Peer Review History
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-->PONE-D-25-53361-->-->The Modified Evan’s Blue Dye Test Has High Positive Predictive Value for Diagnosing Aspiration in Tracheostomized Critically Ill Patients: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis.-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Lovas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 23 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: Thank you for your time in presenting this manuscript. My thoughts are as follows. In the abstract, the authors claim that "[they] conducted a systematic review and meta-analysis to investigate the effectiveness of MEBDT in detecting aspiration in tracheostomized critically ill patients." However, they say that the, "aim of this study was to evaluate the diagnostic accuracy of MEBDT in comparison with FEES in the assessment of aspiration in critically ill patients with tracheostomy." While similar, these two aims are different. They should either be addended to be the same, or a primary and secondary aim should have been set a priori to the study. There are other areas of the manuscript where the authors seem to contradict themselves, make incorrect statements, or clarifying statements are warranted for a number of reasons. 1. page 13, line 76: "MEBDT should be performed in all critically ill tracheostomized patients." However, authors state that, "It is important to emphasize that PPV and NPV, and the conclusions based on them, are only valid for populations where the prevalence is similar to those in the studies examined (between 60-80%, which already represent quite heterogeneous prevalences). Therefore, conclusions based on MS do not apply to patient populations where the prevalence of aspiration is, for example, 10% (where PPV would be around 50% and NPV around 90%) or to a population with 90% prevalence (PPV ~100%, NPV ~20%)," on page 23. This is a major caveat, and a major flaw of their listed key point. 2. page 26, lines 303-308: "This suggests the application of different consistencies (water, saliva, or honey-like), different (5-10-20 ml) and repeated quantities of material to be swallowed. In this case, a PPV of 100% indicates that, in these studies, all patients who tested positive for aspiration using MEBDT were confirmed to have aspiration, meaning that the test identifies aspirates of such consistencies with high accuracy." This is not what it means. Accuracy can not be explained by one parameter like PPV. For instance, this test has a high PPV but a moderate sensitivity, indicating that it's not perfect at detecting all positive cases. This is an important fact and it is not consistent with a "high accuracy" at all. 3. page 23, line 242: "However, for NPV and PPV, heterogeneity values were 0% with p = 0.5 and p = 0.95, respectively (Figs. 3 and 4). However, due to the low number of articles, these metrics do not provide much relevant information." I don't know what to say about this because at least half of the author's argument throughout the paper is that the positive predictive value being near 100% demonstrates high accuracy and/or is the basis for their argument in favor of widespread MEBDT use as a screening tool. What is the purpose of writing a paragraph about a heterogeneity analysis that "does not provide much relevant information." 4. The authors reference the use of local anesthetic during FEES. While it is true that local anesthetic may be used during the procedure, it is not necessary and should be counted against its use in clinical practice. Some literature and practice experts suggests that anesthesia worsens the diagnostic ability of FEES, and recommend against its use. There are numerous places in the manuscript that are clearly missing information/words or used inconsistent formatting. Some examples included but are not limited to 1. page 12, lines 61-62: "Six out of XXX screened studies were included," where the XXX was not updated. 2. page 16, lines 124-125: "Pediatric population, patients without tracheostomy tube, and patients with contraindications to MEBDT and FEES were excluded," where "population" and "tube" should be plural. 3. page 16, lines 129-130: "...on 24th November 2023, and repeated it with the same search key and strategy on June 25, 2025." 4. page 25, lines 279-280: "FEES is positive for aspiration if saliva, food, or any liquid trapped under the vocal cords [28]," where the word "is" is missing between liquid and trapped. There are many other places in the manuscript that were understandable, but clearly not written to the standard of an accredited scientific journal publication. I realize the authors are not from a predominately English-speaking country, but these issues should be addressed. 1. page 14, lines 103-104: "As transfer of the patient is inevitable for VFSS, our decision was to investigate the other two methods, applicable at the bedside." 2. page 28, lines 353-355: As for limitations, only a small number of cases were registered, 216 in total. In addition, only six articles could be included, all of which were observational studies, and reported significantly heterogenous practices." While the peer review process is meant to help improve the quality of submitted manuscripts, these points made it very difficult to want to keep reading further. These issues should make anyone second-guess the quality of the data and conclusions being presented. Therefore, I would not recommend this article for publication in its current state. If this is to be considered, the article would require intensive edits on sentence structure. It may be useful to enlist the support of a native English writing service for this manuscript, as there is a lot of potential in the work. Reviewer #2: This is a systematic review and meta-analysis to investigate the effectiveness of MEBDT in detecting aspirations in tracheostomized critically ill patients. Search was performed across three databases (PubMed, Cochrane Central, and Embase), on November 25, 2023, and repeated with the same search key and strategy on June 25, 2025. This was followed by a systematic screening process against predetermined selection. The aim of this study was to evaluate the diagnostic accuracy of MEBDT in comparison with FEES in the assessment of aspiration in critically ill patients with tracheostomy. It was hypothesized and aimed to test whether MEBDT is at least as accurate as FEES in diagnosing aspiration. The main finding was that MEBDT had a high specificity 95.42% (95% CI [67.38%, 99.53%]) and positive predictive value 95% (95% CI [81, 100]). After a review of the manuscript, I have the following observations, Methods: Looking at the 6 studies included in the review, there was only 2/6 of the studies that had a study period, which were Winklmaier et al and Fiorelli et al, others were either unstated or non-specific. A pooled negative predictive value of 59% is indicative of a variable sensitivity of the use MEBDT which is a major limitation. When a negative result, i.e no blue dye is found, rather than completely ruling out aspiration, it may be due to presence of small aspirations or silent aspirations, where there are no cough reflex present. As well as the high specificity reported, 95.42% (95% CI [67.38%, 99.53%]) merely shows the ability to detect patients who do not aspirate, rather than being as good a diagnostic tool as FEES. This is because FEES is standardized in its uses as opposed to MEBDT, which makes comparism and drawing conclusions about studies with a variety of protocols quite challenging. 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-->PONE-D-25-53361R1-->-->The Modified Evan’s Blue Dye Test Has High Positive Predictive Value for Diagnosing Aspiration in Tracheostomized Critically Ill Patients: A Systematic Review and Meta-Analysis.-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Lovas, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 13 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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[Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #3: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #4: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: N/A ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #2: Thanks for taking time to review and address the concerns highlighted. Approved for acceptance for publication Reviewer #3: Thanks for sharing your work with us, and for performing all the suggested comments and revisions for this manuscpit.. Reviewer #4: (No Response) ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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