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Decision Letter - Muhammad Haroon Stanikzai, Editor

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Reviewer #1: There are some notes:

1- "Study Participants": Describe participants (mean age (SD), working history, etc), if possible.

2- It is better to add an explanation about the ratio of the sample size (393 participants). For example, point out the number of questions in HELIA.

3- SPSS version 26 was used for quantitative analysis. Have you done CFA in SPSS?

If yes, explain in the manuscript or add the SPSS scripts to the supplementary materials.

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4- If it's possible, rewrite and redesign Tables 1 and 2 to be small.

5- For the RMSEA index, report 95% Confidence Interval.

6- Check Link for Ref 14. I cannot access the link.

Reviewer #2: 1. Title and Abstract

The title is structurally appropriate; however, the phrase “Cultural Adaptation and Validation” could be made more precise by indicating the type of validation conducted (e.g., confirmatory factor analysis, predictive validity), particularly since the manuscript reports CFA and multiple forms of construct validity. These important methodological components are not reflected in the title.

In the abstract, the study is described as an “exploratory sequential mixed-methods design,” yet the operational linkage between the qualitative and quantitative phases is not clearly explained. It remains unclear how qualitative findings directly informed the quantitative validation or how integration occurred. Furthermore, the timeframe (March 2024–April 2025) raises concerns, as it overlaps with the manuscript submission period; clarification is required regarding whether data collection was fully completed prior to submission.

The abstract reports effect sizes (Cohen’s d), but the scoring range and scaling method of the HELIA-TB are not specified, limiting interpretability of the magnitude of these effects. Additionally, the statement that no significant differences were observed by TB type or drug resistance status does not acknowledge the extremely small sample size in the DR-TB group (n=11), which substantially increases the risk of Type II error.

The conclusion in the abstract states that the tool “has potential to enhance adherence,” which implies a causal relationship that cannot be supported by the cross-sectional design. This wording should be tempered.

2. Introduction

The epidemiological statistics on TB incidence and mortality in India are presented without specifying the reference year, which is critical given annual variations in TB reporting.

The assertion of a “growing consensus” favoring adaptation over new tool development is not adequately substantiated with comparative methodological or empirical evidence.

The manuscript states that HELIA was “developed in Iran in English,” which appears factually inaccurate. HELIA was originally developed in Persian and later translated into English. This point is important because it directly affects the justification of the translation and adaptation pathway.

The comparison with instruments such as HLQ and HLS-EU emphasizes licensing constraints, but the theoretical and structural differences between these tools and HELIA are insufficiently analyzed. The rationale for selecting HELIA appears more pragmatic (open access) than theoretically grounded.

3. Methods

Study Design

Although the study is described as an exploratory sequential mixed-methods design, the integration strategy is not adequately articulated. The manuscript does not explain how qualitative findings shaped item refinement in a traceable, systematic manner. No joint display or explicit integration framework is presented.

Sampling

The claim of simple random sampling from TB registers lacks detail regarding the sampling frame, total eligible population, response rate, and potential selection bias. Without this information, representativeness cannot be assessed.

The justification of sample size using the rule of 5–10 participants per item is more appropriate for exploratory factor analysis than for CFA using maximum likelihood estimation. A more rigorous justification specific to CFA is required.

The DR-TB subgroup (n=11) is too small to support meaningful discriminant validity testing. Conducting t-tests with such a small comparison group raises serious concerns about statistical power, yet this limitation is not adequately discussed.

Cultural Adaptation Process

Only five patients participated in cognitive interviews, which is insufficient to robustly claim data saturation. The argument that subsequent large-scale validation compensates for limited cognitive testing is methodologically flawed, as the purpose of cognitive interviewing is to identify conceptual and interpretative issues before quantitative testing.

Although HSRI guidelines are referenced, the specific steps followed and how they were operationalized are not clearly described.

It is also unclear whether think-aloud techniques or structured probing were systematically used during cognitive interviews.

Content Validity

While I-CVI and S-CVI/Ave are reported, modified kappa coefficients were not calculated to adjust for chance agreement. The proportion of experts rating each item as 3 or 4 (for relevance) is not explicitly reported.

Reliability

Cronbach’s alpha is reported for the overall scale despite the multidimensional structure. The appropriateness of reporting an overall alpha for a five-factor model requires theoretical justification.

The 30-day interval for test–retest reliability may allow for real changes in health literacy during TB treatment, particularly as patients receive ongoing counseling. This potential source of variability is not discussed.

Confirmatory Factor Analysis

CFA was conducted using maximum likelihood estimation, but no evidence is provided regarding multivariate normality assumptions. The chi-square statistic and χ²/df ratio are not reported. There is no discussion of modification indices or correlated residuals.

One item (Q32) demonstrated a low factor loading (λ = 0.43), yet was retained without robust statistical justification. The decision appears primarily theoretical and requires stronger defense.

Although composite reliability (CR) and AVE were reported, discriminant validity between latent constructs was not assessed using Fornell–Larcker criteria or HTMT ratios.

4. Results

The item-total correlation range includes an extremely low value (0.067), suggesting weak alignment with the overall construct. Retaining such an item without conducting sensitivity analyses or reporting alternative models is problematic.

Predictive validity was assessed using independent t-tests without controlling for potential confounders such as age, education, gender, or duration of treatment. Therefore, conclusions about predictive validity remain limited.

Convergent validity relied on a single-item self-rated health measure, which has inherent measurement limitations. This methodological constraint is not sufficiently acknowledged.

There are minor inconsistencies in reported degrees of freedom in some t-tests relative to group sample sizes, suggesting the need for statistical verification.

5. Discussion

The discussion occasionally implies causal interpretation of associations between health literacy and adherence, despite the cross-sectional design.

The comparison of the observed effect size (d=0.89) with meta-analytic estimates from other chronic diseases does not sufficiently account for differences in instruments, adherence measurement methods, and disease contexts. This comparison may overstate the strength of the findings.

The claim of superiority over other TB literacy tools based solely on S-CVI comparisons is not methodologically sound, as content validity indices are not directly comparable across studies with different expert panels and contexts.

Limitations are acknowledged but not deeply analyzed. In particular, the following require stronger emphasis:

Single-district validation,

Potential social desirability bias,

Lack of measurement invariance testing,

Absence of responsiveness analysis,

Small DR-TB subgroup size.

6. Structural and Reporting Issues

There are minor inconsistencies in statistical reporting (e.g., degrees of freedom) that require careful verification.

Frequent use of evaluative descriptors such as “excellent,” “robust,” and “strong” is not always anchored in clearly defined benchmarks.

Some adaptation decisions (e.g., replacing TB-specific wording with broader “health condition” terminology) may weaken the TB-specific focus of the instrument and require clearer theoretical justification.

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Reviewer #1: Yes:  Dr. Parviz Shahmirzalou, PhD in Biostatistics.

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Revision 1

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The suggested changes can be found on page 18, line 373-379.

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Reviewer Comments

1- "Study Participants": Describe participants (mean age (SD), working history, etc), if possible.

Thank you for this valuable suggestion. We have revised the “Study Participants” section to provide a clearer description of participant characteristics across all stages of adaptation and validation. Specifically, we have now included details on participants’ age ranges, years of professional experience for experts and healthcare providers, as well as demographic and clinical characteristics of TB patient participants, including mean age (SD), gender distribution, education status, comorbidity profile, and healthcare setting. In addition, we clarified that detailed characteristics of experts and healthcare providers are presented in S1 Table.

The suggested changes can be found on page 9-10, line 171-194.

2- It is better to add an explanation about the ratio of the sample size (393 participants). For example, point out the number of questions in HELIA.

Thank you for this important suggestion. We have now clarified the rationale for the validation sample size in the “Sample size and sampling” subsection. Specifically, we added that the HELIA-TB instrument contains 33 items, and the validation sample of 393 participants exceeded the commonly recommended ratio of 5–10 participants per item for psychometric validation and factor-analytic procedures. This strengthened the statistical power and adequacy of the validation analyses.

The suggested changes can be found on page 145, line 286-299

3- SPSS version 26 was used for quantitative analysis. Have you done CFA in SPSS?

If yes, explain in the manuscript or add the SPSS scripts to the supplementary materials.

(Usually, CFA HAVE DONE WITH AMOS, LISREL, or Smart-PLS).

Thank you for this observation. Confirmatory Factor Analysis (CFA) was conducted using the AMOS module available within the SPSS version 26 environment. We have now clarified this in the “Data Analysis” subsection of the manuscript by specifying the software and estimation method used for CFA.

The suggested change can be found on page 16, line 338-340.

4- If it's possible, rewrite and redesign Tables 1 and 2 to be small.

Thank you for this suggestion. To improve the readability and conciseness of the manuscript, we have moved Table 1 (detailed characteristics of experts and healthcare providers) to the supplementary materials as Supplementary S1 Table. Table 2 was retained in the main manuscript because the item-level content validity assessment is central to the psychometric validation process.

The suggested change can be found in S1 Table.

5- For the RMSEA index, report 95% Confidence Interval.

Thank you for this valuable suggestion. We agree that reporting the confidence interval for RMSEA enhances the interpretability and completeness of CFA reporting. Accordingly, the manuscript has been revised to include the RMSEA confidence interval.

The suggested change can be found on Page 34, line 540.

6- Check Link for Ref 14. I cannot access the link.

Thank you for highlighting this issue. We rechecked the link/reference for Ref. 14 and confirmed that it is accessible and functioning correctly from our side. Nevertheless, we have carefully verified the URL and reference formatting in the revised manuscript to ensure accessibility.

Reviewer #2

: 1. Title and Abstract

The title is structurally appropriate; however, the phrase “Cultural Adaptation and Validation” could be made more precise by indicating the type of validation conducted (e.g., confirmatory factor analysis, predictive validity), particularly since the manuscript reports CFA and multiple forms of construct validity. These important methodological components are not reflected in the title.

Thank you for this valuable suggestion. We agree that the title should better reflect the broader psychometric evaluation conducted in the study, including confirmatory factor analysis and construct validity assessments. Accordingly, we have revised the title to:

“Cultural Adaptation and Psychometric Validation of the Health Literacy Instrument for Adults with Tuberculosis (HELIA-TB) in India.”

In the abstract, the study is described as an “exploratory sequential mixed-methods design,” yet the operational linkage between the qualitative and quantitative phases is not clearly explained. It remains unclear how qualitative findings directly informed the quantitative validation or how integration occurred. Furthermore, the timeframe (March 2024–April 2025) raises concerns, as it overlaps with the manuscript submission period; clarification is required regarding whether data collection was fully completed prior to submission.

Thank you for this thoughtful observation. We have revised the abstract and Methods section to clarify the operational linkage between the qualitative and quantitative phases of the exploratory sequential mixed-methods design. Specifically, we now explain that findings from the qualitative phase, including expert review and cognitive interviews with TB patients and healthcare providers, directly informed item refinement, contextual adaptation, terminology simplification, and cultural modifications prior to quantitative psychometric validation. The revised instrument was subsequently evaluated through reliability and construct validity analyses in the larger quantitative sample.

The suggested change can be found on page 3, 52-60.

We also clarified the study timeline. Participant recruitment and data collection were completed prior to manuscript submission. The reported study period (March 2024–April 2025) reflects the overall duration of the study, including data cleaning, analysis, interpretation, and manuscript preparation following submission. We have now revised this to March 2024-March

The suggested change can be found on page 3, line 53-54.

The abstract reports effect sizes (Cohen’s d), but the scoring range and scaling method of the HELIA-TB are not specified, limiting interpretability of the magnitude of these effects. Additionally, the statement that no significant differences were observed by TB type or drug resistance status does not acknowledge the extremely small sample size in the DR-TB group (n=11), which substantially increases the risk of Type II error.

Thank you for these important observations. Additional clarification regarding HELIA-TB scoring has now been incorporated into the revised manuscript. Consistent with the original HELIA scoring protocol, raw scores were linearly transformed to a standardized 0–100 scale, with higher scores indicating higher health literacy levels, thereby improving interpretability of reported effect sizes.

The suggested change can be found on page 16-16, line 336-338.

We also acknowledge that the relatively small number of participants with drug-resistant TB (n = 11) substantially limited statistical power for subgroup comparisons and increased the possibility of Type II error. Accordingly, findings related to drug resistance status have been interpreted cautiously and this limitation has now been acknowledged in the manuscript.

The suggested change can be found on page 39-40, line 644-657.

The conclusion in the abstract states that the tool “has potential to enhance adherence,” which implies a causal relationship that cannot be supported by the cross-sectional design. This wording should be tempered.

Thank you for this important observation. The conclusion in the abstract has been revised to avoid implying a causal relationship between the instrument and treatment adherence. The wording has been tempered to emphasize the tool’s potential role in health literacy assessment and in informing targeted TB care interventions rather than directly enhancing adherence outcomes.

The suggested change can be found on page 4, line 76-78.

2. Introduction

The epidemiological statistics on TB incidence and mortality in India are presented without specifying the reference year, which is critical given annual variations in TB reporting.

Thank you for highlighting this. We have revised and now included the reference year. The suggested change can be found on page 5, line 85.

The assertion of a “growing consensus” favoring adaptation over new tool development is not adequately substantiated with comparative methodological or empirical evidence.

Thank you for this important observation. The wording has been revised to avoid overstating the level of consensus regarding adaptation approaches. The revised text now emphasizes that cultural adaptation and validation of established instruments is increasingly recognized as a practical and scientifically efficient strategy because it allows contextual relevance while maintaining conceptual comparability across settings and populations.

The suggested change can be found on page 6-7, line 126-129.

The manuscript states that HELIA was “developed in Iran in English,” which appears factually inaccurate. HELIA was originally developed in Persian and later translated into English. This point is important because it directly affects the justification of the translation and adaptation pathway.

Response: Thank you for this important observation. The manuscript has been clarified to better describe the adaptation pathway used in the present study. HELIA was originally developed in Iran, and the English version provided by the original developers was used as the reference version during the cultural adaptation process for the present study. This clarification has been incorporated to improve transparency regarding translation and adaptation procedures.

The suggested change can be found on Page 8, line 156-158.

The comparison with instruments such as HLQ and HLS-EU emphasizes licensing constraints, but the theoretical and structural differences between these tools and HELIA are insufficiently analyzed. The rationale for selecting HELIA appears more pragmatic (open access) than theoretically grounded.

Thank you for this important observation. The selection of HELIA was based not solely on considerations of accessibility, but on its conceptual structure, multidimensional framework, and contextual relevance for TB care within a lower-middle-income country setting. Unlike instruments such as REALM and TOFHLA, which primarily assess functional literacy skills, HELIA evaluates broader health literacy competencies including access to information, reading, understanding, appraisal, and decision-making, thereby aligning more closely with contemporary multidimensional health literacy frameworks and the practical self-management demands associated with TB treatment. Although HLQ and HLS-EU are comprehensive instruments with strong psychometric foundations, they were developed within substantially different sociocultural and health-system contexts and involve adaptation procedures that may include licensing restrictions, administrative permissions, and collaborative requirements that can limit independent contextual adaptation in resource-constrained settings. In contrast, HELIA was originally developed and validated in a lower-middle-income country context with healthcare and literacy realities more comparable to the present study population. Therefore, the rationale for selecting HELIA was both theoretically grounded and contextually informed, rather than based solely on pragmatic considerations.

3. Methods

Study Design

Although the study is described as an exploratory sequential mixed-methods design, the integration strategy is not adequately articulated. The manuscript does not explain how qualitative findings shaped item refinement in a traceable, systematic manner. No joint display or explicit integration framework is presented.

Thank you for this important observation. The exploratory sequential mixed-methods integration strategy was operationalized through iterative use of qualitative findings to guide refinement of the HELIA-TB instrument prior to quantitative psychometric validation.

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Reviewer #1: Dear Editor in Chief

After reviewing the authors’ responses, I would like to provide the following comments:

1- "Study Participants": Describe participants (mean age (SD), working history, etc), if possible.

This issue has been addressed. However, it would be preferable to present the information in a clearer table format. At minimum, reduce row lines to improve table readability.

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This issue has been clarified.

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This issue has been addressed.

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This issue has been addressed.

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This issue has been clarified.

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Revision 2

Dear Editor in Chief

Thank you for providing opportunity to address the comments. Please find the response beneath each point.

1- "Study Participants": Describe participants (mean age (SD), working history, etc), if possible.

This issue has been addressed. However, it would be preferable to present the information in a clearer table format. At minimum, reduce row lines to improve table readability.

Response:

Thank you for this suggestion. We have revised the participant characteristics table to improve readability by summarizing participant demographics by stakeholder group and reducing excessive row lines.

2- It is better to add an explanation about the ratio of the sample size (393 participants).

This issue has been clarified.

Response: Thank you

3- SPSS version 26 was used for quantitative analysis. Have you done CFA in SPSS?

This issue has been addressed.

Response: Thank you

4- If it's possible, rewrite and redesign Tables 1 and 2 to be small.

This issue has been addressed.

Response: Thank you

5- For the RMSEA index, report 95% Confidence Interval.

This issue has been clarified.

Response: Thank you

6- Check Link for Ref 14. I cannot access the link

Reference 14 is currently presented as:

“14. Directorate of Census Operations, Gujarat”

References, especially reference 14, need to be checked again based on PloS ONE style.

Response: Thank you. Reference 14 has been updated and revised as per PloS ONE style.

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Revision 3

Thank you for your careful review and constructive suggestions.

We have revised the manuscript in accordance with the recommendations. Specifically:

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