Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 18, 2026 |
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This study investigates whether individuals at higher risk of social withdrawal (particularly those aligned with the Japanese NEET/hikikomori profile) engage differently with the social dimensions of videogames. Using a sample of 587 participants, the authors test the hypothesis that withdrawal risk may be either positively or negatively associated with in-game socialisation and cooperation. Overall, the manuscript is clearly written and grounded in a solid theoretical and empirical background. The topic is relevant and timely, particularly given the increasing interest in digital environments as potential spaces for social engagement among vulnerable populations. That said, several aspects of the manuscript could be strengthened: 1. Sample characterization and recruitment The inclusion and exclusion criteria should be described in greater detail. Given the inherent difficulty in accessing individuals with high levels of social withdrawal, the authors should further elaborate on their recruitment strategy and discuss whether it adequately captures individuals at the more severe end of the NEET/hikikomori spectrum. There is a potential risk of selection bias, particularly if participants were recruited through online platforms that may exclude the most socially withdrawn individuals. 2. Clinical variables and potential confounders Hikikomori is frequently associated with psychiatric conditions such as depression, social anxiety, and autism spectrum traits. The absence of these variables in the data collection is a notable limitation, as they may act as important confounders or mediators. The authors should justify this omission and explicitly acknowledge it in the discussion. 3. Methodological transparency Additional methodological details would improve reproducibility. Specifically: Which statistical software and packages were used for data analysis? How were missing data handled, particularly for incomplete questionnaire responses? What was the average time required to complete the survey? 4. Reporting of results The abstract would benefit from a clearer presentation of the statistical significance and direction of the main findings. This would improve accessibility and ensure that key results are immediately interpretable. 5. Interpretation of findings The conclusion that individuals at higher withdrawal risk are less socially engaged even in gaming environments may be somewhat unidimensional. Alternative interpretations should be considered. For example, a preference for solitary or low-pressure forms of engagement may represent a coping strategy rather than a deficit. Expanding the discussion to include this perspective would add important nuance. 6. Reliance on self-report measures All variables were assessed via self-report, which introduces the possibility of reporting bias, particularly in sensitive domains such as social functioning. The authors should acknowledge this limitation more explicitly and consider the value of incorporating behavioral data (e.g., in-game activity logs, multiplayer participation, communication patterns) in future research. 7. Granularity of gaming variables The study would benefit from greater specificity regarding gaming behaviors and preferences (e.g., game genres, multiplayer versus single-player engagement, types of social interaction). This limitation should be acknowledged, as it constrains the practical implications of the findings. 8. Implications for intervention While the manuscript highlights the relevance of tailoring game design to different player profiles, the implications for intervention remain somewhat underdeveloped. More concrete, theory-driven suggestions would strengthen the translational impact of the study. Conclusion In summary, this is a well-conducted and relevant study that contributes to the understanding of gaming behavior among individuals at risk of social withdrawal. Addressing the points above (particularly regarding sample characterization, clinical confounders, and interpretative nuance) would further enhance the clarity, rigor, and impact of the manuscript. Reviewer #2: I appreciate the opportunity to review this manuscript (PONE-D-26-12060). The topic is both timely and theoretically meaningful. In particular, the focus on social marginalization (e.g., Hikikomori/NEET risk) and its association with gaming-related socialization preferences addresses an important issue with clear societal and practical relevance, especially in East and Southeast Asian contexts where social withdrawal has become an increasingly visible concern. The study offers a valuable contribution by linking psychological risk factors with digital behavioral tendencies, which has implications for designing game-based or technology-mediated interventions. Despite being based on a relatively modest, cross-sectional online sample, the manuscript provides informative preliminary evidence on the associations between NEET-Hikikomori risk and gaming preferences. These findings serve as a useful empirical starting point for future longitudinal or experimental research in this domain. In this sense, I view the study as a well-positioned pilot investigation. I would also like to highlight the strengths of the Introduction. The authors provide a comprehensive and well-structured synthesis of prior literature and, importantly, articulate competing hypotheses regarding the direction of associations between social marginalization and in-game socialization. This significantly strengthens the scientific value of the study by framing it within a theoretically grounded, hypothesis-driven approach. That said, there remain several issues that should be addressed before the manuscript is suitable for publication. These concerns are mostly technical and conceptual clarifications, and I am confident that the authors can resolve them. Major Concerns 1. The manuscript states that data were collected “in two rounds over a span of two weeks” , but it is unclear what the purpose of this design was. Were there any differences in measurement, manipulation, or quality control across rounds? If not, the rationale for this design should be clarified. 2. The mean NHR score (M = 103.4) is extremely close to the proposed cutoff (104), and more than half of the sample is classified as “high risk”. This distribution is somewhat counterintuitive given prior epidemiological evidence suggesting much lower prevalence rates. While the authors attribute this to recruitment via a crowdsourcing platform, the implications for sampling bias and generalizability need more explicit discussion. In particular, how this sample differs from community or clinical populations should be clearly articulated. 3. The reporting of measurement properties is insufficiently systematic. While some reliability estimates are provided (e.g., Cronbach’s α for selected subscales), a complete report of internal consistency for all scales and subdimensions—especially those directly used in hypothesis testing—is necessary. Similarly, in the Construct Validity section, it is unclear: 1) What exact CFA models were specified; 2) Why only partial models (e.g., selected subdimensions) were evaluated rather than full theoretical structures for each instrument (NHR, HEXAD, GTS, TIPI-J). Even if some models demonstrate poor fit, these results should be transparently reported and explicitly addressed in the limitations. 4. In Section 5.1.1, only selected correlations are reported. A full correlation matrix among all key variables would substantially improve transparency and interpretability. This is particularly important given the conceptual overlap between constructs (e.g., HEXAD Socialiser and GTS Social Orientation) and would also beneficial for further meta-analysis by the other researchers. 5. The statement that associations remain significant after adding covariates and therefore are “not explained” by them (p.12, lines 410–412) is conceptually inaccurate. Covariates (e.g., age, gender, extraversion) are included precisely because they are theoretically related to both predictors and outcomes (I’d like to appreciate the authors efforts in this point, since this is an often-overlooked part in some empirical studies). A more appropriate interpretation would be that the associations remain statistically significant after accounting for these covariates. 6. On p.12 (around line 430), the manuscript argues that a negative association is supported by prior work showing a positive association between social support and HEXAD Socialiser. The logical link here is not sufficiently articulated. The authors should clarify the conceptual bridge (e.g., whether social support is assumed to be inversely related to marginalization risk). 7. Although the manuscript generally maintains an associative tone, the cross-sectional nature of the data should be more explicitly acknowledged as a limitation. This can effectively avoid misleading interpretations made by the publics or medias. Minor Concerns 1. The OSF view-only link is not accessible. Please verify the URL prior to publication. 2. Terminology consistency: Since TIPI-J measures extraversion–introversion on a single continuum, the use of the term “Introversion” as a standalone label (p.9) may be confusing. Please standardize terminology (e.g., “Extraversion” or “Extraversion/Introversion”). 3. Typographical issue: “benchmark mode” (p.9) likely should be “benchmark model.” 4. Model naming: Terms such as “Hypothesis variable 1/2” are unnecessary and potentially confusing. Standard labels such as Model 1, Model 2, etc., would improve clarity. 5. On p.12, the reference to “the Chinese 12-item version of the HEXAD scale” is confusing given that the present study is conducted in Japan. This should be clarified or revised. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: I Don't Know Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The authors addressed all my suggestions in the revised version of the manuscript, as described in the point-by-point response to reviewers. Reviewer #2: The authors have made substantial revisions and significantly improved the overall quality of this manuscript. All of my concerns have been adequately addressed. I have no further comments. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Kunru Song ********** |
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