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| Original SubmissionAugust 10, 2025 |
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The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. 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(Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: I have reviewed the manuscript and it presents a great use case for fault detection in power systems . The methods are simple and replicable and is practical in NISQ devices. How ever I have some minor concerns related to encoding , VQC and Use of optimizers . Reviewer #2: 1. The purpose of Table 3, 4, and 5 and their corresponding columns is not very clear. 2. In Table 4, the meaning or measure of the various entries under the column 'classical techniques' and 'deep learning' is not very clear. What does moderate, high and other keywords stand for and how is this measured? 3. In Table 5 lists the various datasets, are these dataset overlapping? Their names if any, needs to be specified. 4. Font size of Fig1, Fig2 needs to be increased as they are not readable 5. The Figure 3 can be accommodated as a whole. 6. The representation of the variables in different equation should be consistent for a given variable. Eqn 1 and eqn 2 has different representation for the input signal. 7. In Fig5, the role of ‘even synchronization’ and ‘missing data handling’ is not clear. The paper begins with taking a signal and cutting it into parts. Request you to justify the missing data. 8. In VQC, why have you used CZ gates for entanglement and why not CNOT gate? Justification for the same is needed. 9. If you are using abbreviations for a particular word then be consistent and use the same throughout the paper. There is no need to use both the full form and abbreviation ahead in the paper. 10. To represent ith instance in an equation use subscript. Eqn 14, 15, and 16 subscripts are not properly represented. 11. I feel Eqn 15 is not correctly printed. 12. Equation 15 and 16 are not a part of the subsection 3.5. Similarly eqn 11, 12 and 13 are not related to subsection 3.4 13. Subsection 3.7 needs to be rewritten as it not very clear. 14. For Fig 6. and Table 7 what is the split ratio? How many samples were used for training and testing? Subsection 3.2 speaks about the data gathering but doesn’t tell us how many samples were simulated and how many of them actually collected and total count in terms of (SLG), double-line (DL), and three-phase (TP) faults. This information might is very much nesseary to see if the dataset is balanced. 15. What does the X and Y labels of confusion matrix stand for? 16. Fig. 8 and 9 shows training and validation accuracies/loss using for which particular techniques? 17. You are using the data from the project 'smart grid monitoring project' are proper permissions sought from the concerned authority? 18. In subsection 4.5, please explain the meaning of the 'An ablation study was conducted to assess the individual contribution of the quantum layer'. What hyper parameter was tuned in this ablation study? 19. This work speaks about applying error correction, what form of error corrections is implemented? 20. Can your proposed techniques of HQCNN detect multiple faults? If Yes, a justification needs to be given in the form of results comparing the various possible combinations. 21. Can you justify this statement used in your paper, 'The performance gain is attributed to the ability of the quantum layer to capture high-dimensional entanglements in the feature space, enhancing decision boundaries for ambiguous cases'. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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Hybrid Quantum-Classical Neural Networks for Real-Time Fault Detection in Power Systems PONE-D-25-43455R1 Dear Dr. Massebo, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information' link at the top of the page. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: General Assessment The revised manuscript presents a relevant and timely study on hybrid quantum- classical learning for real-time fault detection in power systems. The topic is suitable for the journal’s scope, and the paper has improved substantially in response to the previous round of review. In particular, the revised version is stronger in methodological transparency, notation, and presentation of the hybrid HQCNN framework. The inclusion of both simulated IEEE test-system data and real PMU/SCADA events also strengthens the applied relevance of the study. Overall, I find that the major technical concerns raised previously, espe- cially those associated with Reviewer 1, have been addressed adequately. The manuscript is now close to publishable form. However, a small number of mi- nor issues remain, primarily related to consistency, language polishing, and a few residual presentation ambiguities. I therefore recommend acceptance after minor revision. Assessment of Reviewer 1 Comments 1. Normalization protocol: addressed. The revised manuscript now clarifies that Min–Max normalization parameters are computed from the training set and then applied unchanged to validation and test data. It also explicitly states that normalization is not performed on a per-window basis. This satisfactorily resolves the earlier concern regarding possible information leakage. 2. Expressivity of the angle encoding: addressed. The authors revised the encoding description and now introduce a centered angle mapping in Eq. (8), which is a meaningful improvement over the earlier restricted formulation. 3. Quantum circuit trainable parameters: addressed. Figure 3 and the corresponding text now indicate trainable rotation parameters, which aligns the figure with the method description and resolves the earlier in- consistency. 4. Optimizer specification: addressed. The manuscript now explicitly states that SPSA is used to optimize the quantum parameters. This addi- tion improves reproducibility and is appropriate for noisy/NISQ-oriented workflows. 5. Loss formulation: addressed. The training objective has been consol- idated into a single formulation, which improves internal consistency and readability. 6. Error correction claim: addressed. The revised text now correctly limits the claim to measurement/readout error mitigation using Qiskit Ignis and no longer overstates the use of full quantum error correction. 7. Train–test leakage via windowing: addressed. The manuscript now states that splitting is performed at the fault-event level so that all win- dows derived from a given event remain in a single split. This is an important clarification and satisfactorily addresses the leakage concern. Remaining Minor Comments 1. Author name consistency (pages 1 and 8). The corresponding author name is inconsistent between the submission metadata and the manuscript body. One location lists Yaikob Abriham Massebo, while the manuscript title page lists Yakob Abraham. This should be harmonized before final publication. 2. Abstract language and terminology (page 8). The abstract still requires a final language polish. Examples include: • “IEEE 14 and 39-bus system” should be revised to “IEEE 14- and 39-bus systems”; • “Various kind of fault like SDL” should be revised to “Various kinds of faults such as SLG”; • “PMD data sets” appears to be a typo and likely should read “PMU datasets”. These are minor editorial issues, but they affect professionalism and clar- ity. 3. Introduction requires copyediting (pages 8–10). The introduction has improved conceptually, but several sentences remain grammatically awkward or stylistically non-standard for a journal article. This applies especially to the opening paragraph and the subsections “Quantum Com- puting: A New Paradigm,” “Hybrid Quantum Classical Neural Networks,” and “Paper Structuring.” A final English-language edit is recommended. 4. Experimental split description should be made fully unambigu- ous (pages 18–19). Section 3.2 states that simulated data were used for training and controlled evaluation, while validation and testing were carried out using real-world events only. However, Section 3.3 states that the combined dataset was divided into 70/15/15 for training, validation, and testing. These statements may be reconcilable, but in the current wording they create confusion. The authors should present one clear and consistent description of the final experimental protocol. 5. Encoding equations should be checked for internal consistency (page 20). Eq. (8) introduces a centered encoding, θi = π(2zi − 1), but Eq. (9) appears to revert to a non-centered form using RY (πzi). If this is not intentional, the equations should be aligned so that the mathematical description matches the stated encoding strategy. 6. Duplicate entry in Table 3 (page 13). Table 3 appears to repeat the row for Ref. [10] (Neural Networks). This duplication should be removed. 7. Data availability statement should be finalized carefully (page 6 and main text). The manuscript states that the data are fully available and points to a public dataset link. Before final acceptance, the authors should ensure that the final published manuscript contains a complete and durable data availability statement in the journal’s preferred format, including a stable repository link or DOI where applicable. 8. Minor terminology polishing throughout. Although the abbrevia- tion issue has largely been improved, the manuscript would still benefit from one final pass to ensure fully consistent usage of terms such as SLG, DL, TP, HIF, PMU, SCADA, HQCNN, and VQC throughout the text, tables, and figure captions. Conclusion In summary, this is a stronger and more coherent revision. The principal methodological concerns from the prior review round, especially those raised by Reviewer 1, have been addressed satisfactorily. The remaining issues are minor and editorial in nature, with one methodological clarification still needed regarding the exact train/validation/test protocol. Subject to those small revi- sions, I support publication. Final Recommendation: Minor Revision Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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