Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 16, 2025 |
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PONE-D-25-56201-->-->Changing rounds into squares or combining stripes? In-depth analysis of Fritillaria flowers and the color-changing pattern of Sarcophaga flies sheds light on the diversity and morphogenesis of checkerboard patterns in Eukaryotes-->-->PLOS One?> Dear Dr. Galipot, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 03 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The manuscript provides a compelling exploration of checkerboard patterns across the eukaryotic domain, successfully bridging macroscopic biodiversity surveys with microscopic morphogenetic analysis. By comparing the flowers of Fritillaria and the flesh flies of Sarcophaga, the authors demonstrate that these rare geometric motifs represent a case of evolutionary convergence achieved through distinct biological processes. While the work offers a unique multidisciplinary perspective, the manuscript would be strengthened by a more rigorous focus on the FORMula framework and the ecological function of these patterns. Specifically, the authors should move away from abstract analogies (e.g., "horizontal transfers of shapes") and instead provide a sensitivity analysis of their mathematical models. Enhancing the "rarity index" of the pattern and clarifying the physiological mechanism in Sarcophaga—specifically how planar polarity creates structural color—will elevate the study from a structural survey to a significant contribution to evolutionary physiology. Comments: 1) The authors have developed a significant conceptual tool for standardizing morphogenetic data. To improve visibility, they should explicitly mention the "FORMula" framework in the abstract and define it as a standardized flowchart system for categorizing and comparing various biological processes. 2) The paper references a "biological survey" but lacks a sense of its magnitude. Mentioning the survey's specific scope—such as screening thousands of mammal and orchid species—would better substantiate the authors' claims about the rarity of the checkerboard pattern. 3) The authors describe the Sarcophaga pattern as a combination of vertical and horizontal stripes. They should refine this description by directly linking these stripes to the regulation of setae length and planar polarity, which are the specific physiological drivers of the observed structural coloration. 4) The authors provide a fascinating history of the name Fritillaria. This section should be condensed into a single sentence to ensure the narrative remains focused on biological data rather than historical linguistics. 5) While the authors successfully confirm that checkerboard patterns are rare, they could provide a more measurable metric. Calculating a "rarity index" or providing specific ratios (e.g., patterns found per 30,000 species) would offer a more precise statistical representation of their findings. 6) The survey identifies a notable absence of checkerboards in Fungi. The authors should explain how the unique growth mechanisms of fungal hyphae differ from plant or animal tissues to highlight the biological reasons behind this finding. 7) The authors have introduced a novel method for describing development. To prove its utility, they should include a side-by-side comparison of a traditional text-based description versus a FORMula flowchart to demonstrate the gain in clarity and information density. 8) The current modeling relies on a single diffusion reduction value. The authors should perform a sensitivity analysis to map the parameter ranges in which checkerboards emerge, thereby demonstrating the robustness of their "constrained Turing" hypothesis. 9) The paper suggests that checkerboards are visually striking but lacks data on their purpose. The authors should expand their discussion on how these patterns specifically influence pollinator behavior in Fritillaria or predator avoidance in Sarcophaga. 10) The authors discovered that Sarcophaga squares change color based on light angles. They should emphasize the uniqueness of this mechanism by comparing this planar-polarity-based color with more traditional structural colors, such as thin-film interference in butterfly wings or diffraction gratings. 11) The authors hypothesize that veins in Fritillaria act as modulators for color. To strengthen the "universal" nature of their framework, they should compare this to other known modulators, such as feather tracts in birds or bony scales in fish. 12) The authors should discuss whether checkerboard patterns represent "evolutionary attractors"—specific shapes that different species converge upon due to the functional advantages of high-contrast visual signaling. 13) The discussion currently includes abstract analogies comparing the framework to "horizontal transfers" of shapes. The authors should omit these highly theoretical comparisons to maintain a focus on the practical, data-driven applications of the flowchart method. Reviewer #2: Review of the manuscript: “Changing rounds into squares or combining stripes? In-depth analysis of Fritillaria flowers and the color-changing pattern of Sarcophaga flies sheds light on the diversity and morphogenesis of checkerboard patterns in Eukaryotes” This manuscript presents a very interesting study exploring possible pathways leading to the formation of checkerboard color patterns in biological organisms, based on current knowledge of morphogenetic processes across different groups. The investigative framework adopted—previously described by one of the authors in another publication (i.e., starting with a broad species survey, followed by progressively finer-scale analyses at the tissue, cellular, and/or molecular levels, and subsequently using related species to help elucidate pattern-forming processes)—is both reasonable and elegant. As a geneticist working with flies, I was particularly interested in the results obtained for Sarcophaga. Checkerboard patterns in these flies are well known among dipterists, but they are most often discussed from an evolutionary perspective (e.g., potential adaptive significance) rather than from a developmental one (i.e., how the pattern is actually formed). Although developmental biology is not my primary area of expertise, the hypotheses proposed by the authors appear reasonable and well supported based on my current understanding. Overall, I did not identify any technical flaws in the study, and I therefore recommend acceptance of the manuscript. There are, however, two minor points that should be addressed: 1. Page 19, line 289 – In the legend of Figure 4, the findings described refer to Sarcophaga flies; therefore, in item (E), the taxon should be indicated as “Sarcophaga sp.” rather than “Fritillaria meleagris”, if my understanding is correct. 2. Some references do not appear to be correctly formatted (e.g., references 1 and 8). 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Changing rounds into squares or combining stripes? In-depth analysis of Fritillaria flowers and the color-changing pattern of Sarcophaga flies sheds light on the diversity and morphogenesis of checkerboard patterns in Eukaryotes PONE-D-25-56201R1 Dear Dr. Galipot, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Daniel de Paiva Silva, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Dear Dr. Galipot, I am pleased to accept your manuscript for publication in PLoS One! Congratulations on your hard work. Sincerely, Daniel Silva Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: The authors have done an excellent job addressing the previous round of comments. The manuscript has been substantially strengthened by anchoring the broad macroscopic surveys to concrete statistical contexts and clarifying the precise tissue and cellular drivers behind the geometric patterns in both study systems. The structural flow of the paper is much more disciplined, and the tone matches the high multidisciplinary standard expected for publication. I appreciate the authors' transparency regarding their data limitations, and I recommend accepting the manuscript for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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