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Original SubmissionSeptember 25, 2025
Decision Letter - Patricia Fast, Editor

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Thank you for submitting this paper providing Real Wordl Evidence for pneumococcal vaccine effectiveness in Kenya. Please see the comments from Reviewer 1, and additional comments that I have attached as a separate document. Please consider and respond to the comments provided.

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Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review “Pneumococcal conjugate vaccine effectiveness against hypoxemia in children with suspected pneumonia in Kenya; analysis from a real-world sentinel surveillance platform”. This is a nice, well written paper that will add to the literature on this topic. I have a few minor comments for the authors to consider:

What is AFI? Please spell out all your acronyms where they first appear (e.g. AFI appears on line 102)

What was enrolment rate into surveillance study? I see that 17,625 were enrolled, but how many refused enrollment or were otherwise not enrolled? E.g., You note in your limitations section that your enrolling scheme may have missed deaths; can you quantify this and other potential ‘exclusions’? If not, please make this explicit in your results and limitations.

Methods line 109, results line 196. In your methods you report verbal report for data collection, but in the results, you only include verifiable results from a vaccination record. Please clarify, perhaps in your Data Analysis section.

Results, line 205+: This statement is a little unintuitive, and I’m not sure you wish to show the data like this? Consider instead something like: “Hypoxemia was less common among fully vaccinated patients compared to unvaccinated patients (<show data=>)”. The percentages differ only a little, without seeing the absolute numbers or even a p value, it is difficult to understand if these are meaningful differences. To my eye, 93.2% compared to 94.9% is nearly the same.

Table 1: how is “absconded” different from “missing”?</show>

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18 April 2026

Dear PLOS One editor,

Thank you for the opportunity to revise and resubmit our revised manuscript, “Pneumococcal conjugate vaccine effectiveness against hypoxemia in children with suspected pneumonia in Kenya; analysis from a real-world sentinel surveillance platform.

PLOS One” (PONE-D-25-49348). Please find enclosed an updated manuscript with changes made in response to the reviewers’ detailed comments and edits, as well as our point-by-point replies to the comments below. We hope that these changes address the journal editor’s decision and that the article meets the high standards of PLOS One journal. We look forward to hearing back from you.

Sincerely,

Jonas Hines

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Authors reply: We have updated the data availability statement to address this comment and provide information on how other researchers can request data access. The statement now reads, “The data are bound by Government of Kenya provisions, including the Data Protection Act of 2019. This data was accessed via an approved Data Sharing Agreement with ICAP, the data steward. Data access requests require the permission of Kenya Ministry of Health and can be directed to dc2929@cumc.columbia.edu.”

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Authors reply: We recreated the figure in R to use shapefiles from sources that have a CC license. The sources of our shapefiles are:

1. Map of Africa: https://www.naturalearthdata.com/downloads/10m-cultural-vectors/10m-admin-0-details/

2. Map of Kenya (counties): https://data.humdata.org/dataset/cod-ab-ken

3. Lakes: https://energydata.info/dataset/africa-water-bodies).

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Authors reply: There were no such reviewer comments.

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Authors reply: We have reviewed the citations to confirm none have been retracted. One citation (#31) that was a pre-print was replaced with the now published article.

Review Comments to the Author

Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review “Pneumococcal conjugate vaccine effectiveness against hypoxemia in children with suspected pneumonia in Kenya; analysis from a real-world sentinel surveillance platform”. This is a nice, well written paper that will add to the literature on this topic. I have a few minor comments for the authors to consider:

What is AFI? Please spell out all your acronyms where they first appear (e.g. AFI appears on line 102)

Authors reply: We mistakenly omitted the acronym definition on line 94, which has now been updated. Thank you for catching this.

What was enrolment rate into surveillance study? I see that 17,625 were enrolled, but how many refused enrollment or were otherwise not enrolled? E.g., You note in your limitations section that your enrolling scheme may have missed deaths; can you quantify this and other potential ‘exclusions’? If not, please make this explicit in your results and limitations.

Authors reply:

We have added text about the eligibility and enrollment to the beginning of the results, which now reads, “From May 27, 2017 to September 5, 2024, out of 151,546 patients screened , 23,774 (16%) were eligible, of whom 17,625 (74%) were enrolled (percent enrolled range: 58% [2017] to 82% [2021]).”

Additionally, to clarify the second point by the reviewer, we added the text to lines 109-110, “Patients who died before they could be approached by surveillance officers were not eligible for enrolment.” to the description of the surveillance system protocol to ensure this detail is well captured. Additionally, we reinforce this limitation at lines 328-330 ,stating, “Recruiting patients the morning after admission likely excluded those who died soon after presentation to the health facility, biasing toward less severe cases in the surveillance system.”

Methods line 109, results line 196. In your methods you report verbal report for data collection, but in the results, you only include verifiable results from a vaccination record. Please clarify, perhaps in your Data Analysis section.

Authors reply: The surveillance officers document vaccination history preferably from the child health booklet but by participant self-report if the booklet is unavailable. To reduce the risk of bias in our analysis, we restricted to patients who had PCV-10 vaccine history documented in their child health book, as pointed out in this reviewer’s comment. The paragraph from line 154-163 in the data analysis section explains the exclusion criteria for the analysis, including that we “excluded patients with missing vaccination information or vaccination history that was by verbal report alone.”

Results, line 205+: This statement is a little unintuitive, and I’m not sure you wish to show the data like this? Consider instead something like: “Hypoxemia was less common among fully vaccinated patients compared to unvaccinated patients ()”. The percentages differ only a little, without seeing the absolute numbers or even a p value, it is difficult to understand if these are meaningful differences. To my eye, 93.2% compared to 94.9% is nearly the same.

Authors reply: We agree with this comment. The difference in vaccine coverage based on hypoxemia status is small, reflecting the overall high PCV-10 vaccine coverage in the study population. However, 34/65 unvaccinated children were hypoxemic compared to 1,230/3,330 fully vaccinated children (52% vs. 37%). The distinction in these two estimates is in whether column percent (as displayed in Table 1) or row percent are presented. We have removed this sentence from the results narrative since the row percent is presented in the following paragraph; however, the column percent remains in Table 1.

Table 1: how is “absconded” different from “missing”?

Authors reply: Missing refers to missing data on the patient’s outcome whereas absconded is an actual patient outcome in Kenya (equivalent to leaving against medical advice).

Comments from Editor

General: A very convincing, succinct paper. Two or three things might warrant additional comment:

In the discussion—can anything be said about HIV positive children, or are there too few?

Authors reply: Unfortunately, there were too few patients who reported being HIV positive to do more in-depth analysis. HIV status was self-reported and HIV prevalence among children in Kenya is low (0.4% in 0-4 year-olds in the KENPHIA 2018 [https://journals.plos.org/plosone/article?id=10.1371/journal.pone.0277613]), and HIV history in IFBS is self-reported.

It’s interesting that this is one of the highest VE values from RWE reported (per your discussion). Any comment?

Authors reply: We agree that the VE estimate for hypoxemic pneumonia in this study was greater but cautiously compare point estimates between studies with different methodology. these studies point in the same direction of PCV-10 effectiveness is notable itself. We have added the sentence, “Our findings add to the evidence of effectiveness of PCV-10 against pneumonia,” to better describe the topic of this paragraph.

Can you comment on the nutritional/MUAC data? Is this possibly related to having a chronic disease such as HIV, or is this an overwhelming effect of malnutrition wiping out vaccine benefits?

Authors reply: Malnutrition decreases vaccine effectiveness. Although malnutrition is prevalent among CLHIV, our data does not allow us to investigate the relationship between malnutrition and HIV. We have added an additional citation that supports the relationship between malnutrition and reduced immunogenicity of PCV-10.

Line 96—for the past 24 hr.

On Monday, were the records also reviewed and included for the weekend admissions?

Authors reply: Because the surveillance platform does not operate on weekends, on Monday mornings surveillance officers review admission registers for weekend admissions and approach eligible patients if they meet inclusion criteria and have received antimicrobial therapy for < 24 hours. This approach balances comprehensive case capture with the reduced diagnostic yield after antimicrobial treatment begins. We have updated the description of the surveillance platform with the following sentence: “Because surveillance was not conducted on weekends, surveillance officers also reviewed weekend admissions on Monday mornings and approached eligible patients for enrolment if they had received antimicrobial therapy for less than 24 hours.”

Line 102—please define AFI at first use

Authors reply: Please see the above reviewer 1 comment and our reply that address this comment.

Line 109--(either by verbal report or transcribed from the Ministry of Health child health booklet),

Just to be clear, the inclusion criteria were described as requiring the MOH Child Health booklet, but it was not necessarily used to collect the data. Is this correct?

Authors reply: This is correct. We restricted to patients who had vaccine history documented from their child health book. S2 Table contains a sensitivity analysis that includes patients regardless of the source of their vaccination history.

Line 113--(Masimo Rad-5 and Lifebox®)

Were data generated to support the comparability of measurements from these 2 devices?

Authors reply: King et al. established comparability between Masimo and Lifebox devices in Malawi (https://onlinelibr

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