Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionApril 14, 2026 |
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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: This is a prospective, single-center observational study in which systemic catecholamine concentrations were measured in fifteen procedures undergoing hepatic chemo saturation. The objective appears to be determining if the activated charcoal filter used during chemo saturation absorb catecholamines leading to profound hemodynamic instability? The primary outcome was the within-procedure change in catecholamine concentrations across the activated charcoal filter, quantified by paired pre-filter and post-filter plasma levels of noradrenaline, adrenaline, and dopamine during ECC (times T2.1 vs. T2.2). There were five secondary outcomes. 1. Please determine if multiple comparison adjustments to the p-values for the multiple secondary outcomes are needed. All tables appear to be within any adjustment needed. 2. There was no motivation for sample size , this being an observational study. However, it would have been helpful to determine the adequacy of the sample size withing margin of error expectations as is not uncommon for this type of research and since inferential p-values are presented. They included 15 chemo saturation procedures in 12 individual patients in the analysis. The statistical analysis is routine for the small sample consisting of continuous variables e reported as non parametric median and interquartile range (IQR). Categorical variables are reported as absolute and relative frequencies. Differences in catecholamine levels before and after filtration were analyzed using inferential non-parametric methods. For comparisons across multiple time points, the Friedman test was applied. For pairwise comparisons between pre- and post-filtration measurements, the Wilcoxon signed-rank test was used. To estimate the magnitude of the paired differences, the Hodges–Lehmann estimator with corresponding 95% confidence intervals (CI) was calculated. All the analyses were appropriate and well applied. The paper was well written from a statistical perspective and the tables and figures were well formatted and interpretable. The limitations section is incomplete. 3. Since the sample is so small a warning should be included with the limitations that this study is more observational with small sample size. Thus, the p-values should be interpreted with caution. Reviewer #2: The manuscript addresses a clinically relevant question related to hemodynamic instability during hepatic chemosaturation. The topic is of interest, as it attempts to provide a mechanistic explanation for a well-recognized clinical phenomenon. The study is generally well organized and based on prospective data collection. The manuscript does not provide a justification for the sample size. It appears that this study was conducted as an exploratory observational cohort without a formal sample size calculation. The authors should clarify whether a priori power analysis was performed. If not, this should be explicitly stated, and the exploratory nature of the study should be emphasized. Please provide a detailed explanation of the mechanism. The possible reasons why it only affects the concentration of norepinephrine need to be further elaborated. Several minor language and formatting issues should be addressed. For example, an incorrect date is reported (“31.11.2025”), and there are inconsistencies in terminology (noradrenaline vs. norepinephrine). Additionally, minor formatting issues such as missing spaces between values and units (e.g., “16mmHg”) and incorrect confidence interval ordering should be corrected. These issues do not affect the scientific content but should be revised for clarity and accuracy. Reviewer #3: Dear authors, here you receive my comment regarding the manuscript with the title “Activated charcoal filtration profoundly alters systemic noradrenaline concentrations during hepatic chemosaturation: a prospective cohort study”. With number PONE-D-26-16601. The authors present their results of clinical trial. The study was approved by the local medical ethical committee with the number provided and the study was registered with the German Clinical Trials Registry. The article is well described and the question” Does the activated charcoal filter used during chemosaturation absorb catecholamines leading to profound hemodynamic instability? ”is studied and answered. The study is presented straight forward and easy to understand. However, I have some remarks, that maybe after answering or leading to adaptions my improve further understanding. PGE 5 Line 105-114 and P7 L168-171:When the authors are able to just provide a figure or drawing to illustrate the ECC and the blood flow during the procedure, as this could benefit understanding for readers not too familiar with ECC-proceedings? Introduction/Methods: For instance, it is not completely clear enough whether during the balloon occlusion blood form the lower extremities, i.e. organs below liver/abdominal could still reach the right atrium, by an installed bypass bypassing the 2 ballons (connection temporary IVC-RA?). When not, then only he reduction of liver outflow+ the loss of preload from extremities and abdomen would be able to at least decrease cardiac output (C.O) by >20%. Did you measure this by using apparatus tot keep track on circulatory parameters like SVR/PAP, and or C.O.? Were melphalan levels also measure pre- and post-ECC by HPLC also? What are the possible differences betweenT1/2 of norepinephrine vs. epinephrine and dopamine, and could this have influenced the results? P6 here L144-148 all the exclusion criteria are listed. For instance pheochromocytoma was an exclusion. Of course anybody will understand this exogenous source of uncontrollable inotropic levels. Is it the case, that you only include patients with uveal melanoma (as stated in Table1)? Then this was maybe part of the inclusion criteria? P 7L176. How was the blood flow of 500mL/min determined to be the right study-flow? P7L `184 You mean and eventually come to the conclusion that the adrenaline and dopamine measured were all exogenously released, due to the procedure and were not part of the medication/inotropic exogenous continuous support, see/conform L 178? P 17 Table 2 and P8/9 How did these levels of noradrenaline at 3 become 4-times levels of T1 and 20-times levels of T0? And secondly, how did the anesthesia team respond to possible hemodynamic support, when preload was restored? P18 Table 4 and P9 How was PPV monitored/ Please describe and adapt , when possible? Was C.O. monitored? P9 As lactate levels rose to a maximum observed at T3, this may be a surrogate for tissue perfusion, was lactate clearance in anyway monitored? Or did you observe any differences in time for inotropic support after T3. In other words a surrogate for liver perfusion, that was seriously compromised by reduction of outflow, where inflow by the portal vein was still active and may be 70-80% of total liver flow. Therefore, you may not have seen changes in glucose levels and only in bicarbonate levels? How fast did pH- and/or bicarbonate levels normalize after restoration of the liver outflow? What was the duration (min.) between T and T3? P10 L286/287 Did you have contact or inform the manufacturer of the ECC-equipment used , as there may be important information available from animal- or preclinical studies of the properties of the filter, i.e. what is filtered and what is not and for which of these products this may be more flow-dependent? This question may also be seen in relation to your statement on P11 L326 “awareness of the selective nature of catecholamine removal may inform the development of procedure-specific hemodynamic algorithms, including proactive vasopressor combinations, careful volume management, and vigilant monitoring during transitions into and out of ECC” Please comment and adapt, when necessary. P12 L343-346 Time to normalization may have clinical effect on the outcome in the first days after he procedure, see above and take into regard my previous question? ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Dear Dr. Rehn, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Aug 29 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file.
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions Comments to the Author Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed ********** 2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? -->?> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available??> The PLOS Data policy Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** 5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English??> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: I appreciate the authors' efforts in revising the manuscript. Based on the revised version and the detailed point-by-point responses, I have no further comments. In my opinion, the manuscript is now suitable for publication in its current form. Reviewer #3: Dear colleague, here you receive my comment regarding the manuscript with the title “Activated charcoal filtration profoundly alters systemic noradrenaline concentrations during hepatic chemosaturation: a prospective cohort study”. With number PONE-D-26-16601R1. The authors did their best to address all questions and adapted their manuscript where asked and necessary. Reading the manuscript again, I still come to a few remarks. The extraction/filtration is not too medication specific, and heparin being used for anticoagulation during the procedure. How was the possible reduction in heparin by the absorbtion of the charcoal managed and monitored/measured? P7… a bolus of 400 IU/kg heparin was …ACT) > 450 s. … a second bolus of 100–200 IU/kg …,.. ACT was checked again. Ho w many patients needed this extra or 2nd bolus? P11 You write that “ … while lactate concentrations increased markedly, reaching a median of 26.4 mg/dl at T3 (all p < 0.001)….”’ Please explain what possibly induced the generation of the lactate to a median of 26.4 mg/dL (i.e. approx.. 2.93 mmol/L. Which may be considered clinically a mild increase? Was it the ischemia of the liver, the possible reduction in outflow of the lactate from the liver, or the influence of the oncolytic medication on the aerobe metabolism or other? Typo’s: Page 3 Line 48. Please replace Capital for Noradrenaline, see e.g., L 47 and 50? P5 L123 comparable thing here “…Hemodynamic instability…”change into “…hemodynamic…”P6”L150 “…noreadrenaline,… remove the ë” Methods P7 There is no unity in writing the medication with a Capital letter or not, e.g., induction medication using Capital letters, heparin and melphalan there is not not and for Protamine (L188) , The Capital “P” is used again. Please reconsider and choose? See P7 L176 and 177 for Heparin vs heparin ********** what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes: P.Bruins ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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