Peer Review History
| Original SubmissionOctober 29, 2025 |
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-->PONE-D-25-58216-->-->Differences in the Long-term Course of Post-COVID-19 Symptoms in Adults and Children across Epidemic Periods: A Retrospective Cohort Study in Japan, 2020–2024-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Sugiyama, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by Mar 07 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
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Additional Editor Comments: Dear Dr. Sugiyama, Thank you for submitting your manuscript entitled “Differences in the Long-term Course of Post-COVID-19 Symptoms in Adults and Children across Epidemic Periods: A Retrospective Cohort Study in Japan, 2020–2024” (Manuscript ID: PONE-D-25-58216) to PLOS ONE. Your manuscript has now been evaluated by expert reviewers. The reviewers find the topic timely and important and acknowledge the strengths of your large retrospective cohort, extended follow-up period, and the comparative analysis across epidemic periods and age groups. However, they have raised several substantive concerns regarding the study design, data analysis, interpretation of results, and clarity of presentation that must be addressed before the manuscript can be considered further for publication. Therefore, we invite you to revise your manuscript substantially and resubmit it as a Major Revision. [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Partly Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->2. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->3. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: No Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->4. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #2: Yes Reviewer #3: Yes Reviewer #4: Yes ********** -->5. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: This study with the title "Differences in the Long-term Course of Post-COVID-19 Symptoms in Adults and Children across Epidemic Periods: A Retrospective Cohort Study in Japan, 2020–2024" gives an insight about the long-term effects of Covid 19 and its co-relation with patient age. But the study seems to have a few unanswered questions. The authors need to discuss some of these questions: - 1. The authors discussed the different strains of SARS Covid-19 and their long-term symptoms in different patient groups. Do these patients get more than one strain or are they affected by multiple waves of the infection at different time points? 2. The study is based on a survey that includes children who can have different experiences than the adult involved. How did the authors provide more information and support to the children for specific responses. 3. In figure 2, it is interesting to find old versions of viruses showing more severity in symptoms than the later mutants arise. Is it consistent with time and people in each survey. 4. I did not find any information about the co-infection or any other illness that happened to the responders during the survey duration. Reviewer #2: This study analyzes post-COVID-19 symptoms (PCC) in Japan across variants from Wild-type to Omicron in 2024. Including both adults and children fills a research gap. Using interval-censored survival analysis (Turnbull method) enhances confidence in duration estimates. The authors note that vaccination history was not significantly associated with symptoms lasting more than three months in their earlier cohort analysis. However, they acknowledge that external studies (e.g., among U.S. veterans) observed a notable risk reduction with vaccination. Additional discussion of why this cohort might differ, such as the timing of vaccination relative to infection periods, especially during high-risk periods like the Delta variant, would be valuable. The manuscript notes that although some children (1.9% to 4.1% depending on the period) experienced symptoms beyond two years, these did not disrupt daily life. Clarifying which symptoms, such as cough or difficulty concentrating, were most persistent would help create a clearer clinical picture. The authors correctly point out that participants with ongoing symptoms might be more likely to respond. While they argue this does not skew comparisons across periods, they should explicitly note that the overall prevalence such as 47% at six months for Delta might represent an upper limit due to this potential bias. The results indicate that newer sublineages (JN.1, etc.) are not significantly different from early Omicron variants (BA.1/2/5) in symptom duration. This is a novel finding and could be more prominently highlighted in the Conclusion to underscore the current relevance of the study. Reviewer #3: This manuscript represents a strong and policy-relevant contribution to the long-COVID literature, particularly regarding variant-specific and age-specific trajectories. The suggested revisions are clarificatory rather than fundamental and can be addressed without additional analyses. 1. Figure 1: Flow diagram of the study population. Among all individuals diagnosed with COVID-19 at the participating hospital between March 2020 and July 2022 (N = 6,551), adults (n = 3,748) and children (n = 2,830) ; Adults and children number together isn’t added up to 6551. Also, the final analysis population comprised 2,689 participants, including 1,524 adults and 1,165 children. These totals represent the combined analytic cohort derived from respondents to the initial survey (November 2022–March 2023) and newly diagnosed cases enrolled in 2024, However, the adult and pediatric totals do not correspond to a simple arithmetic sum of previously reported and newly recruited cases. 2. Explicitly clarify why vaccination was not included? It might really have an effect. 3. Clarify how “did not interfere with daily activities” was operationalized in children (parent-reported? school attendance?). 4. The conclusion could include one sentence emphasizing relevance to other high-income settings with similar healthcare access, while acknowledging cultural/system differences. Reviewer #4: This is a well-conducted retrospective cohort study addressing an important and timely question regarding the long-term course of post-COVID-19 symptoms across epidemic periods and age groups. The long follow-up (extending beyond two years), inclusion of both adults and children within the same framework, and use of interval-censored survival analysis are clear strengths. Major Comments: 1. Selection Bias: The study population consists of survey respondents, with response rates around 35–50% across waves. 2. Persistence Beyond Two Years: The manuscript states that symptoms persisting beyond two years showed “little further resolution.” 3. Variant Attribution: Epidemic periods were defined using regional surveillance data rather than individual-level viral sequencing. While this approach is appropriate, some parts of the Discussion imply variant-specific biological effects. I suggest framing the findings more consistently as period-based associations and clearly presenting variant-related explanations as hypotheses rather than causal conclusions. 4. Vaccination as an Unmeasured Factor: Vaccination status is not included in the current analysis, despite major differences in vaccine coverage across epidemic periods and age groups. The absence of vaccination data remains an important limitation in interpreting differences between Delta and Omicron periods. This should be more explicitly acknowledged, particularly when discussing faster symptom resolution during Omicron waves. Minor Comments: 1. A brief justification for defining the outcome as “any symptom,” despite wide variation in severity and clinical impact, would be helpful. 2. The self-reported nature of “interference with daily life” may be interpreted differently across age groups; a short acknowledgment of this limitation would strengthen the methods. 3. Terminology (post-COVID-19 symptoms, post-COVID-19 condition, long COVID) could be used more consistently throughout the manuscript. ********** -->6. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? 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-->PONE-D-25-58216R1-->-->Differences in the Long-term Course of Post-COVID-19 Symptoms in Adults and Children across Epidemic Periods: A Retrospective Cohort Study in Japan, 2020–2024-->-->PLOS One Dear Dr. Sugiyama, Thank you for submitting your manuscript to PLOS ONE. After careful consideration, we feel that it has merit but does not fully meet PLOS ONE’s publication criteria as it currently stands. Therefore, we invite you to submit a revised version of the manuscript that addresses the points raised during the review process. Please submit your revised manuscript by May 17 2026 11:59PM. If you will need more time than this to complete your revisions, please reply to this message or contact the journal office at plosone@plos.org. When you're ready to submit your revision, log on to https://www.editorialmanager.com/pone/ and select the 'Submissions Needing Revision' folder to locate your manuscript file. Please include the following items when submitting your revised manuscript:-->
--> If you would like to make changes to your financial disclosure, please include your updated statement in your cover letter. Guidelines for resubmitting your figure files are available below the reviewer comments at the end of this letter. If applicable, we recommend that you deposit your laboratory protocols in protocols.io to enhance the reproducibility of your results. Protocols.io assigns your protocol its own identifier (DOI) so that it can be cited independently in the future. For instructions see: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/submission-guidelines#loc-laboratory-protocols. Additionally, PLOS ONE offers an option for publishing peer-reviewed Lab Protocol articles, which describe protocols hosted on protocols.io. Read more information on sharing protocols at https://plos.org/protocols?utm_medium=editorial-email&utm_source=authorletters&utm_campaign=protocols. 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Please review your reference list to ensure that it is complete and correct. If you have cited papers that have been retracted, please include the rationale for doing so in the manuscript text, or remove these references and replace them with relevant current references. Any changes to the reference list should be mentioned in the rebuttal letter that accompanies your revised manuscript. If you need to cite a retracted article, indicate the article’s retracted status in the References list and also include a citation and full reference for the retraction notice. Additional Editor Comments : Dear Dr. Sugiyama, Thank you for submitting the revised version of your manuscript entitled “Differences in the Long-term Course of Post-COVID-19 Symptoms in Adults and Children across Epidemic Periods: A Retrospective Cohort Study in Japan, 2020–2024” to PLOS ONE. The manuscript has now been evaluated based on the reviewers’ comments and your responses. I appreciate the efforts you have made to address the concerns raised during the previous round of review. The study is well-conducted and addresses an important topic. However, a few minor issues remain that should be addressed before the manuscript can be considered for acceptance. I therefore invite you to submit a minor revision of your manuscript. Please carefully address the reviewers’ remaining comments and provide a clear, point-by-point response outlining the changes made in the revised manuscript. Ensure that all revisions are clearly indicated. Once these minor concerns are addressed, the manuscript is likely to be suitable for publication. Thank you again for your submission to PLOS ONE. I look forward to receiving your revised manuscript. Kind regards, Rishi Kumar Jaiswal, Ph.D. Academic Editor PLOS ONE [Note: HTML markup is below. Please do not edit.] Reviewers' comments: Reviewer's Responses to Questions -->Comments to the Author 1. If the authors have adequately addressed your comments raised in a previous round of review and you feel that this manuscript is now acceptable for publication, you may indicate that here to bypass the “Comments to the Author” section, enter your conflict of interest statement in the “Confidential to Editor” section, and submit your "Accept" recommendation.--> Reviewer #1: All comments have been addressed Reviewer #5: (No Response) ********** -->2. Is the manuscript technically sound, and do the data support the conclusions? The manuscript must describe a technically sound piece of scientific research with data that supports the conclusions. Experiments must have been conducted rigorously, with appropriate controls, replication, and sample sizes. The conclusions must be drawn appropriately based on the data presented. --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** -->3. Has the statistical analysis been performed appropriately and rigorously? --> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** -->4. Have the authors made all data underlying the findings in their manuscript fully available? The PLOS Data policy requires authors to make all data underlying the findings described in their manuscript fully available without restriction, with rare exception (please refer to the Data Availability Statement in the manuscript PDF file). The data should be provided as part of the manuscript or its supporting information, or deposited to a public repository. For example, in addition to summary statistics, the data points behind means, medians and variance measures should be available. If there are restrictions on publicly sharing data—e.g. participant privacy or use of data from a third party—those must be specified.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** -->5. Is the manuscript presented in an intelligible fashion and written in standard English? PLOS ONE does not copyedit accepted manuscripts, so the language in submitted articles must be clear, correct, and unambiguous. Any typographical or grammatical errors should be corrected at revision, so please note any specific errors here.--> Reviewer #1: Yes Reviewer #5: Yes ********** -->6. Review Comments to the Author Please use the space provided to explain your answers to the questions above. You may also include additional comments for the author, including concerns about dual publication, research ethics, or publication ethics. (Please upload your review as an attachment if it exceeds 20,000 characters)--> Reviewer #1: "I would like to thank the authors for their detailed responses and the effort put into the revision. They have addressed all of my previous concerns satisfactorily. The manuscript is now much stronger and provides a valuable contribution to the field." Reviewer #5: In the current work, the authors present a retrospective analysis of the persistence of COVID-19 associated symptoms (long COVID) in patients diagnosed with COVID-19 during different time periods which were dominated by different SARS-CoV-2 variants. The study provides a long term evaluation of the COVID-19 associated symptoms with comparison across the old and newer variants and also adult and children study groups and thus provides an important dataset from a healthcare and immunological standpoint. A few suggestions/comments regarding the study are as follows: 1. The study assigns different strains of SARS-CoV-2 to different years in which the patients were infected. While this is a largely accepted practice, a lack of sequencing information for the infecting viral strain still is a caveat while interpreting the study results. 2. In each of the category of patients, is there any information on the presence of vaccination and recovery from long COVID symptoms. 3. In the patients which require critical care, is there any co-relation between treatment strategies used and the better outcome in terms of long-term symptom alleviation. 4. In case of children as the reporting is done by the parents/supervising adults, the presence of symptoms which interfere with daily life might not be very accurate. ********** -->7. PLOS authors have the option to publish the peer review history of their article (what does this mean?). If published, this will include your full peer review and any attached files. If you choose “no”, your identity will remain anonymous but your review may still be made public. Do you want your identity to be public for this peer review? For information about this choice, including consent withdrawal, please see our Privacy Policy.--> Reviewer #1: Yes:Rohit Tyagi Reviewer #5: No ********** [NOTE: If reviewer comments were submitted as an attachment file, they will be attached to this email and accessible via the submission site. Please log into your account, locate the manuscript record, and check for the action link "View Attachments". If this link does not appear, there are no attachment files.] To ensure your figures meet our technical requirements, please review our figure guidelines: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures You may also use PLOS’s free figure tool, NAAS, to help you prepare publication quality figures: https://journals.plos.org/plosone/s/figures#loc-tools-for-figure-preparation. NAAS will assess whether your figures meet our technical requirements by comparing each figure against our figure specifications. -->
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Dear Dr. Sugiyama, I hope you are doing well. I am pleased to inform you that your manuscript entitled “Differences in the Long-term Course of Post-COVID-19 Symptoms in Adults and Children across Epidemic Periods: A Retrospective Cohort Study in Japan, 2020–2024” (Manuscript Number: PONE-D-25-58216R2) has been accepted for publication in PLOS ONE. The reviewers and editorial team appreciate the thorough revisions you have made, which have significantly strengthened the manuscript. Your study provides valuable insights into the long-term trajectory of post-COVID-19 symptoms across different epidemic periods and age groups, and will be of considerable interest to the scientific and clinical community. The manuscript will now proceed to the production stage. You will be contacted by the journal’s production team regarding the next steps, including proof review. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE. We look forward to your future contributions. With best regards, Dr. Rishi Kumar Jaiswal Academic Editor PLOS ONE |
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PONE-D-25-58216R2 PLOS One Dear Dr. Sugiyama, I'm pleased to inform you that your manuscript has been deemed suitable for publication in PLOS One. Congratulations! Your manuscript is now being handed over to our production team. At this stage, our production department will prepare your paper for publication. This includes ensuring the following: * All references, tables, and figures are properly cited * All relevant supporting information is included in the manuscript submission, * There are no issues that prevent the paper from being properly typeset You will receive further instructions from the production team, including instructions on how to review your proof when it is ready. Please keep in mind that we are working through a large volume of accepted articles, so please give us a few days to review your paper and let you know the next and final steps. Lastly, if your institution or institutions have a press office, please let them know about your upcoming paper now to help maximize its impact. If they'll be preparing press materials, please inform our press team within the next 48 hours. Your manuscript will remain under strict press embargo until 2 pm Eastern Time on the date of publication. For more information, please contact onepress@plos.org. You will receive an invoice from PLOS for your publication fee after your manuscript has reached the completed accept phase. If you receive an email requesting payment before acceptance or for any other service, this may be a phishing scheme. Learn how to identify phishing emails and protect your accounts at https://explore.plos.org/phishing. If we can help with anything else, please email us at customercare@plos.org. Thank you for submitting your work to PLOS ONE and supporting open access. Kind regards, PLOS ONE Editorial Office Staff on behalf of Dr. Rishi Jaiswal Academic Editor PLOS One |
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