as the study was conducted independently rather than as a formally registered JLA PSP. Second, no formal JLA adviser was involved due to independence and lack of funding for this service. Third, carers were not included as stakeholder group, as back pain is typically self-managed and rarely involves ongoing informal caregiving. Consequently, the perspectives of individuals with lived experience of back pain and healthcare professionals were prioritised. Fourth, uncertainties were identified through focus groups. While JLA PSPs typically use online surveys, focus groups and purposive recruitment were used to ensure participant diversity and enable in-depth discussion and collective reflection, revealing uncertainties that might not emerge through surveys.

Comment 2: Participant recruitment: Both reviewers noted the need for more detailed information on how patient representatives and clinicians were recruited, and how diversity was sought or achieved.

Response: We thank you for this comment and apologies for the lack of clarity regarding the recruitment process in the original manuscript. The Method section has now been revised to provide a more detailed description of how participants for the focus groups were recruited and the strategies employed to ensure diversity. Please refer to the Material and methods section or see below:

“Participants were recruited by the Norwegian Spine and Back Pain Association through its networks, in consultation with the project leaders (RMK and ATL) at Oslo University Hospital. Recruitment aimed to ensure diversity. For individuals with lived experience, variation in age, sex, place of residence, native language, and diagnosis (non-specific and specific, e.g., scoliosis) was sought. For healthcare professionals, recruitment aimed to include different professions, as well as representatives from primary and specialist healthcare settings, with variation in age and sex.”

Regarding characteristics of the included participants in the focus groups and the achievement of diversity. For patient representatives, we recorded information on age, sex, and native language. For healthcare professionals, we recorded information on sex, native language, and profession. No additional characteristics were collected due to restrictions from the Data Protection Officer at Oslo University Hospital, which did not permit the collection of identifiable data. To improve transparency, we have now added information on native language in the Results section and included a corresponding limitation in the Discussion section, noting the potential underrepresentation of diverse perspectives. Please refer to the Result and Discussion section or se below:

12 individuals with lived experience of back pain (median age 53 (range 22-77) years; 8 (67%) women; 10 (83%) native Norwegian speakers)..”

“Furthermore, participants in the focus groups and the final priority-setting workshop were predominantly native Norwegian speakers, which may have limited the inclusion of perspectives from individuals with different linguistic or cultural backgrounds.”

Comment 3: Evidence appraisal criteria: The process used to determine whether core questions had been "sufficiently addressed" by existing evidence needs to be more explicitly described. An appendix documenting the search strategy and appraisal rationale would strengthen transparency.

Response: Thank you for this important comment. We agree that transparency in how evidence is evaluated is crucial. As described in the Method section, all core research questions underwent an evidence review to determine whether they had been sufficiently addressed in the existing literature. PubMed was used as the primary search database, with priority given to high-quality evidence, preferably systematic reviews. The search strategy was guided by the wording of each individual question, with search terms derived from the key concepts of the question and supplemented by closely related or synonymous terms to ensure comprehensive coverage. If it was unclear whether a core research question had been adequately addressed, the question and relevant literature were reviewed by the Steering Committee to reach consensus. Questions were retained unless there was strong evidence indicating they had already been thoroughly addressed.

We did not employ a standardised search strategy suitable for inclusion as an appendix. Our approach aligns with the JLA methodology, which recommends evidence checking to be pragmatic and proportionate: the PSP should ensure that the questions put forward for prioritisation are broadly unanswered, and that decisions are made transparently (ref: James Lind Alliance Guidebook). We acknowledge that providing a standardised search strategy would have further enhanced transparency. However, we hope the reviewer also finds our approach consistent with the JLA guidance and acceptable in this context.

To further clarify our approach, we have now added the following description of the search strategy to the Methods section. Please refer to the Materials and methods section or se below:

“The search strategy was guided by the wording of each individual question, with search terms derived from the key concepts of the question and supplemented by closely related or synonymous terms to ensure comprehensive coverage.”

Comment 4: Strengths and limitations: The discussion should more thoroughly address potential biases in recruitment, question formulation, and the final prioritisation workshop, including group dynamics among the nine participants.

Response: We thank the editor for this comment. We agree that PSP processes may be influenced by biases across all stages, including recruitment, question formulation, and consensus-based decision-making. While several potential sources of bias were already discussed, we have now added an explicit statement to acknowledge these influences more broadly and enhance clarity. Thank you. Please refer to the Discussion section or see below:

“In summary, as with all PSPs, the process may be subject to bias at multiple stages, including participant recruitment, framing and interpretation of uncertainties, and consensus-based decision-making, which may have influenced the resulting priorities.”

Regarding group dynamics. We agree that reflecting on group dynamics and the management of differing views is important. Key aspects of facilitation and decision-making were described in the Method section (“All discussions were chaired by the two project leaders (RMK and ATL) to ensure that no single group or individual dominated the decision-making process. The goal was to reach an agreement by consensus, with decisions made by majority vote if consensus could not be achieved”). To further clarify, we have added a brief statement in the Results section noting how discussions were conducted and experienced in practice. Specifically, we have included a statement noting that the discussions during the priority-setting workshop were conducted in a respectful and collaborative manner, with participants receptive to differing perspectives, and no indication of dominance by individuals or groups. Please refer to the result section or se below:

“… with no majority votes required. The discussions were conducted in a respectful and collaborative atmosphere, with participants actively engaging with and remaining receptive to differing perspectives. The two project leaders did not observe any dominance by individual participants or groups during the process.”

Reviewer #1

Thank you for asking me to peer review this interesting, well written and well structured manuscript. I recommend minor revisions prior to publication and outline these below.

Comment 1: Introduction. I appreciate the concise and appropriate content here. However, I think it would be worth expanding a little on the heterogeneity associated with back pain, and adding a couple of lines acknowledging the varied trajectories of back pain - acute, subacute and chronic back pain, and also any data on inequalities in impact of back pain, if you have these for Norway or Europe perhaps?

Response: Thank you for your comment. We agree and have revised the beginning of the introduction to include the suggested additions. Please refer to the introduction or see below:

“Back pain is common across the lifespan [1, 2], and characterised by substantial heterogeneity in symptom presentation and clinical course. Symptoms range from mild to severe and disabling pain, and duration may vary from short episodes to long-lasting conditions [3]. The median lifetime prevalence of low back pain has been estimated at 42% globally [4]. While mild back pain tends to decline after midlife, severe and disabling back pain becomes more common with increasing age [5-7].”

Comment 2: Methods. The introductory paragraph states that the method is ‘inspired by JLA’ but reporting is to patient and public involvement guidance. I’m wondering why the study is not reported according to the priority setting partnership guidance on the Equator site?

Response: Thank you for this valuable comment. We agree that the study should be reported in accordance with the REporting guideline for PRIority SEtting of health research (REPRISE). The manuscript has now been revised to reflect this, and we have stated that the study follows the REPRISE guidelines. Please refer to the Material and methods section or see below:

“The PSP has been reported following the REporting guideline for PRIority SEtting of health research (REPRISE) [8].”

In addition, four adjustments have been made to the manuscript to align with the reporting recommendations:

#1) To more clearly state leadership and management structure, we have specified that the PSP was initiated by the Norwegian Spine and Back Pain Association and conducted in in collaboration with Oslo University hospital by adding “…at Oslo University Hospital”. Refer to the Materials and methods section. (REPRISE no. 8, Describe the selection and structure of the leadership and management team)

#2) To clarify relevant experience within the project team, we have added: “…patient representative with prior experience conducting a PSP using the JLA methodology (ATL)”. Refer to Materials and methods section, Establishing a Steering Committee. (REPRISE no. 10, Describe any training or experience relevant to conducting priority setting).

#3) To provide clearer participant characteristics, we have added the following description of individuals with lived experience of back pain included in the focus groups: “with lived experience of back pain (median age 53 (range 22-77) years; 8 (67%) women; 10 (83%) native Norwegian speakers)”. Refer to Results section, Gathering evidence uncertainties and summarising evidence uncertainties. (REPRISE no. 15, Describe the characteristics of stakeholders).

#4) To address implementation and dissemination of priorities, we have added the following statement: “We hope that research priorities identified in this study will guide future work in the field of back pain and influence researchers, policymakers, and funding bodies. In addition to disseminating the identified research priorities through academic publication, we will share the results via social media, at relevant conferences, and through patient organisations”. Refer to Discussion section. (REPRISE no. 27, Describe how priorities were fed back to stakeholders and/or to the public; REPRISE no. 28, Outline the strategy or action plans for implementing priorities).

Comment 3: Methods. Further, I note the study diverges a little from the JLA guidance – it would be helpful to clarify where it is aligned to JLA, and where it is not. For example, I don’t think a protocol was set or registered; I don’t think carers were involved… It would be helpful to have more explanation to me as a reviewer, and also within the text. I think potentially the most notable divergence is the generation of knowledge gaps/research topics by a relatively small set of focus groups, and not surveys – and you may well have good reasons, but they need more explanation and justification. This point is discussed under limitations on p24 (of the pdf manuscript that I have) but I think we need more earlier. I find it hard to see the as justification for a small number involved in setting questions instead of a survey. I’m looking at the JLA guidebook 2021 https://nihr.widen.net/s/zrmtvrknlk/jla-guidebook-version-10-march-2021 and on page 34 it does say focus groups can occur ‘as well as via a survey.’ I think we may understand the method as an adapted JLA approach or PSP more broadly. I think this point is important, as once the paper is published, I may wish to share it with colleagues, but I wouldn’t want them to think that it is necessarily JLA methodology/ for your paper to set a precedent. Broad generation of questions is surely important in JLA. Please do either correct my knowledge here, or address this issue in the manuscript.

Response: As noted, this study diverges slightly from the JLA guidance. We have aimed to be transparent regarding our method in the manuscript, but we agree that this could be presented more clearly. In response to your comment, we have added a dedicated section in the Materials and methods describing how the study deviated from the JLA Guidebook, including justification for our approach. We appreciate the suggestion and agree that this clarification is appropriate and valuable to include. Please refer to the Material and methods section or see below:

Deviations from the JLA Guidebook

This study deviated from the JLA Guidebook [17] in four ways. First, although a protocol outlining the aim, scope, and method was developed, it was not registered or published on the JLA website, as the study was conducted independently rather than as a formally registered JLA PSP. Second, no formal JLA adviser was involved due to independence and lack of funding for this service. Third, carers were not included as stakeholder group, as back pain is typically self-managed and rarely involves ongoing informal c

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Reviewer #1: Thank you for asking me to review the revised manuscript which has improved and there is a more transparent methods section. I still have some concerns that are mainly focused on what the methodological framing of the study is – I do not find it to be a JLA study, rather a looser PSP. With some reframing in the manuscript, I think the study could be published as a PSP, but not as a JLA. The authors now note some of the divergent points in the manuscript and I have comments on some of these:

• There is a divergence between the PSP study in the manuscript and that of a JLA in generating potential research questions through surveys – these can be paper, online etc., and using focus groups additionally, and this is not fully reflected in the manuscript as a major methodological point.

• I am surprised to see the justification for not including informal carers as because they are rarely involved – this is contradicted by claims of the disabling nature of back pain and evidence on severe/high impact pain (and by my own clinical and research experience – may be a blind spot of this research team). At the minimum, a reference should be given here for that claim.

• The points about the recommended research priorities made by reviewer 2 also show divergence from a JLA approach. I am surprised that the authors haven’t taken this on more in their revisions.

I am not going to go into all of the divergent points, but this is why I think it is better to understand the study as a looser ‘PSP.’ I can see this research team have a similar study published as a JLA approach https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/s41927-025-00588-7 and it is likely to be a contested point. I wonder if it would be best for the editor to contact the JLA directly with this query: https://www.jla.nihr.ac.uk/

Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed all of my previous comments satisfactorily. The revisions have improved the clarity, transparency, and interpretability of the manuscript, particularly with regard to methodological decisions and their underlying rationale.

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Revision 2

Dear Editor and Reviewers,

Thank you for the time and effort you have invested into re-reviewing our article. We greatly appreciate your valuable comments and recommendations. We have addressed each of your comments in the point-by-point response below and a revised version of the manuscript has been submitted. Changes are highlighted in yellow in the “Revised Manuscript with Track Changes”. We believe these revisions have enhanced the quality of the manuscript, and we hope they meet your expectations, making it suitable for publication in PLOS One.

Sincerely,

Rikke Munk Killingmo, on behalf of all authors

Reviewer #1

Thank you for asking me to review the revised manuscript which has improved and there is a more transparent methods section. I still have some concerns that are mainly focused on what the methodological framing of the study is – I do not find it to be a JLA study, rather a looser PSP. With some reframing in the manuscript, I think the study could be published as a PSP, but not as a JLA. The authors now note some of the divergent points in the manuscript and I have comments on some of these:

Comment 1: There is a divergence between the PSP study in the manuscript and that of a JLA in generating potential research questions through surveys – these can be paper, online etc., and using focus groups additionally, and this is not fully reflected in the manuscript as a major methodological point.

Response:

Thank you for this comment. We agree that the use of focus groups instead of surveys represents an important methodological deviation from the traditional JLA PSP process.

In response to the previous review round, we added a dedicated section in the Materials and methods section describing how the study deviates from the JLA Guidebook. In this section, we clarify that uncertainties were identified through focus groups rather than surveys, and that this approach was chosen to ensure participant diversity and facilitate in-depth discussion and collective reflection: “…Fourth, uncertainties were identified through focus groups. While JLA PSPs typically use online surveys, focus groups and purposive recruitment were used to ensure participant diversity and enable in-depth discussion and collective reflection, revealing uncertainties that might not emerge through surveys.” The decision to adopt this approach was also informed by input from the Norwegian Spine and Back Pain Association regarding the method considered most appropriate to capture the perspectives of its members. This methodological choice is addressed as a potential limitation in the Discussion section.

To further address the reviewer’s concern, we have now explicitly emphasised in the manuscript that the use of focus groups rather than surveys constitutes a methodological adaptation of the traditional JLA PSP approach. Please refer to the Material and methods section or see below:

“Thus, the use of focus groups rather than surveys constituted a deliberate adaptation of the traditional JLA PSP approach.”

In the Discussion section, we further clarify that this decision was informed by input from the Norwegian Spine and Back Pain Association. Please refer to the Discussion section or see below:

“Thus, informed by input from the Norwegian Spine and Back Pain Association regarding the method considered most appropriate to capture the perspectives of its members, we chose focus group interviews ..”

Comment 2: I am surprised to see the justification for not including informal carers as because they are rarely involved – this is contradicted by claims of the disabling nature of back pain and evidence on severe/high impact pain (and by my own clinical and research experience – may be a blind spot of this research team). At the minimum, a reference should be given here for that claim.

Response:

Thank you for this important comment. We acknowledge that the original wording may have understated the role of informal caregiving in back pain management across different levels of severity.

We have therefore revised the sentence to better align with the broader literature on back pain. In particular, we have avoided implying that informal caregiving is absent and instead clarified that it is not typically a central component of routine management in the majority of cases. We have also added a supporting reference (Hartvigsen et al. 2018, What low back pain is and why we need to pay attention). Please refer to the Material and methods section or see below.

“Third, carers were not included as stakeholder group, as back pain is typically managed in primary care and largely self-managed, with informal caregiving not being a central component of routine management in most cases [2].”

Comment 3: The points about the recommended research priorities made by reviewer 2 also show divergence from a JLA approach. I am surprised that the authors haven’t taken this on more in their revisions. I am not going to go into all of the divergent points, but this is why I think it is better to understand the study as a looser ‘PSP.’ I can see this research team have a similar study published as a JLA approach https://link.springer.com/article/10.1186/s41927-025-00588-7 and it is likely to be a contested point. I wonder if it would be best for the editor to contact the JLA directly with this query: https://www.jla.nihr.ac.uk/

Response:

Thank you for this thoughtful comment. We appreciate the reviewer’s reflection on the degree of alignment between our study and the standard JLA PSP methodology.

We acknowledge that some aspects of our approach represent contextual adaptations of the JLA methodology, particularly regarding recruitment procedures and the use of focus groups for identifying uncertainties. However, these adaptations were undertaken in accordance with established JLA guidance, which allows methodological flexibility to ensure inclusivity and feasibility within specific contexts. Importantly, the core principles of the JLA PSP methodology were maintained throughout the study, including stakeholder involvement, transparent prioritisation of uncertainties, and a structured consensus-based process involving both patients and healthcare professionals.

Methodological adaptations within JLA PSPs are not uncommon. For example, previous JLA PSPs have reported adaptations while still explicitly positioning their studies within the JLA framework (e.g. Apea et al., 2025 https://doi.org/10.1136/bmjopen-2024-086922; Harris et al., 2022 https://doi.org/10.1136/bmjopen-2021-055780; Lyng et al., 2022 https://doi.org/10.1515/sjpain-2022-0019).

We have carefully re-reviewed the manuscript in light of this comment. We have clarified the methodological deviations and their rationale in the Methods section, as well as their implications in the Discussion section. We consider that the manuscript already addresses concerns regarding transparency of methodological alignment. However, to further improve clarity and address the reviewer’s concern regarding framing, we have revised the title of the manuscript to more explicitly reflect the adapted nature of our approach.

Please refer to the Title or see below:

“Research priorities for back pain: results from an adapted James Lind Alliance priority setting partnership”

We believe this revised wording more accurately reflects the study methodology and its contextual adaptations, while maintaining clear alignment with the JLA framework. We thank the reviewer for the opportunity to clarify and strengthen the transparency of our reporting.

Reviewer #2

The authors have addressed all of my previous comments satisfactorily. The revisions have improved the clarity, transparency, and interpretability of the manuscript, particularly with regard to methodological decisions and their underlying rationale. The authors now clearly justify their choices, acknowledge potential limitations and sources of bias inherent to the methodology, and appropriately discuss the implications of these for interpretation of the findings. Overall, the manuscript presents a technically sound and well reported study, and I consider it suitable for publication.

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Research priorities for back pain: results from an adapted James Lind Alliance priority setting partnership

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Reviewer #1: I contacted the JLA for advice regarding the phrasing used in studies that reported an adapted form of methods like your study and they suggested the following...We would typically see those referred to in publications using phrases like 'a priority setting project inspired by JLA methodology', or 'a priority setting project using adapated JLA methods'.

I have chosen 'accept' here for the manuscript as I don't think this warrants further review and you have addressed the issues raised in the reviews, but do think you should go through the abstract and manuscript and ensure consistency with the phrasing of the methodology to 'adapted JLA.'

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