Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionSeptember 5, 2025 |
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Reviewer #1: Nicely framed and meticulously performed study. No novel findings from the study. I would like to refer to following articles as well Li, T., Trinh, T., Bosco, A. et al. Characterising vincristine-induced peripheral neuropathy in adults: symptom development and long-term persistent outcomes. Support Care Cancer 32, 278 (2024). https://doi.org/10.1007/s00520-024-08484-5 Gui-zhou Li, Ya-hui Hu, De-yi Li, Yong Zhang, Hong-li Guo, Yun-man Li, Feng Chen, Jing Xu, Vincristine-induced peripheral neuropathy: A mini-review, NeuroToxicology, Volume 81, 2020, Pages 161-171, ISSN 0161-813X, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuro.2020.10.004. Also provide reference details used to compare for pediatric NCS testing. Reviewer #2: This is an interesting manuscript concerning the NCS asymmetries in children wil ALL who have received vincristine. It is a valuable area of research since there is relatively little information to guide clinical management or patients' and families' expectations of VINP. The manuscript is nicely written and the data concerning these patients is not easily obtained (due to the relative rarity of the disease and, especially in the author's geographic region, the relative paucity of complex interdisciplinary assessment opportunities compared to western institutions). Therefore, their work should be published, with one very big caveat. The authors have chosen to include the repeated measures of the on-going treatment subgroup as independent observations, effectively doubling the contribution of this sub-group of patients to some of their statistical tests. This is an unsound choice. The statistical tests rely on the same assumptions of independence as other statistical methods, and clearly, the 26 of the observations coming from 13 patients makes these particular observations break that assumption. I understand that data about these patient cohorts is not easy to come by. However, the authors should choose ONE of the measurements, the same one in each patients (either the first, or the second) and stick with that one for their analyses. I might suggest the second measurement in each patient, since that is presumably the closest to the "survivor phenotype", but arguments could be made either way. Thus, they should change the data they present in tables 2 and 3 and reduce the N from 59 to 46. It is also somewhat misleading that in table 1, the N for the "children in therapy" group is presented as 27. I have read the text and I do understand that that number comes from 2 x 13 + 1, but nevertheless, it can be construed by more vicious reviewers as a dishonest way to present data. If they so wish, the authors could also keep their present results as supplementary material, but then they should also add a very clear defense of their choice of why they did so in the discussions. To my mind, this is the one big flaw that they need to address. At the very least, it should be clearly pointed out in the limitations paragraph. I would like to offer words of encouragement to the authors and once again say that their premise and overall results are interesting and warrant publishing. BUT this issue with the statistics must be solved before that. Furthermore, once this issue is resolved, it will also provide fertile grounds for a more in-depth exploration of important hypothese in the discussions section: "is the active treatment phenotype meaningfully different to the survivor phenotype?" and "might there be a changing pattern of NCS abnormalities as vincristine dosages accumulate during treatment?". these patients are quite different from long term survivors and more interesting hypothese might come from these observations, if the data is treated correctly. One other minor issues in rows 214 and 233 there is an error message "Error! Reference source not found.. " - I am assuming these should link to tables. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Nicely framed and meticulously performed study. No novel findings from the study. I would like to refer to following articles as well Li, T., Trinh, T., Bosco, A. et al. Characterising vincristine-induced peripheral neuropathy in adults: symptom development and long-term persistent outcomes. Support Care Cancer 32, 278 (2024). https://doi.org/10.1007/s00520-024-08484-5 Gui-zhou Li, Ya-hui Hu, De-yi Li, Yong Zhang, Hong-li Guo, Yun-man Li, Feng Chen, Jing Xu, Vincristine-induced peripheral neuropathy: A mini-review, NeuroToxicology, Volume 81, 2020, Pages 161-171, ISSN 0161-813X, https://doi.org/10.1016/j.neuro.2020.10.004. Also provide reference details used to compare for pediatric NCS testing. Reviewer #2: This is an interesting manuscript concerning the NCS asymmetries in children wil ALL who have received vincristine. It is a valuable area of research since there is relatively little information to guide clinical management or patients' and families' expectations of VINP. The manuscript is nicely written and the data concerning these patients is not easily obtained (due to the relative rarity of the disease and, especially in the author's geographic region, the relative paucity of complex interdisciplinary assessment opportunities compared to western institutions). Therefore, their work should be published, with one very big caveat. The authors have chosen to include the repeated measures of the on-going treatment subgroup as independent observations, effectively doubling the contribution of this sub-group of patients to some of their statistical tests. This is an unsound choice. The statistical tests rely on the same assumptions of independence as other statistical methods, and clearly, the 26 of the observations coming from 13 patients makes these particular observations break that assumption. I understand that data about these patient cohorts is not easy to come by. However, the authors should choose ONE of the measurements, the same one in each patients (either the first, or the second) and stick with that one for their analyses. I might suggest the second measurement in each patient, since that is presumably the closest to the "survivor phenotype", but arguments could be made either way. Thus, they should change the data they present in tables 2 and 3 and reduce the N from 59 to 46. It is also somewhat misleading that in table 1, the N for the "children in therapy" group is presented as 27. I have read the text and I do understand that that number comes from 2 x 13 + 1, but nevertheless, it can be construed by more vicious reviewers as a dishonest way to present data. If they so wish, the authors could also keep their present results as supplementary material, but then they should also add a very clear defense of their choice of why they did so in the discussions. To my mind, this is the one big flaw that they need to address. At the very least, it should be clearly pointed out in the limitations paragraph. I would like to offer words of encouragement to the authors and once again say that their premise and overall results are interesting and warrant publishing. BUT this issue with the statistics must be solved before that. Furthermore, once this issue is resolved, it will also provide fertile grounds for a more in-depth exploration of important hypothese in the discussions section: "is the active treatment phenotype meaningfully different to the survivor phenotype?" and "might there be a changing pattern of NCS abnormalities as vincristine dosages accumulate during treatment?". these patients are quite different from long term survivors and more interesting hypothese might come from these observations, if the data is treated correctly. One other minor issues in rows 214 and 233 there is an error message "Error! Reference source not found.. 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Electrophysiological Asymmetry in Vincristine-Exposed Children with Acute Lymphoblastic Leukemia: Evidence from Bilateral Nerve Conduction Studies PONE-D-25-47490R1 Dear Dr. Kobesova, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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I am satisfied with the responses and the edits, so I am happy to accept this manuscript. This manuscript will satisfy the readers' interest and provide valuable information to clinicians and researchers in this field. The authors have addressed the reviewers’ comments appropriately, and the revisions have significantly improved the clarity and overall quality of the manuscript. The study presents meaningful findings that contribute to our understanding of the topic and will be of interest to a broad readership. The manuscript is generally well written. As a minor point, I would encourage the authors to perform a final check for spelling, typographical errors, and consistency of terminology throughout the manuscript. For instance, ped-mTNS is used in most sections, whereas Ped-mTNS appears on line 319. Addressing these small inconsistencies would further enhance the quality of the paper. Tomoyoshi Komiyama Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: Thank you for making the necessary changes to your statistical approach. My concerns have been adequately addressed. Please make sure to check for spelling/typing consistency, as there some minor issues. For example, ped-mTNS is variably referred to across the text as ped-mTNS (most places) and Ped-mTNS in others (line 319). Other Reviewer #3: This report by Jevic et al., titled “Electrophysiological Asymmetry in Vincristine-Exposed Children with Acute Lymphoblastic Leukemia: Evidence from Bilateral Nerve Conduction Studies,” presents the results of their retrospective investigation, which systematically analyzes electrophysiological asymmetry in a total of 47 pediatric ALL patients treated with vincristine. This is a well-organized study that succeeds in shedding light on the characteristics of vincristine‑induced peripheral neuropathy (VIPN) through systematic nerve conduction studies. In actual clinical practice, there is often an implicit assumption that VIPN presents symmetrically, and as a result, clinicians may spend considerable time ruling out other conditions when encountering asymmetric or unilateral neurological symptoms. This study clearly demonstrates that VIPN can indeed manifest asymmetrically, providing valuable guidance for clinical decision‑making. Since the authors have fully addressed all the concerns raised in the initial review, the revised manuscript is now suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: Atsushi Makimoto ********** |
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