Peer Review History
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-->PONE-D-26-09031-->-->Age-range–matched external validation of standard liver volume equations: methodological re-evaluation of 13 regression models-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Imamura, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> This manuscript carries out an external validation of thirteen standard liver volume (SLV) formulae through age-range matching. This clarifies key controversies in SLV estimation and offers methodological and clinical implications for liver surgery and transplantation. While the study has clear scientific merit and innovative value, methodological clarity, content refinement, consistency, writing style and clinical elaboration require revision, as the reviewers pointed out. authors must follow all required changes and are strongly encouraged to implement all recommended revisions to improve clarity, rigor, and clinical impact.-->--> Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 13 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Additional Editor Comments: This manuscript carries out an external validation of thirteen standard liver volume (SLV) formulae through age-range matching. This clarifies key controversies in SLV estimation and offers methodological and clinical implications for liver surgery and transplantation. While the study has clear scientific merit and innovative value, methodological clarity, content refinement, consistency, writing style and clinical elaboration require revision, as the reviewers pointed out. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The authors examined the agreement between estimated standard liver volume (SLV) and CT-measured total liver volume (TLV) across 13 previously published formulae, using an age-range-matched external validation approach. The main idea of evaluating each formula only within its original derivation age range is important, and the study has merit. However, several points should be clarified before the manuscript can be considered further. Major comments 1. The definition of “healthy individuals” should be clarified more clearly. The manuscript repeatedly describes the validation cohort as “healthy individuals.” However, the actual cohort includes living donor candidates, patients undergoing elective laparoscopic cholecystectomy, and patients who underwent contrast-enhanced CT for acute abdomen, trauma, urologic disease, gonadal disease, and other conditions. In the current form, it is not clear how “healthy” was defined in this study and what exclusion criteria were applied. Please explain in more detail how subjects with possible liver dysfunction, chronic liver disease, nutritional problems, or other conditions that may affect liver volume were assessed and excluded. This point is important because the reliability of the reference TLV depends on the appropriateness of the study population. 2. More methodological detail is needed for CT volumetry. The manuscript states that TLV was measured using contrast-enhanced CT and three-dimensional image analysis software, but the actual measurement procedure is not sufficiently described. Please clarify whether liver segmentation was manual, semi-automatic, or automatic, whether major intrahepatic vessels were included or excluded, and how focal hepatic lesions or other factors potentially affecting liver volume were handled. Since this study is essentially a validation study, the reliability of the CT-based reference standard should be described more clearly. 3. The discussion on race or population differences should be shortened and toned down. The discussion about racial explanation is interesting, but it is somewhat too long and too assertive compared with the main message of this study. Since the present analysis was performed in a single Japanese cohort, the manuscript should be more careful when making broader statements about the absence of population-related differences. A shorter and more focused discussion would improve the balance of the paper. 4. There is an internal contradiction in the Data Availability Statement. In the manuscript, the Data Availability Statement says that all relevant data are within the paper and its Supporting Information files. However, in the later Data availability section, the authors state that the raw data will be made available upon due request from the corresponding author. These two statements are not consistent and should be corrected. Minor comment Some expressions are too rhetorical for a scientific paper. For example, the “Tower of Babel” expression in the Introduction, the Einstein/Newton analogy in the Conclusion, and the quotation from T. S. Eliot may be too literary for this type of article. A more neutral style would be preferable. Reviewer #2: This study innovatively employed an external validation strategy of "age range matching" to systematically evaluate 13 standard liver volume (SLV) formulas. The "Tower of Babel" contradictory conclusions in the previous literature were successfully attributed to the fundamental methodological defect of ignoring the age range of the original derivation of the formula. The Urata (proportional function of body surface area) and Noda (power function of body weight) formulas were found to be most accurate in their original age range and quantified for the first time the linear decline in liver volume after age 50 ata rate of 2.7-2.8% per 5 years. This work not only clarifies the long-standing controversy about SLV estimation, but also establishes a generalizable paradigm for the external validation of regression models, which has direct guiding value for the accurate evaluation of liver transplantation and liver surgery. However, there are still some parts of the article that need to be revised before publication, as follows: 1. It is mentioned in the conclusion (lines 9-10, page 10) that "incorporation of age adjustment into clinical practice may improve transplantation planning." You can add 1-2 sentences here to specify how to do this. For example, would it be recommended to develop a new formula that includes an age factor, or would it be recommended to multiply directly by an age-corrected factor (e.g., every 5 years after >50 years) after using the Urata/Noda formula? Providing a concrete calculation example will make the recommendations more operational. "2. In the discussion of the linear decrease in liver volume with age (lines 1-13 on page 14), the potential clinical implications may be briefly discussed." Might this physiological reduction in "liver reserve", for example, partly explain the phenomenon of reduced tolerance of elderly patients to hepatectomy, chemotherapy, or certain drugs such as acetaminophen? This will link the findings to broader issues in liver surgery and hepatology. 3. In discussing study limitations or future directions (lines 1-10 on page 18), add a paragraph stating that the precise SLV model developed in this study provides a "baseline" or "frame of reference" for individualized treatment evaluation in other liver diseases. "The age-adjusted SLV established in this study provides a more precise baseline for individualized assessment in liver cancer therapy. For example, an accurate expected total liver volume is critical when assessing the impact of targeted or immunotherapy on liver tumor burden. Future studies could explore the integration of such accurate SLV models into the evaluation system of treatment response in HCC, as highlighted in the discussion on overcoming the bottleneck in HCC clinical trials, accurate baseline assessment is a key part of optimizing treatment strategy [DOI: 10.1007/s12072-025-10799-2]. 4. "In addition, accurate SLV is critical for the field of liver transplantation, not only for graft size matching, but also for assessing the 'reserve pool' of liver function recovery after transplantation. In Settings involving ischemia-reperfusion injury (e.g., early after transplantation), the ratio of actual to standard liver volume may serve as an emerging parameter for assessing the balance between liver injury and regenerative capacity. It is worth exploring the potential value of SLV in predicting or assessing the outcome of liver stress conditions such as ischemia-reperfusion injury in the future [PMID: 41582651]." 5. Figure 1: Since there are 13 subgraphs, although the current layout is clear, when the key findings are mentioned in the text (such as the description on page 9 of the existence of "two independent clusters" of the formula of Yoshizumi, Johnson, and Yu), consider slightly highlighting the two clusters in the corresponding subgraphs (Figure 1d-f) with dashed boxes or different colors. To help readers understand this important finding more intuitively. 6. Terminology unification: TLV (total liver volume) is mainly used as the gold standard in this paper. When referring to "CT-measured TLV" in the abstract, results, etc., it can be simplified to "measured TLV" or "CT-volumetry" to keep it concise. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: I thank the authors for their careful revision and detailed point-by-point responses. The revised manuscript has substantially improved and now largely addresses the concerns raised in the previous review. The authors have clarified the study population by replacing the potentially misleading term "healthy individuals" with a more appropriate description, namely individuals without known liver disease, and added detail on the exclusion criteria. The methodological description of CT volumetry has also been improved: liver segmentation was performed by a semi-automated method with manual correction when necessary, and major intrahepatic vessels and focal benign lesions were excluded. These additions make the reference standard more transparent and acceptable for a validation study. The discussion of race or population differences has been shortened and moderated. Although some statements still remain somewhat broad, it is now more balanced and clearly focused on the main message, that differences in derivation age range and age-related hepatic involution are important sources of disagreement among SLV equations. The previous inconsistency in the Data Availability Statement has been corrected, and the supporting information was revised to improve anonymization. The comments from Reviewer 2 have also been generally addressed, including a practical age-adjustment example after 50 years and the clinical implications of age-related liver volume reduction. Overall, the revised manuscript satisfies the major PLOS ONE criteria for publication, and I believe it is suitable for publication. Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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