Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 27, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-54340-->-->A qualitative exploration of patients discharge experience following Coronary Artery Bypass Graft -the need for more individualized person- centred care.-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Rushton, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 11 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: N/A ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: GENERAL COMMENTS: This manuscript addresses an important and under-explored aspect of cardiac surgical care, namely patient experiences of discharge following CABG surgery. The focus on person-centred care (PCC) and discharge preparedness is timely and relevant to contemporary nursing and healthcare practice. The qualitative approach is appropriate, and the manuscript is generally well structured and clearly written. The use of constructivist grounded theory, COREQ guidance, and rich participant quotations enhances credibility. However, several methodological, analytical, and reporting issues need to be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for publication. MAJOR COMMENTS: 1. Methodological Clarity Although the authors state that a constructivist grounded theory approach was adopted, the findings appear largely thematic and descriptive rather than theory-generating. The manuscript would benefit from clearer explanation of how grounded theory methods (e.g., memo writing, theoretical coding, core category development) were operationalised. If theory generation was not the primary aim, justification for the use of grounded theory over other qualitative approaches should be provided. 2. Sample Size and Information Power The justification for the sample size using the concept of information power is appropriate but repeated across several sections of the manuscript. This repetition affects readability. Additionally, the distinction between thematic saturation and information power requires clearer explanation. 3. Timing of Data Collection Data were collected between 2018 and 2019, whereas the discussion heavily references recent (2023–2024) policies and guidelines. The authors should explicitly acknowledge this temporal gap and discuss how changes in discharge practices and digital health delivery may influence the transferability of findings. 4. Reflexivity Although researcher characteristics are described, reflexivity is limited. The authors should reflect on how their professional backgrounds as nurses and academics may have influenced data collection, participant responses, and interpretation of findings. 5. Integration of Person-Centred Care While PCC is central to the study, participant understanding of the concept was limited. The discussion would benefit from deeper analytical engagement with why PCC was poorly understood by participants and how institutional or professional practices may contribute to this gap, rather than relying mainly on policy-level discussion. MINOR COMMENTS: 1. Abstract: Consider briefly interpreting the themes and adding a short statement on implications. 2. Title: Consider grammatical refinement to “patients’ discharge experience”. 3. Sample Description: Provide justification for the predominantly male sample and discuss its implications. 4. Tables: Table 4 is extensive; consider condensing or moving some quotations to supplementary material. 5. Language: Minor grammatical and typographical errors are present and require proofreading. 6. Ethics: Clarify consent procedures specifically for home interviews and audio recording. STRENGTHS OF THE MANUSCRIPT • Addresses a clinically important and under-researched phase of CABG care • Rich qualitative data supported by participant quotations • Use of COREQ checklist enhances transparency • Clear implications for nursing and discharge planning practice • Strong alignment with international person-centred care frameworks OVERALL RECOMMENDATION: Major Revision The manuscript has substantial merit and the potential to make a meaningful contribution to the literature. However, major revisions are required to strengthen methodological transparency, analytical depth, reflexivity, and contextual relevance. Reviewer #2: Introduction On p.4, in line 101, the correct phrase should be "Registered Nurse Standards for Practice in Australia" rather than "the Australian Nursing Professional Standards". This phrase, "the Australian Professional Standards," appears misleading because it suggests the standards apply to both enrolled and registered nurses in Australia. It is imperative to note that there is a separate standards document for enrolled nurses in Australia. It is called Enrolled Nurse Standards for Practice. Hence, the need to use the "Registered Nurses Standards for Practice" or simply use "Australian professional nursing standards". Please pay attention to my lack of proper nouns and adjectives in the phrase; doing so would encompass both the enrolled and registered nurses' standards of practice. Although Byrne et al. (2020) used the phrase in their paper, they did so to distinguish the standards from other global nursing standards. In lines 99-100, where you stated "In their Australian research …", you need to cite other works from Byrnes et al. or change the word "research" to "review". Methods What rationale did you use when you chose 4-6 weeks post-CABG? The reasoning would help readers. Then, in line 143, you stated you chose two to five weeks post-discharge to help participants recall events. Study participants On discharge, it is reasonable for patients to feel that any nursing contact could be part of their discharge plan. I acknowledge that the participants' information sheet and consent form would spell everything out, but there would be a feeling that their discharge plan could be undermined if they declined to participate in your research. How did you manage power imbalances when you approached potential research participants? Data collection. The word 'data' is the plural form of 'datum' and should have the correct verb and other grammatical mechanics. You stated you obtained consent from the participants, but it is not clear whether some participants did not consent prior to data collection. One thing is to provide information to participants, but another is to give or withhold consent. It is great to see that you avoided the phrase "data saturation" and instead used "information power," which is more appropriate for a qualitative study. Especially in grounded theory, where you must generate a theory from the data (participants' interpretations of their experiences), because themes are not hidden within the data. In line 152, did you mean information power led to the emergent themes? Discussion. You mentioned race and ethnicity affect how they engage with their discharge information, but it is not clear how your findings integrated this study. It is well established that some cardiologists rush patients' discharges to meet KPIs even though these patients may not be "fit for discharge". Please can you relate your findings to this area of concern? Implications for practice Limitations You demonstrated broad perspectives of your findings when you mentioned the lack of cultural diversity in your research. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: SARANYA R Reviewer #2: Yes: Adeniyi Olanrewaju Adeleye ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. 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Discharge After Coronary Artery Bypass Grafting: A Qualitative Study Highlighting the Need for Individualised, Person‑Centred Care. PONE-D-25-54340R1 Dear Dr. Rushton, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: Dear Authors, Thank you for submitting the revised version of your manuscript. I have carefully reviewed your revised version of the manuscript and commend you on the thorough manner in which you have addressed the comments provided during the initial review. Your responses are clear, detailed, and demonstrate a strong engagement with the feedback. The revisions have notably enhanced the clarity, coherence, and overall presentation of the manuscript. In particular, the improvements in the articulation of your findings, the strengthening of methodological transparency, and the alignment between your data and conclusions are evident. These revisions contribute positively to the manuscript’s scientific soundness and readability. Overall, I am satisfied that the concerns raised have been adequately resolved, and the manuscript is now much improved. Thank you for your careful and thoughtful revisions. Kind regards. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #2: Yes: Adeniyi Adeleye ********** |
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