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| Original SubmissionMarch 14, 2026 |
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-->PONE-D-26-09926-->-->MAVS is Important for Antiviral Defense Against Influenza A Virus in a Human Respiratory Epithelium Model-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Holm, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jun 05 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear authors, After careful consideration and based on the opinion of previous and new reviewers, we believe that your article "MAVS is Important for Antiviral Defense Against Influenza A Virus in a Human Respiratory Epithelium Model" is of enough quality and impact for publication in PLoS One, pending on completion of some modifications. As you can see on the reviewers comments, they believe further discussion on the limitations of the virus strains employed, the method use to quantify viral replication and extend of gene knock out are needed. In addition, some text corrections are proposed. Kind regards, [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Interferon-based antiviral immunity is clearly of fundamental importance and has been extensively demonstrated in humans, mouse models, and cultured cell line systems. However, much less is known about how interferon-mediated immunity functions in the nasal mucosal epithelium, which serves as the initial physical barrier encountered by inhaled viruses. In mouse models, interferon-producing immune cells often do not accumulate at sites of infection immediately during the earliest phase of infection, highlighting the importance of understanding the intrinsic antiviral capacity of the nasal epithelium itself. In this study, the authors used electroporation to generate MAVS-ko nasal epithelial cultures and demonstrated the critical role of MAVS in interferon responses and antiviral defense. Overall, the methodology established here will provide an important foundation for future studies in this field. Major comments 1. The use of the IAV PR8 strain somewhat limits the relevance of this study to influenza virus infection in its more physiological context. However, the inclusion of SeV partially addresses this limitation and suggests that the observed effect is not restricted to influenza virus alone. This point would be worth discussing more explicitly in the Discussion. 2. Genetic manipulation in primary human nasal epithelial cells is more challenging than is often appreciated. Electroporation can compromise stemness and differentiation capacity to some extent. We therefore appreciate the authors’ transparent presentation of the finding that MAVS knockout was also associated with reduced MUC5AC expression. However, under these conditions, it is difficult to determine whether this reduction reflects impaired differentiation or a direct role of MAVS in epithelial development. It is unfortunate that cilia staining was not performed in the MAVS-knockout nasal epithelial cultures, as this would have helped assess whether epithelial differentiation remained intact. 3. As the authors note in the Discussion, it is unfortunate that the immunofluorescence analysis did not include co-staining with cilia markers and MUC5AC. Such experiments would likely have provided more informative insight into the epithelial phenotype. 4. I suggest expanding the Discussion to emphasize the following point: mouse studies have firmly established the importance of interferon responses in antiviral defense. However, in vivo, the interplay among nasal epithelial cells, innate immune cells, and adaptive immune cells makes it difficult to define the tissue-specific and time-dependent contributions of interferon-mediated antiviral activity. In this context, the current experimental system provides a particularly direct approach to examine the intrinsic antiviral capacity of the nasal epithelium, the first respiratory tissue encountered by inhaled viruses, during the first 24 to 48 hours of infection before substantial immune cell recruitment occurs. Minor comment Because CC10/SCUB1A1 is used here as a club cell marker, it would be helpful to define this explicitly in the main text rather than only in the figure legend. Reviewer #2: This study provides a compelling investigation into the role of MAVS in the antiviral response to influenza A, distinguished by its use of a highly physiological HAE-ALI model. The methodological integration of CRISPR-Cas9-mediated gene disruption in primary human cells is a significant strength, and the data generally support the authors' conclusions. The manuscript is technically sound and well-written. To maximize the impact of the work, the authors should provide further clarity on the limitations of the viral replication assays, address the uniformity of gene editing, and justify the selection of virus strains. Since many of my concerns (outlined below) have been clearly acknowledged as limitations in the Discussion, I recommend accepting the manuscript for publication after minor modification. Major Comments 1- The primary novelty of the study lies in the use of a primary human respiratory epithelium model to interrogate MAVS function, rather than in uncovering a fundamentally new signaling mechanism. This should be emphasized clearly in the Introduction and Discussion to appropriately frame the contribution. While the conclusion that MAVS is non-redundant is supported within this model, caution should be taken when extrapolating this conclusion beyond epithelial-only systems. 2- Increased viral gene expression and NS1 protein abundance suggest enhanced viral replication in MAVS KO cultures. However, the absence of direct quantification of infectious viral titers (e.g., plaque assay or TCID50) limits the strength of this conclusion. 3- Residual MAVS expression is detectable by Western blot, suggesting incomplete knockout. Given the heterogeneity of HAE-ALI cultures, the lack of cell-type–specific assessment of knockout efficiency (e.g., ciliated vs. secretory cells) should be acknowledged as a limitation, particularly because influenza virus displays cell-type–dependent tropism. 4- The use of the laboratory-adapted A/PR/8/34 strain is reasonable for mechanistic studies, but it may not fully capture host–pathogen interactions relevant to contemporary human influenza viruses. The Discussion would benefit from explicitly stating this limitation and suggesting that future studies validate findings using clinical isolates. 5- The study is limited to two donors of the same sex. While understandable given the complexity of the model, this should be stated explicitly as a limitation. 6- Supplementary Figure F should be “…for 16 h”. In addition, it is unclear what distinguishes Fig. 2A from Supplementary Figure A, as well as Fig. 2C from Supplementary Figure B. Please clarify these differences explicitly in the figure legends. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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