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The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This manuscript investigates the rapid closure mechanism of the Venus flytrap (Dionaea muscipula) by integrating experimental kinematics, micro-CT scanning, 3D reconstruction, and geometric modeling. The authors propose that trap closure is governed by a "size-curvature constraint," where the achievable curvature during closure is limited by the trap size. They further introduce a two-layer differential deformation model to explain the curvature dynamics. The work attempts to bridge plant biomechanics with geometric and physical modeling, and the application of micro-CT and 3D reconstruction to quantify trap morphology. Some suggestions are provided below: (1) The proposed geometric model, while descriptive, lacks direct linkage to underlying physiological or biophysical mechanisms. The parameters D and ϕ are fitted but not independently validated through perturbation experiments. (2) The physical meaning of the "deflection" parameter D and its direct correspondence to a measurable tissue property (e.g., differential strain, turgor pressure gradient) is not clearly established, making the model phenomenological rather than explanatory. (3) The experimental dataset (n=15 traps) appears limited for establishing robust correlations between size, angle, and velocity. No statistical tests (e.g., p-values, confidence intervals) are reported for the trends shown in Fig. 1. (4) The geometric model is primarily fitted and validated using the same imaging data from which parameters were extracted. There is no independent experimental test to confirm the model predictive power. (5) The two-layer differential deformation model assumes constant strain rate and a simplified relationship between curvature and strain. It ignores the complex tissue architecture, cell wall mechanics, and potential viscoelastic effects, which are crucial for rapid movements. (6) The discussion dismisses the hydrostatic pressure and elastic buckling models somewhat superficially. The study fails to reconcile its geometric constraint with these established theories or design experiments to distinguish their contributions. (7) The claimed size-curvature constraint (Fig. 4f) is presented as an empirical observation without a theoretical derivation of the boundary limits (e.g., why 6"mm" and 21"mm" ?). The physical principles defining this "orange area" remain speculative. (8) The analysis treats closure as a transition between two static states (open/closed). The dynamics of the curvature change ∂κ/∂t are modeled with a simplistic assumption of constant ϵ _out, which is unlikely to hold true throughout the rapid, non-linear closure process. (9) The model does not account for the role of the midrib, teeth, or the hinge region in guiding and stabilizing closure, which are known to be structurally important. (10) The stretching-bending ratio α is adopted from prior work but its direct physical interpretation in the context of the flytrap bilayer, hydrated tissue is not clarified. Reviewer #2: Authors completed the 3D morphology reconstruction of the Venus flytrap by micro-CT scanning, and deduced a non-dimensional parameter by the geometric value obtained above to feature the motion of the Venus flytrap. The main conclusion is that the non-dimensional index they deduced is correlated to the angular velocity of the snapping. The verification of the relationship between the geometric parameters and dynamic motion is essential for the research of the Venus flytrap. Concerning the novelty and originality, I suggest to accept this paper after minor revision. However, there are several questions I hope to receive response from authors: 1. Page 2, line 45: actually, there is one paper published mentioned that only one trigger could initiate the motion of the plant. For your reference: A single touch can provide sufficient mechanical stimulation to trigger Venus flytrap closure. 2. Page 3, line 103: the non-dimensional parameter α was proposed by Yeol et al., could you explain why you choose this parameter and what new based on your analysis comparing their previous work? 3. Page 4, line 131-132; Page 5, line 169-170: could you explain the value difference of the D, because you mentioned that D for open is 2.6mm, and close is 0mm is page 4, and then D for open is 0.0, and close is 0.7? Besides, please describe the reason this value equals zero. 4. Page 5, line 165-166: It looks like that the closing time is pretty long, why this happen? Did you trigger the motion on site, or you have to cut the leaf for imaging? 5. Page 6, line 181-183: You used two velocity parameters to describe the motion, which should be better to represent the natural notion of the plant? 6. 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Size–Curvature Constraint in the Closing Motion of Venus Flytrap Leaves PONE-D-25-65525R1 Dear Dr. Satoru, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Please consider including also the second reviewer's final comments. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Partly ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The authors have addressed most of my concerns. The reviewer do not has further additional comments for the manuscript. Reviewer #2: 1. Clarification and consistency of parameter D (important) In the original geometric formulation proposed by Poppinga and Joyeux, the parameter D is defined as a geometric quantity representing the maximum separation between the two lobes in the reference (closed) configuration, and is used to construct a lifelike initial shape of the trap.Importantly, in that framework, D is treated as a fixed geometric parameter, rather than a dynamic variable describing the temporal evolution of the motion. In this paper, the parameter D plays a central role throughout the manuscript, as it is used: 1. to distinguish open and closed states (e.g., D = 0 vs D > 0), 2. to describe the deformation process over time, 3. to construct the size–curvature relationship (e.g., D–H morpho space). Given this central importance, the definition and interpretation of D should be as precise and consistent as possible. At present, D appears to serve multiple roles: a geometric parameter in the surface model (Eq. 1), a descriptor of deformation state, and, in the discussion, a proxy for underlying physiological processes. While these interpretations are individually reasonable, their combination can be somewhat ambiguous. Please clearly define D in a single, primary sense (e.g., geometric descriptor vs. state variable), and explicitly state how the other interpretations relate to this definition (e.g., whether they are conceptual or derived). Even a short clarifying paragraph would greatly improve the conceptual clarity of the manuscript. 2. Physical interpretation of D The added physiological interpretation of D is interesting and provides useful intuition. However, because D is introduced through a geometric model and extracted from morphological fitting, its connection to quantities such as: differential strain, turgor pressure, or ion-mediated processes remains indirect. To avoid overinterpretation, I suggest: explicitly framing this connection as qualitative or interpretive, unless a direct quantitative relationship is established. This will strengthen the rigor of the manuscript while preserving its interdisciplinary perspective. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes **********
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