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-->PONE-D-25-34881-->-->Control of deposition-epigenetic alteration of sandbody on uranium mineralization in Toutunhe Formation, Louzhuangzi area, Southern Margin of Junggar Basin, China-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 14 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a well-executed study on uranium mineralization in the Toutunhe Formation, integrating analysis of depositional environments with epigenetic alteration processes. The research is methodologically robust, employing field surveys, petrographic studies, and advanced microscopy techniques to elucidate the controls on uranium mineralization. The findings are novel and make a meaningful contribution to the understanding of sandstone-type uranium deposits. The study effectively addresses key questions about the depositional and epigenetic factors influencing uranium mineralization. The use of SEM, EMPA, and FIB-TEM provides detailed insights into uranium occurrence and mineral associations, where the identification of brannerite and the proposed role of hydrocarbon reduction are notable advantages. The manuscript is well-organized, with logical flow and clear presentation of results. Some Suggestions for Improvement: Thermal Fluids: Further discussion on the origin and properties of thermal fluids would enhance the understanding of their role in mineralization. Hydrocarbon Evidence: Additional data, such as fluid inclusions with more analysis, could strengthen the hydrocarbon reduction hypothesis. Some bulk sample analyses are needed to give an overview about the nature of the samples and their matrix. Reviewer #2: General Evaluation The manuscript offers a detailed geological, sedimentological, and mineralogical study of uranium mineralization in the Toutunhe Formation, Junggar Basin, using fieldwork and microanalytical methods. Although it has scientific value and potential to advance knowledge on sandstone-type uranium deposits, significant revisions are needed before it is suitable for publication in PLOS One. Major Points for Revision 1. The introduction should clearly state the research objectives and hypotheses to guide the reader. 2. The manuscript lacks a clear, standalone methodology section, making it hard to separate methods from background and results. A dedicated “Materials and Methods” section with labeled subsections is recommended for clarity. 3. The manuscript lacks detailed geochemical analysis, such as elemental concentrations, ratios, or diagrams (e.g., Harker or discrimination plots) that could support the interpretation of provenance, alteration, and uranium enrichment processes. 4. The study heavily relies on SEM, EMPA, and FIB-TEM observations. However, no XRD or quantitative mineral abundance data are provided. Including XRD would validate the qualitative and semi-quantitative identification of mineralogical phases within crystalline materials. 5. The Results section in the manuscript is informative but not clearly delineated as a standalone section. The findings (e.g., petrography, depositional environment, uranium mineralization) are integrated within broader descriptive sections, making it hard to distinguish between background, methodology, and results. 5.1 The text mentions the presence of pyrite and organic debris but does not sufficiently explore their role in uranium precipitation. A more focused discussion on their redox buffering capacity is recommended. 5.2 The manuscript provides Q/ (F+R) ratios to indicate compositional maturity, but the significance of these values in the context of uranium mobility and deposition should be elaborated. 5.3 In several parts of the manuscript, it is unclear whether certain alterations (e.g., chloritization, sericitization) are of early diagenetic or late-stage epigenetic origin. 6. The manuscript lacks a clearly explained discussion section. To improve scientific rigor, the authors should provide a separate and well-structured discussion that interprets key findings, compares them with previous studies, and explains their implications for uranium mineralization processes. 7. Summarize key findings and explicitly discuss how the study informs future uranium exploration efforts in the Junggar Basin and comparable basins. 8. 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-->PONE-D-25-34881R1-->-->Control of deposition-epigenetic alteration of sandbody on uranium mineralization in Toutunhe Formation, Louzhuangzi area, Southern Margin of Junggar Basin, China-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Qing Wang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 06 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: Partly ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes Reviewer #5: No ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: The authors have addressed the comments appropriately, and the manuscript is now suitable for publication. Reviewer #3: Review of the manuscript titled “Control of deposition-epigenetic alteration of sandbody on uranium mineralization in Toutunhe Formation, Louzhuangzi area, Southern Margin of Junggar Basin, China”, submitted to the journal “Plos One”. - Line 15: Remove “shows” and use has instead of have: “In recent years, some uranium mineralization with industrial values has been discovered in ….” - Line 21: use “in the Toutunhe Formation (J2t) of the Louzhuangzi area …”, and you can remove “of the Louzhuangzi area” from line 27. - Line 36: Turpan-Hami, Songliao Basins, and the northern… - Line 41: mineralizations - Lines 49-53: The sentence is very long. - Line 54: …during the period from the Late Cretaceous to the Paleogene. The Middle and… - Line 78: Use the full name for Si, P and Y. - Line 79-82: The sentence is very long. - Line 81: determines that the mineralization… - Lines 86-94: this is a paragraph that should consist of at least 3 sentences, not one sentence. Avoid long sentences. Same in lines 110-116, divide the paragraph into sentences. - Line 102: …mineralization (Fig 19). Is it Figure 19 or Reference 19? - Line 124: the orientation “N-WW” seems incorrect. - The quality of most of your Figures is bad. The content, essentially the texts, is unreadable (e.g., Figures 1, 2, 8, 9, 13, 14? 18). Please provide a high-quality version of your Figures. - Line 150: use “stratigraphic column of Louzhuangzi area…” instead of “Composite stratigraphic column of Louzhuangzi area…” - Methods and Materials: label the subheads “Fieldwork and sampling, Petrographic and mineralogical analysis…” as 3.1; 3.2; … - Adding some field or lab pictures may be useful. - Lines 191, 193: I ask if the Figures cited are Figures 7A, 7B? - Lines 201: I ask if the Figure cited is Figure 12? - Please revise the citation of your figures, and organize them following the order of their appearance in the text. - Line 239: use micrometer symbol “μm” not “um” for 2600um, 500 and 1500um,… - Lines 340-344: The sentence “The ore-bearing main… bar developed” is very long. Same for the next one. Same for the sentence in lines 609-614. - Line 376: “document”? You want to say “shows”? - It is recommended to discuss the main strengths and limitations of this work. - Overall, the manuscript must be revised before sending it for the next review. Reviewer #4: Reviewer #1: Comments The abstract lacks some key aspects, including Quantify: Add numbers to findings (e.g., "〖"CO" 〗_2purity >95%"). Clarify: Define the specific "controversy" being addressed. Comments Keywords: The authors may consider changing some of the keywords using one of the suggestions below: • Sandstone-type uranium deposits (Standardized classification) • Braided river delta (Specific depositional micro-facies from your abstract) • Hydrocarbon-mediated reduction (The specific "how" of your mineralization) • FIB-TEM/SEM analysis (Specific high-end methodology) • Toutunhe Formation (Necessary stratigraphic marker) • Redox transition zone (The geochemical environment) • Northwest China (Broader geographic context to reach a wider audience) Comments Are all the pictures used here original? If you take a random picture, you must have permission before using it. Please state what role the funders took in the study. If the funders had no role, please state: "The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript." If this statement is not correct, you must amend it as needed. And include it in the cover letter, that will be enough. Comments Introduction: The text needs to be solidified by adding more references; each statement requires supporting references. 5. Comments Methodology: If it's possible, the author can add a graphical abstract. Reviewer #5: Comments on: Control of deposition–epigenetic alteration of sandstone units on uranium mineralization in the Toutunhe Formation, Louzhuangzi area, Southern Margin of the Junggar Basin, China This manuscript addresses an important and enduring question in sandstone-type uranium geology: how depositional architecture interacts with later epigenetic processes to control uranium mineralization. The Louzhuangzi area is, in principle, a suitable case study, and the authors have assembled a substantial dataset that includes petrography, SEM-EDS, EPMA, and TEM observations. These efforts are commendable. However, in its current form, the manuscript is weakened by several significant technical limitations, interpretive overreach, and unresolved procedural concerns. As a result, the conclusions extend beyond what the available data can reliably support. At the most basic level, the sedimentological framework is not sufficiently developed to underpin the interpretations that follow. The manuscript asserts a transition from a gravelly braided river system in the lower Toutunhe Formation to a meandering river system in the upper part, yet this distinction is largely stated rather than demonstrated. Although sedimentary structures such as cross-bedding and erosional contacts are described in detail, key architectural elements that distinguish braided from meandering systems—such as channel geometry, accretion styles, facies proportions, paleocurrent patterns, and systematic grain-size trends—are not presented. In the absence of paleocurrent data, fining-upward successions, or facies architecture diagrams, the depositional interpretations remain ambiguous. This limitation becomes particularly important when uranium mineralization is later linked to specific “lag deposits” and depositional microfacies. While several microfacies are listed, they are neither mapped nor quantified, and it is unclear which facies host uranium preferentially, or how consistently this relationship holds across the study area. Consequently, the central claim that depositional controls govern uranium distribution lacks a clearly demonstrated sedimentological basis. More serious concerns arise with the mineralogical characterization of uranium occurrence states. The manuscript distinguishes among coffinite, pitchblende, brannerite, and “dispersed adsorbed uranium,” yet these categories are not supported by sufficiently rigorous mineralogical criteria. Coffinite and pitchblende are differentiated primarily on the basis of SiO₂ content, despite substantial compositional overlap and the absence of X-ray diffraction data. Several analyses attributed to coffinite approach pitchblende compositions, rendering phase identification uncertain. This uncertainty carries over into the classification of “dispersed adsorbed uranium,” which is defined as nanoscale uranium whose mineral type cannot be confirmed. If the mineralogical identity is unknown, it is difficult to justify excluding poorly crystalline or nanoscale coffinite and pitchblende, particularly when the high TiO₂ contents of these analyses suggest association with titanium oxides rather than true adsorption. Indeed, the manuscript later acknowledges that such uranium may occur as nanoscale minerals attached to Ti-oxide dissolution pores, which directly conflicts with its earlier treatment as a distinct occurrence state. The identification of brannerite is presented as a key novel contribution, yet it is among the least convincing aspects of the study. Reported compositions deviate from ideal brannerite stoichiometry, and no crystallographic confirmation is provided. Without selected-area electron diffraction or clear lattice-fringe imaging demonstrating the UTi₂O₆ structure, alternative interpretations—such as intergrowths of uranium phases with titanium oxides—cannot be excluded. Given the prominence of this claim, its evidentiary basis needs to be significantly strengthened. Interpretations of alteration zonation and redox evolution are similarly overstated. Figures showing the spatial relationships among oxidation fronts, depositional facies, and mineralization combine multiple data types without indicating data density or confidence levels. In several areas, particularly in the western part of the study area, interpretations appear to rely on sparse drilling, yet are presented as regionally robust. The interpretation of extensive interlayer oxidation is based largely on color changes and uranium anomalies, without supporting geochemical redox indicators, systematic documentation of alteration mineral assemblages, or mass-balance considerations. As a result, the conclusion that interlayer oxidation controlled uranium mineralization becomes circular: oxidation is inferred from visual criteria associated with uranium enrichment, and the spatial coincidence is then taken as evidence of genetic control. Alternative scenarios, such as post-mineralization oxidation, are not explored in depth, and no temporal constraints are provided to distinguish cause from effect. A similar pattern appears in the discussion of sulfurization and hydrocarbon-related reduction. The alteration of titanium oxides and the presence of pyrite are convincingly documented, and the regional context of hydrocarbon systems is appropriately noted. However, the inference that H₂S and CH₄ derived from deep oil and gas leakage were the primary reducing agents responsible for uranium precipitation is not directly supported by the data presented. No sulfur isotope analyses, organic geochemical data, or temporal relationships between hydrocarbon migration and uranium mineralization are provided. Instead, the argument relies on regional analogies and external studies, while acknowledging limitations in the current dataset. If hydrocarbon reduction is to be treated as a central genetic mechanism, it requires primary evidence within this study. In a broader scientific context, the manuscript does not clearly articulate what insights from Louzhuangzi can be generalized to other sandstone-type uranium systems. Concepts such as multi-stage alteration, facies control on mineralization, and redox-driven uranium precipitation are well established. The proposed novelty lies in their specific combination and sequence at Louzhuangzi, yet these stages are neither independently dated nor constrained by geochemical or isotopic data. Thermal fluids are invoked without temperature or compositional constraints, hydrocarbons without diagnostic geochemical fingerprints, and basin-scale flow systems without hydrological evidence. Consequently, the proposed model reads more as a plausible narrative than a tested framework. Several procedural and ethical issues further compound these scientific concerns. Changes in authors are not explained and should be transparently addressed in the cover letter and authorship declarations. I noticed that two additional authors have been added to the revised manuscript. In addition, reliance on unpublished or forthcoming institutional studies to support key interpretations is inappropriate when such evidence is central to the manuscript’s conclusions. Interpretations should stand on data that are accessible and peer-reviewed. In summary, this manuscript contains valuable observations and has the potential to contribute meaningfully to the understanding of sandstone-type uranium mineralization. However, substantial revisions are required. Core mineralogical identifications must be validated using XRD and crystallographic TEM techniques; alteration models must be supported by geochemical and temporal constraints; sedimentological interpretations must be grounded in quantitative facies and architectural analyses; and speculative elements must be clearly separated from evidence-based conclusions. Until these issues are addressed, the manuscript’s central claims remain insufficiently supported, limiting its reliability and broader applicability. Below I point attention to some of these issues for authors’ and editor’s reference. 1. Severe Introduction Deficiencies The introduction (lines 32-105) lacks: • Clear knowledge gaps: What specifically is unknown about this deposit type? • Theoretical framework: No explicit statement of competing hypotheses • Literature synthesis: References are listed without critical evaluation of conflicting interpretations The manuscript will benefit from a more robust introduction, if authors can address the concerns above. 2. Methods Section (lines 152-181) Critical missing elements even after revision: • Sample selection criteria and representativenes. • Sampling Strategy Not Justified • Table 1 lists samples from various depths (24.84m to 871.50m) and drill holes. • No explanation of selection criteria • No discussion of spatial representativeness • Samples concentrated in specific holes (e.g., 6 samples from ZK6-2, only 1 from ZK3-3) • Potential sampling bias need to be addressed • Quality control procedures • Detection limits for EMPA analyses • Reproducibility assessment EMPA Data Quality Issues (Table 2): • Totals range from 84.01% to 97.14% - some analyses are poor quality • No standard reference materials mentioned • Single-point analyses without replication • No discussion of analytical uncertainty • Sub-optimal totals (e.g., 84.01% for brannerite) suggest volatile loss or inappropriate analytical conditions Missing Critical Techniques: The authors acknowledge (only after review) absence of: • XRD - fundamental for phase identification • Fluid inclusions - critical for understanding ore-forming fluids • Bulk geochemistry - necessary for provenance and alteration assessment • Isotopic data - essential for fluid source and timing constraints The Response to Reviewers states: "Due to the limited quantity of samples available for destructive analysis, XRD analysis was not conducted". This is scientifically unacceptable because: • XRD requires minimal sample (~100mg) • The study collected 22 samples (Table 1) • XRD is non-negotiable for validating mineral identifications • Claims about "chlorite/smectite mixed layer minerals" cannot be confirmed without XRD 3. Results-Discussion Conflation Despite revision, interpretive statements remain embedded in Results: • Lines 314-315: "indicating that the type of the sandstone is greywacke and the sandbodies were formed in a proximal deposit environment" - this is interpretation • Lines 345-361: Depositional environment interpretation mixed with descriptive sedimentology • Lines 520-528: Genetic interpretations presented as observations Brannerite Identification - Overstated Certainty The manuscript claims (lines 457-467) definitive brannerite identification, but: • Evidence presented: Only EDS element mapping showing Ti and U co-distribution • Missing: Electron diffraction patterns confirming brannerite crystal structure • TEM images (Fig. 11B-C): Show "complexly interwoven acicular aggregates" but lack lattice fringe imaging • Chemical composition (Table 2): TiO₂/UO₂ ratios (average 33.20%/39.62%) deviate from stoichiometric UTi₂O₆ (expected ~29.7%/63.3%) Critical issue: The text contradicts itself - lines 467 states this is "nanoscale brannerite aggregate, rather than nanoscale coffinite or pitchblende associated with titanium oxides," but the evidence for this distinction is not compelling without crystallographic data. 4. INTERPRETIVE WEAKNESSES i. "Thermal Fluids" - Unsupported Speculation The manuscript repeatedly invokes "thermal fluids" (lines 29-30, 101, 731-744, 754) but: Evidence provided: • Clay mineral assemblages (chlorite, chlorite-smectite) • Brannerite occurrence • Sulfurization features Problems: • These features can form at diagenetic temperatures (<100°C) • No temperature constraints whatsoever • No fluid inclusion data • No isotopic evidence for deep fluid sources • The Discussion (lines 731-744) is essentially an admission that thermal fluids are speculative The authors state (Response to Reviewers): "due to the lack of direct fluid inclusion or isotopic data, the properties and pathways of these thermal fluids cannot be definitively identified" Then why make it a central interpretive element? This represents speculation presented as conclusion. ii. Hydrocarbon Reduction - Circumstantial Evidence The manuscript argues (lines 69-71, 641-643, 677-690) that H₂S and CH₄ from hydrocarbon leakage caused reduction, based on: • Presence of pyrite and bitumen • Regional petroleum geology • Citation of He et al. (2024) Missing: • Direct evidence of hydrocarbon fluid inclusions • Organic geochemistry linking bitumen to deep sources • Sulfur isotope data to constrain H₂S sources (biological vs. thermochemical) • Temporal constraints on hydrocarbon migration vs. uranium precipitation Reviewer 1 noted: "Additional data, such as fluid inclusions with more analysis, could strengthen the hydrocarbon reduction hypothesis" Authors' response: Acknowledge limitation and cite He et al. (2024) for supporting evidence Problem: This effectively outsources key evidence to another study while maintaining the interpretation as a primary conclusion. iii. Depositional Facies Analysis - Oversimplified The depositional environment interpretation (Section 4.2, lines 305-396) suffers from: • Sedimentary structures described but not systematically analyzed: No paleocurrent data, no grain size distribution analysis, no facies associations diagram • Uncritical facies assignment: E.g., "flaser bedding... mainly formed by migration and deposition... in meandering river channel" (lines 317-320) - but flaser bedding forms in tidal settings and other environments • Missing quantitative data: No channel dimensions, no sand/mud ratios, no architectural element analysis • References misapplied: Folk (1968) cited for sedimentary environments (line 344) when it's a textural classification scheme 5. DATA PRESENTATION ISSUES 1. Table 2 - Serious Problems Compositional Data: • 35 analyses presented without context (which samples? which grains?) • Mineral types assigned post-hoc based on composition • No clear criteria for distinguishing "dispersed adsorbed uranium" (5 analyses) from coffinite (16 analyses) • Some "coffinite" analyses have very low SiO₂ (9.33%) approaching pitchblende composition Statistical treatment absent: • No mean ± standard deviation • No compositional ranges by deposit location • No correlation analysis (e.g., UO₂ vs. TiO₂) 6. DISCUSSION SECTION - SUPERFICIAL SYNTHESIS The Discussion (added/restructured after revision, lines 646-755) has improved structure but remains problematic: Section 5.1 (Sedimentary control): • States braided channel facies are primary hosts (correct) • Comparison with Ordos, Songliao, Texas deposits mentioned but not developed • Missing: Why is Toutunhe Formation mineralization similar/different from these analogues? Section 5.2 (Compositional maturity): • Q/(F+R) ratios discussed (lines 657-675) • Links low maturity to uranium mobility - reasonable • Missing: Comparison with unmineralized Toutunhe sandstones - are compositional differences significant? Section 5.3 (Redox buffering): • Argues pyrite and organics reduced U⁶⁺ to U⁴⁺ • Problem: This is standard ore-forming process - what's specific to Louzhuangzi? • References [39-43] cited but not critically evaluated Section 5.4 (Alteration timing): • Distinguishes early diagenetic from epigenetic alteration • Major gap: No geochronology, no cross-cutting relationships systematically documented • Relies on textural interpretation alone Section 5.5 (Future geochemical work): • This is not discussion - it's an admission of missing data • Acknowledges need for major/trace elements, REE, Ti/Zr, Th/U ratios • Should have been done before publication Section 5.6 (Thermal fluids origin): • Essentially states "we don't know" (lines 731-744) • Speculation about basin-centered flow, magmatic underplating • No new insight beyond acknowledging uncertainty Section 5.7 (Mineralization model): • Figure 19 presents conceptual model • Problem: Model incorporates unvalidated elements (thermal fluids, hydrocarbon timing) • Three-stage process (oxidation → thermal overprint → hydrocarbon reduction) is plausible but not demonstrated 7. WRITING QUALITY AND PRESENTATION Pervasive Issues: i. Jargon and unclear terminology: o "Deposition-epigenetic alteration" (title) - awkward phrasing o "Gravel braided river channel lag deposits" (line 28) - "gravel braided river" is non-standard (should be "gravelly braided river") o "Uranium-bearing sandbody" - "sandbody" is informal; use "sandstone unit" ii. Grammatical errors (examples): o Line 88: "the properties of the ore-forming fluids have been determined" - overstated; properties remain uncertain o Line 314: "indicating that the type of the sandstone is greywacke" - awkward construction o Line 474: "The dispersed adsorbed uranium is actually the nano-scale uranium minerals" - "is actually" undermines precision iii. Redundancy: o Extensive description of sedimentary structures (lines 196-204, 318-333, 344-361) could be condensed o Repeated statements about gray/grayish-white alteration zones (lines 578-583, 632-635, 687-690) ********** -->7. 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Depositional architecture and post-depositional alteration of the Toutunhe Formation (J2t) in the Louzhuangzi area, Southern Junggar Basin: Implications for uranium mineralization PONE-D-25-34881R3 Dear Dr. Qing Wang, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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Key sections such as the Abstract, Introduction, Geological Background, and Methods are now more clearly written and better structured. The addition of quantitative data, improved sampling description, and integrated analytical techniques (petrography, SEM, EPMA, and FIB–TEM) significantly strengthens the study and enhances its contribution to understanding sandstone-hosted uranium mineralization in the southern Junggar Basin. However, several important issues still require further attention before the manuscript can be considered fully suitable for publication: 1. The sedimentological interpretation has improved, but the overall sedimentological rigor remains moderate. Several depositional facies interpretations would benefit from clearer diagnostic criteria and stronger support from sedimentary structures, grain-size characteristics, and architectural relationships. A more process-based facies analysis would strengthen this section considerably. 2. Some interpretative statements are still included within the Results section. Separating observational data more clearly from interpretation/discussion would improve both the scientific clarity and the structure of the manuscript. 3. Although the Discussion section is improved, some interpretations are still not sufficiently supported by the presented petrographic, mineralogical, and sedimentological data. The discussion would benefit from stronger and more explicit connections between the analytical results and the proposed geological interpretations. 4. The proposed genetic model is interesting and has improved significantly; however, the relationships among sediment deposition, diagenesis, oxidation, hydrothermal alteration, fluid evolution, and uranium precipitation are still not fully constrained. 5. The integration between micro-scale mineralogical observations and basin-scale geological processes remains somewhat inferential. Additional discussion linking permeability architecture, fluid migration pathways, redox evolution, alteration processes, and uranium mineralization would improve the robustness of the proposed model. 6. The language quality has improved considerably, but the manuscript still contains occasional grammatical inconsistencies, awkward sentence construction, repetitive wording, and several overly long sentences. A final professional English language edit is recommended before acceptance. Overall, with additional revisions focused on strengthening the evidence-based discussion, improving sedimentological interpretation, clarifying the linkage between results and interpretations/discussion, and refining the language, the manuscript could become suitable for publication in PLOS ONE. Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). 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