Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 29, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-56394-->-->Association between Pan-immune-inflammation value and clinical outcomes in hyperlipidemia patients: An observational study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. huang, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 11 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: In this study, the authors demonstrated that elevated pan-immune-inflammation value (PIV) was independently associated with mortality and adverse outcomes in critically ill patients with hyperlipidemia admitted to the ICU. Based on the results, the authors concluded that PIV may be used as a simple and cost-effective prognostic tool for early risk stratification in critically ill patients with hyperlipidemia. However, to confirm the conclusions of this study, the following points need to be reconsidered: 1.Since all of the patients in this study were critically ill, the title should include "critically ill patients with hyperlipidemia." 2.Although blood glucose levels are used in model 3 of the multivariate analysis, it is unclear whether they were measured fasting or at any time, so HbA1c is likely to provide a more accurate indication of the presence or absence of the influence of abnormal glucose metabolism. 3.White blood cell counts are also significantly affected by the presence or absence of glucocorticoids, which are often administered to critically ill patients, but how was this factor taken into account in this analysis? 4.Looking at the AUC of the ROC analysis, it appears that simply using lymphocyte count as an indicator would be sufficient as a prognostic predictor without the need to use PIV, but it is necessary to clearly explain to readers the benefits of using PIV. Reviewer #2: Reviewer Comments This manuscript investigates the association between the pan-immune-inflammation value (PIV) and short- and long-term clinical outcomes in critically ill patients with hyperlipidemia using the MIMIC-IV database. The topic is clinically relevant, as inflammation-based biomarkers are increasingly recognized as valuable tools for risk stratification in critically ill populations. The sample size is large, the statistical analyses are generally robust and the findings suggest that elevated PIV is independently associated with increased mortality and adverse outcomes such as AKI and delirium. The manuscript is generally well organized and clearly written. However, several methodological clarifications, additional analyses and improvements in interpretation are required to strengthen the validity and clinical applicability of the findings. Major Comments 1.Hyperlipidemia is defined solely based on ICD-9/10 codes, without stratification by lipid subtype (e.g., hypertriglyceridemia, hypercholesterolemia, mixed dyslipidemia). 2.Given that different lipid abnormalities may have distinct inflammatory and prognostic implications, the authors should clarify which lipid phenotypes are primarily represented. 3.If available, subgroup or sensitivity analyses based on triglyceride or cholesterol levels would substantially enhance the clinical relevance of the study. 4.Although the authors adjusted for APS III, SOFA and SIRS scores, PIV is itself strongly correlated with disease severity. 5.The possibility of residual confounding or overadjustment should be discussed more explicitly. 6.Consider performing sensitivity analyses excluding severity scores or using alternative adjustment strategies to confirm the robustness of the association. 7.The restricted cubic spline analysis identifies a threshold lnPIV value (≈5.15) beyond which mortality risk increases sharply. 8.However, the clinical meaning of this threshold is not sufficiently discussed. 9.The authors should translate this lnPIV value back to the original PIV scale and discuss how it could be applied in real-world clinical decision-making. 10.Although lnPIV showed a higher AUC than individual blood cell parameters, the overall discriminative ability remains modest (AUC ≈0.66). 11.The manuscript should more cautiously interpret the predictive performance and clarify that PIV may complement, rather than replace, existing risk models. 12.Comparison with established prognostic scores (e.g., SOFA alone vs. SOFA + PIV) would strengthen the argument for clinical utility. 13.The manuscript states that multiple imputation was used for variables with <20% missingness, but the imputation method, number of imputations and variables included in the imputation model are not described. 14.These details should be clearly reported to ensure transparency and reproducibility. 15.The study is based on a single-center database from a U.S. tertiary care hospital. 16.The authors should more explicitly discuss the limitations regarding external validity, particularly for non-ICU settings and populations with different ethnic, socioeconomic, or healthcare characteristics. Minor Comments 1.Although MIMIC-IV studies are exempt from IRB approval, a brief ethics statement should be explicitly included in the Methods section, consistent with journal requirements. 2.Minor grammatical and stylistic issues are present (e.g., “imbalance lipid metabolism” should be “imbalance in lipid metabolism”). 3.A thorough language edit would improve readability. 4.The manuscript alternates between “hospital mortality” and “in-hospital mortality.” Please standardize terminology throughout the text and tables. 5.Figure legends should be more descriptive, particularly for the restricted cubic spline and subgroup analyses, to allow interpretation without referring back to the main text. 6.Units for laboratory values should be consistently reported across all tables. 7.The Discussion would benefit from a clearer comparison of the present findings with prior studies evaluating PIV or related inflammatory indices (e.g., NLR, PLR, SII) in critically ill or dyslipidemic populations. Reviewer #3: n studies examining the Pan-Immune-Inflammation Value (PIV)—including observational research in hyperlipidemia patients—there is no single universally accepted “normal value.” This is because PIV is a composite inflammatory index and its reference range depends on the study population and clinical context.Based on published observational and cardiovascular/metabolic studies: Author should need to incuat Healthy individuals / low-risk populations: ≈ 200–400 Patients with metabolic disorders (including hyperlipidemia): ≈ 300–600 High inflammatory burden / poor prognosis groups: > 600–800 (sometimes much higher depending on disease severity) In hyperlipidemia cohorts specifically, many studies use: Cutoff values should ideally be: Derived from your study population Adjusted for age, sex, comorbidities, and statin use Most studies define “high PIV” using ROC analysis or percentile grouping, not standard laboratory reference ranges ********** -->6. 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Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: I have no further comment for the responses of the authors to the concerns I raised in the original version. Reviewer #3: This manuscript is well-written and clearly presented. All data and the findings are adequately available and supported. The statistical analysis has been performed appropriately, and all previous comments have been satisfactorily addressed. However, further research on Pan-Immune-Inflammation is recommended to strengthen the study and expand its scientific impact. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Ken-ichi Aihara Reviewer #3: Yes: Dr. Momtaz Ahmed Head of National Diabetes Centre, Suva, Fiji Senior Fellow International Diabetes Federation ********** |
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