Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionNovember 12, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-60974-->-->Association Between First-Trimester Cell-Free Fetal DNA Levels and the Risk of Preterm Birth and Low Birth Weight: A Propensity Score-Matched Cohort Study-->-->PLOS ONE Dear Dr. Yin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Jan 07 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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-->PONE-D-25-60974R1-->-->Association Between First-Trimester Cell-Free Fetal DNA Levels and the Risk of Preterm Birth and Low Birth Weight: A Propensity Score-Matched Cohort Study-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Yin, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. ============================== For the manuscript to be accepted:-->--> -->-->- There are a number of technical elements that requires revision - kindly address all the reviewers' comments and provide a rebuttal document which clearly outlines the changes made in the manuscript for final consideration.-->-->- Ensure that all grammar and English errors are appropriately corrected ============================== Please submit your revised manuscript by Apr 01 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Kind regards, Preenan Pillay Academic Editor PLOS One Journal Requirements: 1. If the reviewer comments include a recommendation to cite specific previously published works, please review and evaluate these publications to determine whether they are relevant and should be cited. There is no requirement to cite these works unless the editor has indicated otherwise. 2. Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments: For the manuscript to be accepted all reviewers' comments must be addressed with a clear rebuttal letter that tracks all changes in the manuscript. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: (No Response) Reviewer #2: (No Response) ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This revised manuscript to me is scientifically sound. It shows the association between first-trimester fetal fraction and preterm birth and low birth weight. It adds to the body of work on this subject. I have some minor issues that I believe should be addressed. - In the Objective in the Abstract add 'first trimester' - For readability, I suggest not to put all the OR's/aOR's and 95%-CI's in the text of the Result section. They are already presented in the tables. - In the Discussion section, could the authors provide more insight from a clinical point of view how fetal fraction could be a useful biomarker? Indeed, associations with adverse pregnancy outcomes have been shown, but does it really help to predict adverse outcomes and change individual pregnancy care? Possibly comment hereon also in light of a publication by Becking et al. on the predictive value of fetal fraction (Becking et al. BJOG, 2024; https://doi.org/10.1111/1471-0528.17978) - Last, LWB without correcting for gestational age has little clinical meaning, this should be mentioned as a limitation of the study. Or are gestational-age corrected birthweights available? Reviewer #2: FINDING ON THE AUTHOR'S RESPONSE TO THE 1ST REVIEWER'S CONCERNS. All comments have been adequately addressed except for the method for molecular description 1st Reviewer comments: Require explicit molecular/technical description of cffDNA measurement. My Findings: The current submission has substantially addressed the comments but remains borderline. The platform is named, but key technical details such as sequencing depth, library prep method, and fetal fraction algorithm (e.g., SNP-based vs. read-count) are missing. In my opinion, if NIPT is a routine clinical test, the level of detail might not be necessary. However, clarifying sentences must be added. e.g., “Fetal fraction was calculated using a validated read-count–based algorithm routinely applied in clinical NIPT reporting”. REVIEWER REPORT I have some concerns with the current submission. Below is my report with major and minor concerns addressed separately General Assessment This manuscript reports a large retrospective cohort study examining the association between first-trimester cell-free fetal DNA (cffDNA) levels and the risks of preterm birth (PTB) and low birth weight (LBW), using propensity score matching and multivariable regression analyses. The study addresses an area of ongoing debate, particularly regarding the directionality of cffDNA associations with adverse pregnancy outcomes. Overall, the study is methodologically sound, ethically compliant, and clearly presented. The conclusions are largely supported by the data. However, several conceptual and methodological clarifications are required to strengthen interpretability and reproducibility, particularly regarding cohort selection, cffDNA measurement, and interpretation of subgroup/threshold analyses. Major Strengths 1. Large sample size and statistical power The cohort of over 10,000 singleton pregnancies provides robust power to detect modest associations and to conduct stratified analyses. 2. Appropriate use of propensity score matching (PSM) The authors appropriately apply PSM to address confounding in this observational study and demonstrate adequate post-matching balance using standardized mean differences. 3. Outcome-specific analysis (PTB vs LBW) The distinction between PTB and LBW is well justified biologically and analytically, and the differential association patterns are a notable strength. 4. Ethical transparency Institutional approval, waiver of informed consent, and anonymisation procedures are clearly stated and acceptable for retrospective research. Major Scientific Concerns 1. Cohort Selection and Potential Selection Bias (Important) It appears that cffDNA measurements were derived from routine clinical non-invasive prenatal testing (NIPT). However, it is not clearly stated whether: 1. All singleton pregnancies during the study period underwent NIPT, or 2. The cohort represents a selected subgroup (e.g. advanced maternal age, higher socioeconomic status, or high-risk pregnancies). This point is critical because NIPT uptake is not random and may introduce selection bias that could influence both cffDNA levels and pregnancy outcomes. Suggestions: Explicitly clarify the NIPT inclusion criteria and discuss potential selection bias and its impact on generalisability in the Discussion. 2. cffDNA Measurement and Reproducibility (Moderate) While the manuscript now includes a general description of the NIPT workflow (plasma separation, DNA extraction, NGS, Illumina platform), key technical details relevant to reproducibility remain unclear: 1. How was fetal fraction calculated (e.g. read-count, SNP-based, proprietary algorithm)? 2. Was a single analytical pipeline used throughout the study period? 3. Were quality thresholds applied for inclusion of cffDNA values? Although full proprietary details may not be required, some clarification is necessary for scientific transparency. Suggestions: Add a brief statement describing the fetal fraction estimation approach and confirm analytical consistency across samples. 3. Interpretation of Subgroup and Threshold Analyses (Important) The manuscript includes extensive subgroup and threshold analyses. However: • It is unclear whether these analyses were pre-specified or exploratory. • Multiple comparisons increase the risk of type I error. • Threshold effects may be data-driven. While these analyses are interesting, their inferential weight should be limited. I presumed the analysis is exploratory; thus, concern about overstating findings should be addressed. Suggestions: Explicitly state that subgroup and threshold analyses are exploratory and interpret findings cautiously in the Discussion or suggest a study in an independent cohort. 4. Biological Interpretation of “Protective” cffDNA Effects (Conceptual) The finding that higher first-trimester cffDNA levels are associated with lower PTB risk contrasts with traditional interpretations of cffDNA as a marker of placental stress or injury. While the authors briefly allude to placental mass or turnover, the biological interpretation remains underdeveloped. Critically, in the Discussion section (where this interpretation should be expanded):There is no clear paragraph that: 1. reconciles the inverse association with placental biology 2. distinguishes pathological cffDNA elevation from physiological placental mass/turnover 3. explains why higher early fetal fraction could reflect healthier placentation Suggestion: Expand the Discussion to more clearly distinguish between: 1. pathological cffDNA elevation due to placental damage, and 2. physiologically higher cffDNA reflecting placental mass or healthy trophoblast turnover. 5.Fixed threshold for maternal age and BMI The manuscript categorises maternal age and BMI using fixed thresholds; however, the rationale for selecting ≥35 years for age and ≥30 kg/m² for BMI is not explicitly stated. As these variables are central to the propensity score model, a brief justification based on clinical guidelines or prior literature would improve transparency and reproducibility. Minor Issues and Editorial Suggestions 1. Causal language Terms such as “protective effect” should be replaced or clearly contextualised as “inverse association” to avoid causal implication. 2. Results–Discussion boundary Some interpretive language appears in the Results section; tightening this separation would improve clarity. 3. Author name consistency Ensure consistent spelling of author names across the manuscript and submission metadata. 4. Justification of PSM parameters A brief justification for the chosen 1:3 matching ratio would be helpful. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. 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Association Between First-Trimester Cell-Free Fetal DNA Levels and the Risk of Preterm Birth and Low Birth Weight: A Propensity Score-Matched Cohort Study PONE-D-25-60974R2 Dear Dr. Guofeng Yin We’re pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been judged scientifically suitable for publication and will be formally accepted for publication once it meets all outstanding technical requirements. Within one week, you’ll receive an e-mail detailing the required amendments. When these have been addressed, you’ll receive a formal acceptance letter and your manuscript will be scheduled for publication. An invoice will be generated when your article is formally accepted. Please note, if your institution has a publishing partnership with PLOS and your article meets the relevant criteria, all or part of your publication costs will be covered. 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If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #2: All comments have been addressed ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: The manuscript shows the association between first-trimester fetal fraction and preterm birth and low birth weight. It adds to the body of work on this subject. I believe all issues from previous reviews have been adequately addressed. Reviewer #2: The authors have satisfactorily addressed all previous comments. Key methodological clarifications, particularly regarding cffDNA measurement, have been adequately incorporated, and the discussion now provides a more balanced clinical interpretation. The limitation concerning LBW without gestational age adjustment has also been appropriately acknowledged. The manuscript is methodologically sound, clearly presented, and the conclusions are supported by the data. Recommendation Accept in its current form. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: No ********** |
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