Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionJanuary 9, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-24-60347-->-->Age, gender, and distributional effects on moral foundations-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Zakharin, -->-->Thank you for submitting your manuscript “Age, gender, and distributional effects on moral foundations” to PLOS ONE. We have now received comments from two expert reviewers, and I have considered these alongside my own reading of the paper. Both reviewers are positive about the quality of the work, describing the manuscript as well-designed, clearly written, and methodologically sound. Their suggestions focus on clarifying and expanding the theoretical background and discussion, as well as providing additional background on the measures, rather than on changes to your design or analyses. On this basis, I am pleased to invite you to submit a revised manuscript, and I am designating the decision as Minor Revision. In preparing your revision, please address the reviewers’ points in a detailed, point-by-point response. In particular, I encourage you to: 1. Clarify and motivate the hypotheses more explicitly. As Reviewer 1 notes, it would be helpful to expand on the reasoning behind specific predictions, such as why proportionality was expected to show a male advantage, and why you anticipated age-related increases across all foundations with effect sizes in the .05–.25 range. Connecting these expectations more clearly to prior empirical work or theoretical arguments would strengthen the Introduction. 2. Elaborate the implications of the observed age and gender differences. Reviewer 1 also asks for more discussion of how these differences in moral foundations may translate into broader social and political outcomes (e.g., patterns of political affiliation, intergenerational value conflict). Deepening this part of the Discussion will help readers see the societal relevance of your findings. 3. Develop the point about maturational versus societal causes. In the Conclusion you note that your results underscore the importance of both maturational and societal drivers of moral change. Please expand this argument: outline what kinds of maturational mechanisms you have in mind, what societal changes might be relevant, and whether you would expect these to operate similarly or differently in the US and UK contexts. 4. Provide more background on the MFQ-1/MFQ-2 and the moral domains. In line with Reviewer 2’s comments, please elaborate briefly on the six moral domains (care, equality/fairness, proportionality, loyalty, authority, purity) and clarify how MFQ-2 differs from MFQ-1. It would be very useful to provide the MFQ-1 and MFQ-2 item sets as Supporting Information files, or at minimum to include a clear description that allows readers unfamiliar with these instruments to fully understand the differences. In addition to the reviewers’ points, I would also ask you to consider the following issues raised from my side as Academic Editor: 5. Clarify the “distributional effects” framing. The title and framing emphasise “distributional effects,” but the meaning of this term (e.g., heterogeneity across age groups, variation across the distribution of scores, or differences in variance) could be described more explicitly. Please ensure that the Introduction, Methods, and Results clearly explain what you mean by distributional effects and how your analyses capture them. 6. Multiple comparisons and effect size interpretation. Given the number of moral foundations and demographic comparisons, it would be helpful to briefly state how you addressed the issue of multiple testing (e.g., correction procedures, emphasis on effect sizes rather than single p-values). Relatedly, please consider adding a short paragraph in the Discussion that contextualises the magnitude of the observed effects (e.g., small but consistent differences) and avoids any possible overinterpretation. 7. Age, cohort, and design limitations. Because the data are cross-sectional, age effects are potentially confounded with cohort and period effects. It would strengthen the manuscript to acknowledge this explicitly in the Limitations section and to clarify what kinds of inferences can and cannot be drawn about developmental (maturational) change versus cohort differences. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 13 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The present manuscript, “Age, gender, and distributional effects on moral foundations,” reports two studies examining the effects of age and gender on six moral concerns: Care, Equality, Proportionality, Loyalty, Authority, and Purity. The authors rely on correlations drawn from the Moral Foundations Questionnaire-2 (MFQ-2), showing increasing and decreasing trends amongst women and men (both young and old) to capture changes in moral values. I enjoyed reading this manuscript; the Introduction is concise, the Methods are robust, and the Results are well-explained. The paper is well-written and well-designed overall. In what follows, I have listed a number of minor points and suggestions, which I hope the authors will find helpful in revising their work. 1. Although great so far, the authors would benefit from further explaining their hypotheses. For example, why did the authors predict that “proportionality would show a male advantage,” or why did they anticipate age-related increases across all moral foundations with “effect sizes ranging from .05 to .25”? Seems a bit arbitrary without knowing their thought process. Elaborating a bit would help clear the air. 2. Moreover, it would be helpful (and interesting) if the authors discuss and cite work that considers the repercussions of the age and gender differences found amongst the moral foundations. I concur with their saying of how these differences “result in substantially different moral worldviews between younger and older adults.” However, it would be great if they dug a little deeper and expanded. How can this help us understand, for instance, the political affiliations these different groups are drawn to? 3. Lastly, in the authors’ conclusion, they state that these findings are of paramount importance when considering “both maturational and societal causes as drivers of changes in moral values.” This is an interesting point that, again, I believe warrants more explanation. What could these maturational and societal causes be? Would they be the same in the US and the UK? Reviewer #2: Overall the manuscript provides a solid analysis of how morals change between gender and age demographics. To provide a more solid background it might be helpful to provider a copy of the Moral Foundations Questionnaire, the first and second version to fully understand the differences. In addition, it might be helpful to elaborate on the different domains care, fairness, proportionality, loyalty authority, and purity. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes: Paula Beatty ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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<p>Age, gender, and score distributions of moral foundations PONE-D-24-60347R1 Dear Dr. Zakharin, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: Paula Beatty's Comments to Authors Overall, this research about moral foundations is very well written and insightful. Reviewer 1 asks for more of a discussion on observed differences in moral foundations relates to broader sociopolitical outcomes. A more detailed analysis of sociopolitical might help the reader understand the overall significance of this study. Also, these points seem to be slightly contradictory: “Given their shared cultural and economic structures, we expect these dual pressures to operate similarly across US and UK contexts, though their relative strength may vary with national factors such as religiosity and political culture” in the Discussion section; and in the limitations section, “our focus on US and UK samples limits generalizability as cultures imbue moral values with different significance.” Major Comments: 1. Expanding the definition for “culture wars” might help the reader understand why these results are still meaningful. 2. “Liberty” is removed in the revised version, even though liberty/oppression” are sometimes included in MFQ-2. It might be prudent to add liberty/oppression as a domain that is sometimes included in the proportionality domain since this is difference between MFQ-1 and MFQ-2. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #2: Yes: Paula Beatty **********
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