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The authors mention that "two microarray datasets, GEO-GPL96 (Nov, 2007) and its last update GEO-GSE9476 (Nov 2018), were found to be compatible with our filtering parameters." However, according to the GEO database, GEO-GPL96 provides a description of the array technology, specifically detailing the platform's design by Affymetrix. This description suggests that the dataset might be primarily related to array design and not specifically focused on the data used in the gene expression analysis, which is important to clarify.

On the other hand, GSE9476 corresponds to a dataset involving gene expression profiles from normal hematopoietic cells (38 healthy donors) and leukemic blasts (26 AML patients). The data includes various cell types, such as CD34+ selected cells (N = 18), unselected bone marrow cells (N = 10), and unselected peripheral blood cells (N = 10). Therefore, it would be important to distinguish between the description of the platform (GEO-GPL96) and the specific dataset (GSE9476).

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Reviewer #1:  This study profiles differentially expressed genes in AML and identifies 8 transcription factors potentially critical for AML development, maintenance, and drug resistance. The intriguing finding that high expression of these genes associates with both drug resistance *and* sensitivity underscores the complexity of drug response in AML. While the computational analysis is valuable, significant revisions are required to strengthen the biological validity and presentation of the findings.

Major Revisions:

1. Experimental Validation of Identified TFs: The identification of the 8 key transcription factors relies solely on computational analysis. To confirm their differential expression and biological relevance, the mRNA and protein levels of these TFs must be experimentally validated. This should involve direct comparison between primary AML patient samples and healthy donor samples (e.g., via qRT-PCR and Western blotting/immunohistochemistry).

2. Functional Validation of Drug Resistance Role: The proposed link between these TFs and drug resistance is derived computationally. Functional experiments are essential to support this claim. Perform in vitro and/or in vivo assays (e.g., knockdown/overexpression followed by drug sensitivity testing in AML cell lines or primary cells) to demonstrate a causal role for these TFs in mediating drug resistance or sensitivity.

Minor Revisions:

1. Clarify Data Analysis Workflow: Given the multi-step bioinformatic analysis involving various filters, databases, and tools, include a clear data analysis flow diagram or schematic in the manuscript. This is crucial for transparency and reproducibility.

2. Correct Figure 7 Issues:

Labels Missing:Add the missing labels "a" and "b" to the panels in Figure 7.

Legend Discrepancy:Ensure the legend description for Figure 7a and 7b accurately reflects what is shown in the respective panels (currently described oppositely, lines 233-234).

3. Correct Table 2:Fix the misspelling of "summary statistics" in Table 2.

4. Correct Table 4 Legend:The legend for Table 4 (line 269) states there are 12 genes, but the table lists 24 genes (AML-up and AML-down). Update the legend to accurately reflect the total number of genes presented (24).

5. Clarify Table References:There is confusion regarding Table 5:

* Line 242 ,249 mentioned Table 5.

* Confirm and correct all table references.If Table 5 is mentioned in the text, it must exist and be numbered correctly. If it is a typo, correct all instances to refer to the appropriate table (likely Table 4).

6. Revise Figure 9:

Resolution: Provide a high-resolution version of Figure 9, as the current version is illegible.

Legend Accuracy: The current legend description (lines 291-295) does not match the content of Figure 9. Completely revise the legend to accurately describe the data and analysis presented in the figure.

7. Clarify Figure 10: The text (line 309) and Figure 10a list only 7 genes. Confirm whether FEN1 is missing from both the text description and Figure 10a. If FEN1 is part of the analysis, it must be added to both places. If not, ensure the text and figure consistently reference the correct number (7) and list of genes.

Reviewer #2:  Please revise the manuscript based on comments. Some of the statistical figures are missing in the paper and inclusion of them would be appreciated. Some clarifications on threshold is also needed to support the conclusions.

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Revision 1

Dear Prof. Purnima Singh

PLOS ONE

Manuscript ID: PONE-D-25-22273

Title: A systems biology approach to find representative genes in Acute Myeloid Leukemia

We sincerely appreciate the time and effort that you and the respected reviewers have dedicated to thoroughly evaluating our manuscript. The insightful comments and constructive feedback have been invaluable in helping us to refine and strengthen our work. We have carefully considered each point raised and have addressed them in detail within manuscript.

Since this study is an in silico, systems biology investigation, accordingly, experimental validations fall beyond the scope of the current computational work. therefore, questions regarding the necessity for experimental work (Reviewer #1) were added at the end of manuscript as suggestions for further studies. In the following paragraphs you can find the responses to comments and suggestions of reviewers.

With kindest regards

Khosrow Khalifeh

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Reviewer #1:

This study profiles differentially expressed genes in AML and identifies 8 transcription factors potentially critical for AML development, maintenance, and drug resistance. The intriguing finding that high expression of these genes associates with both drug resistance *and* sensitivity underscores the complexity of drug response in AML. While the computational analysis is valuable, significant revisions are required to strengthen the biological validity and presentation of the findings.

Specific comments relating to the text,

Comment 1: Experimental Validation of Identified TFs: The identification of the 8 key transcription factors relies solely on computational analysis. To confirm their differential expression and biological relevance, the mRNA and protein levels of these TFs must be experimentally validated. This should involve direct comparison between primary AML patient samples and healthy donor samples (e.g., via qRT-PCR and Western blotting/immunohistochemistry).

Response: We sincerely appreciate the respected reviewer for his/her insightful comment which actually led to improvement of our paper.

This study is an in silico investigation that uses computational modeling to predict outcomes based on existing experimental data that are available in bioinformatics databases. These predictions are intended to guide the design of future laboratory experiments and to refine or expand previous studies. While experimental validation is indeed critical for confirming the predictions made, such validations fall beyond the scope of the current computational work. However, in line with your valuable feedback, we have incorporated a suggestion at the end of the revised manuscript to encourage further experimental studies to complement and extend the findings of this in silico work.

Comment 2: Functional Validation of Drug Resistance Role: The proposed link between these TFs and drug resistance is derived computationally. Functional experiments are essential to support this claim. Perform in vitro and/or in vivo assays (e.g., knockdown/overexpression followed by drug sensitivity testing in AML cell lines or primary cells) to demonstrate a causal role for these TFs in mediating drug resistance or sensitivity.

Response: we sincerely appreciate your insightful comment regarding the need for experimental support. As mentioned in response to previous comment, this study is an in silico investigation, and its primary objective is to generate predictive models based on existing experimental data to guide and optimize future laboratory experiments. Hence, the experimental investigations fall beyond the scope of the current computational work. To address your valuable suggestion, we have emphasized in the revised manuscript the potential experimental approaches that could be pursued to test our predictions, thereby fostering collaboration between computational and experimental research efforts.

Minor concerns;

1) Clarify Data Analysis Workflow: Given the multi-step bioinformatic analysis involving various filters, databases, and tools, include a clear data analysis flow diagram or schematic in the manuscript. This is crucial for transparency and reproducibility.

Response: This is a good suggestion. We added the overall Workflow of current study at the end of Method section (Figure 1). Accordingly, the numbering of figs was changed.

2. Correct Figure 7 Issues:

Labels Missing: Add the missing labels "a" and "b" to the panels in Figure 7.

Legend Discrepancy:Ensure the legend description for Figure 7a and 7b accurately reflects what is shown in the respective panels (currently described oppositely, lines 233-234).

Response: Thank you very much for your careful attention. You are absolutely right. The mentioned points regarding Figure 7 (Figure 8 in the revised version) have been corrected.

3. Correct Table 2: Fix the misspelling of "summary statistics" in Table 2.

Response: So many thanks. It has been corrected.

4. Correct Table 4 Legend: The legend for Table 4 (line 269) states there are 12 genes, but the table lists 24 genes (AML-up and AML-down). Update the legend to accurately reflect the total number of genes presented (24).

Response: Thank you very much for your insightful attention. You are right. It was corrected.

5. Clarify Table References: There is confusion regarding Table 5:

* Line 242 ,249 mentioned Table 5.

* Confirm and correct all table references. If Table 5 is mentioned in the text, it must exist and be numbered correctly. If it is a typo, correct all instances to refer to the appropriate table (likely Table 4).

Response: Thank you very much for your important comment. This mistake is due to transferring of some tables into the supplementary files. The Table 5 is indeed Table 3. Thanks to your nice comment this issue has been amended.

6. Revise Figure 9:

Resolution: Provide a high-resolution version of Figure 9, as the current version is illegible.

Legend Accuracy: The current legend description (lines 291-295) does not match the content of Figure 9. Completely revise the legend to accurately describe the data and analysis presented in the figure.

Response: Thank you very much for your comment. This image (Fig 10 in the revised version of the manuscript) is the output of the server. Accordingly, we are limited in changing image quality. We have tried to manipulate the image by re-writing the names of the genes and cancer types. We also completely changed the legend of the Figure 10 according to your insightful; comment.

7. Clarify Figure 10: The text (line 309) and Figure 10a list only 7 genes. Confirm whether FEN1 is missing from both the text description and Figure 10a. If FEN1 is part of the analysis, it must be added to both places. If not, ensure the text and figure consistently reference the correct number (7) and list of genes.

Response: Thank you very much for your comment, which reflects a thorough and careful reading of the paper. The reason for the absence of the FEN1 gene in the figure is that, based on the database criteria and an FDR of less than 0.05, this gene did not show significant resistance or sensitivity to any of the analyzed drugs. Overall, the concept and interpretation of the figures in this chart are based on the CTRP and GDSC databases, relying on the following two assumptions:

1) Positive correlation indicates a higher gene expression may lead to drug resistance.

2) Negative correlation indicates a higher gene expression may make drug sensitive

Considering your comment, we added an explanatory statement in the Figure legend (Figure 11 in the revised version of the manuscript).

Reviewer #2:

The paper presents multi-step bioinformatics study to identify prognostic genes in Acute Myeloid Leukemia (AML) and explore their relationship with drug sensitivity. The authors utilize public gene expression data (GEO-GSE9476) and performs various bioinformatic approaches including differential expression analysis, pathway and network analysis, survival analysis, and finally, drug sensitivity correlation. They identified 8-gene signature (3 upregulated, 5 downregulated) and this is a potentially valuable finding. The use of multiple databases (GEO, GEPIA2, BloodSpot, GDSC) for analysis and validation is also a strength of this paper.

Comment 1: Authors have identified MCM2 and MCM3 as genes that are downregulated in AML patients compared to healthy controls. However, when discussing the drug sensitivity results from the CTRP database (Figure 10b), the text states to "MCM2, MCM3 (upregulated in AML patients)". Please clarify.

Response: Thank you very much for your careful attention. You are absolutely right. It was corrected.

Comment 2: The authors have marked the Ethics Statement as "N/A". This is inappropriate for a study that analyzes human patient and donor data, even if obtained from a public repository. The authors must correct this section to state that the data were obtained from a publicly available source (GEO-GSE9476) and that the original study that generated the data (Stirewalt et al.) received the necessary ethical approvals and patient consent, citing that study.

Response: Thank you very much for your nice comment. Thanks to your experience, it will be amended during submission process.

Comment 3: The process for selecting the final list of transcription factors in Table 1 is not detailed. The authors mention using "the statistical significance of the intersections and the repeatability of TFs across various databases". Please provide specific p-value thresholds and a clear definition of "repeatability."

Response: Thank you very much for your important comment. The missing information was added into the material and method section.

Comment 4: The criteria for selecting the hub genes listed in Table 3 are not explicitly stated. It is unclear if they are the top N genes by degree or another centrality metric. This should be clarified.

Response: So many thanks for your insightful comment. In line with your comment, we added more explanatory statements in the revised version of the manuscript (Section 3.4.1. Hub Genes and Significant Modules of the PPI Network)

Comment 5: The manuscript states that the 8 identified genes were associated with a "strong prognosis, suggesting high hazard ratios (HR) for AML". A high Hazard Ratio (HR > 1) typically signifies a worse prognosis (i.e., higher risk of a negative event, like death). The term "strong prognosis" is unclear. Please report whether high expression of a gene correlates with better or worse survival.

Response: Thank you very much for your suggestion. You are right. The current statement is confusing for readers. We applied some changes in the corresponding paragraph. The Legend of the Figure 10 has also changed according to your comment.

Comment 6: The connection to "epigenetics and lifestyle" is mentioned in the abstract, discussion, and conclusion as a potential factor influencing gene expression and drug response. This is not directly supported by any data in the manuscript. Stating them multiple times without support of data weakens the manuscript.

Response: Thank you very much for your insightful comment. Indeed, our aim was to extend the results of recent modeling studies—specifically those concerning the influence of expression patterns of certain genes on AML—toward a more generalized biological reality to provide a biologically meaningful interpretation of these findings. To this end, we discussed how gene expression patterns may be influenced by environmental factors. However, as you correctly pointed out, such a conclusion cannot be drawn directly or with absolute certainty. Therefore, in response to your comment, we have softened the wording of this conclusion and avoided any deterministic interpretation. Also, the final respective statement at the conclusion section was deleted.

Comment 7: The drug sensitivity data in Figure 10 is confusingly written. For example, "low expression in AML patients leads to reducing resistance” could be written more directly as "low expression in AML patients is associated with increased drug sensitivity." Revising this section to make it more clear is necessary.

Response: Thank you for your suggestion. You are absolutely right. The paragraph was rewritten.

The authors have conducted a comprehensive in silico analysis that identifies a promising set of prognostic genes for AML. Please address these issues for paper to be publication ready.

We believe that the paper significancy improved by considering your insightful comments and suggestions. Thank you again for saving your time and details to read the manuscript.

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Decision Letter - Purnima Singh, Editor, Mohammad H. Ghazimoradi, Editor

PONE-D-25-22273R1

A systems biology approach to find representative genes in Acute Myeloid Leukemia

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Dear Dr. Kalifeh,

Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we have decided that your manuscript does not meet our criteria for publication and must therefore be rejected.

I am sorry that we cannot be more positive on this occasion, but hope that you appreciate the reasons for this decision.

Kind regards,

Mohammad H. Ghazimoradi

Academic Editor

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While the work is interesting, without proper experimental work as the reviewer ask, the manuscript is not suitable for publication.

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Revision 2

Subject: Appeal for Reconsideration of Manuscript

Title: A systems biology approach to find representative genes in Acute Myeloid Leukemia

Manuscript ID: PONE-D-25-22273R2

Dear Purnima Singh, Academic Editor, PLOS ONE

At first, I would like to thank you for saving your times and details to manage our paper. We Also thanks the respected reviewers for the valuable comments and suggestions that help us to improve the paper.

As you know, our manuscript was initially submitted to PLOS ONE and underwent peer review, where both reviewers provided positive feedback and recommended revisions. We addressed all comments from the reviewers in a thorough revision, submitting the revised version along with a detailed point-by-point response. However, after submission, we received notification that the original handling editor was unavailable, and the manuscript was reassigned to a new editor who is expert in the experimental Biology rather than computational one. Regrettably, the new editor rejected the manuscript within a few hours, citing the absence of an experimental laboratory section as the primary reason. We believe this decision was made without consulting the reviewers or considering the fact that this work is classified in the area of Modelling and Computational Biology. This work aligns with PLOS ONE's scope, which emphasizes innovative research across disciplines, including computational biology, without mandating experimental validation in all cases. The rejection rationale does not adequately account for the nature of our study or the positive assessments from the initial peer review. We kindly request that you reconsider this decision by assigning the manuscript to an expert editor in the area of computational Biology and allowing it to proceed to re-review by the original referees, who are best positioned to evaluate the revisions. We are confident that the revised manuscript meets PLOS ONE's criteria for publication and contributes meaningfully to the field. Thank you for considering this appeal. We value the opportunity to contribute to PLOS ONE and look forward to your response. You can find below the point-by-point responses to the reviewer’s comments.

Responses to Editor and Reviewer Comments

Editor comment:

We appreciate the opportunity to improve the clarity of our manuscript.

Editor comment 1) The authors mention that "two microarray datasets, GEO-GPL96 (Nov, 2007) and its last update GEO-GSE9476 (Nov 2018), were found to be compatible with our filtering parameters." However, according to the GEO database, GEO-GPL96 provides a description of the array technology, specifically detailing the platform's design by Affymetrix. This description suggests that the dataset might be primarily related to array design and not specifically focused on the data used in the gene expression analysis, which is important to clarify.

On the other hand, GSE9476 corresponds to a dataset involving gene expression profiles from normal hematopoietic cells (38 healthy donors) and leukemic blasts (26 AML patients). The data includes various cell types, such as CD34+ selected cells (N = 18), unselected bone marrow cells (N = 10), and unselected peripheral blood cells (N = 10). Therefore, it would be important to distinguish between the description of the platform (GEO-GPL96) and the specific dataset (GSE9476).

Response:

We thank the respected Editor for highlighting the need for clarity regarding the use of GEO-GPL96 and GEO-GSE9476 in our study. To address this, we acknowledge that GEO-GPL96 refers to the Affymetrix platform description, which outlines the microarray technology and probe design used for gene expression profiling. In contrast, GEO-GSE9476 is the specific dataset containing gene expression profiles from normal hematopoietic cells (38 healthy donors) and leukemic blasts (26 AML patients), including CD34+ selected cells (N=18), unselected bone marrow cells (N=10), and unselected peripheral blood cells (N=10).

In our manuscript, we used GEO-GPL96 to confirm the compatibility of the array platform with our filtering parameters, ensuring that the probe design and technical specifications aligned with our analysis pipeline. The actual gene expression data analyzed in our study were derived from GEO-GSE9476, which provided the relevant biological samples for our AML modeling. To avoid confusion, we have revised the manuscript to clearly distinguish between GEO-GPL96 as the platform description and GEO-GSE9476 as the dataset used for gene expression analysis. Specifically, we have updated the text in the Methods section to read:

Gene expression data were obtained from GEO-GSE9476 (last updated Nov 2018), which includes profiles from normal hematopoietic cells (N=38) and leukemic blasts (N=26) across various cell types (CD34+ selected cells, N=18; unselected bone marrow cells, N=10; unselected peripheral blood cells, N=10). The dataset was generated using the Affymetrix platform described in GEO-GPL96 (Nov 2007), which was verified to meet our filtering parameters for probe design and data compatibility.

We believe this revision clarifies the distinct roles of GEO-GPL96 and GEO-GSE9476 in our study and addresses your concern.

Editor comment 2): The authors must italicize human gene names throughout the manuscript to ensure consistency with nomenclature guidelines.

Response: Thank you very much for your suggestion. The gene names italicized throughout the manuscript.

Reviewer #1:

This study profiles differentially expressed genes in AML and identifies 8 transcription factors potentially critical for AML development, maintenance, and drug resistance. The intriguing finding that high expression of these genes associates with both drug resistance *and* sensitivity underscores the complexity of drug response in AML. While the computational analysis is valuable, significant revisions are required to strengthen the biological validity and presentation of the findings.

Specific comments relating to the text,

Comment 1: Experimental Validation of Identified TFs: The identification of the 8 key transcription factors relies solely on computational analysis. To confirm their differential expression and biological relevance, the mRNA and protein levels of these TFs must be experimentally validated. This should involve direct comparison between primary AML patient samples and healthy donor samples (e.g., via qRT-PCR and Western blotting/immunohistochemistry).

Response: We sincerely appreciate the respected reviewer for his/her insightful comment which actually led to improvement of our paper.

This study is an in silico investigation that uses computational modeling to predict outcomes based on existing experimental data that are available in bioinformatics databases. These predictions are intended to guide the design of future laboratory experiments and to refine or expand previous studies. While experimental validation is indeed critical for confirming the predictions made, such validations fall beyond the scope of the current computational work. However, in line with your valuable feedback, we have incorporated a suggestion at the end of the revised manuscript to encourage further experimental studies to complement and extend the findings of this in silico work.

Comment 2: Functional Validation of Drug Resistance Role: The proposed link between these TFs and drug resistance is derived computationally. Functional experiments are essential to support this claim. Perform in vitro and/or in vivo assays (e.g., knockdown/overexpression followed by drug sensitivity testing in AML cell lines or primary cells) to demonstrate a causal role for these TFs in mediating drug resistance or sensitivity.

Response: we sincerely appreciate your insightful comment regarding the need for experimental support. As mentioned in response to previous comment, this study is an in silico investigation, and its primary objective is to generate predictive models based on existing experimental data to guide and optimize future laboratory experiments. Hence, the experimental investigations fall beyond the scope of the current computational work. To address your valuable suggestion, we have emphasized in the revised manuscript the potential experimental approaches that could be pursued to test our predictions, thereby fostering collaboration between computational and experimental research efforts.

Minor concerns;

1) Clarify Data Analysis Workflow: Given the multi-step bioinformatic analysis involving various filters, databases, and tools, include a clear data analysis flow diagram or schematic in the manuscript. This is crucial for transparency and reproducibility.

Response: This is a good suggestion. We added the overall Workflow of current study at the end of Method section (Figure 1). Accordingly, the numbering of figs was changed.

2. Correct Figure 7 Issues:

Labels Missing: Add the missing labels "a" and "b" to the panels in Figure 7.

Legend Discrepancy:Ensure the legend description for Figure 7a and 7b accurately reflects what is shown in the respective panels (currently described oppositely, lines 233-234).

Response: Thank you very much for your careful attention. You are absolutely right. The mentioned points regarding Figure 7 (Figure 8 in the revised version) have been corrected.

3. Correct Table 2: Fix the misspelling of "summary statistics" in Table 2.

Response: So many thanks. It has been corrected.

4. Correct Table 4 Legend: The legend for Table 4 (line 269) states there are 12 genes, but the table lists 24 genes (AML-up and AML-down). Update the legend to accurately reflect the total number of genes presented (24).

Response: Thank you very much for your insightful attention. You are right. It was corrected.

5. Clarify Table References: There is confusion regarding Table 5:

* Line 242 ,249 mentioned Table 5.

* Confirm and correct all table references. If Table 5 is mentioned in the text, it must exist and be numbered correctly. If it is a typo, correct all instances to refer to the appropriate table (likely Table 4).

Response: Thank you very much for your important comment. This mistake is due to transferring of some tables into the supplementary files. The Table 5 is indeed Table 3. Thanks to your nice comment this issue has been amended.

6. Revise Figure 9:

Resolution: Provide a high-resolution version of Figure 9, as the current version is illegible.

Legend Accuracy: The current legend description (lines 291-295) does not match the content of Figure 9. Completely revise the legend to accurately describe the data and analysis presented in the figure.

Response: Thank you very much for your comment. I think that the original image changes during conversion and inclusion into the pdf file by journal server. This image (Fig 10 in the revised version of the manuscript) is the output of the server. We have tried to manipulate the image by re-writing the names of the genes and cancer types. We also completely changed the legend of the Figure 10 according to your insightful; comment.

7. Clarify Figure 10: The text (line 309) and Figure 10a list only 7 genes. Confirm whether FEN1 is missing from both the text description and Figure 10a. If FEN1 is part of the analysis, it must be added to both places. If not, ensure the text and figure consistently reference the correct number (7) and list of genes.

Response: Thank you very much for your comment, which reflects a thorough and careful reading of the paper. The reason for the absence of the FEN1 gene in the figure is that, based on the database criteria and an FDR of less than 0.05, this gene did not show significant resistance or sensitivity to any of the analyzed drugs. Overall, the concept and interpretation of the figures in this chart are based on the CTRP and GDSC databases, relying on the following two assumptions:

1) Positive correlation indicates a higher gene expression may lead to drug resistance.

2) Negative correlation indicates a higher gene expression may make drug sensitive

Considering your comment, we added an explanatory statement in the Figure legend (Figure 11 in the revised version of the manuscript).

Reviewer #2:

The paper presents multi-step bioinformatics study to identify prognostic genes in Acute Myeloid Leukemia (AML) and explore their relationship with drug sensitivity. The authors utilize public gene expression data (GEO-GSE9476) and performs various bioinformatic approaches including differential expression analysis, pathway and network analysis, survival analysis, and finally, drug sensitivity correlation. They identified 8-gene signature (3 upregulated, 5 downregulated) and this is a potentially valuable finding. The use of multiple databases (GEO, GEPIA2, BloodSpot, GDSC) for analysis and validation is also a strength of this paper.

Comment 1: Authors have identified MCM2 and MCM3 as genes that are downregulated in AML patients compared to healthy controls. However, when discussing the drug sensitivity results from the CTRP database (Figure 10b), the text states to "MCM2, MCM3 (upregulated in AML patients)". Please clarify.

Response: Thank you very much for your careful attention. You are absolutely right. It was corrected.

Comment 2: The authors have marked the Ethics Statement as "N/A". This is inappropriate for a study that analyzes human patient and donor data, even if obtained from a public repository. The authors must correct this section to state that the data were obtained from a publicly available source (GEO-GSE9476) and that the original study that generated the data (Stirewalt et al.) received the necessary ethical approvals and patient consent, citing that study.

Response: Thank you very much for your nice comment. Thanks to your experience, it will be amended during submission process.

Comment 3: The process for selecting the final list of transcription factors in Table 1 is not detailed. The authors mention using "the statistical significance of the intersections and the repeatability of TFs across various databases". Please provide specific p-value thresholds and a clear definition of "repeatability."

Response: Thank you very much for your important comment. The missing information was added into the material and method section.

Comment 4: The criteria for selecting the hub genes listed in Table 3 are not explicitly stated. It is unclear if they are the top N genes by degree or another centrality metric. This should be clarified.

Response: So many thanks for your insightful comment. In line with your comment, we added more explanatory statements in the revised version of the manuscript (Section 3.4.1. Hub Genes and Significant Modules of the PPI Network)

Comment 5: The manuscript states that the 8 identified genes were associated with a "strong prognosis, suggesting high hazard ratios (HR) for AML". A high Hazard Ratio (HR > 1) typically signifies a worse prognosis (i.e., higher risk of a negative event, like death). The term "strong prognosis" is unclear. Please report whether high expression of a gene correlates with better or worse survival.

Response: Thank you very much for your suggestion. You are right. The current statement is confusing for readers. We applied some changes in the corresponding paragraph. The Legend of the Figure 10 has also changed according to your comment.

Comment 6: The connection to "epigenetics and lifestyle" is mentioned in the abstract, discussion, and conclusion as a potential factor influencing gene expression and drug response. This is not directly supported by any data in the manuscript. Stating them multiple times without support of data weakens the manuscript.

Response: Thank you very much for your insightful comment. Indeed, our aim was to extend the results of recent modeling studies—specifically those concerning the influence of expression patterns of certain genes on AML—toward a more generalized biological reality to provide a biologically meaningful interpretation of these findings. To this end, we discussed how gene expression patterns may be influenced by environmental factors. However, as you correctly pointed out, such a conclusion cannot be drawn directly or with absolute certainty. Therefore, in response to your comment, we have softened the wording of

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Title: A systems biology approach to find representative genes in Acute Myeloid Leukemia

We sincerely appreciate the time and effort that you and the respected reviewer have dedicated to thoroughly evaluating our manuscript. We have carefully considered each point raised, and have addressed them in detail within manuscript. All changes in the final version of the manuscript were highlighted.

With kindest regards

Khosrow Khalifeh

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The manuscript can be accepted after verifying the following minor corrections:

1) In the Methods section, ensure a clear distinction between the microarray platform (GEO-GPL96) and the dataset (GEO-GSE9476).

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We thank the respected Editor for highlighting the need for clarity regarding the use of GEO-GPL96 and GEO-GSE9476 in our study. More explanation was added in the main text of the manuscript. (Pages 4 and 5)

comment 2: In the Methods section, include explicit details regarding the statistical thresholds (p-values) and the criteria for “repeatability” used in transcription factor selection.

Response: Thank you very much for your suggestion. The details of statistical criteria were added into the manuscript. (Page 7)

comment 3: Verify the consistency in the expression status of MCM2 and MCM3 between the main text and the drug sensitivity figure, and correct if necessary for accuracy.

Response: So many thanks for your comment. We added more statements to clarify our explanations. (Page 17)

comment 4: Clarify the hub gene selection process in Section 3.4.1 by specifying the centrality metrics used.

Response: Thank you very much for your suggestion. More explanatory statements were added into the revised version of manuscript. (Page 12)

comment 5: Confirm that the interpretation of survival results has been revised to clearly indicate whether higher gene expression correlates with better or worse prognosis.

Response: Thank you very much for your comment. We clarified our conclusion by adding more statements into the manuscript. (Pages 17 and 18)

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