Peer Review History
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-->PONE-D-25-30014-->-->Comparison of altruistic, egoistic, and scientific appeals in the recruitment of politicians to a survey panel-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Rapeli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->
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There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions--> -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: No Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This manuscript presents a large-scale randomized field experiment testing whether altruistic, egoistic, or scientific appeals improve the recruitment of local politicians into a survey panel. Its strengths lie in its novelty—politicians are an especially hard-to-reach group—its methodological rigor, including pre-registration and representativity checks, and its transparency in reporting. The null findings, showing that none of the appeals significantly increased participation, are valuable in themselves, as they challenge expectations derived from citizen-based recruitment studies and underscore the limitations of simple message framing when targeting elites. The analysis also provides useful descriptive insights, showing that age, gender, municipality type, and party affiliation predict participation, and that despite low response rates, the recruited sample closely resembles the broader population of politicians. That said, the paper would benefit from a clearer theoretical framing and a more cautious interpretation of results. The altruism–egoism distinction is borrowed from citizen survey literature without fully justifying its relevance to politicians, while the scientific appeal is only weakly distinguished from altruism. The discussion of null results is underdeveloped, focusing mainly on practical explanations like information overload rather than deeper theoretical alternatives, such as whether civic duty norms or institutional trust shape politicians’ responsiveness. Subgroup analyses, such as differential effects by municipality type or minority status, are interesting but risk appearing post-hoc and should be presented as exploratory. Finally, the very low response rates raise questions about long-term panel viability and external validity beyond Finland’s high-trust context, which the discussion should address more directly. Overall, the manuscript makes a useful methodological contribution by showing that framing appeals alone is insufficient to improve participation among politicians. To maximize its impact, the authors should position the study more clearly as a baseline for future work, strengthen the conceptual discussion, and highlight alternative strategies—such as appeals rooted in prospect theory, leveraging trusted institutional endorsements, or exploring non-textual methods of engagement. With these refinements, the paper could make a valuable contribution to both survey methodology and the study of elite participation. Suggestions: - Reframe the contribution more explicitly as a methodological demonstration that simple appeal framing does not increase recruitment among politicians, rather than as a theoretical advance in leverage–saliency theory. - Clarify the theoretical rationale for using altruistic, egoistic, and scientific appeals with elite respondents. More strongly justify why politicians, unlike citizens, should be expected to respond differently to these frames. - Deepen the discussion of null results by considering alternative explanations, such as institutional trust, civic duty, or elite-specific norms, rather than attributing the outcome primarily to information overload. - Present subgroup analyses as exploratory rather than confirmatory. This will prevent over-interpretation of interaction effects that lack strong theoretical grounding. - Discuss the implications of low response rates more directly, including risks of cumulative attrition in panel studies and limits to generalizability beyond the Finnish context. -Improve readability by streamlining descriptive material and moving some tables and statistical outputs to appendices. Reviewer #2: Thank you for the opportunity to review this paper. The study investigates how different types of motivational appeals affect local politicians’ willingness to participate in a research panel. Using a large-scale experimental design with more than 7,000 local-level politicians, the paper makes a comprehensive attempt to understand to extent to which participation in such surveys may be incentivized. The authors should be commended for assembling a rich dataset and addressing an important methodological question. However, several aspects of the design, analysis, and presentation could be improved before the manuscript is ready for publication. Some of these issues are fairly major in nature, which, in my opinion, might require extensive revisions. My comments are in no particular order. Starting with the theory, the assumption that an egoistic appeal works because politicians value access to the panel’s findings is strong and should be treated more cautiously. A growing body of elite-survey research suggests that many politicians do not perceive direct benefits from public-opinion information, nor do they believe such information meaningfully advance their careers. Acknowledging this in the discussion section would help readers understand why the treatment may not have produced significant differences (i.e., perhaps because the stimulus was not strong enough to generate a behavioral response). A related point concerns the likely diversity in what motivates politicians. Different forms of egoism and altruism may appeal to different types of politicians, depending on institutional, electoral, and media contexts. It would be useful for the authors to acknowledge that such cross-context and role-based variation could partly explain the absence of clear treatment effects. The paper refers to three experimental groups repeatedly before clearly specifying what these groups are. Introducing the treatment conditions earlier in the paper would provide an overview of the design to the reader and make the design easier to follow. The second hypothesis is under-theorized relative to the first and third. Strengthening the theoretical justification here, perhaps by linking it to distinct mechanisms or prior findings, would improve coherence across the hypotheses. There was a brief mention about left-wing politics, but I haven't seen much about past research detailing the mechanism behind this. I was unclear about the pre-registration process. The text refers to a pre-registration (“see the pre-registration for more details”) but then suggests that it was shared only with the editors. I was not able to identify a separate submission document that details the pre-registration process. Reviewers know who the authors are, so I don't understand why the authors preferred not to reveal it. If the document is really available only to the editors, it prevents reviewers from assessing deviations from the original design, which undermines the purpose of pre-registration. Clarifying this and, ideally, sharing the pre-registration document as supplementary material would increase transparency and credibility. With over 7,000 politicians in the sample, the study is large enough to examine heterogeneous treatment effects. It would strengthen the contribution to explore whether the treatment effects differ across subgroups. Even descriptive exploration of heterogeneity would enrich the interpretation of otherwise null or weak average effects. The discussion of low acceptance rates across treatment groups suggests that bias from rare events could affect the estimates. Replicating the main models using a penalized maximum-likelihood estimator, such as Firth’s logistic regression for rare events (see King & Zeng; Allison), would be a valuable robustness check. The manuscript lacks a clear methodological section explaining why specific estimators were chosen and how balance was assessed. Most experimental studies report randomization checks or balance tests; this paper does not clearly do so. Table A1 includes significance tests, but it is unclear what they really tested, and many are statistically significant. A simple regression predicting treatment assignment with covariates would demonstrate whether randomization succeeded. There are many other tables in the appendix, but it is difficult to understand what they do. A detailed discussion accompanying those tables would be very helpful. The authors should walk readers through these diagnostics explicitly. Assuming randomization was successful, control variables may not be necessary. Presenting models without controls would help assess the robustness of the findings and avoid potential post-treatment bias. In other words, comparing simple and full specifications would increase confidence in the results. Overall, I believe there is enough promise in this study for eventual publication, but significant revisions are necessary as there are major issues in the paper. I encourage the authors to view these comments as constructive steps toward strengthening an already ambitious and important project. Reviewer #3: The paper represents methodologically rigorous experimental design, and has transparent reporting and strong adherence to reproducibility standards. It addresses an important methodological gap in survey recruitment of political elites such as politicians. It also has clear practical and theoretical contributions to survey methodology and political behavior literature. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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-->PONE-D-25-30014R1-->-->Comparison of altruistic, egoistic, and scientific appeals in the recruitment of politicians to a survey panel-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Rapeli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->In particular, R2 raises a few important concerns that require your attention. I believe these are easily doable within a reasonable timeframe. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 23 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The manuscript examines whether different invitation framings influence politicians’ willingness to join a survey panel. Using a large field experiment among more than 7,000 local politicians in Finland, the authors compare altruistic, egoistic, and scientific appeals in recruitment emails. The study addresses an important methodological problem in elite research: how to increase participation rates in surveys targeting political elites. The experimental design and the use of real behavioral outcomes represent clear strengths of the study. The research design is generally sound. The use of randomized assignment and a large sample size provides a solid basis for causal inference. The statistical analyses are broadly appropriate for the research question. The authors employ logistic regression models and also conduct robustness checks using a penalized likelihood estimator suitable for rare events, which increases confidence in the stability of the results. The addition of randomization checks and alternative model specifications also improves transparency. Overall, the statistical approach is adequate and supports the main conclusions. The paper’s main finding that simple framing strategies do not significantly increase recruitment among politicians is interesting and potentially valuable for scholars conducting elite surveys. Reporting null results from well-designed field experiments can make an important contribution, particularly in areas where practical methodological guidance is limited. The discussion appropriately acknowledges several possible explanations for the lack of treatment effects, including weak treatments, information overload, and broader contextual factors affecting politicians’ willingness to participate in surveys. The authors have also responded constructively to the main points raised in the previous round of review. In particular, the manuscript now frames its contribution more clearly as a methodological demonstration rather than a strong theoretical test, and additional robustness checks and diagnostic information have been included. These revisions improve the transparency of the analytical strategy and clarify the scope of the study’s contribution. That said, several aspects of the manuscript could still be strengthened. First, the theoretical justification for the three framing strategies remains somewhat limited. While the authors refer to civic duty and self-interest as potential motivations for politicians, the mechanisms linking these motivations to the specific treatments could be more clearly articulated. Strengthening this theoretical discussion would help clarify why different framing strategies were expected to generate different behavioral responses. Second, the heterogeneous analyses are potentially interesting but appear to be largely exploratory. The manuscript would benefit from emphasizing this point more clearly and avoiding overly strong interpretations of subgroup patterns, particularly when statistical support is weak. Presenting these analyses as descriptive extensions rather than confirmatory tests would improve analytical transparency. Third, although the authors discuss limitations related to generalizability, this issue could be elaborated further. Because the study focuses on local politicians in a single national context, it is not clear to what extent the findings apply to other political systems or to politicians operating at different institutional levels. Finally, some elements of the methodological description could be presented more clearly in the main text rather than primarily in the appendix. In particular, a brief explanation of the randomization checks, model selection strategy, and robustness analyses would improve readability and make the analytical strategy easier to follow. Overall, the manuscript presents a well-designed field experiment addressing an important methodological issue in elite research. With clearer theoretical framing and some improvements in the presentation of the analysis and interpretation of subgroup results, the paper could provide a useful contribution to the literature on elite survey methodology. Reviewer #2: I thank the authors for their revisions. My comments have been sufficiently addressed and I am happy to recommend publication of the manuscript. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes: Emre Erdogan Reviewer #2: Yes: Tevfik Murat Yildirim ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". 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-->PONE-D-25-30014R2-->-->Comparison of altruistic, egoistic, and scientific appeals in the recruitment of politicians to a survey panel-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Rapeli, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process.-->--> -->-->Please submit your revised manuscript by May 27 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: R1 appreciates the second round of revisions but requests one final set of comments. I kindly request addressing them as soon as possible, after which I will reach an in-house decision at the earliest. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Thank you for the opportunity to review the revised version of your manuscript. The paper addresses an important and underexplored issue, how to recruit political elites into survey panels—and does so with a transparent and well-executed experimental design. The revisions have improved the manuscript in several meaningful ways, particularly in terms of clarity and scope. At the same time, a few core issues remain only partially resolved. First, the theoretical framework has been strengthened with the inclusion of social conformity theory. This addition provides a clearer rationale for why politicians, as role holders, might respond to normative cues embedded in survey invitations. However, the link between this framework and the specific treatments (altruistic, egoistic, scientific appeals) remains somewhat underdeveloped. The argument now clarifies why normative expectations may matter, but it is still not fully clear why these particular framings should generate differential effects. As a result, the theoretical contribution would benefit from a more explicit articulation of the mechanisms connecting role-based expectations to the specific experimental manipulations. Second, the handling of subgroup analyses is notably improved. The manuscript now consistently frames these analyses as exploratory and acknowledges their limited statistical power. This represents a clear gain in interpretive caution. That said, parts of the discussion still attribute substantive meaning to marginal or statistically weak patterns. I would encourage further restraint here, ensuring that these findings are presented strictly as hypothesis-generating. Third, the discussion of generalizability is much stronger. The added reflections on the Finnish local-level context and the explicit call for replication in other settings appropriately bound the scope of the findings. This revision directly addresses earlier concerns and improves the manuscript’s external validity claims. Fourth, moving key methodological details into the main text significantly enhances transparency. The inclusion of randomization checks, model comparisons, and robustness analyses makes the empirical strategy easier to evaluate and strengthens confidence in the results. Two issues, however, remain insufficiently addressed. The first concerns the interpretation of the null findings. While the manuscript now acknowledges uncertainty, it still leans toward concluding that framing does not matter for elite recruitment. Given the very low baseline participation rate, it is plausible that behavioral variation is constrained, limiting the observable impact of treatments. This alternative explanation limited elasticity rather than absence of effect should be more directly incorporated into the interpretation. The second concerns broader theoretical integration. The discussion introduces several plausible mechanisms, such as information overload, institutional trust, and reputational considerations, but these remain post hoc explanations rather than analytically integrated alternatives. The manuscript would be stronger if it more explicitly positioned these mechanisms alongside the tested framework, even if only as directions for future research. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. 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Comparison of altruistic, egoistic, and scientific appeals in the recruitment of politicians to a survey panel PONE-D-25-30014R3 Dear Dr. Rapeli, We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. If your institution or institutions have a press office, please notify them about your upcoming paper to help maximize its impact. If they’ll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team as soon as possible -- no later than 48 hours after receiving the formal acceptance. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. Kind regards, Cengiz Erisen Academic Editor PLOS One Additional Editor Comments (optional): Reviewers' comments: |
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