Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 26, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-61939-->-->High donor hemoglobin interacts with pre-transplant recipient neutropenia to modulate mortality after allogeneic hematopoietic stem cell transplantation: a single-center, retrospective, real-world study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Eslami, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 25 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you’re ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the ’Submissions Needing Revision’ folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. Additional Editor Comments: Eslami et al present a retrospective association study showing donor hemoglobin has an effect on overall survival in allogeneic stem cell transplantation and claim this can mitigate the effect of recipient neutropenia. The findings would be of interest to the broader blood cancer community but would require validation in other cohorts. A limitation is the relatively small sample size and relative low effect size in terms of hazard ratio. Also there is little discussion of other variables that independently correlate with poor survival in donors vs recipients. The references are not exhaustive nor current. 1] Can the authors perform analyses with standard prognostic factors that predict outcome in allogeneic transplantation? 2] Why did the authors choose to examine donor hemoglobin? 3] Can data from another published cohort where donor hemoglobin levels are available for validation? [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewer’s Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: No ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->3. 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Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents an interesting, hypothesis-generating exploration of potential host–graft interactions in alloHSCT. The conceptual framework is novel and could be of interest to the field. However, there are several methodological and reporting issues that currently limit the interpretability and robustness of the findings. Addressing the points below would substantially strengthen the scientific validity of the work and clarify how readers should interpret these exploratory associations. Main considerations: 1) Study design and variable selection • Several well-established alloHSCT prognostic variables are not included in the descriptive tables or regression models (e.g., primary diagnosis, disease status at transplant, donor type, stem cell source, GVHD prophylaxis, comorbidity indices such as HCT-CI, and performance status). Given the strong known effects of these factors on outcomes, omission raises concern for residual confounding and omitted variable bias. Suggestion: consider expanding baseline characteristics and, if feasible, incorporating key transplant-specific covariates into univariate and multivariable analyses. If this is not possible due to data limitations, this should be clearly acknowledged and the conclusions further tempered. • The rationale for selecting pre-alloHSCT recipient neutropenia and donor haemoglobin as candidate predictors would benefit from clearer justification in the Introduction, grounded in existing literature or biological plausibility. 2) Missing data and cohort construction • Approximately 19% of patients were excluded due to missing data. The operational definition of “>30% incomplete medical records” is unclear, and it is not evident whether partial data recovery was attempted. Suggestion: please clarify how missingness was defined and whether attempts were made to retrieve incomplete records. A brief discussion of potential selection bias introduced by these exclusions would strengthen transparency. 3) Outcomes and mechanistic framing • Overall survival is used as the primary outcome, yet much of the biological interpretation centres on graft function and host–graft interaction. Key transplant outcomes that would directly inform these hypotheses (e.g., time to neutrophil/platelet engraftment, primary/secondary graft failure, pure red cell aplasia) are not presented. Suggestion: if available, reporting engraftment kinetics and graft-related outcomes would substantially strengthen the biological plausibility of the proposed mechanisms. If unavailable, this limitation should be emphasized when interpreting the findings. • The high prevalence of pre-alloHSCT neutropenia (43.6%) would benefit from contextualization (e.g., disease status, recent therapy, incomplete count recovery, disease biology). 4) Transplant-specific and biological considerations • The hypothesis that donor haemoglobin reflects graft “vigour” is intriguing but difficult to evaluate without key transplant variables (stem cell source, cell dose, graft manipulation, GVHD prophylaxis, ABO matching) and engraftment data. • The discussion of iron toxicity and red cell mass would benefit from: - Reporting graft source (PBSC vs BM vs CBU), given typical low red cell content in PBSC grafts - Information on donor/recipient iron studies and baseline iron overload - Consideration of ABO matching and its relevance to red cell-related complications • Recipient neutropenia is likely influenced by disease biology, remission status, and prior therapy (e.g., HMA exposure), which are not explored and may confound observed associations. These factors warrant further discussion. •Given the single-centre design, contextual information on the local population (e.g., prevalence of red cell disorders in the donor pool) may be relevant to interpreting donor haemoglobin distributions and generalizability. 5) Statistical interpretation and scope of inference • The manuscript occasionally uses language suggesting confirmation or mitigation of effects. Given the retrospective, exploratory design, it would be more appropriate to frame these findings strictly as associations requiring external validation. • Multiple exploratory comparisons are performed. Suggestion: please explicitly discuss the risk of false-positive findings and how readers should interpret statistical significance in this hypothesis-generating context. • Kaplan–Meier and predicted survival figures should include corresponding p-values and clearer annotation to aid interpretation. Additional Considerations: • Please report the study timeframe with precise start and end dates. • Consider consolidating overlapping Methods subsections for clarity. • Table 1 would benefit from clearer categorization of disease indications and disease status at transplant. • Given overall survival is the primary endpoint, please report median OS and time-specific survival estimates. The conceptual idea is interesting and potentially hypothesis-generating for future studies. Strengthening variable reporting, addressing missing data more transparently, incorporating key alloHSCT-specific confounders (where feasible), and tempering causal or confirmatory language would substantially improve the manuscript and help readers appropriately interpret the findings. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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High donor hemoglobin interacts with pre-transplant recipient neutropenia to modulate mortality after allogeneic hematopoietic stem cell transplantation: an exploratory, single-center, retrospective, real-world study PONE-D-25-61939R1 Dear Dr. Eslami, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. Please make sure your user information is up-to-date by logging into Editorial Manager at Editorial Manager® and clicking the ‘Update My Information’ link at the top of the page. For questions related to billing, please contact billing support. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Daniel Thomas, MD Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): The authors have significantly decreased their claims. This study is exploratory and hypothesis generating rather than conclusive. This is now indicated in title and abstract. All comments have been addressed adequately Reviewers’ comments: |
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