Peer Review History
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-->PONE-D-25-12083-->-->Relationship between appearance-related social media consciousness and beliefs about obese individuals among physical education teacher candidates-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Sayın Temur, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Sep 24 2025 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This is a thoughtfully executed study on a topic of growing global relevance. It successfully addresses a research gap, contributes valuable cross-sectional data, and lays groundwork for further exploration into stigma and digital self-awareness in teacher education. While the analyses are basic and the conclusions somewhat cautious, the manuscript offers timely insights that merit dissemination. Observations and opportunities to improve the paper are as follows: Introduction The manuscript's objectives are clearly stated and relevant, particularly considering the WHO's projections on obesity prevalence and the pedagogical imperative for inclusive education. However, the introduction could benefit from a sharper statement of the core research question, ideally summarized at the end of the first section to enhance coherence. Recommendation: Clarify and explicitly state the research question/s at the end of the Introduction. Condense the literature review to reduce redundancy and improve flow. Methods Observation: Convenience sampling may introduce bias and limits generalizability. Cross-sectional design precludes causal inference. The study does not control for potential confounders such as BMI, personal history of dieting, or social media use frequency. Post-hoc testing lacks correction for multiple comparisons, increasing the risk of Type I error. Recommendation: The methods section should discuss these limitations more transparently, especially the implications of sampling bias and uncontrolled confounding variables. Report effect sizes for all inferential tests and consider corrections for multiple comparisons. Results/ Discussion Observation: The interpretations are consistent with the data and responsibly framed within the study's limitations. The authors rightly caution against overgeneralization and call for targeted training in PE curricula. Notably, they interpret the absence of gender differences and the significance of grade-level trends with nuance, acknowledging sociocultural factors and the potential role of educational exposure. However, the conclusion about "lower-than-average" beliefs and awareness is not empirically substantiated and seems speculative. Recommendation: Avoid drawing normative conclusions (e.g., that beliefs are "lower than average") unless benchmark data are cited. Emphasize the potential for curriculum interventions rather than assuming deficit thinking among participants. Suggest future research directions involving longitudinal or qualitative methods to explore causality and context. Reviewer #2: 1. Significance and Relevance a. The topic is highly relevant, especially in the context of increasing body dissatisfaction and obesity stigma amplified by social media exposure. The focus on future PE teachers is well-justified as they play a key role in shaping student attitudes toward physical health and body image. b. However, the manuscript misses an opportunity to deepen its theoretical and practical contributions. While the descriptive findings are useful, they are not sufficiently connected to broader frameworks such as social cognitive theory, stigma internalization, or health belief models. 2. Research Questions and Rationale a. The study's objectives are clearly stated, but the rationale for exploring the relationship between appearance-related social media consciousness (ARSMC) and beliefs about obese persons (BOP) could be strengthened. b. There is limited justification for why these two constructs should be correlated. While both relate to body image, a theoretical link (e.g., internalization of appearance ideals leading to weight stigma) would clarify expectations and better explain null results. The manuscript might benefit from explicitly stating hypotheses or expected directions of relationships. 3. Sample and Generalizability a. The study sample is limited to one university and selected via convenience sampling, which restricts external validity. This should be acknowledged more critically in the discussion section. b. A sample of 153 participants is sufficient for nonparametric analysis but may be underpowered to detect small to moderate correlations. This limitation is not mentioned. c. The demographic profile lacks important variables such as participants' BMI, frequency/type of social media use, and personal experience with weight stigma, which could all be relevant moderators or confounders. 4. Measures and Instrumentation a. The ARSMC and BOP scales used are both validated and their Turkish adaptations are appropriate. The reported Cronbach’s alpha coefficients (0.94 and 0.85, respectively) indicate strong internal consistency. b. It would be helpful to include more information about the factor structure or example items in the Results or Appendix for readers unfamiliar with these scales. c. The BOP scale's scoring method (adding 24 to the sum of reverse-coded items) could be better explained, as this may not be intuitive to all readers. 5. Statistical Analysis a. The use of nonparametric tests (Mann-Whitney U, Kruskal-Wallis, and Spearman’s rho) is justified due to the non-normal distribution of scores. However, the manuscript relies exclusively on bivariate analyses. b. The absence of multivariate analyses is a missed opportunity. Simple adjustments for confounders such as age, gender, year level, or self-reported social media use could have added depth to the findings. c. The decision not to use regression or structural equation modeling to explore mediation or moderation effects limits the interpretability of the null findings. 6. Results Interpretation a. The findings are presented clearly, but the emphasis is on statistical significance rather than effect size or practical relevance. Reporting median differences, interquartile ranges, or even using boxplots could enhance the results section. b. The null correlation between ARSMC and BOP is potentially meaningful and deserves deeper interpretation. Could it reflect a disconnect between internalized appearance concerns and external attitudes toward others? c. The pattern of higher ARSMC and more positive beliefs among 4th-year students raises interesting possibilities. Have they received specific training that influenced their perceptions? Is there an educational progression effect? 7. Discussion and Integration with Literature a. The discussion offers a useful summary of national and international studies, but it lacks a critical synthesis. Many citations are used descriptively without analyzing why findings converge or diverge. b. The interpretation of null gender differences could benefit from engagement with recent debates on gendered body image expectations, especially in athletic or PE contexts. c. The lack of a correlation between ARSMC and BOP should not be interpreted simply as "no relationship"; alternative explanations such as measurement limitations, range restriction, or unmeasured confounding should be acknowledged. 8. Limitations and Future Directions a. Some limitations are mentioned, such as convenience sampling and small sample size, but these are treated briefly. A more reflective account of the study’s methodological constraints would strengthen the manuscript. b. The recommendation to revise PE curricula is reasonable but would benefit from greater specificity. For example, what pedagogical approaches or training modules are proposed? Have such interventions been tested elsewhere? c. Future research should consider a longitudinal design to examine how PE candidates' beliefs evolve over time and how professional training mediates these changes. 9. Writing Style and Structure a. The manuscript is generally well-organized and readable. However, the introduction and discussion are quite long and at times repetitive. Several paragraphs could be condensed to improve focus and clarity. b. Some terms (e.g., "beliefs about obese persons") are used frequently without variation; editorial revision could enhance linguistic variety and readability. c. The manuscript would benefit from professional language editing to tighten the narrative, especially in the background and discussion sections. 10. Ethics and Data Availability a. Ethical approval is clearly stated, and participant consent was obtained, which aligns with ethical standards. b. The data availability statement ("available upon reasonable request") falls short of PLOS ONE’s expectations. Authors should consider uploading anonymized datasets to a public repository or providing more detailed access instructions. Overall Recommendation: Major Revisions This manuscript addresses an important and socially relevant issue, using validated instruments and appropriate analysis. However, the study design is limited in explanatory depth, and the theoretical integration is underdeveloped. With substantial revisions—particularly in expanding interpretation, integrating theory, and tightening the writing—the paper has the potential to make a valuable contribution to the literature on social media, stigma, and health education. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-25-12083R1-->-->Relationship between appearance-related social media consciousness and beliefs about obese persons among physical education teacher candidates-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Sayın Temur, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 24 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Additional Editor Comments: Please note that I have acted as a reviewer for this manuscript, and you will find my comments below, under Reviewer 2. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Partly ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: (No Response) ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Thank you for the chance to re-review this paper. You responded substantively to our prior requests. I only have a few minor recommendations: BOP reliability (α = 0.57): Briefly discuss the implications of this low alpha for interpretation (attenuation of correlations, wider measurement error). If feasible, add an item-total table in the supplement and note whether any item(s) depressed alpha. If you choose not to alter the scale, state this is a known limitation and consider a sensitivity check (e.g., re-computing with one problematic item removed) reported in the supplement. Clarify BOP scoring text: Replace “adding 24 to the mean total score” with the exact scoring rule (e.g., reverse items 1,3,4,5,6,8; sum all items; add 24 to shift the range to 0–48). This avoids confusion for replication. Nonparametric summaries & effect sizes: Add IQRs to tables reporting medians. For Mann–Whitney r, present absolute values and provide a one-sentence interpretation (small/moderate) to emphasize practical significance, not just statistical significance. Reviewer #2: Thank you for submitting the revised version of the manuscript. The revision shows substantial effort and meaningful engagement with the reviewers’ feedback, particularly in strengthening the statistical reporting, theoretical framing, and discussion. Most major concerns have been addressed satisfactorily. However, there are a few remaining points that need to be resolved before the manuscript can be considered for acceptance. Points that still need attention -The manuscript continues to use normative language such as “slightly below average” or “just below the average” when describing beliefs about obese persons. These statements are not supported by external benchmarks or normative reference values. Please revise these to neutral, descriptive language, or clearly cite appropriate comparative data if such claims are to be retained. -The internal consistency of the Beliefs about Obese Persons scale is low (Cronbach’s α = 0.57) in the current sample. While this is transparently reported, its implications are not sufficiently discussed. Please add a brief but explicit discussion on how this low reliability may affect interpretation of the findings and caution readers accordingly. -Although the limitations section appropriately notes the absence of multivariate analyses, some interpretations—particularly in the Discussion and Conclusion, remain somewhat stronger than warranted by bivariate analyses alone. Please further temper causal or explanatory language where appropriate. -The response letter states that all underlying data will be made available in the Supporting Information, in line with PLOS ONE’s data policy. Please ensure that the revised submission clearly reflects this (and that the data files are indeed included), as this is a requirement for editorial compliance. Reviewer #3: List of coments 1. Data collection tools, were they assessed for content validity and reliability assessment in particular to the population where they were administered.Comment on the applicability of these tools to the study participants. 2. Describe the study population, how they were selected, and where did they come from? Used convenient sampling, from where? 3. 3. What was the level of significance considered in the analysis? 4. 4. The author may include interquartile range for summary statistics to describe variability in the data 5. Include reporting of median of each group in Kruskal wallis test results 6. Suggests to not repeat in the text the numbers that are presented in the table, include specification of direction of groups instead of repeating the numbers ********** -->7. 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