Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionMarch 13, 2026 |
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This manuscript presents the results of a cross-sectional web-based free-listing survey among adults commonly underrepresented in clinical research to elicit perceptions and emotions regarding participation in research. Understanding research participation, especially among underrepresented populations is an important issue. This study is novel as it brings attention to a qualitative methodology “freelisting” not commonly used to study research participation. Overall, the manuscript is concise and very well-written. Below, I am listing a few comments to further strengthen the accuracy of the paper. 1. In the Discussion section, the authors state “These findings suggest that we, as investigators and research teams, need to enhance our efforts to recruit representative populations into our studies, thereby ensuring that all patient groups have equal opportunities to participate.7,27-33” While the very broad statement in itself is not incorrect, I think this is not something that the results suggests. This should either be removed or reworded. 2. I also think it is interesting that the authors don’t discuss some of the major negative salient terms which stood out for almost all groups and questions, including scary, effort, lab rats. 3. One of the salient terms that stood out to me was “scary”, which is a strong negative emotion, which I think is a bit surprising. Interestingly, when I looked at the example free listing question, the topic was “scary movie” and some of the example words listed were “scary”, “having nightmares”, “afraid”, “scared”. All of these exact example words could then also be found listed under the parent terms in Appendix 2. I understand that the researchers chose a topic unrelated to research, but I think it might have affected the results, and this should be acknowledged. 4. In terms of limitations, I think it would be good to highlight that the study looked at several important underrepresented populations, but the analysis did not include lower socioeconomic status. In fact, the survey did not collect information on, for example, education. I think this should be acknowledged and discussed. 5. Have the authors considered intersectionality of the included underrepresented populations? I am not sure if the n’s would be large enough but could be discussed as future direction. Reviewer #2: This manuscript describes the use of freelisting to investigate contemporary barriers to research participation by underrepresented groups. While the use of this methodology is new to this type of investigation, the results obtained reproduce the results of past studies using other methods (many are appropriately cited). Thus, new understandings of the “mechanisms of lack of representation (awkward wording)” are not revealed. Instead, the data support the conclusion that contemporary perceptions of research participation by a small, but appropriately representative, number of individuals who are underrepresented in clinical studies remain the same decades after the pioneering studies that elucidated them. The finding that perceptions remain the same for those with no first-hand experience with clinical research or recruitment efforts is worthy of publication. It demonstrates that despite changes in NIH policy and national efforts to improve diversity in research participation, they continue to be largely ineffective as published in PLoS medicine over a decade ago (Oh et al., 2015). This ineffectiveness limits the rigor and impact of clinical and biomedical research, and this scientific fact must be reiterated in the scientific literature to reach multiple audiences. Moreover, the somewhat novel finding in this manuscript that perceptions of research improved for underrepresented individuals with first-hand experience in a clinical study and/or recruitment encounter is significant. This result increases the evidence-base for increased recruitment efforts using community-engaged tools as discussed by the authors. Taken together, the manuscript should be revised to better highlight these conclusions from the data presented. Other results that warrant publication are the timeliness of the work, the use of a new methodology for gaining community insight about research participation, and the comparison across populations groups. Participant responses were collected from May-September 2023, a few years after the murder of George Floyd that prompted greater attention to ‘race’ and health, and before inauguration of the current president. Thus, this cross-sectional study captures a unique period in U.S. history. It also captures perspectives and sentiments across populations who are underrepresented in research, which is somewhat novel given that most studies on this topic study one population or another. The fact that only 101 responses were collected in 5 months-time through implementation of freelisting (a low burden activity with a $25 incentive) is a significant result because it exemplifies the outcome of continued negative perceptions towards research in 2023 at the multiple sites for the study. At these sites, the patient/client demographics should be available and the authors could estimate how many eligible individuals were reached in the 5 months of the study to obtain only 101 responses (i.e., quasi response rate). Given that freelisting appears to be a relativity low cost, low resource tool for collecting community insight, it will be interesting to see how these perceptions change after the inauguration of the new president in 2024. The authors may consider adding their expectations to the discussion section. Finally, with respect to categorization of terms and phrases as positive, neutral, or negative it is necessary to note the following. First, it appears to be a strength of freelisting that the terms and phrases that are collected can be easily sorted. However, a framework for the sorting of terms and phrases collected in this study as positive, neutral, or negative is not provided. 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Perceptions of research participation among underrepresented groups: Insights using freelisting methodology PONE-D-26-11831R1 Dear Dr. Kohn, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information’ link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Vijayalakshmi Kakulapati, Ph.D Academic Editor PLOS One -->Comments to the Author --> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->--> |
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